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March Challenge: "And the Skies Gone Dark Under Heaven"

Cobalt Frost

Captain
Captain
Captain’s Log… Challenger is returning to Gateway Station, under her own power.. but barely just. We were part of the largest joint operation (so far) between Starfleet and the Free Stars’ Alliance Navy, a hammerblow designed to break the grip of the Har-Krath raiders in the FSA’s Outbound Sector. The taskforce was made up of twenty ships: mostly Starfleet and Celvani, with a flight of D’haan frigates and a pair of Cohvli destroyers. The Shuta and the Nava’ak sent one cruiser each; hell, even the Vik’kar’nos sent a gunboat, though they turned tail and ran as soon as the torpedoes started flying. Half of the ships didn’t survive the engagement, and only a few of the ships that did make it through were able to leave under their own power. The others are awaiting the flotilla of repair barge, tugs, and other ships that are en route, doing what they can while they wait to retrieve any escape pods ejected during the battle.

The battle.. gods above and gods below, what a furball that was. FSA agents had finally tracked the Har-Krath raiders to their main base, concealed in the gravimetric hellstorms surrounding the Iyudha’ato Cluster, and our armada was hastily deployed in hopes of catching them by surprise. And we did at that, though we were surprised in turn; the Har-Krath had three times as many ships as FSA intel had reported. Mostly fighters and small gunboats, but we were pretty well outnumbered. Still, we took their measure and gave better than we got. When it came time to tally the butcher’s bill, we’d destroyed all but three Har-Krath ships and had crippled their starbase beyond repair.

Most importantly, we secured the cache of isolytic burst-bombs they’d sourced from renegade Son’a arms dealers before they could be deployed. Seems the Har-Krath had been planning to sow them throughout the sector unless they were paid a ridiculous ransom.. real original, I know, but then, the Har-Krath barely have enough brains to get out of bed in the morning. These goons give the Nausicaans a run for their money in the ‘big, dumb, and ugly’ department. But I digress…
The burst-bombs have been transferred from the D’haan frigate that followed us from the Cluster to the USS
Barcelona, the newest Exemplar-class battlewagon and Admiral Durham’s flagship. The Barcelona and the Celvani warship D’arra Falcor are en route to an undisclosed location to dispose of the dangerous and highly volatile subspace weapons. I’d say good riddance, though I suspect ‘disposal’ is a euphemism for ‘hiding them somewhere until WE need them.’ Gotta love the military…

Gabriel finished typing his log entry just as the last support umbilicals slid home into their respective and various ports on Challenger’s hull. The faint but unmistakable ‘burnt bacon’ smell of blown EPS conduits lingered on the bridge, one of many reminders of the battle that had recently taken place. Gabriel stretched, wincing as he bumped his bruised right shoulder against his chair. Behind and just slightly to the right of him, Commander Taylor was coordinating the final details of Challenger’s arrival with Gateway Station’s dockmaster.

Challenger confirms, Gateway. All docking connections read green across the board. We are in your capable hands.”

“Copy that, Challenger. Repair teams will be deployed in ten. Gateway out.” Connie turned and heaved a heavy sigh in Gabriel’s direction.

“I want to shower – with real water, mind you – for at least two hours, and then I want some pizza.” At that, Gabriel had to smile. He wasn’t sure where her cravings had come from, but lately it seemed whenever Connie got stressed she wanted pizza. “And then I want to sleep for a week straight.”

“Showers are off-line,” Gabriel said, a light note of mocking disappointment in his voice. “There’s always…” He was interrupted by Lt. Avallios.

“Message for you, sir.” He tabbed a control, and Ensign Lynch’s pleasantly bland voice came over the speakers.

Captain Frost, Commander Taylor; at your convenience, Admirals Durham and Nikolakis-Costopolous request the honor of your presence for a debriefing regarding the Iyudha’ato engagement.”

Gabriel handed the PADD he’d had in his hand to Lt. Avallios and headed for the turbolift. “Give that to LCDR K’kon, make sure he gets the repair teams on the primary and secondary starboard phase inverters before anything else. Otherwise, Challenger won’t get a meter out of the dock without a cascading power failure. Oh, and tell him he’s in command until we get back.” Gabriel paused just inside the waiting turbolift and looked at Connie expectantly.

“He wants us there now?” Connie said, her voice carrying a slightly incredulous tone. She gestured at herself, indicating her torn uniform, bruised face, and rather disheveled hair. “Can’t we take a few minutes to freshen up?”

Gabriel smiled that half-smile that annoyed Connie so. “’At your convenience’ is Adm. Durham’s code-speak for ‘five minutes ago’.” He stepped back to allow Connie into the turbolift. “I just hope his pet Xuuxusans aren’t there; they creep me out.” The turbolift doors slid shut with a grinding stutter.

“Transporter room two,” said Gabriel, and the turbolift car lurched into motion.

“At least the Xuuxusans can’t read your mind,” Connie said. “How do you think they make me feel?”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Three hours later…

“That should do it, I think,” Adm. Durham said with a disinterested smile as he finished typing into a PADD.

“Thank you both for your time.” Behind him, Adm. Nikolakis-Costopolous was doing her best not to look as utterly bored as she obviously was. Gabriel had to wonder why she’d been in on the debriefing; she’d asked maybe two or three questions and spent the balance of the time with her nose buried in one PADD or another. Adm. Durham, on the other hand, had been very thorough in his questioning of both Gabriel and Connie. He appeared to be visibly disturbed about the loss of so many ships, and seemed determined to find someone to blame.

“Sounds like Challenger will be dry for a while,” he said, as Gabriel and Connie stood up. “You two should think about taking advantage of the time, maybe get away for a bit.” Adm. Durham flashed them a lecherous wink. “Just not too long. I want Challenger and her crew back in fighting trim before I leave for Earth.”

Gabriel and Connie both snapped off textbook salutes. “On your word, sir,” Gabriel replied. Adm. Durham paused to type a last-minute note into his PADD, and then looked back up.

“Dismissed.”

After Gabriel and Connie had left the briefing room, Adm. Anemona Nikolakis-Costopolous stood up and stretched, arching her back to emphasize her breasts. There’s something to drool over, you old pervert, she thought, ignoring Adm. Durham’s lustful gaze. “Why the hell was I even here, Robert? I was about as useful as that broken vacuum cleaner droid in the corner.”

“I’m beginning to regret dragging you with me to this godforsaken patch of space, Mona,” Adm. Durham retorted. “But you insisted on coming along, claiming you wanted to see Celvanos and what all the fuss was about. Really, though, you were just hoping to get back into MacAllister’s pants.”

“I wasn’t…”

“Oh please, don’t deny it. I could see the look on your face when you found out she was still involved with Erika Priest.” The sour look on Adm. Nikolakis-Costopolous’ face confirmed what Adm. Durham already knew. “Time to move on, don’t you think?”

“Yeah, maybe.” She bent down across the desk, giving Adm. Durham a perfect view of her ample cleavage. She could practically feel his hands on her as he stared, and the thought made her sick. “But it ain’t gonna be with you. So stare all you want. Here, I’ll give you a prime view of my ass.” She spun on her heel and walked briskly out of the conference room.

“You can find the whores on level 85,” Adm. Durham snapped at Mona as the door slid shut. “Ask for Ta’anra.” If Mona didn’t have the Academy commandants in her pocket, Adm. Durham thought darkly, I’d have shoved her out an airlock years ago…

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Gabriel and Connie took the ‘scenic route’ back to Challenger; that is, the turbolift route that ran through Gateway Station’s hollow midsection. The wide transparent aluminum windows of the turbolift car provided an excellent view of Gateway’s interior strata, as well as the physics-defying waterfall that ran along the station’s centerline. Gabriel had broken the comfortable silence only once, to order Kromm to prep the Unforgiven, Gabriel’s yacht. Connie cocked an eyebrow quizzically but said nothing; she’d come to expect such seemingly random behavior from Gabriel.

All too soon, the turbolift deposited Gabriel and Connie at the staging deck of the slip where Challenger was currently moored. Panoramic windows showed the repair craft and spacesuited workers tending to the mighty but wounded Challenger. Beyond lay the blue-white globe of Celvanos, the world that Gateway Station orbited with lazy purpose.

The world that Gabriel loves so much, Connie thought. She and Gabriel had spent some time there, Gabriel showing her its wonders, but… it’s not Earth. It’s not home. Connie felt a pang of sorrow as she realized just how long it had been since Challenger had been to Earth. I should really transmit a letter to Grandmum…

“Commander?” prodded Gabriel.

“Wha? I’m sorry, I was lost in thought.” Connie blushed, slightly embarrassed that she’d not heard Gabriel talking to her.

“Many light-years lost, by the look of it,” teased Gabrlel. “I said, it looks like K’kon has the repairs well in hand, so we’re going to take Adm. Durham’s offer of time off.”

“Offer? He just said we should think about.. ah, ‘code-speak’ again?”

Gabriel just smiled. “Pack for early summer temperatures, and meet me at the Unforgiven in ten minutes.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“I.. I didn’t expect to hear from you so soon, m’lord admiral.”

“What you did or did not expect is irrelevant. The ship should be nearing coordinate point beta.”

“It is, m’lord admiral.”

“Then you know what to do. Do not fail me, and you may find in death the honor you relinquished in life.”

“It will be as you command, m’lord admiral.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“I can’t believe Celvanos doesn’t have a weather control net,” said Connie, scrambling to find shelter from the sudden downpour. At least she’d been able to get most of the picnic back into the basket and get it covered up. There was little worse than soggy peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. She looked over at Gabriel, who hadn’t moved from where they’d been sitting. “Would you mind getting out of the rain, Captain?”

Gabriel looked back at Connie, hunched under a nearby rock outcropping. “Why? It’s only rain.” He held out his hands. “And it’s just cool enough to feel really good.” He motioned for her to join him; when she shook her head ‘no’, he laughed. “What’s the matter, Commander, afraid you’re going to melt?”

“Going to…” Oh yes, that ‘Wizard of Oz’ movie; that green witch creature was afraid of water. Connie started laughing, realizing how silly she looked huddled against the rock. She went over and sat next to Gabriel; within seconds, she was soaked to the bone. She had to admit, though, it did feel good.

“The Celvani tried a weather net,” explained Gabriel, “but due to lingering effects of the Dragonwars, atmospheric conditions proved too difficult to control. Besides, the Celvani live in harmony with their world, whatever she may throw at them.” After a few minutes, the torrent of rain slowed to a light trickle, and in the distance a rainbow appeared. Gabriel pointed it out, noting the unique color combinations it displayed due to the light from Celvanos’ binary suns. Gabriel let Connie look at the rainbow for a moment, then quickly directed her attention to a clump of telion bushes.

“Watch this.” The light from Celvanos’ suns (one was yellow, the other blue) caught the raindrops clinging to the bushes, scattering green sprays of light over the ground. A gentle breeze picked up, moving through the bushes with what Connie could swear was a crystalline tinkling sound. Gabriel reached over and plucked a now-solid raindrop from a nearby bush and put it gingerly in Connie’s hand. It was surprisingly heavy, and as Connie watched in amazement it slowly evaporated into a puff of the palest green.

“Wow.”

“That doesn’t happen very often,” said Gabriel. “Conditions have to be just right.”

“I think I’m getting a better idea of why you love this world so much.”

“There’s so much I want to show you. But for now,” he said, a mischievous grin crossing his face as he lay Connie back on the grass and started to undo her top, “let’s get out of these wet things, hmm?”

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“Admiral MacAllister!” Lt. Hoek’s thick Hispanic baritone cut through the hubbub of Gateway Station’s command deck, the CommuniCore. Adm. MacAllister’s head spun in his direction, and she nearly spilled her mug of Slurm.

“What is it, Lieutenant?”

“We’re receiving a distress call from the Barcelona, ma’am,” he said. “Audio only, and the signal is fluctuating wildly.”

“On speakers.” A deafening screech of static filled the CommuniCore, causing everyone on deck to at best wince in pain. Two officers, however, collapsed unconscious to the floor; they were from races with hyper-sensitive hearing.

“Engage the goddamn filters!” MacAllister barked. Lt. Hoek hammered at his console, and the sound instantly dropped to a low hiss. He continued to work, massaging the transmission and making the words as distinguishable from the static as he could.

“That’s the best I can do,” Lt. Hoek said, looking up at Adm. MacAllister nervously. Her hand, resting on his shoulder, tightened uncomfortably, but her voice was quiet and ice cold.

“Replay, please.”

"skkrrtch mayday, this is USS Barceloskkrrtch… we hit a subspace distskkrrtch outside the Ta’aldorn system, EPS spike caused warp drive skkrrtchalance and knocked us out of warp.. same distortion caused catastskkrrtchic failure on D’arra Falcor, she was destroyed, lost with all hands.. impskkrrtch drive got us in-system before dying, we are now locked in a decaying skkrrtch around Ta’aldorn V.. we are burning out the RCS thrusters to delay the ship’s desskkrrtch, but it’s only a matter of time before skkrrtch..."

“Jesus Christ,” she spat. “Who do we have on station?”

“Um, no one, Admiral,” said Ensign Lynch hesitantly. “Nearly every available ship was pulled for the engagement against the Har-Krath, and those that weren’t are engaged in rescue and recovery operations. None of them would make it from the Iyudha’ato Cluster in time.”

Adm. MacAllister fumed silently for a long moment. “Waitaminnit! Challenger has slipstream drive, and she got here under her own power.”

“By the skin of her teeth is more like it,” said Adm. Durham as he stepped into the CommuniCore. “She’s really in no shape to mount a rescue.”

“She’s the only ship we’ve got,” MacAllister countered. “And if anyone can pull it off, it’s your golden boy.” She turned back to Lt. Hoek. “Get me Captain Frost.”

Lt. Hoek opened a channel to Challenger; LCDR K’kon responded. “I’m sorry, Admiral. Captain Frost is not on board. Unfortunately, I don’t know exactly where he is.”

Adm. MacAllister let loose a string of invectives that nearly melted the carpeting from the deckplates. After the eruption subsided slightly, she growled, “and that means Commander Taylor is in tow, hanging on to his coat-tails.” She closed her eyes and massaged the bridge of her nose; MacAllister could feel the stirrings of a headache that no amount of Slurm could combat.

“LCDR K’kon,” she said, her voice tight, “you are ordered to take Challenger to Ta’aldorn V to affect the rescue of the USS Barcelona. You know that she’s carrying the isolytic subspace weapons that were confiscated from the Har-Krath; I don’t have to tell you to be extremely cautious. We need you there ASAP, so you are authorized to use your slipstream drive for the duration of this mission.”

K’kon sighed, or the equivalent for his insectoid race, but his voice held firm. “Very well, Admiral. Challenger will depart immediately.”

As soon as the channel closed, MacAllister rounded on Adm. Durham. “We’ve got him this time, Admiral. Frost and Taylor gone AWOL? We can finally nail his hide to the wall.”

A look crossed Adm. Durham’s face, sheepishness crossed with frustration and a thinly-veiled rage. He knew MacAllister was right; this would have been a great opportunity, except…

“Actually, Mary Catherine,” he said quietly, “he’s not AWOL.” Adm. Durham produced a PADD. “After the debriefing following the Iuydha’ato engagement, I ‘suggested’ they take some time off.”

“Goddammit, Robert…”

Adm. Durham’s voice dropped to a whisper but took on a razor’s edge. “This is not the time or the place, Mary. I’m just as upset as you that we missed this chance, but we’ll have another, and we’ll get Frost for far worse than being AWOL.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Challenger exited the slipstream vortex with a rough shudder. Though the slipstream drive systems were undamaged in the recent battle (truth be told, they hadn’t been engaged since Challenger’s shakedown cruise), Challenger herself was in pretty bad shape. There were large gashes across the saucer and secondary hull; as power couldn’t be spared to maintain force fields, nearly 1/3 of the ship was exposed to open space. A host of other problems existed that required serious dock work, and K’kon knew that Challenger honestly had no business being here. But he had his orders, and he and the crew would do their duty.

“We’ve got to be on our toes around here,” said Lt. Torvos, hands tight on his helm controls. “This system is notorious for subspace distortions.”

“That’s likely the reason for the limited subspace manipulation abilities the Ta’aldae have,” commented LCDR D’negel, from his post at Tactical.

“Interesting, but irrelevant, Commander,” said K’kon. “Mr. Torvos, set your course for Ta’aldorn V, best possible speed.”

“Best possible speed, aye,” Torvos replied. Gingerly firing the impulse engines, Challenger’s Romulan helmsman guided the wounded starship towards her moribund sister, grasped firmly in the deadly grip of Ta’aldorn V’s gravity well. Several long minutes and one harrowing spike of runaway thrust from the impulse drive later, Challenger was within visual range of Ta’aldorn V and the Barcelona.

“Magnify,” K’kon ordered. The viewscreen flickered, and the extent of the Barcelona’s damage became visible. The ship was bleeding atmosphere and venting drive plasma, and the port side of the saucer was crumpled, as if it had been gripped by a gargantuan hand.

“Life signs?”

“Fluctuating,” replied D’negel. “There’s some sort of subspace turbulence that’s playing hell with the sensors. We’d have to get close to get an accurate reading, but that would put us in the same predicament. And there’s no way we can get a reliable transporter lock, even if the transporters were on-line.”

“Damn,” K’kon said quietly. “I need options, and fast. Tractor beam?”

“That subspace turbulence, combined with the amount of drive plasma around the ship…” D’negel shrugged. “We could try.”

“What about maneuvering Challenger underneath the Barcelona and using the shields to nudge her into a higher orbit?”

“I could fly that with my eyes closed,” said Torvos. “But Barcelona would have to have her shields raised as well, or we’d be hitting her bare hull.”

“And we can’t raise them on any channel,” D’negel added. “We could tell them our plans, but we’d have no way of knowing if they got our signal or not. Hell, we don’t know if anyone’s still alive over there.”

Gabriel would know what to do
, K’kon thought sourly. “Stow that negative talk, mister. Launch a class four probe, set it to maneuver right next to the Barcelona. We should get clear life signs and hopefully a comm channel.”

“On it,” replied D’negel. A minute later, the probe fired and made a beeline for the Barcelona. Another minute, and telemetry began trickling in.

“Two hundred forty-seven life signs,” D’negel reported. “But their comm systems are fried. No way we’re getting a signal to or from them.”

“Out of a crew of over 1000,” K’kon whispered. He turned and looked at the MSD that dominated the rear quarter of Challenger’s bridge. He’d seen Gabriel do the same on many occasions, and hoped somehow to find inspiration in the display.

“Lt. Torvos, close to 400,000 kilometers and hold station. Mr. D’negel, when we get in position, I want you to fire a phaser burst, narrow beam width, into the drive plasma behind the Barcelona. If I’m right, the explosion will push the Barcelona into a slightly higher orbit. Not enough to save the ship, but we can get any surviving crew and retrieve or at least permanently disable those isolytic burst-bombs.”

“Aye, sir. Standing by.”

Challenger didn’t have far to go; it was only two minutes before Torvos indicated that the ship was in position.

“Ready phasers,” ordered K’kon.

“At your command,” D’negel replied. “Sir, what yield should I set?”

“Um, set at 40%. That should be just enough.”

“Aye, sir, yield at 40%, phasers on your mark.”

K’kon took a deep breath, held it, then exhaled slowly. “Fire.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Unforgiven slid into her berth at the top of Challenger’s primary hull; the docking sequence was barely complete before Adm. MacAllister was on the comm, ordering Gabriel and Connie to report to her office.

“You should have been on the bridge of your ship, Captain,” MacAllister spat, her voice laced with venom, “not off playing slap-and-tickle with your XO. If you had been there, goddammit, this whole thing could have been avoided.” She picked up a PADD and waved it in Gabriel’s face, looking for all the world like she wanted to bash his head in with it.

“But once again, Adm. Durham comes through with an excuse for your despicable behavior, and you get off scot free.” She threw the PADD against the wall, and got within millimeters of Gabriel’s face.

“Chew on this, Captain,” she hissed. “Because he was in command at the time, LCDR K’kon will be reprimanded for what happened, and with this kind of black mark in his service jacket, it would take a bigger miracle than Moses parting the Red Sea for him to advance past his current rank.”

MacAllister paused to retrieve an isolinear chip from her desk before getting right back in Gabriel’s face. “You’re so goddamned fond of the holodeck, run this program when you get back to Challenger. You watch every bloody minute of it. And when you’re done, remember this: despite what the official report says, I will personally make sure the handful of surviving Ta’aldae know exactly who was responsible for the burning of their world and the genocide of their race, not to mention the families of those Barcelona crewmembers still alive before your ship fired."

Adm. MacAllister's hatred and anger were palpable; she had so much she wanted to say, but couldn't find the words. Instead, she put as much poison into her voice as she could manage, and bit off one single word.

“Dismissed.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Gabriel did as ordered, and what he saw literally brought him to his knees. K’kon’s idea to use the phasers was correct, but he used too much power; he should have fired at 25% yield. The phaser beam ignited the drive plasma, and the too-strong shockwave forced the Barcelona further down instead of away from the planet. In addition, the explosion rattled the isolytic burst-bombs in the Barcelona’s cargo holds and set them all off. A roiling wall of subspace energy washed over the surface of Ta’aldorn V, and as Adm. MacAllister had said, the planet burned. No hell envisioned by Dante or anyone else matched the unnatural firestorm of subspace energy that scoured Ta'aldorn V down to the bedrock. Gabriel knew that he’d see those images every night for a long, long time.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Later

“Here are the reports you requested, Captain,” said LCDR K’kon, handing Gabriel a small stack of PADDs.

“Thank you, Commander.” Gabriel set them on his desk, then looked at K’kon. “Commander, for what it’s worth... Gods above and gods below, I’m sorry.”

LCDR K’kon gave Gabriel a blank stare. “To be completely honest, Captain, it has no worth whatsoever.” He indicated the door with a curt nod. “By your leave, sir?”

Gabriel, numbed by what his second officer, his friend, had said, waved at the door. “Dismissed,” he muttered weakly…

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End

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In case anyone is wondering, the events detailed in this month's challenge take place some time before the events of my entry in to the June 2010 challenge, "Then Welcome, Hail! Damnation" ( http://trekbbs.com/showthread.php?t=123641 )

 
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In case any of y'all were curious, here are some of my casting choices (read: fantasy wish list) for my stories:

-Captain Gabriel Frost, played by David Tennant http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u108/FrostRaptor/DavidTennantasCaptainGabrielFrost.jpg As Gabriel, his hair will be a dirty blond, he’ll have blue eyes, and speak with an American accent.

-Commander Connie Taylor, played by Kinoshita Ayumi http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u108/FrostRaptor/KinoshitaAyumiasCommanderConnieTaylor.jpg and http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u108/FrostRaptor/K2.jpg Raised mostly by her half-British paternal grandmother, Connie speaks “the Queen’s English."

-Fleet Admiral Robert “Phaser Pants” Durham, played by Sam Watterson http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/...rsonasFleetAdmiralRobertPhaserPantsDurham.jpg He earned the nickname “Phaser Pants” during the Dominion War, after which he rose quickly to become the CIC of the Unified Command.

-Admiral Anemona Nikolakis-Costopolous, played by Melina Kanakaredes http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/...redesasAdmiralAnemonaNikolakis-Costopolis.jpg and http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/u108/FrostRaptor/M2.jpg I don’t know much about her yet as she decided to make her debut in this month’s challenge, other than she had a tempestuous relationship with Adm. MacAllister

- Rear Admiral Mary Catherine MacAllister, played by Julia Ormond http://i166.photobucket.com/albums/...mondasRearAdmiralMaryCatherineMacAllister.jpg She is the commanding officer of Gateway Station; she speaks with a fairly heavy Irish lilt, hair shows signs of the red it once was before stress caused her to go grey. A “lapsed Catholic”, she is rather fond of ‘blasphemy’ aka ‘colorful metaphors’.

-LCDR K'kon, voiced by Frank Welker, character most likely would be portrayed via CGI. A member of the insectoid K'krothan race (very mantis-like). His people are highly valued in Starfleet, though there have been some difficulties due to their physignomy.

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I'm putting together a more exhaustive list, as there's quite a few characters to "cast", but these are the main players in this month's entry.
 
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Great depiction of original characters.

It seems as if Captain Frost doesn't exactly have a good reputation with the top brass...?

Anyhow--though I don't recall having read any other tales of your series before--still, I think it was well-written. The tragedy was filled with irony--everyone knows Captain Frost was absolutely essential in that mission--but the admirals make the call to send the ship out there anyway--and then seek to put the blame on Frost.

I guess they must hate him.

Well done.
 
A very good entry. Certainly an event that would echo around for a while-I imagine this will be referred to in other stories?
 
@Rush Limborg- Thanks for the compliments! As to Capt. Frost's relationship with various admirals, it's touched on in several of my other stories (links available on request :D). I won't go into detail here, as there are things I don't want to spoil.

@Mistral- Yeah, this one will cause some shockwaves! The idea came out of left field, and I just ran with it. I'm thinking about rewriting "And Welcome, Hail! Damnation" to reflect the events detailed above.

And the obligatory shameless self-plug: vote for me! :D :D I really would like to win just one of these things...
 
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