Star Trek Discovery - Need some help, fanfic well and truly stalled!

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Hi everyone, looking for some help and support really with my stalled fanfic! I won't bore you with a long history of how the story has developed but suffice to say it's been in "development hell" for want of a better word for some time!

Got the makings of a pretty good story there I think but unable to get it out!

I'll post the prologue below and would really appreciate any suggestions to how to give it more of a BANG whilst preserving the overall premise that this ship has to wander into the Neutral Zone and get ambushed in a believable and justifiable way.

I think it's a reasonable scenario but I think it could do with something more.

Also I would appreciate some help with the overall story outline that I've concocted and am constantly refining!

Thanks in advance!

 

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On the main viewscreen of the Federation starship Houston, the large freighter tumbled slowly through space against a backdrop of hundreds of distant stars. The long, thin hull of the freighter, more than twice the length of the Starfleet ship that had come to its aid, was pitted and scorched by the merciless barrage of weapons fire directed at the vessel by its attackers. Most of the ruined freighter's detachable cargo pods were missing, a few still floated nearby, all forcibly cut away from the central core of the spacecraft in the aftermath of the brutal assault on an essentially defenseless ship. Equipped with only simple deflector shields and navigational phasers, the small civilian crew had stood no chance of repelling a determined attack by an experienced pirate crew armed with vastly superior weapons that could threaten even a Starfleet ship.

Captain Paul Kelland surveyed the unsettling scene with barely restrained fury from a tense bridge at red alert, his eyes tracing the undulating violet tendrils of drive plasma leaking from the derelict freighter's charred engineering hull. He and the rest of his crew had witnessed the horrific aftermath of four identical attacks in the two months they'd begun their current patrol, all carried out by the same infamous pirate vessel that had terrorised civilian shipping in this lonely tract of space for months.

The Houston had responded to the urgent distress signals of each freighter or cargoship at maximum speed, but had on each occasion arrived too late to drive off the merciless crimson-hulled pirate vessel, which had become known amongst the vessels who plied the isolated spacelanes of the area as the Red Dagger. A fearsome vessel, the Dagger was both well-armed and fast, but most significantly equipped with masking circuitry that made it virtually undetectable on long-range sensors. And Kelland knew that out here on the frontier, far from the well-trodden and highly populated core regions of the United Federation of Planets, the vulnerable civilian freighter crews who saw their fellows being brutally attacked and massacred with a terrifying frequency, considered the Red Dagger to be essentially unstoppable.

Fifteen weeks had passed since the first of these savage attacks had been recorded by the USS Truman, another Starfleet vessel operating in the lonely hinterland that lay between the Federation and the forbidding territories of the vast and powerful Romulan Star Empire. Even after fifty years of near-isolation from the affairs of the galaxy, the Empire's spectre nonetheless loomed large of the entire region like the frightening bird of prey that adorned the Romulan military crest.

"We're detecting no lifesigns aboard the freighter, captain," first officer Doug Richards announced grimly from the raised quarterdeck that encircled the Houston's bridge. "Although we showing what appear to be bodies scattered throughout the habitable areas of the ship."

Kelland closed his eyes, drawing in a long breath of recirculated air as he automatically recalled the horrific scenes he'd witnessed aboard the other four derelicts in the preceding weeks. Even though an away-team from the Houston would inevitably have to board the freighter, the captain was nonetheless reluctant to order any member of his crew across to the broken vessel that now tumbled without power ahead of his starship.

"Are those sections of the vessel still holding atmosphere?" Kelland asked after a moment, resigning himself to the fact that an away-team would need to be sent to confirm the fates of the freighter's tragic crew. The vessel had been holed in numerous places by the onslaught of weapons fire, and the hideous endeavour would at least be completed in less time if the away-team could transport aboard without having to wear bulky EVA suits.

Commander Richards scrutinised the streams of sensor data scrolling across the sensor console, leaning in close past the young lieutenant manning the station.

"Yes, captain," the first officer responded. "The emergency bulkheads appear to have isolated the sections that were breached during the attack."

Pulling his gaze away from the floating tomb that the freighter had become, Kelland turned to address his second-in-command. "Prepare a minimum away-team, commander," he ordered with some hesitation. "I'll be leading it. Have Doctor T'Nar and two of her assistants meet me in transporter room one in fifteen minutes. I'll also need a couple of engineers to download the contents of the vessel's computer."

Richards nodded briskly, darting away to contact the necessary department heads to assemble the captain's away-team.

"Stand down red alert," Kelland said, turning back to the main viewscreen as his well-trained crew complied with his commands. As he continued to watch the wrecked freighter, he tried as best he could to prepare himself to once again face the shocking scenes that he knew awaited him on board.

 

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As he finished dictating his latest log entry, detailing the Houston's response to the distress signal and its subsequent discovery of the source, Paul Kelland realised that nearly three hours had passed since his return from the derelict freighter. It was now early-evening, and he had used the time well, beginning with a visit to his quarters as soon as he'd been able to thoroughly cleanse himself of the unsettling smell of death that seemed to cling to his body and clothes. He'd spent over twenty minutes in the compact sonic shower, allowing the relaxing vibrations of the acoustic pulses to purge the odors and grime for twice as long as the guidelines recommended.

After recycling his soiled clothes through the replicator and dressing himself in a fresh uniform from his closet, Kelland had returned to duty feeling refreshed, if still a little uneasy from his most recent away-mission. Instructing the communications officer on the bridge to open a communications channel to Starfleet Command on Earth, Kelland had retired to his ready room adjacent to the command-centre to relay his gruesome findings back to Rear Admiral Frank Webber, the captain's immediate superior.

The away-team from the Houston had discovered that the freighter had been registered at a spaceport in orbit of Bolarus IX thirty years earlier, and was helmed by a combination of civilian Bolian and human crew members, all of which had been brutally killed when the pirate crew of the Red Dagger had boarded the crippled vessel. In almost identical scenes to those he'd witnessed aboard the other ships that had been attacked by the Dagger, the small freighter crew had been massacred by a superior force using both disruptor pistols and bladed weapons, hideously slaughtered by the merciless pirates for whom stealing the ship's precious cargo of ore wasn't enough.

Admiral Webber had listened in grim silence until Kelland had finished describing the the attack on the freighter, promising to contact the Bolian representative who stood on the Federation Council, who would in turn arrange for two Bolian ships to make the journey out to the Romulan frontier to tow the derelict spacecraft back to port where the crew's bodies could be taken off for burial.

Since the Houston was currently patrolling the Romulan Neutral Zone, the narrow buffer of neutral space drawn up by Earth and Romulus in the aftermath of the war, the delay in communications between the Starfleet ship and Earth could be measured in seconds. The concentration of dedicated Starfleet booster relays that had been deployed throughout Federation space to assist with subspace communications between its ships and stations was particularly high between Earth and the Neutral Zone, with the intention that any warning of a forthcoming Romulan invasion would be received by Starfleet Command with as little delay as possible. The efficiency of the relay network in this part of space also meant that Kelland had the unwanted capability of verbally communicating these gruesome reports to Admiral Webber back at Starfleet Command, where a written report detailing his findings would have sufficed had he been elsewhere in Federation space.

Unfortunately, the continued attacks by the Red Dagger showed no sign of stopping.

Kelland leaned back in his chair and blew out a long, exasperated breath, his eyes lingering on the Federation seal that had replaced the sullen face of Frank Webber after the admiral had terminated the subspace link between the Houston and San Fransisco on Earth. In his twenty-five years of unbroken service to the United Federation of Planets as a Starfleet officer, he had never encountered an ongoing situation such as the one that he currently faced. He commanded a state-of-the-art new-orleans class starship, in only its fifth year of service since being launched from the Utopia Planitia shipyards in orbit of Mars, but was apparently powerless to bring a halt to these constant, brutal assaults on civilian shipping.

Other Starfleet vessels on similar patrols were encountering the same hideous aftermath of the Dagger's attacks elsewhere along the Neutral Zone, but as the commanding officer of the most powerful vessel currently assigned to the region, Kelland couldn't fully banish the sense of personal responsibility he felt for stopping the pirates' murderous campaign.

Suddenly, the captain was snapped from his frustrated contemplation of the situation when Doug Richards burst through the doors to the ready room, apparently having dispensed with all notions of protocol or privacy.

"We need you out here, sir," the first officer told him curtly, his face a mask of what the captain identified as panic. Richards had been assigned to the Houston only three months earlier as first officer, and Kelland had noticed how the commander displayed definite indications of being out of his depth at being second in command of a modern Starfleet vessel.

But such concerns over the suitability of Richards to his new role were swiftly banished by Kelland as he charged from the private sanctuary of his ready room and onto the Houston's bridge, moving to stand beside Richards on the deck just forward of his command chair. On the viewscreen, the Bolian freighter was no longer tumbling uncontrolled through space, having been caught by the Starfleet ship's tractor beams and brought to rest as a sign of respect to the crew. All around Kelland, his well-trained bridge crew were studiously engaged in their duties, obviously concentrating on whatever urgent development had prompted Richards to burst into the ready room in such a manner.

"Report," the captain called into the tense hush that had descended over the command centre.

"We're picking up a signal on a civilian subspace channel," Richards informed him. "It's not directed at anyone in particular, someone just sent it out into space for all to hear."

"What does it say?" Kelland demanded, his harsh tone betraying his annoyance at having to press Richards for information in this way.

"Someone says they've sighted the Red Dagger not far from here," the commander said. "They've included a rough approximation of its course. It looks to be travelling perpendicular to the Neutral Zone border."

Spurred into action by this unexpected piece of good fortune in many weeks, Kelland spun to address the young lieutenant currently manning the helm console. "Yellow alert! Make our course to follow theirs and engage at warp nine!" he commanded before glancing back at Richards. "I'm not letting this bastard get away this time."

Richards nodded in agreement. "Why do you think he isn't using his masking circuitry?"

"Perhaps the Bolians managed to do more damage to the Dagger than we initially thought," the captain postulated, watching the viewscreen as the freighter slid out of sight. Moments later, the distant stars stretched into long streaks of starlight, and the starship shuddered slightly as the powerful engines flared to life and accelerated the Houston into warp.

"Now at warp nine, captain," the helmsman announced.

Kelland nodded absently in acknowledgement, his tactician's mind already calculating the best strategy for attacking the formidable pirate vessel that was now his quarry.

 

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Two hours into the Houston's pursuit of the damaged Red Dagger, Paul Kelland sat anxiously in the ship's main dining room, aware of the increased vibrations being transmitted through the deck that signified a starship being driven hard. At speeds below warp factor nine the modern Starfleet vessel offered no noticeable indication of its velocity, but at warp nine and above even the ship's state-of-the-art inertial dampener systems were unable to fully suppress the vibrations produced by the powerful warp engines.

The dining room was quiet that evening, with only a handful of the Houston's one hundred and forty strong crew choosing to eat their meals with their colleagues in the vessel's main communal area. Kelland fully understood and agreed with their decision, he himself having little or no appetite and unable to stop his mental preparation for the forthcoming battle that he faced. But he hadn't eaten in the twelve hours since his light breakfast that morning, and had finally succumbed to Doug Richards' repeated invitations to dinner as the starship at yellow alert sped through this lonely part of the galaxy.

"Well I can't be the only one who's gonna be glad to get the hell off the Romulan frontier," the first officer said breezily, placing two large, freshly-replicated plates of sirloin steak and salad down on the small table shared by the two officers. "Whether or not we do manage to catch the Red Dagger, this whole mess becomes someone else's problem in a few days' time."

Kelland looked up at Richards, who had wasted no time in attacking his steak with his knife and fork. "That's hardly the attitude one would expect from a Starfleet officer," he replied coldly, allowing his words to hang in the air for long moments. For the second time that day, the captain was seriously doubting if Richards was possessed of either the ability nor character to be second-in-command of the Houston.

"I'm sorry, captain," Richards apologised without glancing up, just before shovelling a large fork-full of steak and salad into his mouth. "All I'm saying is that I won't be sorry when the Discovery relieves us and we can get back to our normal duties."

Kelland sighed quietly, cutting into his own steak with what little enthusiasm for the meal he was able to muster. While he didn't appreciate or agree with Richards' sentiment that they should simply wash their hands of the frightening situation with the Red Dagger, he was also a man who had always prided himself on being in touch with his crew's mood. He knew that the ship's company was eager to leave the monotonous patrol duty on the fringes of known space, beyond which lay the Federation's oldest and most powerful adversary.

Largely abandoned by Federation citizens who did not want to live with the constant spectre of the Romulan Empire hanging over their daily lives, the lonely tracts of space alongside the Neutral Zone were not a pleasant place to be. Federation ships and vessels from the nonaligned worlds tended to give the Neutral Zone a wide berth.

For obvious regions, no one wanted to wake the dragon.

Starfleet however did not have the luxury of avoiding the Neutral Zone, and for nearly two hundred years its starships and listening posts had maintained a constant watch over the border. And whether Doug Richards liked it or not, the Houston was one such ship, having been assigned by Starfleet Command to relieve the aging USS Discovery that had returned to Earth for scheduled maintenance and refitting.

"When we do turn this patrol over the Discovery," Kelland began slowly, unsure of how to broach this particular subject with Richards, "We're going to be heading to Starbase 718 for resupply. At that time I intend to request that you be transferred off the Houston, commander."

Richards paused, his eyes widening as he looked up at his captain. "May I ask why?" he said, a little hoarsely.

Kelland placed his knife and fork down on the plate. "Commander, onboard any vessel, but particularly aboard a front line Starfleet ship, it is of utmost importance that the captain and first officer are, and appear to the crew, in step with each other. Perhaps I've been fortunate enough during my career as a captain to always serve with a first officer who compliments my particular style of command. However I don't feel that to be the case with ourselves, Mr. Richards."

The commander looked aghast. "I don't know what to say," he stammered.

"Don't take this as a commentary on your skills or abilities as a Starfleet officer," Kelland told him, remaining professional. "I have absolutely no doubt that you would flourish given a new assignment serving under a different captain. I'm afraid the Houston is, for whatever reason, not a suitable posting for you."

Richards sat back in his chair, apparently having lost his mighty appetite. "Is there anything in particular that has led you to this decision?"

"As I've said, I simply don't feel that our styles are compatible," Kelland said, endeavouring to be as diplomatic as possible.

Richards opened his mouth to speak again, but was interrupted by the sudden and intrusive wail of the red alert klaxon.

"Bridge to captain!" the officer called urgently as strips of crimson lighting began flashing around the dining room. "We've found him sir!"

Kelland launched himself out of his chair, hitting his combadge as he strode toward the room's only doorway. "I'm on my way!" he called, hesitating as the door panels hissed open to look back at Commander Richards with a smile. "Now how about we complete our short assignment together on a high?"

Richards grinned. "I'd like that, sir," he said, pushing himself to his feet.

With the red alert siren calling the Houston's crew to battle, both men ran for the bridge.

 

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Paul Kelland charged onto the bridge of the Houston after one of the most anxious turbolift rides of his life, swiftly crossing the compact room that sat at the pinnacle of the ship's primary hull and dropping into his command chair. The darkened bridge, illuminated intermittently by red lighting, was now noticeably busier than it had been when he'd left for the dining room. This was of course necessary when the ship was entering a combat situation, where crew members would need to be instantly replaced at their stations should they be injured during the forthcoming battle.

"Intercept in two minutes, captain!" the helmsman called over his shoulder, his fingers moving rapidly over the complex helm controls as the Starfleet ship rapidly closed on its quarry.

"Okay," Kelland announced, raising his voice to address all those present on the bridge, "You've all seen first-hand the atrocities that this ship has committed over the last few months. They've gone beyond piracy and committed hideous acts of murder against defenceless civilian crews. This may be our only opportunity to confront the Red Dagger, and I know that you all share my determination to put an end to these atrocities and bring those murderers to justice. We go in hard and fast. I intend to show them no more mercy than they showed the freighter crews."

"Thirty seconds to intercept," the helmsman reported.

"Raise shields!" Kelland commanded fiercely. "Bring the phasers online and ready photon torpedoes!"

"All sections report ready, sir!" Doug Richards reported.

The captain braced himself for the inevitable drop from the subspace realm that permitted flight at faster-than-light warp velocities, tensing as a vibration moved through the deck beneath him.

The inertial dampers strained against the tremendous deceleration from warp factor nine to a relative stop, working in conjunction with the structural integrity force fields and physical support bulkheads to keep the starship in one piece.

On the main viewer, Kelland watched the elongated white chalk marks that had been stars, transform back into distant pinpricks of light as the Houston came screaming out of warp. In the centre of the screen the hideous crimson-hued hull of the infamous Red Dagger suddenly exploded into view, its disruptor cannons already discharging a stream of destructive energy toward the oncoming Starfleet ship.

The Houston shuddered heavily under the first volleys of disruptor fire impacting the forward defensive shields, as the ship dived in toward the Dagger at full impulse.

"Fire all weapons!" Kelland bellowed, tightly gripping the arms of his command chair as the Houston absorbed a second volley from the pirate vessel's cannons.

Searing lances of phaser fire burned across the void, accompanied by the blinding red flashes of photon torpedoes launched from beneath the Houston's primary hull, all of which impacted against the powerful shields of the Dagger as the Starfleet ship banked sharply away to avoid a collision.

"Those disruptor cannons are packing a hell of a punch, captain!" Lennox called from tactical, using the brief respite of the Houston overshooting the Dagger to deliver his report. "Our shields are at eighty-five percent!"

Kelland gritted his teeth as the Houston banked to starboard, describing a tight arc in space to come back around to face her quarry. If the defensive shields of a new-orleans class Starfleet vessel had been weakened by fifteen percent after just two volleys from the Dagger's disruptor cannons, it was little wonder they'd made such easy work of so many civilian freighters with little or no armament.

"Fire at your discretion, Mr. Lennox!" the captain ordered, watching the pirate ship slide back into view and discharge a fearsome barrage from its cannons.

The Houston's shields flared blue as they absorbed continued disruptor blasts, responding in kind with a volley of photon torpedoes combined with successive arrows of phaser fire.

"I'm estimating the Dagger's shield strength as around forty percent, captain!" Richards reported, working frantically at an auxiliary station on the quarterdeck. "Their speed is dropping! I think we've damaged their engines!"

"Good shooting, Mr. Lennox!" Kelland called. "Helm, bring us around for another pass!"

The Houston described a tight arc in space, all the while taking fire from the Dagger.

"They're distuptor cannons are packing one hell of a punch, captain!" Richards warned..

"Photon torpedoes!" Kelland snapped, grasping the arms of his command chair as his ship completed her turn and brought her weapons to bear on the pirate.

The Starfleet vessel charged at the Dagger, releasing a volley of torpedoes from its forward tubes that smashed into the pirate vessel in a massive explosion of energy.

"They're breaking off!" Richards shouted. "I think we've done some damage!"

On the viewscreen, the Dagger was pulling away from the confrontation, the whole time spitting bursts of disruptor fire toward the onrushing Houston.

"Stay with them, helm!" Kelland ordered, "What's the status of their shields?"

"Estimating twenty percent of maximum power," Richards replied promptly, "Another volley of photon torpedoes should finish them off."

"Fire as soon as we're back within range!" the captain said, watching the fleeing pirate ship. "Are the boarding parties ready to go?"

Richards nodded. "Four teams of six can be beamed aboard at your command, captain," he confirmed.

As the Houston closed on the Dagger again, Lennox discharged a fearsome volley of photon torpedoes, each one striking its target perfectly.

"Their shields are down!" Richards reported.

"Open a channel!" Kelland commanded.

"Channel open!" Lennox confirmed.

"This is Captain Paul Kelland of the Federation starship Houston," the captain announced to the pirates. "You are wanted by Starfleet for multiple acts of piracy and murder. Stand down your weapons and prepare to be boarded."

"Captain, the Dagger is changing course!" Richards reported urgently. "They're heading into the Neutral Zone!"

"Full stop!" Kelland snapped as he pushed himself out of his chair, unable to remain seated a moment longer. "Mr. Lennox, stop that ship!"

The blistering red arrow of nadion energy lanced out from the Starfleet ship, burning its way across the rapidly-increasing distance between the Houston and the Dagger and striking the retreating pirate vessel squarely astern.

"Direct hit!" Lennox exclaimed.

"Their impulse engines just went offline!" Richards added.

Kelland ignored the hushed murmurs of triumph from amongst the assembled bridge crew and pushed himself to his feet, walking forward to stand between the helm and operations consoles, as if those few feet would bring him closer to his quarry that now drifted helplessly on the viewscreen. Without the mass-reducing effect produced by its impulse engines, the Red Dagger had stalled a million kilometres into the Neutral Zone. Now driven forward by only what little momentum it still carried, the Dagger travelled at only a thousand KPH, effectively coming to a dead stop in galactic terms.

But the million kilometre wide expanse of space that lay between the Houston and its quarry was blocked by an invisible barrier that the Starfleet ship was unable to breach. On the viewscreen, the Dagger spun slightly on its axis, still moving into the Neutral Zone but clearly having lost power. With its engines inoperative and its weapons and shields offline, the most infamous pirate vessel ever to operate in this part of space was defenceless and adrift. In any other situation the Red Dagger could be called a sitting duck, but at that particular moment it was protected behind a line drawn on a galactic map long ago.

Every Starfleet officer knew that any incursion of into the Neutral Zone by military vessels belonging to either Starfleet or the Romulan Guard would be classed as an act of war that would in all probability lead to a devastating conflict between the two most powerful organisations in this part of the galaxy.

"Range to target?" Kelland snapped, speaking into the strange lull that had descended over the bridge following the short-lived battle.

"About nine-hundred thousand kilometres, captain," Richards reported, the tone of his voice betraying the futility of the current situation.

Kelland felt his jaw tighten, the anger at having the murderous crew of pirates within arms reach but unable to grasp them. "I suppose increasing the range of our tractor beam or weapons is out of the question," he asked of no one in particular, mentally weighing what few options were currently available to him.

"We can't push either that far, sir," Lennox said quietly, confirming what the captain already knew.

Kelland shifted uncomfortably, the frustration of looking at the Dagger sitting in space ahead of the Houston threatening to overwhelm him. When he thought of the atrocities that the Dagger had committed in the last few months, atrocities that he himself had witnessed firsthand, it seemed almost unthinkable to have come so close to apprehending the ship only to be stopped in such a manner.

"A moment of your time, commander," Kelland said after a moment, gesturing for Richards to join him. "Mr. Lennox keep a close eye on the Dagger, inform me if anything changes."

The captain led his Richards out of the Houston's command centre and into the adjacent ready room, coming to a halt in the centre of the small office and waiting for the doors to slide closed behind his first officer, ensuring that the bridge crew was out of earshot before he started speaking.

"Okay, commander," Kelland began, "That ship out there is responsible for dozens of hideous attacks on defenceless civilian shipping. You and I have both seen the result of an attack by the Red Dagger. These people have committed acts that go beyond simple piracy and stealing cargo, they're boarding ships and cutting helpless crew members to pieces with bladed weapons and have been doing so for months without being challenged by Starfleet. Today fate seems to have handed us the opportunity to bring them to justice, and I can't simply stand by an squander that opportunity because of a line drawn on a map."

Richards gazed at his commanding officer for long moments, appearing to consider his words carefully before speaking. "Captain," he said cautiously, "Entering the Neutral Zone is just about the most heinous crime that a Starfleet commander is capable of. Our ships are absolutely forbidden to do so under any circumstances short of us invading the Romulan Empire. Our treaty with them is explicit: no military spacecraft from either side may enter the Neutral Zone. The consequences would likely be a full-scale war between the Federation and Romulus."

Kelland blew out a long, exasperated breath. "I'm well aware of the treaty stipulations, Mr. Richards," he stated flatly. "But I'm also aware that there have been incursions into the Neutral Zone by both sides in the years since it was established. Now I'm not saying that those commanders have necessarily been justified on those occasions, but they haven't caused a war."

Richard's eyebrows rose in surprise. "I've studied history as well, captain," he retorted. "And on each occasion the political fallout was immense and we were extremely fortunate not to be drawn into a war with the Romulan Empire."

"I'm not talking about taking this ship and dropping photon torpedoes on Romulan planets on the other side of the Neutral Zone!" Kelland snapped, pacing back and forth as he spoke. "I'm taking about edging a million kilometres over the border to apprehend a ship full of brutal murderers! Hell, we could put that sort of distance down to a navigational error!"

"I doubt that, sir," Richards muttered.

"Commander, if I simply let the Dagger sit there for the next few hours and make repairs we'll lose them all over again!" the captain continued, speaking quickly. "They'll fix their engines and weapons, get their masking circuitry back online and vanish into the Neutral Zone! They'll continue attacking shipping and who knows how many innocent people will be massacred before Starfleet catches up with them again!?"

Richard's gaze was downcast, and he stared at the carpeted deck for long moments before replying. "Despite what I might have said earlier about turning this problem over to the Discovery, simply leaving the Red Dagger make its escape again doesn't sit well with me either, captain. But the fact of the matter is that whatever that vessel is guilty of, it's currently sitting inside an area of space that we're forbidden to enter." He paused. "Look, you know how closely Starfleet monitors this part of space. We've got starships and listening posts stationed along the entire length of the Neutral Zone watching Romulan ship movements around the clock, and we know for a fact that the Romulans watch us just as closely. Maybe even more so considering their nature."

"The Neutral Zone is hundreds of light-years in length," Kelland said. "They can't monitor everything that goes on on our side any more than we can monitor everything that goes on on theirs, despite the assurances given to the general public by Starfleet. The Dagger is adrift and disabled, we only need to take the Houston just over the border and lock onto it with a tractor beam. Then we can drag them back into Federation space and board their ship. The whole thing wouldn't take more than a few minutes."

"I'm not sure, sir," Richards admitted, clearly uncomortable with what his captain was proposing. "It's tempting, but if we're spotted by the Romulans the repercussions would be enormous."

"I doubt even the Romulan Empire would go to war with the Federation over us apprehending a pirate vessel guilty of committing terrible acts of violence against civilian ships," Kelland told him.

"It's ultimately your decision, captain," Richards said finally.

"I'm not letting him get away," Kelland stated flatly, before turning and walking straight past Richards, striding out of the ready room and back onto the bridge, followed closely by his first officer. Both men stood before the command chair, eyeing the stalled pirate vessel in the distance.

"Helm," the captain began, thereby resigning himself to intruding, however briefly, into the Neutral Zone, "On my order you will bring us alongside the Dagger as quickly as possible. Mr. Lennox, stand ready to secure the vessel with a tractor beam for immediate retrieval to our current position."

Somewhat understandably, the bridge crew hesitated upon hearing their captain's latest orders, exchanging concerned glances with each other. They were a well-trained crew who were unfailingly loyal to Paul Kelland, but they also all knew the repercussions that could result from a Starfleet ship entering the Neutral Zone, having had the scenario cited numerous times throughout their training.

But inexplicable the order may be, a Federation starship was not governed by a democracy.

"You heard the captain!" Doug Richards suddenly barked from his position at Kelland's side, his sharp tone snapping the hesitant members of the bridge crew into action.

The helmsman tapped the necessary points on his console, and the battle-damaged Houston slid forward across the invisible line that had been drawn in space so long ago. Though there was no tantible change as the vessel crossed into the buffer zone between the Federation and the Romulan Empire, everyone on the bridge was aware of the noticeable increase in tension at encroaching into a place where they were forbidden to enter.

Kelland watched intently as his ship closed swiftly on the Red Dagger, traversing the distance between the disabled pirate vessel in less than a minute. As the Houston pulled alongside the Dagger, everyone present on the bridge appeared to hold their breath as if they suspected a war with Romulus may start at that very moment.

"Preparing to lock on tractor beams," Lennox reported from tactical, apparently as eager as everyone else to snare the Dagger and get back to Federation territory.

"Wait," Commander Richards called out, standing at an auxiliary station on the quarterdeck.

"What is it?" Kelland asked curtly, in no mood for delays at that particular moment.

"I'm showing a significant amount of power still being generated by the Dagger's engines," Richards elaborated, a worried tone creeping into his voice. "I'm not detecting any damage that would account for them coming to a stop out here. In fact I don't think we've done nearly as much damage to them as we first thought."

Kelland looked back at the viewscreen, not fully wanting to comprehend the ramifications of what the first officer was telling him. If the Dagger had essentially come to a stop within the Neutral Zone, just outside the Houston's effective weapons range, when no significant damage had been done to its engines, it led him straight to an inescapable, horrifying conclusion.

"We've flown straight into a trap," he muttered, seemingly needing to speak his sudden realisation aloud before his brain could fully accept it as the truth. "Helm, bring us about!"

But it was too late.

 

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"Ships decloaking!" Richards called out. "They've got us surrounded!"

Kelland watched the viewscreen in abject horror as the murky green spacecraft shimmered into existence all around his ship at point-blank range. As a twenty-five year veteran of Starfleet service, the captain recognised them as being outmoded Romulan vessels even before they'd fully emerged from beneath their cloaks. As his tactician's mind raced he realised that it was unlikely that these were current Romulan ships, since the Romulan Guard tended to keep vessels in service for less than two decades before retiring them in favour of more modern designs. Those retired ships, still perfectly serviceable spacecraft despite being forsaken by the Romulans themselves, were often turned over to their subject races for use in their own fleets.

"Hail those ships," Kelland ordered, mentally considering how best to explain his presence inside the Romulan Neutral Zone to whoever commanded the small fleet that had just decloaked. While it was true that the incursion of vessels into the Neutral Zone belonging to either the Romulan Guard or Starfleet had long been considered an act of war, the language of the treaty had been left intentionally ambiguous with regard to other vessels not directly involved with the military. A handful of trade routes had been established between the Empire's subjugated worlds and the Federation, and the civilian ships that plied these routes traversed the Neutral Zone with impunity.

Since Kelland considered it highly unlikely that the newcomers belonged to the Romulan Guard, he could not even claim that both parties were equally culpable and the situation was therefore a stalemate.

"No answer to our hails, captain," Richards replied eventually, having given the surrounding vessels ample time to respond.

Kelland closed his eyes for a moment, weighing what limited options were currently available to him. The ships had clearly taken an aggressive posture, decloaking within a few hundred metres of the lone Starfleet vessel. In spacegoing terms, the ships were within touching-distance of the Houston, having positioned themselves so that the Houston was left with no unobstructed course out of its current quandary.

Kelland supposed he could slowly ease his ship forward, thereby forcing the surrounding spacecraft into a situation where they had to move or risk colliding with the oncoming Starfleet ship. However his current predicament was already untenable, and forcing a collision with another vessel would turn an already precarious situation into a potentially catastrophic one. He dismissed the option of the Houston fighting her way out of her current captivity without a second thought, even assuming he had the firepower at his disposal to overwhelm these ships enough to make an escape back to Federation space. Even if he did manage to succeed under such circumstances, the political fallout would be phenomenal.

Grimly, he realised that whatever the outcome of the situation, his successful career with Starfleet was essentially over. Even if Starfleet Command decided by some miracle not to have him cashiered out of the service in disgrace, he would almost certainly be stripped of rank and given the most abject duty available.

"I'm detecting activity from one of the vessels above us," Richards announced. "It looks like they're lowering something from their ventral cargobay."

Kelland looked up at his first officer. "Can you identify it?" he asked.

"It's a metallic object of some kind," the first officer elaborated, scrutinising the sensor data intently. "Reading large concentrations of tricobalt explosive."

The captain needed no more information. "It's a bomb," he announced sharply, turning to address Lennox at tactical and speaking with a forced calm that he didn't feel. "Begin broadcasting a distress signal and reroute all available power to the shields. Shore them up as best you can!"

A tricobalt bomb was an outdated weapon whose origins could be found back in the mid twenty-third century, designed to be used against an enemy's planetside facilities or slow-moving targets like spacestations or supply depots. Kelland knew that they were also extremely powerful weapons despite their crude nature, and though they were virtually useless when used against starships, the stationary Houston was currently a perfect target.

If the bomb exploded at this range, even with the shields at maximum power, the Houston would be lucky to survive.

"Open a priority channel to those ships," Kelland ordered urgently.

"Channel open," Lennox confirmed. "They can hear you, captain."

"This is Paul Kelland commanding the Federation starship Houston," the captain announced, speaking with an urgency that reflected his anxiety. "Call off your attack and we can resolve this situation peacefully and without bloodshed. If you destroy this ship the consequences for both the Federation and the Romulan Empire will be extreme. Please respond."

Long, tense moments passed as Kelland and the rest of the bridge crew awaited a transmission from the surrounding vessels.
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"They've cut the bomb loose, captain," Richards said quietly, his voice carrying an apparent resignation that there was nothing more they could do to prevent what would happen next.

"Shields are holding at seventy percent of maximum," Lennox added.

At that moment, the Houston shuddered heavily. Kelland had been in space long enough to recognise that tractor beams had been attached to the hull of his ship.

"Reading a power surge in -"

Doug Richards' never finished his sentence.

 

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Re: Star Trek Discovery - Need some help, fanfic well and truly stalle

I think it stands pretty well as is. If you're wanting to better justify the Dagger drifting into the Neutral Zone, you could technobabble it up a bit by saying the last few phaser hits from the Houston cause some short circuits in the impulse controls of the Dagger that make her surge into impulse speed for a few seconds before the system gives completely out and then she stalls.

 

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Re: Star Trek Discovery - Need some help, fanfic well and truly stalle

It's good but would the captain still require a bit more motivation to break the neutral zone agreement even to chase this murderous pirate?