While Tigerstyle and I are sorting out some various RL issues, I thought I'd post this to give everyone something to read while they wait for the next part of Midnight on the Firing Line. Interludes is a series of vignettes spanning various points of Kieran's Starfleet career, intended to give readers a little more insight into Kieran's life, times, and character. This one also introduces characters and concepts that I'll touch on again in another story I intend to write for this month's Challenge. Hope you enjoy. ---------------------------------------------------------- Klingon-Federation Neutral Zone, somewhere near the Mutara Nebula August 16, 2281 The air inside Klingon science station Vrai't was pungent with the charnel smell of death. Whoever had attacked the Klingon outpost had been quite thorough, and had obviously had the time to indulge the dark side of their imagination. Spatters of lavender blood dotted the walls and the smashed remnants of computer consoles. Smoke still hung in the air, a reminder of the recent presence of the Klingons' mystery attackers. The only sound to break the eerie silence was the soft clank of boots on deck plating. Lieutenant Commander Kieran Forester wrinkled his nose and grimaced at the smell as he studied his tricorder. His off hand tapped the butt of his phaser restlessly as he collected his readings, scowling as he studied the display. His scans weren't yielding much in the way of useful information; he sighed in annoyance as he closed the tricorder and returned it to its belt holster. "Ugh." He grunted in displeasure as he nearly tripped over the corpse of a Klingon. Like the several other corpses in the room, this body had been horribly mutilated by the attackers. The Klingon's armor had been sliced to ribbons, and most of his midsection was simply gone, as if something had ripped his stomach out. Kieran's gaze moved to the dead Klingon's face; the corpse's features were twisted in horrific agony. "Anything new, Commander?" Kieran turned away from the Klingon corpse towards the voice of his captain. "No, sir. Their computer systems are off line, and my tricorder's not telling us anything we don't already know." He turned away from Captain Richthofen to regard the dead Klingon. "Poor sorry bastards," he said softly. "I wouldn't waste my sympathy, Commander," called out Richthofen's voice behind him. "Sir?" Kieran asked, his head tilted in confusion. Richthofen was standing next to him, staring down under a furrowed brow at the dead Klingon. "These... people... are the enemy, Commander. This fellow here--" he prodded the Klingon with his boot "--would have liked nothing more in life than to disembowel you with his mek'leth. However, thanks to the winds of fate, it is you standing over his corpse and not vice versa." His voice softened ominously,and he went down to one knee, his gaze sweeping over the Klingon's face. "Even in death, that rage, that bloodlust, never disappears from their eyes." He looked back, raising his head to look at Kieran. "They'll never stop hating us until one of our races is extinct. It will one day come down to a simple matter of us or them. You realize that." The unspoken question was evident in Richthofen's tone. Kieran swallowed, suddenly feeling uneasy. "I don't know, sir, I... suppose so." He felt his face heating, and his eyes broke contact with his captain's. "I just... I'm not sure I'm comfortable thinking in such absolutes. I mean... there's always an exception." Kieran's eyes dropped again to the dead Klingon. The corpse's lifeless eyes stared at the ceiling. Kieran looked for that spark of hate, that last cooling ember of rage, but he saw nothing. Only the cold remorse of death, the same woeful emptiness he would expect to see in any dead man's eye. Richthofen nodded, his features relaxing. "I assume you're referring to the Klingon you met on Khatora? Khelorik, the one that helped you rescue the Starfleet prisoners?" Kieran stayed silent, but the look in his eyes was all Richthofen needed. He chuckled sardonically. "Don't give the Klingon more credit than he's due. You were rushing at him with a squad of Starfleet marines and he found a way to buy his life from you. Don't let yourself be fooled, Commander. He'd have just as soon killed you as looked at you. You, and every other human, for that matter." Richthofen rose to his feet. He walked away from the dead Klingon, Kieran following in his wake. "Starfleet is ostensibly an organization dedicated to research and exploration. Why, then, have we had to fight off Klingon incursions almost from the very moment of first contact? The Mal Satz Conflict of 2232. The Battle of Donatu V. The Four Years War. The Organian conflict. Countless other skirmishes and raids over the past seventy-plus years. They've shown no desire to peacefully coexist with us, and they hide their hatred behind flimsy excuses of dwindling resources and overcrowding. Someday, the Federation is going to have to realize the truth before we wake up and find Klingon warships orbiting Earth." Kieran was torn. His mind raced, and he was struck speechless for several seconds as a tumultuous flood of thoughts and feelings stormed through his mind. Uncertain cobalt eyes met hard steel gray. In that second, Kieran could see the uncompromising resolve in Richthofen's soul, the strength and force of will that fueled him and that had made him a man Kieran had come to respect and admire in the short time the younger man had been on Menahga. His pulse quickened as Richthofen's words repeated themselves in his head, and he couldn't help but seriously consider what the captain was telling him. An incredulous voice sounded in the back of his mind. Are you serious? The man's advocating genocide, and you're here about to agree with him? The tiny voice was washed away, however, by a sudden flash of anger. Anger, and something else... a dark feeling, something that he couldn't quite describe... something that felt right, yet something that a part of his mind told him was wrong. Kieran squared his jaw, and the words forming on the edge of his lips finally spilled, unable to be contained any longer. "I... suppose I never thought of it in those terms, sir. It's not a pleasant thing to consider... the thought of an entire race destroyed at the hands of another, but I... I suppose you've got a point about the Klingons. We can't trust them, can we?" With that admission, the mood seemed to lighten. Richthofen smiled and clapped Kieran on the shoulder. "Don't get me wrong, now. I'm not advocating a cataclysmic war-to-end-all-wars against them. Lord, I'm not that fatalistic. I just wish the Federation would realize just what kind of monster they're dealing with." His steps halted, and he regarded Kieran with a somber expression, a change from his sudden joviality a moment ago. "I'm glad we had this discussion, Kieran. Captain Hejduk was right about you, you're a bright young man." He was interrupted by the insistent beeping from the communicator on his belt. In one smooth motion he took it out and flipped it open. "Richthofen here." "Captain, this is Commander Rozhdestvensky. We've found something down here you'll want to see." "Acknowledged, Commander; Commander Forester and I will be down momentarily. Richthofen out." As the two men moved to exit the command center, Richthofen paused and turned to face Kieran. "Commander," he began, then paused. After taking several seconds to consider his next words, he continued in a quiet tone. "What do you know about a man by the name of Rittenhouse?"
A very well done vignette giving strong insight into the character of Kieren while also revealing the darker side of the TMP and also TOS universe. I'm looking forward to your reading your August challenge entry too.
I've become quite bad at giving feedback on this board do to other obligations. But I still manage to read a lot and I did read this with great enthusiasm. It's a very well crafed vignette that really gives us an interesting insight into your main character as well as how his later ideas and thoughts were molded in the first place. I'd love to see more of this. Great job
I fully intend on replying....after I go back and read some of the earlier Star Trek: Civilizations posts. I'm a newcomer and apparently didn't go back far enough in the posts to catch it.. I just don't like starting in the middle of a story..
CeJay - I know what you mean, and I have the same issues myself. Wasn't directed at you or anyone in particular, I had just hoped for more than one comment. No worries, Dulak. I'm in the same boat, trying to get caught up with all these great stories by all these different authors. However, you don't have to read Midnight on the Firing Line before reading this vignette, as this takes place nine years before said story. But hey, as long as you are reading Midnight, let me know what you think. It's stalled for the moment, but my co-writer and I have no intentions of abandoning it.
A very nice insight into Kieran’s personality. Seeing as James Kirk espoused similar beliefs to Captain Richthofen at one point, it’s not too hard to imagine that a significant number of Starfleet officers perceived the Klingons as mindless killing machines. It says something about Kieran that he’s not willing to blindly hate the Klingons, despite how much his captain’s opinion means to him. Two questions remain unanswered, however: 1) Who did this to the Klingons? 2) Is Richthofen’s starship painted a snazzy shade of red? Nicely done, Hyperion
In response to your first question, well, that's not really the point of the story, is it? I suppose, though, if you must know... I'd imagined it to be Kzinti/Tzenkethi(whatever you want to call them) raiders. And for the second, no, but he does have a model of a certain red Fokker triplane flown by an ancestor of his. Glad you liked it.