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'One More Day' falls in your lap...

Gojirob

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This is not just a rant. Fictional scenario : You are a new writer at Marvel, done some decent fill-in work, slowly getting a rep. OMD comes down at Spidey, and, finding a loophole in his contract, JMS walks away from it in disgust before writing a single word. Worried stockholders, maybe prompted by Stan, get JQ to back off just enough so that, while the basic results will be the same, you, picked in desperation, get to choose how those results come about. Sadly, you must make Pete/MJ part ways, and probably by a retcon of some sort. But after that, how you get there is all you. Quesada has been warned by someone high enough to make him listen to not mess with one fine detail.

Not the best of all worlds either, but here's my take :

Among the people Peter instantly consults with in his moments with Doctor Strange is Ezekiel, maybe through some connection they have. He too refuses to save May, and says that the mystic stuff will also leave Peter's life for a good long time to come. He says that Peter can do this, by climbing a 'reality web', but advises against it like crazy, comparing it to messing with the universe's registry. Good advice not taken. Peter, overwhelmed once he gets there, sees a foolish Gwen embracing Norman, and, in his disgust, swipes at that portion of the web--unravelling the whole damned thing. As everything he knows collapses around him, he feverishly fires out new webbing, and to his initial delight, it looks the same. Only as ya know, whoever MADE this thing tosses him away does he realize its not exactly the same at all.

He awakens and wonders if he and MJ, who knows his secret, will ever get serious, wonders if Norman's and Eddie's mental instability will eventually undo their amnesia about his ID, and remembers the look of betrayal on Tony's face as he blew off the unmasking, wondering if the man will ever carry out his threat to out his ID. Spider-Man has laid low since then, and wonders if he could have stopped Steve Rogers from dying, had he just taken sides. Not doing so distinctly left him with many fewer super-friends.

Harry walks into Norman's office, says 'This just isn't working out', and hits the button that causes the clone Norman to dissolve, and then hits two more labeled 'Gabriel' and 'Sarah'. In the next room, Liz calms an upset Normie, while their two-year old adopted daughter (yup) sleeps calmly.

Gripe at mine, but let's hear yours, too.
 
Mine wouldn't contain a magical retcon at all, and thus probably wouldn't fit the bill, but it is fairly simple.

Instead of being an idiot and ignoring her morning sickness, MJ buys a home pregnancy test. Peter and MJ discuss the results and come to the conclusion that they can't raise a child as fugitives. Stark comes through for Aunt May and she's saved by Iron Man technology. It doesn't give her superpowers, but it does keep her heart beating. While Jarvis is still visiting May at the hospital, Peter and MJ use him to relay one last request to Tony. Iron Man, not being a total asshole, provides new identities for Aunt May and Mary Jane in order to protect them and the baby. Peter doesn't know who they are, where they are, or how to contact them, and he knows that trying will put them in extreme danger. So he finds himself alone, on the wrong side of the law, fighting for freedom and justice in a world gone mad. But he knows that if he ever succeeds he has a family waiting for him, out there, somewhere.
 
^^ That would have made a lot more sense. It doesn't bring Harry back to life, but why exactly would they do that anyway?
 
I like yours very much, and I did think along those lines. Problem is, Quesada exists, seems hell-bent on getting his way, EIC or no, and with seemingly all the creative-side types I've read liking splitting Peter/MJ all too well, my thoughts ran along mitigating the train wreck. Its the single biggest fan/creator divide that I can recall.

The only thing I can say for my mitigation is that, while it retains the annoying parts of OMD, it negates the exasperating WTF parts.
 
Yes, but we must still remember : Quesada can be defeated, but never destroyed.

Or am I mis-quoting?
 
Nah JoeQ can be defeated just needs someone with some guts to take him off his ivory tower. He was cool at first when he got the job, I thought he was taking Marvel in an interesting direction, but now its like if he doesn't like something he'll stop at nothing to see it change. I'm sure it is only a matter of time before we see a new Ultimate universe and that'll be the 616 reformatted.

OMD could have been handled in one simple way... MJ leaves Peter period. She loves him, yes. But she's been worrying and running and fighting since they got married. And I still think that Harry is alive, and he just had a clone die in the Osborn Institute in SSM#200 or he regen'd like his pop. Heck it would be interesting if it was all a scam by Harry to get her back. "Liz was too coddling and scared. But you MJ... you're strong, you're vital and my god woman you get hotter with each passing year."

Sure it might be some kinda manipulation/affair but done right could work. And would make Peter feel even worse that his wife left him for an old enemy. Although... in my twist, I'd have Harry as a benefactor to Pete as he goes fugitive. Partly to keep himself in MJ's good graces, but also to ensure that Pete sort of stays out of his life.
 
Quesada can be destroyed. He's just a mortal man in spite of his power. The problem is that killing a guy over a comic book is a bit excessive.

Every good story that can be told with a young Spidey has already been told, but that's what Quesada wants. You can tell better, more human, stories with a separated Spidey than you can with a magically never married Spidey, the trick would have been to sell Quesada the seperation in a way that he can accept, which means that it can't "age" the character. That's hard, but it could have doable. You just have to couch it in the right terms and put the right spin on it.

OMD could have been handled in one simple way... MJ leaves Peter period. She loves him, yes. But she's been worrying and running and fighting since they got married. And I still think that Harry is alive, and he just had a clone die in the Osborn Institute in SSM#200 or he regen'd like his pop. Heck it would be interesting if it was all a scam by Harry to get her back. "Liz was too coddling and scared. But you MJ... you're strong, you're vital and my god woman you get hotter with each passing year."

Quesada was right about one thing, MJ leaving doesn't work. It can't work. And it's actually worse than the stupid Mephisto plot. It would be like Jackie leaving JFK (when he was still alive) or Lois Lane leaving Superman or Bety and Veronica leaving Archie. It just completely destroys everything that they're about by having them give up for no good reason. So if they are going to seperate, the reason must be good. The incompatiability of rasing a baby and the fugitive lifestyle would be a good reason.
The only problem is that it is hard to sell a new Spider-Baby bacause Quesada is afraid that it'll "age" him, as are many others. Because they're idiots. Of course, keeping it far away from the actual story would mitigate that a little.




Personally, I still see some potential for One More Day to bring out interesting plots, but only if Quesada can be removed. And by interesting, I mean an aged Baby May clawing her way out of hell after (subjective) years (time runs faster in hell) of unimaginable torment and torture bent on getting revenge against the people who inadvertantly sold her to Mephisto, leading to a storyline that eventually culminates in Deadpool and Spidey storming hell together to take down Mephisto.
 
Deadpool and Spidey... in the same room?
BOOM.

That was the universe imploding on itself.

That would be AWESOME!

Well honestly for all the lovey dovey crap that MJ and Pete sometimes spew, they did seperate for a while, she did movies, he was his broke ass self. To be honest, I think MJ just wasn't the 'right' kind of wife for Spider-Man. She can't really share his life in the field. She doesn't have any skills in the background that she can use to support him. I mean hell I was actually hoping that when they all moved into Stark/Avengers Tower that she would have taken on a sort of Jan VanDyne/Maddy Pryor/Jessica Jones like role. Not a super-hero, but she worked behind the scenes to support them in various ways. I always thought MJ and Jan would have been an interesting friendship pairing. One is the fashion designer, the other's the model/actress. But I could also have seen MJ being a fugitive Spidey's financier, PR gal. Not just the pretty redhead that's sitting at home in sweats looking out the window waiting for Spidey to come home.

So much lost potential. I almost wish they'd hook Pete and Felicia up again. She's got that whole "Face it Tiger you just hit the jackpot" like bravado, she's fuckin' hot, and she's able to be there in both his civilian and private lives. Especially if they kept the 'known' identity thing. Play her a tad more mature, a tad less ready to fuck anything with a dick, and boy you'd have a killer pairing. MJ who? Gwen huh?

I would have ended OMD with Pete and Felicia in bed. With a ring on her finger. May not have been his 'one true love' but would you argue with this in bed next to you?

http://www.comicartcommunity.com/gallery/details.php?image_id=15817

I rest my case.
 
Mine wouldn't contain a magical retcon at all, and thus probably wouldn't fit the bill, but it is fairly simple.

Instead of being an idiot and ignoring her morning sickness, MJ buys a home pregnancy test. Peter and MJ discuss the results and come to the conclusion that they can't raise a child as fugitives. Stark comes through for Aunt May and she's saved by Iron Man technology. It doesn't give her superpowers, but it does keep her heart beating. While Jarvis is still visiting May at the hospital, Peter and MJ use him to relay one last request to Tony. Iron Man, not being a total asshole, provides new identities for Aunt May and Mary Jane in order to protect them and the baby. Peter doesn't know who they are, where they are, or how to contact them, and he knows that trying will put them in extreme danger. So he finds himself alone, on the wrong side of the law, fighting for freedom and justice in a world gone mad. But he knows that if he ever succeeds he has a family waiting for him, out there, somewhere.

That was great. I would loved to have read that. I wish we had gotten than instead of OMD. Though I must admit that I do like the Character Assassination storyline.
 
Mine wouldn't contain a magical retcon at all, and thus probably wouldn't fit the bill, but it is fairly simple.

Instead of being an idiot and ignoring her morning sickness, MJ buys a home pregnancy test. Peter and MJ discuss the results and come to the conclusion that they can't raise a child as fugitives. Stark comes through for Aunt May and she's saved by Iron Man technology. It doesn't give her superpowers, but it does keep her heart beating. While Jarvis is still visiting May at the hospital, Peter and MJ use him to relay one last request to Tony. Iron Man, not being a total asshole, provides new identities for Aunt May and Mary Jane in order to protect them and the baby. Peter doesn't know who they are, where they are, or how to contact them, and he knows that trying will put them in extreme danger. So he finds himself alone, on the wrong side of the law, fighting for freedom and justice in a world gone mad. But he knows that if he ever succeeds he has a family waiting for him, out there, somewhere.

This actually works a bit better with the title itself.

Peter doesn't have Mary.

Peter doesn't have Aunt May.

Peter doesn't have friends.

Peter doesn't have the law nor the people on his side.

All he has is one more day...
 
Mine wouldn't contain a magical retcon at all, and thus probably wouldn't fit the bill, but it is fairly simple.

Instead of being an idiot and ignoring her morning sickness, MJ buys a home pregnancy test. Peter and MJ discuss the results and come to the conclusion that they can't raise a child as fugitives. Stark comes through for Aunt May and she's saved by Iron Man technology. It doesn't give her superpowers, but it does keep her heart beating. While Jarvis is still visiting May at the hospital, Peter and MJ use him to relay one last request to Tony. Iron Man, not being a total asshole, provides new identities for Aunt May and Mary Jane in order to protect them and the baby. Peter doesn't know who they are, where they are, or how to contact them, and he knows that trying will put them in extreme danger. So he finds himself alone, on the wrong side of the law, fighting for freedom and justice in a world gone mad. But he knows that if he ever succeeds he has a family waiting for him, out there, somewhere.

Damn, why didn't they talk to you first? :scream:
 
I voted to kill Robin and then...wait Spidey isnt married to MJ anymore when did this happen? Damn that deal I made with Mephisto to watch over my comic collection just isnt working out right. Next thing you know Cap will be dead.

I have seen dozens of ideas on the net which were far superior to OMD. I think one I saw even had the Beyonder involved and it was better.
 
I voted to kill Robin and then...wait Spidey isnt married to MJ anymore when did this happen? Damn that deal I made with Mephisto to watch over my comic collection just isnt working out right. Next thing you know Cap will be dead.

I have seen dozens of ideas on the net which were far superior to OMD. I think one I saw even had the Beyonder involved and it was better.

If anyone, Loki should have been involved. The set-up was there dozens of issues previously in JMS' run, anyway.
 
It seems like something the Loki Trickster (or I guess Trickstress? Tricktrix? now) would be down for.
 
It's breaking up a marriage a bit petty for Loki? I can see him tricking them into fighting The Hulk, but not breaking up their marriage.
 
If they wanted to make the marriage more interesting, this is what I would have done:

Aunt May will pull through, but she and MJ are still huge targets. Peter doesn't know what to do and is at the end of his rope.

Enter Mephisto. He offers to give Peter his identity back. Everyone, including MJ, forgets who he is, and he has to keep it that way or the deal is off.

Peter gets his identity back, Mephisto gets the joy of watching him lie to his loved ones every day, and the readers get more drama in the Parker home life, which had gotten stale, IMO. It's still a magical fix (necessary bacuse of the Civil War revelation) but not as drastic as BND, and it opens up a lot of directions for what happens when MJ finally remembers or is told the truth.
 
It's breaking up a marriage a bit petty for Loki? I can see him tricking them into fighting The Hulk, but not breaking up their marriage.

It's the small slices that hurt the deepest, my friend. :lol:

"Candy today, cavities tomorrrrrowwwww..."
 
"It doesn't bring Harry back to life, but why exactly would they do that anyway?"

Actually, I believe the way they wrote it, Harry would have been alive regardless.
They basically pulled an "Osborn", and had the Goblin Serum that killed him also bring him back to life.

I have YET to see them really do much of anything in BND that could not have been done with a married Peter. But hey, what JoeyQ wants, JoeyQ gets.
 
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