Feedback for novels posted here...

[IreneAdler]

I wanted to leave feedback for Big Tom's ST C.O.E Mission to Bajor, Book Three, Prophets Landing, but I didn't want to infere with his chapters at all.

This story really appeals to me because I love post-Dominion War Cardassia. I love the dichotomy between the proud, xenophobic Cardassian way, with the need they suddenly have for outsiders. I also love learning about what happens to old ships once they've been officially retired. I also love the plural marriage; it's something that you don't see nearly enough in Trek.

Stylistically, I tend to prefer paragraphs, and a bit more detail, but as a first-person narrative, it leads a unique feel. Still, when writing descriptive text, I'd likely recommend putting it in a single paragraph, as the flow of reading works better that way.

I'm really curious to see what else you do with this!

 

[Big Tom]

Thank you Irene for the feedback. You are the first and only the I have ever received on Trek BBS.
I use the posting format on this site to match the blog posting I do at Word Press. com under the name of tmflavinjr.

I also post my books on Wattpad.com as T.M. Flavin. They did list my works as R-rated, but they are there.

I recommend the site for other selections for you e-reader.

As you probably know by now all of my works on Trek BBs have disappeared.

I am greatly disappointed as the four book series of the "Mission to Bajor" has been in the works for three years or more.

I thank you again for you taking the time to read my novels, and to comment on them.

Good luck with you own works.

Sincerely,

T.M. Flavin