...the remastererd version makes the text very readable...on the whole, MUCH more readable than an employment contract.
Some bits I would like to see in all contracts:
"This section deals with the right of each party to confer with the other in the even something screwy happens"
"You might think that this is incredibly clever stuff. Boy are you wrong. That goes double for anyone who had anything to do with the original treaty. Most of those lawyer folks are like in the the hospital, along with the executives of the Sirius Cybernetics Corporation."
"All requests for changes in the text of provision (B) must be submitted in writing or by a terribly complex subspace coded signal, as long as it is encrypted and unreadable, as well as garbled and confused, so as to conform to the provision (A.294 A-C) of the Incomprehensible Acts of Widdershins"
"we just thought we'd try to demonstrate our legalistic cleverness"
Some bits I would like to see in all contracts:
"This section deals with the right of each party to confer with the other in the even something screwy happens"
"You might think that this is incredibly clever stuff. Boy are you wrong. That goes double for anyone who had anything to do with the original treaty. Most of those lawyer folks are like in the the hospital, along with the executives of the Sirius Cybernetics Corporation."
"All requests for changes in the text of provision (B) must be submitted in writing or by a terribly complex subspace coded signal, as long as it is encrypted and unreadable, as well as garbled and confused, so as to conform to the provision (A.294 A-C) of the Incomprehensible Acts of Widdershins"
"we just thought we'd try to demonstrate our legalistic cleverness"
Still hoping we see the Sheliak again 
