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January Challenge - Caretaker

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Commodore
Commodore
I wrote a big preamble that explained the divergences from the established universe, but it made the post too long and I decided it might be more interesting for you, the reader, to figure out the numerous divergences.

This could probably be a much longer piece, but I wasn't very sure about how exactly the longer story would get to the point of discovery about the Caretaker. So it cut a few corners.

The Caretaker


Captain Elizabeth Shelby felt the deck of the Enterprise rumble, the brilliant plasma storms of the Badlands casting supernatural light on the faces of her command crew after the lighting flickered out.

With the new navigational package and the bio-neural computer system, the Enterprise was more than equipped to navigate the plasma storms, but even Shelby was comforted by the sight of Lieutenant Thomas Riker at the helm.

Commander Data to her right and Counselor Deanna Troi to her left, with Sito Jaxa at Tactical and Sam Lavelle at Operations rounded out the rest of her command crew.

It came down to one thing - Worf had vanished whilst on a covert mission to infiltrate the Maquis and the Enterprise had been tasked with tracking both him and the cell he had been infiltrating down.

Before the Cardassians did it for them, she added.

Shelby caught Lavelle doing a double-take at some information on his console, stood and moved closer so that she could take in the information too. She also completed a double-take -

"Am I seeing what I think I'm seeing, Sam?"

Lavelle nodded.

"A planet in the middle of the Badlands and free from the ravages of the storms," said the young Canadian. "It's a theoretical impossibility but ... there she is ..."

Shelby blinked.

"Feed the coordinates to the Helm," she ordered. "Mister Riker, when you get the coordinates, lay in a course for that planetoid ..."

"Aye, Captain."

Both the Alaskan and the Canadian went about their duties and, within moments, the Enterprise was on a new heading towards the mysterious planetoid that the sensors had revealed.

It came out of the plasma storms, resplendant in its simple beauty. Obviously a more arid planetoid from its hues, but there was plenty of water and enough signs of fauna that suggested the planetoid was capable of supporting humanoid life.

"Data, what do you suggest?"

Data cocked his head. His recent decision to use the emotion chip that he had previously avoided had given him some unusual emotional ticks as he struggled to comprehend his emotions.

"Are there any life signs?"

"Numerous," revealed the Canadian Ops Manager. "Representatives of several Alpha Quadrant races and some the sensors don't even recognise."

Shelby was interested.

"Anyone we know?"

"Actually, there's a good chance one of the Klingon life signs is Commander Worf," explained Lavelle. "It's a seventy percent match with the life signs we have on file for him -"

Lavelle worked at his console.

"I just matched several other life signs with personnel and civilians lost within the vicinity of the Badlands within the past several ..." and Lavelle blinked. "Within the past several _decades_, Ma'am."

Shelby and Data looked at each other.

"Are they being held against their will, Deanna?"

Troi shook her head.

"Not that I can ascertain, Captain," explained the ships empathic counselor. She would have been able to pick up levels of stress or agitation that would have been indicative of the people below being imprisoned.

Shelby ran her avenues of decision through her mind.

"I'll be damned if I'm going to let you have the fun on this one, Number One," she said, a smile flickering across her face. "Sito, Lavelle, you're with me. Number One, you have the Bridge ..."

Shelby turned up the ramp, heading to the turbolift. The ships Acting Security Chief and the ships newly assigned Operations Manager following close behind.

Data coughed.

"Regulations indicate that Captain's are _not_ to lead away missions into any potentially hostile situation," the android recited. "In this situation, I would like to suggest that I myself lead ..."

Shelby held her hand up, the android halted.

"Log it as an official complaint if you feel the need to, Commander. But, right now, I have an away mission to lead ..." the blonde haired Captain said, stepping into the turbolift and letting the doors shut behind her and her companions.

Counselor Troi and Lieutenant Riker exchanged an amused look at the android as he settled into the centralised commanders chair. Elsewhere, Captain Shelby and Lieutenant's Lavelle and Sito had met up with Doctor Selar in Transporter Room 3 where Chief Salazar beamed the foursome, alongside two security guards, down to the mysterious planet that the ship was orbiting.

Shelby took in the almost tropical landscape as the team materialised on a beach on which the gentle blue waters of the ocean gently lapped. Lavelle and Sito had their tricorders out straight away.

"What have you got for me, Sam?"

"The lifesigns we picked up are thattaway, Ma'am," the Canadian announced, indicating into the jungle.

Shelby lead the team through the jungle. It reminded her of tropical islands back on Earth that she'd visited when she'd been involved with Vincent Wexler during her Academy days. Soon, she heard people talking and heard the sound of a waterfall cascading over cliffs and into a plunge pool.

She picked up her speed, pushed through into a clearing where several men and women and some persons of indeterminate gender were playing in the pool. It was almost as if the Enterprise had stumbled onto a primite pleasure planet that had managed to remain off the charts.

One of the revellers turned to her.

"Have you just got here?"

Shelby nodded.

"Captain Elizabeth Shelby of the USS Enterprise," Shelby said, by way of greeting. The well-built man with mottled shoulders - a Trill if she wasn't mistaken - pulled himself from the plunge pool and Shelby realised, for the first time, that the revellers were completely naked.

Shelby averted her eyes whilst the man wrapped a towel around his waist and stepped over to them.

"I'll take you to the settlement. You're the second new arrival in the past week. Last week we had a group of people arrive including," the man paused, "A Klingon of all things!"

Shelby and Sito exchanged a look.

Worf? mouthed Sito.

Shelby nodded in response.

"That would be great," Shelby told their newfound guide. "And perhaps we could meet this Klingon fellow. I think he could be a friend of ours that we're looking for."

"I'm sure that would be most agreeable," said their guide. "By the way, my name is Jamal. I found my way here with my girlfriend, Ursa, when my freighter was forced to take a turn into the Bloodfield."

"The Bloodfield?"

"It's what my people call this area of space."

Shelby took this information in, storing it for future use. As the short trip through the jungle from the clearing to the settlement proceeded, Jamal explained that he and his girlfriend had been on the planet for two months. But things didn't match up - his references to historical events were out of synch by almost two hundred years.

Her own tricorder yielded some clues about the nature of the planet and of Jamal, Ursa and the other residents of the planet. She showed the chronometric readings to Selar, who raised her eyebrow.

"Most interesting," the Vulcan medic volunteered. "A Tumnus Paradox."

Shelby nodded. She wasn't particularly experienced with temporal anomalies but she knew that a Tumnus Paradox occured when the passage of time was different from one place to another - the name of the paradox had been culled from an ancient childrens novel in which the situation occured.

If Jamal believed he had arrived two months earlier from his point-of-view but had been there for two hundred years from her point-of-view, then Worf, who had arrived only two weeks ago from her point-of-view may have only been missing for an hour or two from his.

They'd been on the planet for just over an hour but several days might have gone past back on the Enterprise.
 
It gave her a headache to think about it.

She tapped her communicator.

"Shelby to Enterprise."

No response. The other members of her team tried their communicators and got no response either.

"You won't get any response," explained Jamal. "There's something in the planets atmosphere that blocks all attempted communications."

Shelby nodded, that sort of thing wasn't unheard of.

"Sam, I want you working on it. Selar, help him."

The journey to the settlement abruptly halted when they stepped out of the jungle and into an area that had been cleared of trees and now consisted of several huts, made from trees and the remains of spaceships. And in the central square was a Maquis Raider that was being torn apart for salvage -

"Captain!"

Worf bounded over to them, his civilian tunic had been slashed at the shoulders revealing his muscled arms. A few of the other settlers hovered at a cautious distance and a handful came closer, intrigued by the new arrivals.

"Commander," said Worf in greeting. "I have been trying to get a message to Starfleet, but I'm unable to with the equipment and resources that are at hand."

"So we understand. I've got Mr Lavelle and Selar working on it. Is there anyone else here who wants to leave as well, everyone seems quite at ease with their confinement?"

Worf eyed the other settlers.

"There are," he searched his mind for the right word to use, "'others' who wish to leave the planet. Many are happy to live out their days here, believing it to be some sort of mythical 'Eden' ..."

"And the energy field surrounding the planet? Natural or artificial?"

Worf shrugged.

"It is uncertain, there are supporters for each point of view. If the Enterprise is in orbit, then our recovery ought to be speedy."

"Assuming Data and Geordi can pool their resources and penetrate the field that surrounds the planet," said Shelby. "In the meantime, it's been hours since I had anything to eat - what's good to eat round here?"

"They have a drink that is an acceptable substitute to prune juice, other food is vegetable based. Fauna does not appear to be in sufficient quantities to support the population of the settlement ..." explained Worf.

"Has nobody tried to explore the planet?" asked Sito.

Worf shook his head.

"It seems that nobody has been here long enough for that to be an issue, Sir," explained Worf. And that presented an issue - if someone believed that they had been on the planet for ten months, almost a thousand years would have passed.

"Who has been here longest?"

Worf indicated an elderly man with a gently contoured face. He wasn't Human, but there was a definite base Humanoid look about him.

"He calls himself the Caretaker," explained Worf.

"I think I'm going to go and have a chat with this man, see if he's got any clues about what's going on here," said Shelby. She crossed the settlement, leaving Worf to open into a discussion with his protege, Lieutenant Sito, and sat down on the bench next to the mysterious Caretaker.

"How long have you been here, old man?"

"Oh, about two years," the old man spoke with an unusual drawl, not meeting Shelbys eyes. This made her suspicious. "You must be a new arrival, the new arrivals always want to see the first of us."

"Two years," said Shelby. "By my calculations that means you've been here for near enough two thousand years, give or take a decade or two. Did you arrive on your own?"

The old man nodded.

"I was travelling to see my daughter when I was hit by a plasma storm and had to land here. My shuttle wouldn't work so I couldn't leave, then other people started arriving too ..."

"And you're sure there was no native life?"

"Fairly sure, dear," replied the Caretaker.

Selar approached, holding her tricorder out towards the mysterious Caretaker. The Vulcan female had her eyebrow raised, showing she was intrigued by what her tricorder was showing her.

"You are not humanoid," she stated, simple and to the point. "You are appearing as one, to us, but you are not one of us."

"Explain, Doctor," barked Shelby looking at the old man, who looked bewildered.

"I am reading signs that this 'old man' is a sporocystian lifeform masquerading as a humanoid," explained Selar. "The signs are weak, masked by the field creating the Tumnus paradox, but they _are_ there."

Worf was here now too.

"Nobody else had such advanced tricorders, it would explain why it wasn't found out before," explained the Klingon.

Shelby turned to the old man, who had dropped the bewildered act.

"Okay, okay, I give up," he said - and, in a flash of light, an unusual energy and plasmoid lifeform was in his place. His voice seemed to come from out of nowhere. "You found me out."

"Why did you hide in plain sight?"

"I didn't want to scare anyone," explained the Caretaker. "I just wanted to have company. I knew I could never return home, so I set up the energy field to accelerate time on the planet - it meant that company arrived sooner rather than later ..."

Shelby frowned. This would require some explaining to the other settlers.

"I'd suggest you take the field down so I can communicate with my vessel," said Shelby. And, moments later, she looked across at Selar who nodded that she was back in contact with the vessel.


Captain's Log, Stardate 48115.6

Although we have had to take the sporocystian lifeform into custody alongside the Maquis that Worf travelled with, several of the citizens who settled on Eden have chosen to remain there and extend their society. Many will take a great deal of getting used to the current political status of the quadrant, but I hope that any unsettlement will be brief.

It is my understanding that Commander Data performed admirably in the weeks that we were out of phase with time on Eden and I will be recommending him for a commendation. To a more unhappy duty, I have recieved Commander Worf's request for transfer to Deep Space Nine. According to Commander Sisko, Worf's skills are in demand there.

Lieutenant Sito Jaxa will succeed Worf as Security Chief on a more permanent basis.
 
That was so low key you could miss the relevance to the topic unless you payed close attention. I would call this both subtle and well thought out. Good job!
 
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