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Contest: ENTER May/June 2025 Challenge - Kaelin's Catastrophic Mistake

Bynar0110

Fleet Captain
Fleet Captain
This entry is from my story USS Edison-Muddled Awakening- Chapter 10.

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I want to thank Robert Bruce Scott for proofreading this chapter.

Stardate 38680.92 (September 6, 2361)

Zeta Reticuli IV, a world located on the outskirts of the Delphi System.


In the depths of the cosmos, where the heavens and the abyss coalesce, a vision unlike any before unfolded in the Delphi System. A kaleidoscope of violet and obsidian bled across the void, a celestial anomaly defying the laws of creation. This swirling mass, not of mere gas and dust but of something far more insidious, seemed to devour the light that dared to touch it, casting the planets below into an eternal shadow. The very fabric of space quivered with a malevolent tension, as if the breath of the universe itself was held in anticipation of doom.

A rhythmic pulse, more felt than heard, resonated through the entity—a primordial, alien thrum that pierced the silence of the cosmos and echoed through the bones of the system. It was as if the heartbeat of an ancient, unseen god, a reminder of the chaos that once reigned before the celestial order was set. The stars above flickered and sputtered, their celestial fire wavering like the last breaths of the condemned, only to swell again in a desperate, futile attempt to reclaim their glory. It was a scene straight out of the apocalyptic visions of old, where the heavens themselves trembled at the threshold of the end times.

On the outskirts of the Delphi System, the planet Zeta Reticuli IV was a world of endless sand dunes, stretching as far as the eye could see under a pale, twin sunset. The air was thin and dry, carrying the faint whisper of ancient winds. In a small, fortified settlement, a lone figure stood at the edge of a makeshift observatory, his eyes fixed on the horizon. Dr. Alistair Kaelin, a humanoid scientist with a reputation for being a bit eccentric, adjusted the alignment of his primitive probe from a collection of jury-rigged technology of discarded components acquired via bartering and scavenging in the dunes from crashed ships, and probes.

The settlement, a collection of ramshackle buildings and makeshift shelters, was a mix of traders and scavengers. They called Kaelin "the wiseman of the dunes," not in mockery, but with a mix of respect and curiosity. His obsession with the sky, particularly the strange signals he had been tracking for weeks, was well-known. These signals were unlike anything he had ever encountered—faint, yet persistent, like the echoes of a distant conversation.


Kaelin's fingers danced over the controls, a mix of ancient math and local dialect rolling off his tongue as he fine-tuned the settings. The probe, a collection of sensors and a rudimentary communication array, was tethered to the observatory by a thin, fragile wire. He muttered to himself, "Come on, come on... just a little more," his voice a mix of hope and desperation.

The sky above was clear, the stars twinkling like distant diamonds. Suddenly, a faint, pulsating light appeared on the horizon, growing brighter with each passing moment. Kaelin's heart raced as he realized that the object he had been tracking was finally within range.

"Finally," he breathed, his hands steady as he hit the launch button. The probe rose into the air, its engines sputtering and whining. It climbed higher, the thin wire stretching taut behind it. Kaelin watched intently as the probe approached the mysterious object, his monitor flickering with data.

For a moment, the signals were clear, a series of complex patterns that he could almost make sense of. But then, the probe began to shake, its systems overloaded by the sheer volume of data it was trying to process. The monitor crackled, and the image distorted, turning into a chaotic jumble of static and gibberish.

"Not like this... not like this!" he shouted, his voice lost to the wind. The display exploded in a burst of light, the shockwave pushing back the sand and sending a plume of debris into the air.


As the probe launched and approached the object, a subtle change began to ripple through the planet. The rhythmic pulse that had been a constant presence in the Delphi System now resonated with a new, sinister energy. The inhabitants of Zeta Reticuli IV, a mix of traders, scavengers, and Kaelin's fellow scientists, felt it deep in their bones. They paused in their daily activities, a sense of dread washing over them.

In the settlement, the tension was palpable. The traders, usually busy bartering and haggling, stopped to look up at the sky. The scavengers, who usually roamed the dunes in search of valuable scraps, huddled together, their eyes wide with fear. Kaelin, oblivious to the growing chaos, continued to fine-tune his probe, his mind consumed by the data he was trying to capture.

The object, now visible as a pulsating orb of darkness, grew larger in the sky. It seemed to pulse with a life of its own, sending out waves of energy that distorted the very fabric of space. The sand beneath the settlers' feet began to ripple, as if alive, and the thin air vibrated with an eerie hum.

Kaelin's monitor flickered one last time before it exploded, and the probe was sent careening into the planet's moon. The impact was catastrophic, sending debris and dust into the void. The moon, once a stable and unassuming satellite, began to crack and fragment, its pieces raining down on Zeta Reticuli IV.

The settlers watched in horror as the sky turned black, the twin suns obscured by the expanding shadow of the object. The ground beneath them shook violently, and the air grew even thinner. They could feel the object's presence in their minds, a phantom whisper that dug into their deepest fears and memories, amplifying them to excruciating levels.

Kaelin fell to his knees, his eyes wide with a mix of awe and terror, mind was flooded with visions of his past, each moment of anguish amplified, made excruciatingly real. He saw himself as a young boy, lost in a desert storm, and as a young scientist, failing to save a loved one. The memories were overwhelming, and he could only clutch his head in agony.

"Kaelin, what have you done?" one of the traders shouted, his voice trembling. But Kaelin was already running, his mind racing with the realization that he had awakened something he could not control.

Deep within the heart of the object, a consciousness stirred. It was ancient, perhaps as old as the universe itself, and it had been dormant for eons. The probe's arrival had awoken it, and now it was reaching out, its tendrils of energy probing the minds of the nearby inhabitants.

The consciousness was not a single entity but a collective, a hive mind of countless beings that had merged into one. It had no form, no body, only a presence that filled the void. Its purpose was simple: to expand, to grow, to consume.

As the probe approached, the consciousness felt a surge of excitement. It had been so long since it had encountered anything so interesting. The probe's data, though primitive, was a welcome distraction from the endless void. The consciousness reached out, pulling the probe into its heart, where it was consumed and analyzed.

The probe's data was unlike anything the consciousness had encountered before. It was a mix of ancient technology and modern science, a fusion of knowledge that intrigued it. The consciousness began to manipulate the data, twisting it to its own ends. It sent out a series of signals, not just to the probe, but to the planet below, to the minds of the inhabitants.

The signals were not random; they were designed to amplify the fears and memories of those who received them. The consciousness fed on the emotions it elicited, growing stronger with each moment. It was a feedback loop, a cycle of fear and destruction that it could not resist.

In the heart of the object, the consciousness was a swirling mass of darkness, a vortex of energy that pulsed with a life of its own. It was not evil, not in the human sense, but it was hungry. It needed to consume, to grow, and the planet below was its next meal.


High above Zeta Reticuli IV, the Federation transwarp probe Druidia stealthily observed the scene. The probe, a more advanced and sophisticated piece of technology, was one of several sent by Starfleet Command to investigate the mysterious object. Druidia's sensors were hypersensitive, capable of detecting even the faintest changes in the environment.

As the primitive probe launched and approached the object, Druidia's data recorders captured every detail of the encounter. The probe's sudden destruction was noted, and the information was immediately sent back to Starfleet Command via a secure transwarp communications link.

Druidia's sensors detected the waves of energy emanating from the object, distorting the space around it. The probe's data showed the object's influence on the planet's surface, the ground shaking and the air thinning. The impact of the probe on the moon was recorded, the fragments of the moon raining down on the planet below.

The object's effect on the minds of the populace was particularly alarming. Druidia's data showed the inhabitants of Zeta Reticuli IV experiencing intense, amplified fears and memories. The collective consciousness of the object was reaching into their minds, feeding on their emotions, and growing stronger.

Druidia's observations were transmitted back to Starfleet, adding another piece to the growing puzzle. The data was analyzed by the best minds in the Federation, but even they were baffled by the object's nature and its capabilities.

The object's influence on Zeta Reticuli IV was catastrophic. The planet's surface, once a sea of sand, was now a landscape of chaos. The ground shook violently, and cracks began to form, spreading out like a network of veins. The twin suns, once a source of light and warmth, were now mere pinpricks in the sky, their light swallowed by the expanding darkness.

In the settlement, the inhabitants were in a state of panic. They ran through the streets, their minds overwhelmed by the object's influence. The phantom whispers grew louder, each word digging into their deepest fears. Some collapsed, their bodies convulsing as they relived their worst memories. Others screamed, their voices lost in the howling wind.

Kaelin, the wiseman of the dunes, watched in horror as the object continued to grow. He had been the one to awaken it, and he knew he was to blame. The probe he had launched, a last-ditch effort to understand the object, had only made things worse. The moon's fragments rained down on the planet, each impact sending shockwaves through the ground.

The object's tendrils of energy reached down, pulling the planet into its heart. The sand dunes were consumed, the buildings were crushed, and the people were obliterated. The object's presence was a black hole, a singularity of fear and destruction that devoured everything in its path.



Druidia, the Federation probe, recorded the final moments of Zeta Reticuli IV. The planet's surface was a fiery inferno, the cracks spreading until the entire world began to break apart. The object, now a massive, pulsating mass, absorbed the planet's remnants, growing larger and more powerful with each bite.

Kaelin's last thought, as he was pulled into the darkness, was a mix of regret and wonder. He had uncovered a mystery, but at what cost? The object, now fully awake, continued to drift through the Delphi System, a harbinger of doom, waiting for its next meal.

But for now, the Delphi System was a dead zone.

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Starfleet Command - Earth

In a dimly lit room deep within the bowels of Starfleet Command, a team of analysts and scientists gathered around a large display monitor. The data from the probe flickered to life, casting eerie shadows across the faces of those in the room. On the screen, an image of the object and the chaos that followed the local scientist's failed attempt to gather information played out in stark detail.

"Fascinating," Commander Audrey Delaney mused, her voice tinged with curiosity. She leaned forward, her eyes narrowing as she studied the object's surface. "It appears the object is emitting a complex series of signals that are beyond the capabilities of the planet's technology to decode. However, the probe's destruction suggests that the object may have some form of self-defense mechanism or energy field around it."

A younger scientist, a Denobulan with calm, observant eyes, nodded. "The signals bear striking similarities to the communication patterns of V'Ger and the Whale Probe. It's possible they represent a form of advanced communication, or perhaps they're a residual energy pattern left over from the object's journey through space, much like the echoes we detected from those earlier encounters."

Commander Delaney turned to the communications officer, Petty Officer Kibbey, who stood at attention by the console. "Send a message to the USS Edison. We need them to investigate this object further. It’s clearly an immediate threat and something we can’t ignore."

Petty Officer Kibbey nodded and began to relay the message. His fingers danced over the console, and a moment later, he confirmed, "Message transmitted, Commander."

"Good." Commander Delaney straightened, her mind already racing with possibilities. "We need to understand what we're dealing with. If this object has origins beyond our understanding, it could hold secrets that could change the course of history. Keep me updated on any new findings."

As the team dispersed, the Denobulan scientist hesitated for a moment, looking back at the monitor. "Commander, with all due respect, are they ready for this?"


Commander Delaney gave him a knowing glance. "They’re about to find out..."

The Denobulan nodded, though a trace of concern lingered in his expression. "Of course, Commander."

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Meanwhile, high above Zeta Reticuli IV

The Federation transwarp probe Druidia continued its silent vigil. Its advanced sensors recorded every detail of the unfolding disaster below. The probe's systems detected the waves of energy emanating from the mysterious object, noting the catastrophic effects it had on the planet's surface and its inhabitants. The data streamed back to Starfleet Command, painting a grim picture of chaos and destruction.


As Druidia observed, it became aware of the growing instability in the environment. The planet's surface was fracturing, and the inhabitants were succumbing to the object’s influence, their fears amplified to unbearable levels. The probe's systems strained under the weight of the information it was processing, but it remained steadfast in its mission.

However, as the object continued to expand and consume Zeta Reticuli IV, Druidia's sensors detected a sudden surge of energy. The probe's systems began to overload, unable to cope with the intensity of the signals being emitted. In a final desperate attempt to relay its findings, Druidia sent one last transmission back to Starfleet Command, detailing the catastrophic events and the object's insatiable hunger.

Then, in a blinding flash of light, Druidia was engulfed by the very energy it had been monitoring. The probe was consumed, its data lost to the void, leaving Starfleet Command with only fragmented information about the object and its devastating capabilities.

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Starfleet Command, Earth

The team continued to analyze the incoming data, unaware of Druidia's fate. The room buzzed with tension as they pieced together the implications of the object’s existence. Commander Delaney felt a chill run down her spine as she considered the potential threat looming in the Delphi System, now a dead zone after the destruction of Zeta Reticuli IV.

The echoes of the probe's last transmission lingered in her mind, a haunting reminder of the unknown dangers that lay ahead. Starfleet had always faced the unknown, but this time, it felt different—more ominous. As she prepared for the next steps, she couldn't shake the feeling that they were on the brink of something far more significant than they had ever anticipated.

As the room emptied, Commander Delaney felt a heavy weight in her chest as thoughts of her twin daughters, Jenny and Megan, crept into her mind. Just entering their teens, they were filled with dreams of enrolling in Starfleet and becoming astrophysicists. Yet, a deep-seated fear gnawed at her—what dangers lay ahead in the vastness of space? She couldn't shake the worry that the discoveries made by the USS Edison might not lead to the bright future she envisioned for them, but rather expose them to risks she could hardly bear to contemplate. The cosmos was a realm of wonder, but it was also fraught with peril, and she feared for the safety of her daughters as they aspired to reach for the stars.

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