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Miscellaneous Creative Writing Jam

Locutus of Bored

Yo, Dawg! I Heard You Like Avatars...
In Memoriam
In an effort to get discussion and creative juices flowing around here, I thought it would be fun to have a creative writing thread where you can share your short stories, poetry, song lyrics, comics, non-Trek fanfic (we have a Trek fanfic forum already) within the bounds of the new board content rules, and articles you're writing on world, domestic, and local affairs, literary criticism, in-depth movie reviews or analysis, what have you.

If we get enough interested participants, perhaps it would be cool to have a weekly or monthly theme writing project in addition to the other free form writing (thanks to macloudt for the idea). Maybe even have a literary equivalent of the avatar contests eventually --though monthly to give people some more time. Once people are done with their submissions they can combine it into one post so it can be pasted in the voting thread.

I know a lot of you are participants in the upcoming annual NaNoWriMo creative writing project which we have a thread for each year, and this is not meant to step on that, merely give people an opportunity to express themselves creatively year-round,

I look forward to seeing your contributions and any suggestions for how you'd like the thread or any contests to proceed in the future. Thanks, and good writing. :techman:
 
Years ago, when I was actually studying French, I wrote a poem in French and English:

Je Rêve

J'espère, je rêve, je vive.
And all has become clear.
Et j'embrasse le soleil
Because it's there to hold
To touch, to feel, to love.
Les chansons du soleil
Ring deep inside my mind:
The sounds of Earth, of birth,
And our crying laughter.
écoutez. écoutez.
Je m'emprends de la vie.
Écoutez. Écoutez.
Hear the lovely birds sing.
ÉCOUTEZ! ÉCOUTEZ!
I hoped, I dreamt, I lived.
Tout est devenu claire
Because I looked inside
And caught a feeble glimpse.
La lumière me luis.
Life is a shining dream!

(And, of course, my apologies to those who know French much better than I did back when I wrote this!)
 
Here's a short story I did for another forum :). I hope you guys enjoy it.



The House across the Street

By: Random_Spock

Rating: PG

© 2013 by Random_Spock -- original characters come from my own imagination. All rights reserved.



The sun was beginning to set on Way street and the streetlights were coming on when Nate was coming to his friend Jason's house. He knew to be there by 8, no later. Jason had mentioned to him about what he had seen in the Wilson estate. Something that he couldn't explain and something that they needed to check out for themselves. He knocked on his door and Jason answered the door. Nate went in and they both got the flashlights and started off to the now vacant house across the way.

The hooting of owls only made the night more eerie, along with the slight autumn chill that was in the air. They made sure to bring some snacks along with them in case they got hungry. Not that they'd need them, they both figured that they'd see what ever Jason had seen quick enough. "Are you sure that you actually saw anything, Jason?", Nate asked him, impatiently.

"Yea I'm sure, man...", he said to him nervously, "The thing had 8 eyes or something... but that was just out of the corner of my eye, so I didn't get the best look at it." Nate grinned at him and laughed. "Dude it could have just been a particularly large fly that you saw..." , Josh said to him teasingly. "Cut it out, Nate. That's not funny. This thing, whatever it was, gave off a malicious vibe. Didn't like it one bit."

"Oh come on, I wasn't being serious, Jason. And besides, we're two against one against whatever this thing is." Jason grinned, "That's ok, guess I'm just a little uptight... that's all. Whatever this thing is, it's huge. Scared me out of my wits." "Don't worry, man. I'm with you. This time around, you're not alone.", Nate told him confidently.

The sun was almost set by the time they made it to the front door of the house. Jason wiggled the handle and the door opened. Both him and Nate entered the dry and dusty entrance way. The house looked like it hadn't been lived in for years. You could almost feel the weight of those who used to live there, almost like they'd never left.

They continued up the stairs and to the mirror that Jason had seen the monster in. They looked into it... and Jason's form shimmered. He changed into a giant grey haired demon. Nate screamed... "You tricked me!", he said to him. "Of course, and did you wonder what happened to the original owners as well...", he said to him cackling. Nate tried to get out, but Jason had cast a spell on the door so it wouldn't open.

He started to chant a spell that opened a portal and he took Nate with him.

What happened to Nate next, no one knows.

The moral of the tale is this: Don't EVER trust mysterious friends.

THE END
 
^ Entertaining! Also ...

The house looked like it hadn't been lived in for years. You could almost feel the weight of those who used to live there, almost like they'd never left.
I really like that line.

What inspired you to write the story?
Thanks Ancient Mariner!

It was a Halloween/fall themed writing contest, I was kind of inspired by Stephen King and R.L. Stine. Loved the way the former built up his younger characters and the latter's way of writing a nice spooky story.
 
Ah, yes ... I can see how you were using the dialogue there to build up the tension, and make the reader wait for things to happen. Cool!
 
Years ago, when I was actually studying French, I wrote a poem in French and English:

Je Rêve

J'espère, je rêve, je vive.
And all has become clear.
Et j'embrasse le soleil
Because it's there to hold
To touch, to feel, to love.
Les chansons du soleil
Ring deep inside my mind:
The sounds of Earth, of birth,
And our crying laughter.
écoutez. écoutez.
Je m'emprends de la vie.
Écoutez. Écoutez.
Hear the lovely birds sing.
ÉCOUTEZ! ÉCOUTEZ!
I hoped, I dreamt, I lived.
Tout est devenu claire
Because I looked inside
And caught a feeble glimpse.
La lumière me luis.
Life is a shining dream!

(And, of course, my apologies to those who know French much better than I did back when I wrote this!)
This is good. I like the combination of French and English.
 
I've actually started to attend a monthly storytelling group where they have a different theme every time (Grim darkness is the next one I think).

Here's a poem about Watchmen

The clock ticked another minute to Doomsday
A father wept as his daughter stayed out late
To the immortals it's nothing but child’s play
Just another tear lost in the rain

A meeting with an old friend reminds you how times have changed
But deep inside a spark remains
A common secret, a common shame
A commonwealth of shared blame
A lover living on another plane
Treating life as if it’s a game
Just have a smoke and tell a joke
Sell everything for fame

It only takes a minuteman to save the world
We all watch the war grow cold
And pray to a silent god
That it all doesn’t end before we run out of heroes

He beats and rapes the love of his life
Because she dared to say ‘no’ twice
Then turns around and rolls the dice
Snake eyes rule his conscience

A boy looks with wrath upon his mother
As she watches one leave then takes another
Just a whore with broken hearts in her bed
Like the lesbians, stabbed until they bled

Everyone drowning in their own sin
No-one has the strength to muster a grin
Because the comedian is dead
And the clock ticked another minute closer to doomsday

It only takes a minuteman to save the world
We all watch the war grow cold
And pray to a silent god
That it all doesn’t end before we run out of heroes

The smartest man in the world has gone insane
Another fight in an alleyway
Too much information in his brain
A broken arm, a shattered face
He thought he could find a way to stop the rain
Followed by a warm embrace
But he could never fully explain
Hell is somebody’s happy place
Why we needed all the pain

It only takes a minuteman to save the world
We all watch the cold war thaw
And pray to a silent god
That it all doesn’t end because we ran out the heroes

We were jealous and scared
Lashed out and who was there
Our protectors, to take the blows
Our defenders, as we said ‘go’
So they left us
And we said oh....fuck

We taunted the superman
Flaunted the everyman
Haunted by every damned mistake we made
Trying to escape from the shadows into which we fade
But don’t worry
It’s sane to be afraid
As the clock ticks another minute to doomsday

We just watched as the minutemen died to save the world
And we just watched as the cold war burned
And prayed to a silent god
To bring back the heroes
 
Ah, a creative writing thread. Excellent idea. I hope a lot of people participate. :bolian:

Years ago, when I was actually studying French, I wrote a poem in French and English:
I like it. Years ago, I wrote a poem that mixed in a little French and Latin. I'll have to dig it off my backup drive.

Here's a short story I did for another forum :). I hope you guys enjoy it.
That's a pretty nice idea. You should expand on it and polish it a bit. It does have that Goosebumps kind of a feel to it.

Here's a poem about Watchmen
This is really good. I especially liked "We taunted the superman/Flaunted the everyman." Nice work.

Just give me a couple of minutes and I'll dig up a couple of seasonal items....
 
Okay, here we go. First up, a spooky story that I wrote for Shattered Corpse a couple of years ago:

THE CAMPFIRE
© 2014 by Rick Hutchins

In the darkest hour of the endless night, in the deepest tract of the primeval forest, under a black and moonless sky sprinkled only faintly with cold stars, the campfire was a warm and yellow beacon.

It was visible for miles and Sumalee had been stumbling toward it for hours through the thick and pathless underbrush. Her face and arms were scratched from the branches, her legs bruised black and blue from the rocks and fallen trees. She trembled and shook violently from hunger and nervous exhaustion as she struggled through the thickets. She had been separated from her friends since before sunset.

“Get me out of here, please, get me out of here,” she cried huskily, despair mixing with frustration and anger. “I am so fucking sick of this shit. I just want to go home!”

Hiking in the Berkshires with her new friends from the physics lab had seemed like such a great idea. Amherst had totally changed her life. It seemed like every day brought her the opportunity to do something she had never done before. What had gone wrong? How had she gotten separated from the other kids? She didn’t even know.

The campfire was close now; it seemed like it was just a few feet away. She ducked under a low-hanging branch, pushed through bramble bushes that tore divots out of her jeans and sweatshirt. A clearing became visible, painted in flickering yellow light and dancing shadows.

“Come on,” she sobbed. “Oh, come on....”

As she got nearer, she could make out steadier shadows blocking the firelight. Three of them. Silhouettes of people sitting around the fire.

“Thank god,” she said. “Help me, please, help me.” But her voice was too dry, thin and husky to be heard, a dehydrated whisper.

Finally, she broke through the edge of the forest and stumbled into the clearing, dropping to her knees, sobbing. These people would have water, food, a map, a cell phone. She could already feel the warmth of the campfire against her cold and clammy skin.

“I need some help here,” she shouted hoarsely, crying and trembling on hands and knees.

After a few moments, she realized that nobody was rushing to her aid. She looked up, wiping the tears from her eyes with the back of her dirty hand. Three people, dressed warmly against the night chill, sat on logs arranged around the campfire. They were as still and silent as statues.

“Excuse me...?”

Confusion flickered through her mind. Were they meditating? Praying? Had she stumbled onto some bizarre religious camp or outing? These questions were followed by even more disturbing thoughts of cults, inbred backwoods families and cannibal bikers flashing through the back of her head.

Slowly, cautiously, she rose to her feet.

“Hello...?”

She stepped hesitantly forward, hugging herself, tiptoeing, as if afraid to wake these people from their slumber. The grass and leaves beneath her hiking boots were dry and brittle and crunched softly in harmony with the brisk crackling of the campfire.

Four logs had been set up in a circle around the campfire as benches. Two of the people, in heavy plaid coats– a middle-aged man and woman by the look of them– sat side by side with their backs to Sumalee. The third person sat alone on the other side of the fire, head down, dressed in a dungaree jacket over a bulky black sweatshirt and wearing a dark blue knit stocking cap.

The fire threw off a lot of heat; they didn’t need to be dressed so warmly.

Sumalee stepped up to the edge of the circle of logs and still nobody moved. But from this distance she had a better view of the face of the man on the other side of the campfire, and he looked like hell. Like death warmed over, thought Sumalee. Literally.

His skin was as gray and cracked as a dry old newspaper, his cheeks and eye sockets sunken and hollow. She realized that, under his bulky clothes, he was as emaciated as an ancient Egyptian mummy.

Now she realized what was going on, and she put her hand to her mouth as a wave of pity ran through her. These people were patients from that cancer clinic in Farmington; part of their holistic therapy included camping retreats, reconnecting with nature.

She took another step closer. “I’m sorry,” she said, both for the intrusion and the terrible....

And then she saw the human bones.

A chill of horror raced up her spine and curdled her stomach, and she swayed with vertigo. She wanted to step backward, turn and run back into the woods, but she was rooted to the spot.

Scattered on the ground, both inside and outside the circle of logs, were ribs, femurs, vertebrae, pelvises. Skulls. Tattered shreds of clothing, rotten and dirty, lay among them. Some of the bones were black and cracked with age, mingled with the dirt and grass; some were gray and smooth, only recently picked clean.

“Holy fuck,” she gasped, her voice breaking. “Holy fucking shit. Oh my fucking god.”

She put her hands to her face, like in the Munch painting, the blood pounding dizzily in her temples, and she felt on the verge of passing out. Her eyes, wide and white, scanned back and forth over the bones, the logs, the stone-circled campfire, the pitiful sitting figures. Did that clinic just leave them here to die? Was this some horrible scandal that she had stumbled upon, some cost-saving measure, some inhuman disposal of the homeless, the unwanted or the uninsured?

Then, as her eyes once again fell upon the wizened man in the stocking cap, he seemed to fold into himself; turning, twisting, he slowly toppled to the side and struck the ground with a limp thud, slack and dead.

“Oh, no,” sobbed Sumalee, tears bursting from her eyes. “Oh my god....”

But still she didn’t run; instead, she stumbled forward on shaking knees and sat down unsteadily on one of the logs. What the fuck am I doing? she thought. I have to get the fuck out of here.

If this was some horrid human disposal ground where the hopeless were left to rot and die, she could be in immediate danger. If they came back while she was here, what would they do? Kill her? Imprison her? They couldn’t just let her go and tell what she had seen.

As soon as she steadied herself, as soon as she could stop her legs from shaking, she had to get up and go. There had to be a road nearby for the clinic to use to bring these patients up here. She could follow that to find the way back to civilization. As soon as she felt steady. But the woods were cold and dark, and the firelight was warm against her face....

The campfire! Holy shit! They wouldn’t just go away and leave the campfire burning like this. They had to be right nearby. They could return at any second, find her here, catch her.

But still she didn’t move.

I’m in shock, she realized with sudden dispassionate insight. Fear, exhaustion, exposure, hunger, dehydration– and now this horror. Definitely shock, no doubt about it. Good god, this was a nightmare; anybody would have a breakdown.

And still she didn’t move.

There was something odd about the campfire, Sumalee thought as she watched it burn steadily, serenely, hypnotically. Something odd about the texture, the edges, something strange about the way it overlapped the circle of stones.

And why would the clinic dress up their patients in hiking clothes to dump them here? These weren’t patients. These were people who had wandered into the clearing, just as she had.

Something odd about the campfire, she thought, staring at it intently.

She looked across the fire at the other two people sitting on the log. A man and a woman, their hair wispy gray, sitting shoulder to shoulder, the fingers of his right and her left hand intertwined. They wore matching red plaid jackets and brown hats with ear flaps. They had been elderly in life, an old married couple. Now they were gray, shriveled, parchment-skinned mummies.

Staring at the fire.

And still she didn’t move.

Sumalee realized at that moment that the campfire was never going to let her go. It was keeping her here, feeding on her, eating her from the inside out, just as it had done with these people who were now just dry dead bones. It had lured them in with its friendly yellow glow, promising warmth and protection and companionship and it had never let them go.

What the fuck was it? She stared at it as it flickered and danced and crackled, rose and fell, sent glowing orange embers floating up to fade in the cool night air, and tried to penetrate its strangeness. It looked like a normal fire and yet– animated. Self contained. Fluid. Smeared at the edges like something in a bad old videotape.

Was it some vampiric energy being from outer space that feeds on life energy, like on Star Trek? Maybe that was it. Maybe it was some clump of exotic particles that had gotten caught in Earth’s gravity well, some quark-gluon soup or packet of strange dark matter that was incompatible with the standard variety and wreaked havoc with cell activity, like a sunspot causing radio static.

Sure, thought Sumalee sardonically. My first month in the physics lab and I just happen to wander into the woods and stumble on an unpredicted physical phenomenon that fell to Earth. Not too much of a coincidence.

Maybe it was just fucking haunted.

Somehow she had to free herself, get away from this thing before it killed her. But she didn’t know where to begin. There was no force holding her, no compulsion to stay, no voice in her head telling her what to do.

She just wasn’t getting up.

Panic began to rise and she fought it back down. It will be all right, she told herself. It will be all right. Kim and Jerry and Maureen were still out there looking for her and they had probably gotten help by now and any minute they would pile out of the woods and grab her and drag her to safety and the campfire would die and the credits would roll.

She began to cry.

Closing her eyes might help, she reasoned; if she couldn’t see the fire, or whatever it was, it couldn’t affect her. But its erratic, gentle rhythms could still be seen through her eyelids, red instead of yellow, outlining a delicate pattern of blue veins. The pulse of the firelight and the pulse of her blood combined to create swirls of phosphenes, like splashes of bright paint, like galaxies and nebulae exploding in the dark, like fireworks, beautiful fireworks.

She had seen the fireworks at the Esplanade in Boston a couple of years ago with her mother and father and brother and her best friend Nicole. Her father had let Nicole come with them and had even let the girls have their own room at the hotel in Braintree. She and Nicole had ordered chicken strips and French fries from room service and her father had been furious; room service was expensive and he had already spent too much. He had yelled at her and she had yelled back, but she had been sorry and mad at herself. She hadn’t meant to cause him any problems, hadn’t meant to upset him after he had been so generous; she had never told him how sorry she was.

Sumalee opened her eyes. Time had passed, but she didn’t know how much.

The bodies of the old couple had fallen over backwards. She could only see their baggy trousers, tucked into their hiking boots, hooked over the log where they had sat.

Everything seemed muted and quiet, colors were dim and washed out, sounds were distant and hollow. She didn’t want to die, but she knew she was already more dead than alive. Her mouth was dry, her lips cracked and her throat constricted; she didn’t have the strength to swallow. She could barely feel the heat from the campfire on her face.

I’m sorry I ordered the chicken strips, Daddy, she thought calmly. I’m sorry I’m dead. I know you would save me if you could.

Eventually, she slumped forward onto the ground, face down in the bones.

And the campfire continued to burn, and its brittle crackling sounded like cruel laughter.

***

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And, finally, a little poem for you:

NORMAN THE PHLEBOTOMIST
© 2014 Rick Hutchins

On those certain occasions
When a vein is hard to find
Norman the Phlebotomist
Is the man who comes to mind
Sometimes routine venipuncture
Isn’t so routine
And it’s a matter of life and death
To get a value for lipoprotein
And when all the lab technicians
Have failed and start to pout
It’s time to bite the bullet
And get an expert to bail them out
Norman of the Night Shift
Is the hero that you need
There is no vein so deeply buried
That he can’t make it bleed
It’s like he’s got some sixth sense
A hematologic radar beam
He always nails it on the first attempt
Easy as pie, so it would seem
His talents have become a legend
He is famous far and wide
This unassuming little man
Has become respected and admired
All the nurses on the campus
Worship him like a god
Though, truth be told, his neighbors
Think the guy is slightly odd
But there isn’t a female staffer
Not a veteran, nor a rookie
Who hasn’t slipped off to the call room
To give Norman a little nookie
But all the men that are on staff
Be they doctors or merely interns
Fail to appreciate his appeal
And they are becoming quite concerned
For each and every lady
In the aftermath of these quickies
Walks around in a mild daze
And sports a large, unsightly hickey
Why, these MDs ask themselves,
Do the women seem anemic?
Attempts to question Norman fail
Because his eyes are so mesmeric
But, hey, he always saves the day
So there’s no harm in a little bite
For Norman the Phlebotomist:
A simple creature of the night
 
My Alien Abduction

I was out walking one cool late-summer night, doing a little star-gazing and Tom-Peeping, as is my want. After spying a particularly fruitful star cluster (the Seven Sisters) and an equally fruitful Peep (The Two Sisters) I felt a sudden chill and disturbance in the air. I could see my breath as I exhaled, and I was haling my ex's rather rapidly.

Without warning, I was blinded by a Light that was at once bright and filling. Somehow the photons were sustaining me, a literal manna to my fear and confusion. I gradually detected a Sound to go with this feast of senses, and the sound was not unlike that of the Enterprise's engines going to warp.

Soon it was apparent that I was traveling parallel to the ground at a rapid rate. The ground shortly disappeared, and I then found myself on a table. The material of its construction was at once familiar and alien. As if a stainless steel examination table took on some of the attributes of the T-1000, malleable and form-fitting.

I heard them before I saw them. A group of chirps and squawks and beeps and whirrs, at once unmistakably sentient, and mechanical, like implements and tools in use, attached to some sort of terrible intelligence.

Then, a Presence. Almost an Energy Field, tantalizing my flesh. Tesla, I wondered.

Into my field of vision entered Beings. 3.5 meters, maybe a bit more. each with a coterie of contrivances. "Galaxy Quest" I thought. Only with not a drop of pigment.
Markings, to be sure, and all unique in size and shape. No color. I strained to get up or to greet or to bolt or to shit or some such, but, denied. I could sense or see no restraint, but restrained I was.

There, below the threshold of aural sensation, a sub-sound. Barely. After a time, a tiny bit louder, then, a little bit louder. A little bit louder, still, until I could make out a Song. But, Jesu, what a Song. A mellifluous moving of pressure and displacement such as I had never grokked. It seemed to touch the very center of my scrotum. There was no other way to describe it.

He/She/It spoke directly to my temporal lobes, and my thalamus struggled to make sense of it. "We are the Els," H/S/I intoned. "We come from what you would call "The Orion Group." HSI went on to tell me that the that the Els were among the oldest in the Universe, from the Dryson Region. They had studied and befriended many in their travels, and had heard about our planet from some old television transmission waves. HSI said they were something called Imperial Margarine commercials picked up In the far reaches of the Solar System. Apparently, they were happy to know Earth was ruled by a Queen Named "Mother Nature." At this news, the "Galaxy Questians" chirped and whirred at a noticeable increase in sound and speed.

"We ask all we come across (!) for permission to study and take samples from," HSI continued. Using He/She/It was getting tiresome and unwieldy, so I asked if there was a name or designation I could use to address her.

"Rishathra" she said, what I felt was with particular pride.

"May we study and sample you, You-Man?"

Much chirping and whirring and spinning and beeping!

I must have acquiesced, because, after a time, I became aware of areas of my body that felt pierced, yet healed and reborn. A sheen of silken liquid adorned my corpus, and I shivered at the slightest air disturbance or stray thought. It was then that I noticed an impossible shape next to my head as I lie on the soft forest floor. The shape seemed to "phase" in and out of reality and at times it glowed. I was sure I was hallucinating most excellently. A VoiceMemory entered my Consciousness, thanking me, and explaining that, in trade for my ManEssence, I was to have The Everlight. It was what we would call a tesseract, powered by the very essence of creation.

Essence for Essence
 
Ah, a creative writing thread. Excellent idea. I hope a lot of people participate. :bolian:

Years ago, when I was actually studying French, I wrote a poem in French and English:
I like it. Years ago, I wrote a poem that mixed in a little French and Latin. I'll have to dig it off my backup drive.

Here's a short story I did for another forum :). I hope you guys enjoy it.
That's a pretty nice idea. You should expand on it and polish it a bit. It does have that Goosebumps kind of a feel to it.

Here's a poem about Watchmen
This is really good. I especially liked "We taunted the superman/Flaunted the everyman." Nice work.

Just give me a couple of minutes and I'll dig up a couple of seasonal items....

Thanks RJ! Can't do anymore via the story there... but maybe I can do some kind of prequel, that fills in the blanks of how the house came to be.
 
^^ That would be cool, but what I really meant was just expanding the prose. There's lots of opportunity for building suspense there.

My Alien Abduction
Nice, and well written. It reminds me of old-school Contactee stories from the days of George Adamski, Barney and Betty Hill, et al. :bolian:

as is my want.
Actually, that should be "wont."
 
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