Star Trek:Plaything Part 1

[John Vasiliou]

http://goanimate.com/go/movie/0mF_u6EuLPLI/1

Gave goanimate.com a try ,and came up with this.

 

[RevdKathy]

This looks to me like it would probably be more appropriate in Fan Films, so I'm shipping it there.

 

[John Vasiliou]

Yeah it would fit in there I guess.

 

[Jim Gamma]

You need to improve your spelling, punctuation and grammar. Also, when using foreign words or words you don't know how to spell, check a dictionary. (Touché, not "tushay", for example.) Sorry, but that kind of thing just pulls me right out of a story, no matter how decent it is.