Title: Captain's Desire Author: Whoa Nellie (whoa_nellie40@hotmail.com) Series: TNG Codes: P/V Synopsis: A mirror version of Captain's Holiday. As always: Paramount owns all the marbles. We just have a lot more fun playing with them. Feedback is always appreciated - posted or e-mail. Whoa Nellie's Picard/Vash Romance Fanfiction website: http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/Galaxy/7926/ Whoa Nellie's Sci-Fi Romance Fan Fiction Website is at: http://www.geocities.com/whoa_nellies2000 CAPTAIN'S DESIRE On the poolside patio at the Risan resort, Vash rested comfortably in a chaise lounge. As far as the other patrons were concerned, she was engrossed in a book on her lap, but she was well aware of the Ferengi who casually strolled past and loitered near her. Sovak discreetly scanned the area while clandestinely speaking to the human female. "Vorgons were concerned after speaking with you. They got the impression that you weren't going to allow them to destroy it." "Smart and perceptive, those Vorgons." Sovak closed his eyes and shook his head in silent frustration with the intractable female. "The item is dangerous. You should give serious thought to its destruction." "I'd rather give serious thought to finding and studying it," she calmly retorted. "Consider what I've said. It's not worth the risk," Sovak warned before wandering off. From across the patio, Imperial Captain Jean-Luc Picard watched the woman and decided that her dossier image didn't do her justice. Her brunette hair gently cascaded to her shoulders, framing her delicate features. Her swimsuit accentuated the perfect curves of her silhouette and perfectly set off her long, shapely legs. He demanded quietly into the communicator he held in his hand, "have you found the disk?" "Not yet, captain. If it's here, we'll find it" "Find it or answer for it," he ordered curtly before cutting off the channel. Returning the communicator to his pocket, he purposefully strode over to the woman. "Hello." "Look, I don't mean to appear rude, but I am not seeking Jamaharohn," Vash responded in a weary tone without even looking up to see who had approached her. "I don't recall suggesting the search." The powerfully-masculine timbre of the voice caused Vash to look up. The man standing over her had a sleek, muscular build and handsome, chiseled features. The corded muscles of his well-defined arms were displayed by a sleeveless, leather vest while tight leather pants conformed impressively to his lower body. She found herself flustered, "I'm sorry . . . It's just that I've already been approached by five different men." "I find that quite understandable." Picard sat down and raised her hand to brush a courtly kiss across the back of it. "I'm Jean-Luc Picard, and you lovely lady?" The brush of his lips felt like a lightning strike, causing a shiver to race through her. "Vash" "Tell me about yourself, Vash." He gave her a small predatorial smile, his eyes hungrily raking over her every curve. "When it comes to such a beautiful woman I can be rather tenacious." "I'm a member of the archaeology council," she managed, held captive by his penetrating gaze. Her senses overwhelmed by the passionate charge between them, she retreated using the only route open to her and slipped off the other side of the lounge to leave. "If you'll excuse me." "Of course," he watched her head into the resort. ....................................... Reaching her suite of rooms, Vash activated the door and walked in. She gasped in shock at the sight of her ransacked room. The furnishings had been upended and her belongings strewn over the room. She was suddenly grabbed from behind by a large human male and hauled back against him. As he held her immobile, she could feel his breath on the side of her face. "What a sweet little morsel." "Come on, pretty thing. Hand over the goods and the three of us will have a little fun together," his cohort leered. He trailed a grubby finger down her neck, following the plunging neckline of her swimsuit to trace the swell of her breasts. Those were his last words before being vaporized by a single shot from a phaser on its highest setting. "Let her go." The voice of icy steel resonated with authority. Vash turned her head to see Picard standing there with a phaser in his hand. The man holding her glanced at the scorch mark where his companion had stood moments ago and abruptly released her, stepping aside. With a sharp cry, Vash involuntarily jumped as a second phaser shot flew past her, instantly vaporizing the second assailant. "You all right?" He slid the phaser back into his vest. "Yes," she nodded, quickly composing herself. "Whatever they were looking for must be valuable," he remarked casually while nonchalantly looking around the room. "Possibly the disk Professor Samuel Estragon left you containing his research notes and maps pinpointing the location of the Tox Uthat." "Who are you?" Vash demanded. She had spent the last five years as Estragon's personal assistant helping him search for the Uthat, a quantum phase inhibitor capable of halting all nuclear reaction within a star. The artifact was developed by a scientist named Kal Dano in the mid-twenty-seventh century and hidden in the past. When Estragon had disappeared, a box with all of his research on the Uthat had been delivered to her at her apartment with no explanation at all. He had never been heard from again. "How do you know about Dr. Estragon's research?" With admiration, he realized this belle was no shrinking violet. The fire in her blue eyes as she dared to challenge him had an aphrodisiac-like effect. He moved to stand directly in front of her leaving only an inch of space between them. "I'm the captain of an Imperial Starship and the man who just saved your lovely neck. As for how I know about it, I'm the captain of an Imperial Starship, I have my sources." "I'm not looking for a partner," she stated flatly. "Your two friends had already finished searching your room and were about to start searching you next," he reminded her. "Give me the disk, I'll go in your place and whomever hired your friends will follow me. You will remain here, safe." "I don't follow orders, captain," Vash countered brazenly. "Besides, you'll never find it without me; the professor's notes are in code." He studied her and when he spoke, his baritone voice was low and husky. "From the moment we met I knew you were going to be trouble." "You're obviously a man who can handle trouble," she purred seductively, all of her attention riveted on the man in front of her. He decided to get back to the business at hand. "How far is it to our destination?" "A series of subterranean caves lie twenty-nine kilometers due east. That's where we'll find the Uthat." ............................. Picard cautiously peered around the cave they had entered, checking for any possible threats. "Have you calculated how much further we have to go?" Vash checked her tricorder and answered, "another eleven kilometers." He set down the backpack he had been carrying, this looked like the best place he'd seen in the past hour to make camp. "We'll remain here for the night." "I was hoping you'd say that." Vash began laying out the bedroll. "We made better time than I expected," he noted as he helped her. "I'll take that as a compliment," she gave a smile of flirtation with a tinge of smugness. A night in a cave sleeping next to such a virile man lent a whole new dimension to this adventure. "As it was intended." He laid down on his side next to her propped up on one elbow. The Tox Uthat was no longer the only treasure on Risa he was interested in plundering. Vash's khaki workshirt and shorts accentuated the feminine curves of her lithe silhouette. His eyes greedily drank in the way the undone buttons of her shirt exposed a hint of the curves beneath while the simple khaki shorts conformed the slimness of her waist, outlining the flare of her hips. "I'll never forget that look on your face when you thought I was offering you Jamaharon." "That was a simple misunderstanding," Vash whispered, a blush creeping over her features. She felt like a tiny robin that had fallen under the spell of a king cobra's stare. The carnal heat from his intense gaze coursed over her entire body like it were an actual physical caress. "When I offer a woman Jamaharon, I make sure there is no misunderstanding my intentions," he assured her, his deep, resonating voice taking on a decidedly wolfish tone. He reached out with one hand to entangle his fingers in her silky hair and forced her face to his, powerfully crushing her lips beneath his own. His tongue plunged past her parted lips, decisively staking claim to everything in its path. ...................................... Late the next afternoon, an exhausted Vash and Picard stood in the deep pit they'd spent the better part of the day digging. A whining noise drew their attention to an outcropping higher up in the cave chamber just in time to see Sovak and two Vorgons materializing. "A bit early, aren't you?" Vash asked Sovak while wiping her brow. The Ferengi tried again to reason with the scholar. "I know how badly you want to study the Uthat, Vash, but you cannot trust this man. He will turn it into a weapon. You must allow the Vorgons to destroy it." "Who the hell are they?" the imperial captain demanded. His arm flung out in a wild gesture toward the intruders. "They're Vorgon security officers from the twenty-seventh century. They're here to destroy the Uthat," Sovak replied. Picard snarled. "How did you find us, you little troll?" He turned to eye Vash suspiciously. Vash threw her arms out and shrugged her shoulders. "I made a back-up copy of the disk, but I burned it in my room before we left." "Only the outer casing was incinerated," Sovak explained. "And she's not the only one who worked for Professor Estragon; she's also not the only one who knew his code." "It doesn't matter, the Uthat isn't here," Vash grumbled putting down her shovel. She turned to Picard sounding crestfallen. "According to the disk we should have reached it hours ago." "Are you saying Estragon's findings were wrong?" Picard inquired. Vash didn't even try to hide her disappointment. "It would appear so." "It is most puzzling," One of the Vorgons muttered to the other. He pressed a button and they disappeared, taking Sovak with them. ................................................. Back at the resort, cleaned up and changed into a soft, flowing dress of pink chiffon, Vash hurried across the deserted lobby toward the Horga'hn shrine. "Leaving so soon?" Picard asked from the secluded spot where he had been waiting for just this moment. "Jean-Luc -- I was just about to come say good-bye." She was startled to see him in his uniform. The vest made of a crimson fabric with gold epaulettes emphasized the masculine slope of his shoulders. Glinting in the moonlight, a ceremonial dagger hung from the woven-gold sash that belted the waist of the short vest. The tight black, uniform pants conformed to his body's every muscle as he crossed the patio toward her. "I want to put all this behind me as soon as possible. You understand." "Of course." Moving to stand behind her, he reached around her to lightly trail his fingers up the arm and shoulder left bare by her dress. "However, there is one last thing you can do for me." "Anything," she breathed, her senses reeling from the warmth of his strong hand on her bare skin. "Show me where you've hidden the Tox Uthat." Before she could respond, he roughly yanked her back against him. "You never intended to burn that disk. If you had, you wouldn't have been so careless as to allow Sovak to salvage any of it. You wanted him and the Vorgons to follow us so they could see for themselves that the Uthat wasn't at the cave site. It was the only way to convince them that your quest had been futile." "But how could I have known the Uthat wasn't there?" Vash's voice was raspy with apprehension. He wouldn't--couldn't actually do anything to her in public, Imperial Captain or not. "Because you had gone there once before, probably the moment you arrived on the planet. That's when you found it." She felt him release her but somehow she could still feel the hold he had over her. Compelled by an unspoken command, she took a step forward toward the shrine and removed a Horga'hn. Opening it, she showed Picard the crystal hidden inside. Her voice was filled with wonder. "A piece of the future." "A very powerful piece." He took the crystal from the Horga'hn. "Too powerful to be trusted to the likes of you." Sovak walked out from the shadows training a weapon on Picard. "You are becoming quite an annoyance," Picard complained wearily. "As are you, human. Perhaps I should kill you and then destroy the Uthat." "No, wait . . ." Vash interrupted, taking the Uthat from Picard. Picard rushed the Ferengi and slammed his shoulders into Sovak. The force of his attack drove them both to the ground and sent the weapon flying across the patio. Sovak tried to choke Picard with both hands around his neck. The Imperial captain brought his arms up to break the hold and slammed Sovak's chin backward with his open palm. The force of the blow caused the Ferengi 's head to snap back, hitting the ground with a sickening thud. Picard looked over to see the Uthat on the ground and Vash standing a few meters back pointing Sovak's weapon at it. Picard stood and moved toward her. "Vash, the chance to study such a treasure will never come again." "He could use it as a weapon to kill billions, destroy it," Sovak urged from his spot on the ground. Closing her eyes and taking a deep breath, Vash fired the weapon destroying the Uthat. The Vorgons appeared once again behind Sovak. "History recorded that you destroyed the Uthat. You have fulfilled your destiny well, Vash." The Vorgons disappeared again. Sovak scrambled to his feet, breathing hard. He turned and headed toward the exit. "All's well that ends well." "You're a resourceful and cunning woman," Picard walked over taking the weapon from her to throw it into a nearby bush. The Ferengi was forgotten the moment he left the lobby. Brushing his fingers over her smooth cheek, his next words were emphasized by a tone of possessive pride. "The perfect captain's woman. At least I won't be returning empty handed." He took her into his arms and activated his communicator. "Picard to Enterprise, two to beam up." ***FINIS***
I remember this from the first time. Nice story but does it count? The mirror universe isn't the one as depicted in Trek Canon as per the challenge?, Picard would be a slave, not an Imperial captain given what happened to the Empire?
Interesting point Starkers....and also brings up something I hadn't thought about in my initial challenge. It seems that many people, myself included didn't watch the Mirror Universe story line in DS-9 as closely, or if they did, they disagreed with it. I'd be willing to entertain a quick poll about either making the challenge about Mirror Universes, more loosely...although there was a challenge about alternates in the past apparently. Or possible just basing it on the TOS depiction with extrapolation from there. in short, question, should this contest be more or less restrictive? I for one, would vote for more freedom in depiction of Mirror, as long as it doesn't get really wierd, like United Federation of Lizardia or some such.
Thank you. I'm pleased to hear you liked it. No, it doesn't count because it is a year old written for a previous challenge. I did go back to the original mirror universe story, the TOS episode "Mirror, Mirror" one of my all time favorites for my inspiration. My reasoning was that the use of Dr. Richard Feynmann theory of the 'Sum over histories' in the TNG episode "Paralles" stating that a particle would not have a single history or path in space-time, but would instead follow every possible path, meant that the Mirror universe shown to us in TOS would have branched out into many different universes with many different outcomes some where the Empire fell and some where it didn't. And I will freely admit I cannot stand the DS9 mirror episodes, I find them a bland wussification (is that a word? ) of the TOS concept, the mirror Kira Nerys being the only exception. I know, don't hold back Whoa Nellie, how do you really feel. As far as the actual rules for this month Dulak, that is up to you. The August/September 06 monthly Challenge was simply Alternate Universes and I had hit upon the idea of writing a mirror version of an episode as my submission that month. To see that idea issued as the monthly challenge almost exactly one year later just amazed and delighted me. Warmest Wishes, Whoa Nellie Whoa Nellie's Picard/Vash Romance Fanfiction website: http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/Galaxy/7926/ Whoa Nellie's Sci-Fi Romance Fan Fiction Website is at: http://www.geocities.com/whoa_nellies2000
Thank you so much for the very complimentary feedback. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. :thumbsup: Go for it! Stories in the Mirror Universe or stories with a mirror universe character in them are just way too much fun to write. That's why there are a number of them in the Whoa Nellie collection. Warmest Wishes, Whoa Nellie