March challenge: Stolen Angel.

[Starkers]

Hopefully this makes it in under the wire, but if not I understand Not going to win anyway, this is probably one or two proof's short of where I'd like it to be but...well here it is anyway!

Charlie Cross is back...

http://uk.geocities.com/yourtrainingmatrix/stolen

 

[Mistral]

Starkers-2 things. One: Dang it-would you stop dropping such excellent stories into the contest at the last moment!

Two: You'd better finish this one!

 

[mirandafave]

Well Mistral what else did you expect in a cliffhanger challenge?

 

[mirandafave]

Oh that was a great little thriller. Loved the proletariat detective having to work for the big bucks. Also the species [FONT=Arial]Tulthian [/FONT]are a fascinating creation and you've made great use of their nature to feed the story. As for Charlie Cross' predicament the poor fellow is in a tough bind and I wonder how he'll get out of it. [FONT=Arial]

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[Starkers]

Mistral, sorry I keep doing this don't I! It isn't for any nefarious reason its just that I have a rubbish perception of time! Not for nothing does my girlfriend call me Last Minute Harry!

Mirandafave, thanks for the comments-glad you liked the Tulthians, the original challenge premise did say something about trying to show something we'd never seen in the Trekverse before...