Fix Beyond very simply. Fix 2009 even simpler.

Discussion in 'Star Trek Movies: Kelvin Universe' started by Laura Cynthia Chambers, Nov 23, 2021.

  1. Laura Cynthia Chambers

    Laura Cynthia Chambers Rear Admiral Rear Admiral

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    Fix Beyond by adding two TOS tropes.

    1) Instead of the Enterprise answering the Altamid distress call, have them be sent out to find out what became of the ship that did - something TOS often wound up doing.

    2) Instead of destroying the Enterprise, have them find said other ship destroyed. While an away team beams/shuttles to the surface to look for survivors (again, something which was done a lot in TOS), the Enterprise winds up in a firefight against the swarm, able to beat them back for a while. Eventually, Enterprise and Franklin (crewed by away team) get together to fight off the swarm and Krall.

    As for 2009?

    It's said in TOS that Kirk taught at the Academy. So, here's Kirk, a few years after grad, unsatisfied, not getting anywhere in his quest to explore space/become a captain, etc. He's a professor teaching kids younger than him that get to live out his dream, the one PIke promised, while he's only been on a couple of shakedown cruises at most. The only satisfaction he gets is an academic rivalry with Spock. So when the Vulcan comes out with his new "no-win scenario" simulation, prof Kirk decides to make a fool out of him.

    When the Nero crisis begins, and it's all hands on deck, Kirk sees his big chance to get out into space and prove he's good for more than grading papers.

    Heck, fix Into Darkness too. Post-Nero, assuming '09 plays out as it actually did (Cadet Kirk) Kirk loses the Enterprise back to a recuperated Pike and finishes his education, then winds up on Enterprise as first officer somehow (maybe PIke's original FO is transferring, or sick).
     
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  2. fireproof78

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    I do like this idea, largely because I don't really want Krall to be Edison. I think sending the Enterprise out to investigate the disappearance of another Starfleet ship is a good idea.

    As for 2009, honestly I have a much simpler fix. Have an ending montage of Kirk receiving his commendation for saving Earth, and then go through a highlight reel of other commendations, seeing him receive his promotion at the end, and stepping on to the bridge. Then, all those other adventures could be continued in the comics of how he got to captain.
     
  3. Admiral Archer

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    Love your idea on how to fix "Beyond"! They trashed the Kelvin 1701 WAY too early, and the crew didn't feel like they had earned a brand new 1701-A. It just felt way too rushed.
     
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  4. dupersuper

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    I take it Into Darkness is considered beyond repair?
     
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  5. F. King Daniel

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    These films need fixing? I like them just fine as they are. The only thing I would "fix" would be to cut Spock's "Khaaaaan!" from Into Darkness. That was awful, and facepalmed me out of a touching alternate universe reverse-Wrath of Khan death scene.
     
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  6. fireproof78

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    I like them too, but I think some small things will take them from good to great, in my view. Krall was always the weakest part of Beyond for me so adjustments there would be welcome.

    ST 09 just needs really small tweaks, but I lay that on the writer's strike.

    I agree with your Into Darkness suggestion. Honestly, I would just have John Harrison be John Harrison. No Khan.
    Into Darkness just needs two small adjustments to make it a great film, in my opinion. So, no.
     
  7. XmasCV330

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    the Kelvin films get better to me with each re-viewing. that doesn't always happen for me.
     
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  8. Mage

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    I don't mind it as much as others do, but yeah..... An emotional outburst from Spock I am quite ok with. But the Khaaaaaaan. Bit OTT
     
  9. arch101

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    Watched STB the other night again and it’s really grown on me. I think it’s the best Kelvin film by a wide margin and deserved a sequel. Pegg really knows how to write for the fans.
     
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  10. Laura Cynthia Chambers

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    At least Beyond was an original story. Yes, it also used the "disgruntled Human/ex-Starfleet corrupted" trope, as well, but the character himself was new. Trying, at least.
     
  11. UssGlenn

    UssGlenn Commodore Commodore

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    Yeah, then at the end after we see him back in the pod, pan over to the one next to him and its a young Ricardo Montelban.
     
  12. STEPhon IT

    STEPhon IT Commodore Commodore

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    Kirk going through a phase in his life and is hoping to rejuvenate himself. The story had been told before and much better in The Wrath of Khan. The villains seem to always have a personal vendetta with either the system or our heroes; Xerox this over, and over, and over and over and over again. The only things that's remotely original in Beyond is the special effects along with the make up effects.
     
  13. valkyrie013

    valkyrie013 Commodore Commodore

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    For ST-B
    Yes, have a ship lost and they go find it. Have Kirk and company beam down, leaving Sulu maybe Scotty on board, the swarm comes, disables or even still have the steering of the nacelles, but they get the impulse working and they play hide and seek in the asteroid field, having to leave Kirk and Co alone .. Ala TOS.
    Things play out on the surface, find an old broken ship, Villian? Maybe just the swarm itself, robots on the surface, mainframe ala Landru.
    Sulu and Scotty outwit the swarm and destroy it.
    Basically.. Don't destroy the ship give it something to do and beca hero ship that it wasn't in the other movies.