I never saw anything too terribly wrong with these novels. Sure, some of the constant rehasihng of philosophical concepts got a little grating after awhile but I'd rather read that than all the pages of technobabble that later Treks revelled in.
I never heard of slash before I read this novel the first time. I just saw it as great charcaters insights that the other novels at the time didn't investigate.
Take Kirk, killed and duplicated. Who's the real one? Will he escape Omne? If so,will he be allowed to still command the Enterprise? The Enterprise is Kirk's first and foremost love. He'd move heaven and earth to get her back.
Take Spock, his closest friend is Kirk. Kirk's dead. How does Spock deal with these pesky emotions in the face of such overwhelming evidence at the beginning? Great scenes with him leaning on and seeking out McCoy's advice in the beginning like Kirk told him to do in "Tholian Web."
Take Omne, a villain set up as invincible. Super strength, super intelligence. How will kirk and Spock be able to outwit or out fight him? It actually takes camraderie and dedication, along with the Romulan Commander, to take Omne down a peg or two. Something that a lone, bitter solitary man like Omne wouldn't understand or know how to deal with.
The science of the phoenix process wasn't anymore ridiculous that those transporter solutions found in "Lorelei Signal," "Terratin Incident," & "Counter-Clock Incident before it. Or "Unnatural Selection" and countless others after it.
I've read better novels but then I've read much worse. I agree with PaulSimpson that the 2 Phoenix novels are better than Prometheus Design or [/Triangle[/i] that came after them. I'm looking forward to his interviews in the upcoming issues!