Sorry about the late response...
Heh, I hadn't quite realized the story had ended, but I enjoyed it a lot. I hope we see more of our young Andorian friend in future tales. As I've said before, this was a great way to see Eagle from different perspectives. It reminds you that so-called "background" characters are real people, too.
I can't say I'm in love with Star. Frankly, this woman has her nerve. She breaks regs then has the nerve to blame a subordinate for getting her into trouble with the captain. It also dosen't speak will of an xo who thrashes about in desperation to gain the respect of the crew. She has no business giving career advice to anyone, in my opinion.
Of course, I'm being harsh. I don't know her back story, which may be why I'm not as forgiving as your other readers.
But Star is an interesting charcter for sure.
All in all, great work here!