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Enterprise: Lifetime

thew40

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STAR TREK: ENTERPRISE

"Lifetime"

As with many fans, I was highly disappointed in “These Are The Voyages.” With what should have been a heartfelt tribute to the stronger qualities of Enterprise, it turned out to be a big turd. Recently, the novel “The Good That Men Do” retconed that episode, placing its events immediately after “Terra Prime” instead of five years later. This fic mostly takes place in 2245, but deals with the events of both Enterprise installments.

It’s divided into three parts. Be warned the first part is pretty much a talky.



Part One: Morning

2245

Jonathan Archer rose to the sound his alarm. He landed his feet on the ground and stood as tall as his could, his old bones cracking and creaking as he did so. He shuffled to the bathroom, did his business, and proceeded to load his injections of the day. He showered, dressed and walked out into the living room. The shades drew back, revealing the ugliness of the day. Thick dark clouds layered the sky and send down sheets of rain.


His agenda was light – until later. A few messages he needed to respond to, a few items he was asked to arrange, and a . . . meeting with an old friend.


The chimes of his doors rang out. Archer looked up from his screen. His meeting wasn’t supposed to be for hours. Maybe she was early. He marched to the door.


“Daniels.”


The man stood on the other side of the threshold holding, of all things, a plate of eggs.


“Surprised to see me?”


Archer turned away from him. “I don’t know. Should I be? I thought the Temporal Cold War was over with.”


Daniels nodded and stepped in. “It is . . . sort of. It depends on your perspective. It’s history now, if that’s what you’re wondering. I brought you breakfast.”


Archer stared at the plate, then back to Daniels. He took the plate and led the time traveler into his living room.


“I’m actually about to send you and Enterprise back home,” Daniels explained. “I just came out of a temporal flux and found out that it was all over. I figured I would stop back here for what I would call . . . an interview.”


Archer blinked. “An interview?”


Daniels sat down. “And other things, yes.”


“Other things?”


“An explanation that I owe you. About the Temporal Cold War.”


Archer resigned himself to this. He sat down across from Daniels and tasted the eggs.


“Good?” Daniels asked


He nodded. “Very. Now please, get on with your explanation or interviews or whatever the hell is going on . . .”


Daniels smirked. “The Temporal Cold War is over. I’m in a unique position in which I can finally tell you what happened. To an extent. And with the promise that this stays a secret.”


Archer waved his hand towards Daniels. Daniels nodded and leaned forward.


“By the 28th century, the Romulan Star Empire is a thing of the past. The loss of their homeworld, civil wars, political revolutions, and cultural movements has led to its complete collapse. A group believing the Romulans have lost their way contacted the Suliban in the past.”


“Why the Suliban?”


“Because the Suliban are in just the right position. They’re low-key, quiet, and for the most part, don’t have much to contribute. But in the 25th century, the Suliban would be engrossed in a boarder conflict with the Romulans. While initially nothing more than an annoyance, the Suliban delivered a blow to one of their major colonies, wiping out eight million citizens. It’s yet another set-back in a string of them. Eventually, the Suliban were suppressed, but – ”


“I don’t understand,” Archer cut in. “If the Suliban did that, then why did this Romulan agent try and turn them into allies?”


Daniels took a moment to think. “History . . . history requires the right people in the right places at the points in time. Here’s a good example. Have you heard of the USS Kelvin?”


Archer paused, recalling the name. “I . . . believe so. It’s a science vessel, right?”


“Correct. As it stands, that ship has a medical officer named George Bates. Bates will eventually leave the Kelvin and acquire a grant from Starfleet Medical that would allow him to study bimolecular energy transference during transporter use. It would later be considered a total waste of time and resources. However, if Bates didn’t get the grant or had died before hand, then another medical officer from the USS Wellington would have been given that grant and would have been found a way to extend the lifetimes of thousands of humans – including you – by about twenty years.”


Archer sat back, stunned by this. “How-how do you know this?”


“We study alternate timelines as well as our own, sir. But to answer your earlier question, the Romulan agent created the Cabal for the Suliban, leading them into conflict with the Tandarans. The Romulan’s plan was to use Cabal to weaken Starfleet and Klingons – and eventually have them engage the Tandarans. The genetic enhancements were only designed to last for a limited amount of time. When those enhancements would wear off, the Cabal and the Suliban themselves would be at the mercy of the Tandarans.”


Jonathan Archer stood up. “What about Vosk?”


“Vosk is something else. We were after Vosk and trying to undo all the damage he had done. It was Vosk who started the Temporal Cold War. Catching was the biggest prize of them all and when we did, the destruction of the temporal conduit – as well as some creative thinking on our part – erased his existence from Earth.”


“And the time ship? The one the Tholians and Suliban were after?”


Daniels shook his head. “I don’t know. There’s a lot that I know that I can’t explain to you because we don’t have days to go over the different variables.”


Archer sighed and fell back in his chair. Daniels steepled his fingers.


“My turn, sir.”


“What do you mean?”


“My questions.”


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Part two tomorrow!
 
Part Two: Noon​

Jonathan poured the two cups of coffee, the steam rising up into his face. He handed one over to Daniels, who nodded in appreciation. “Thank you. I’ve actually kind of exhausted.”


Archer grinned. “Wait until you get to be my age. I’m surprised I’m still alive to be honest. The doctors believe it has something to do with the genetic modifications done to me thanks to both the Klingon Augment virus and the, uh, the ah - ”


“The Loque’eque?”


“Yes, thank you.”


“You’re welcome,” Daniels replied, sipping his coffee. “It was also probably the exposure to Surak’s katra. Evidence has shown that close contact with Vulcan katra’s improve neural sustainability.”


“My thanks to Surak, then. Ask your first question. I’m expecting company later and I would like a chance to clean up the place.”


“Of course, Captain.” Daniel sat down his cup. “Mainly, I guess I wanted to know what happened to your crew?”


“Don’t you have records of that?”


“We do, but . . . I guess I want some perspective. When was the last time you were all together?”


“All of us?”


Daniels smirked. “I know all about Commander Tucker, so if that makes a difference . . .”


“It does, actually. The last we were all together.” Archer rolled the events over in his mind. He took in a deep breath. “Phlox’s wedding. His fourth wedding. Apparently there’s a certain protocol allowing for Denobulans to marry a fourth time if they perform some sort of ceremony before hand. Since that ceremony took two days and involved . . . many situations we didn’t want to witness . . . we decided to skip it and go to the actual wedding. Enterprise had been mothballed, the crew was in different places in their lives. It was between my leaving of Starfleet and my ambassadorship of Andor . . .”



2168

“Where’s T’Pol?”


Hoshi, standing shoulder to shoulder with Reed, glanced over. “She said she wasn’t sure if she’d make it.”


“You talked to her?” he asked. “I haven’t talked to her in two years . . .”


“Well, it took a little work to get in touch with her, but yes, I talked to her. But she wasn’t sure if she’d be able to make it.”


“Is she still teaching?”


“Yes, but only part time.”


“Part time?” Reed balked. “I’m head of Starfleet Security and I made it here. You’re revolutionizing the way Starfleet communicates and you’re here. And you’re pregnant!”


Hoshi ran a hand over the bump in her dress uniform. “Well, Vulcan’s a way off. I’m not about to make excuses for her.”


Reed sighed. “Very well then.”


The two were in a large and crowded lobby. Huge circular windows gave them a tremendous view of one of Denobula’s biggest cities – Qua’Quar – a massive metropolis that seemed to be without room to breathe. The buildings were tightly packed together with ramps and streets going in to out. People were everywhere.


“Quite a view, huh?”


Reed and Hoshi turned to find Captain Travis Mayweather standing behind them. Hoshi gave him a hug as best she could, working her belly around him. Reed gave him a warm handshake.


“How’s the USS Horizon? Gotta used to that new Daedalus-class yet with that spiffy warp seven engine?” Reed asked, smirking.


“Handles like a dream,” Travis responded. “I remember when warp five was a big deal. We surpassed that on our way here. How are things back home?”


“Just fine. I do have new security up-grades you should take a look at.”


“And I have some suggestions for your comm officer.”


Mayweather laughed. “I’ll be sure to set up a meeting. By the way, Malcolm, you still have that book I lent you?”


Reed nodded. “Chicago Mobs of the Twenties? Yes, actually, I brought it with me.”


“Great. I’d love to have some reading material before we depart for our next mission.”


“And just where is that?”


“The Sigma Iotia system.”


Hoshi nodded. “Pre-warp civilization. Just be careful. Remember when Malcolm left his communicator on that one planet?”


Reed rolled his eyes. “Don’t remind me. I almost died getting it back. Whole situation was a mess.”


“But it was fun, wasn’t it?” came the voice of Jonathan Archer, placing his hands on Reed’s shoulders.


“Sir, good to see you again,” Hoshi spouted.


“Hoshi, come here,” he said, hugging her. “Travis, how’s the ship?”


“Beautiful, sir. Thank you.”


“Malcolm.”


“Good afternoon sir.”


Jonathan took a moment to take them all in, seeing how much they had changed since that first mission. He had seen Hoshi and Malcolm more often than Travis, but he had taken a few weeks leave and seeing them again now reminded him of just how much things can change.


“Has anyone seen T’Pol?” he asked.


“She said she might be coming,” Reed answered before Hoshi.


“There was a Vulcan transport in orbit,” Travis said then. “Old friends of the doctors from his days in the medical exchange program.”


Archer shrugged. “T’Pol may have been with them.”


“Here comes Phlox,” Travis stated then, the old doctor heading towards them.


“Thank you all for coming,” Phlox said with his huge smile. “I hope the journey wasn’t too much of a hassle for you.”


“Nonsense,” Reed responded.


“You’re like family,” Archer said.


“I appreciate that, Ambassador.”


Archer grinned. “Let’s stick with Jonathan.”


Phlox considered that a moment. “It will take some getting used to calling you that. How about captain?”


“Whatever works for you.”


Just then, two huge drums were struck, echoing out into the room. Phlox smiled at them and disappeared into the thickening crowd. They were slowly herded into a large chamber, which was when Hoshi spotted T’Pol. She was walking with a group of Vulcans, flanked in particular by two hooded Vulcans – one shorter than the other.

***

The ceremony last for two hours, involved movements from the vast assembled, and at one point, Phlox and his bride were both very naked. When it ended, all were invited to the Great Feast, which consisted of four long tables intersecting into one round one where the lucky couple was seated. Everyone was to start at the end of the tables and move towards the bride and groom, eating and moving at the same time.


Hoshi in particular seemed to be eating a fair amount, giving into her cravings. Archer, on the other hand, was on the look-out for T’Pol. He spotted her only twice, but couldn’t get to her because of all the people in the way. She didn’t even see him or the crew.


After two and a half hours of food and dancing, it was Reed who saw her this time. She was walking towards the exit, flanked again by the two hooded Vulcans.


“Phlox,” Archer said to the groom, pointing to the exit. Phlox saw T’Pol and used his influence as the man of the day to follow her. The rest of the old bridge crew followed.


“Stop right there,” Archer announced to the trio. T’Pol halted in her tracks, as did the two next to her.


T’Pol turned around. “Ambassador.”


“Were you really going to leave my wedding with only a brief ‘congratulations?’” Phlox asked, having been face-to-face with her for a few short seconds immediately after the ceremony.


“I have business to attend to on Vulcan,” she replied. She looked back at the one hooded Vulcan behind her. The taller one – he nodded. “But it can wait.”



2245

Archer pulled himself out of the memory and looked to Daniels, who seemed eager to hear more.


“We talked for a while,” he said then. “Caught up on old times. Then T’Pol left with her aides and that was that.”


Daniels nodded. “I guess . . . I just wanted to know that. Some of history books get things confused about that period of time.”


Archer crossed his legs. “What does history say about me?”


“Captain of the first warp five ship. Noted explorer. Hero of the Xindi Crisis. Key figure in the foundation of both the Coalition of Planets and the United Federation of Planets. Solider in the Romulan War. Starfleet Chief of Command, Earth ambassador to Andoria, Federation Council member, president of the Federation, and – currently – Admiral at Starfleet Academy.”


“Only sometimes,” Archer replied. “Only when they need me to teach some history.”


Daniels stood up. “But you’re more than that, Captain. You are the mold for some of the best captains to come. You represent what Starfleet has and will become. You’re more than just that. You’re an inspiration. And a good man.”


Archer didn’t quite know how to take that. His face flushed and he felt himself growing proud of the man in front of him.


“Thank you.”


Archer reached out and shook Daniels hand.


“No sir,” Daniels corrected him. “Thank you.”


Archer smiled broadly.


“I should be going,” Daniels said then.


“Good luck to you,” Archer said. “I might be a little short with you when you send us back, but - ”


Daniels shook his head. “Don’t worry about it, sir. You just wanted to get home.”
 
Seems pretty interesting, and if I am not mistaken, that last remark is alluding to "Storm Front, Part II"

Yep!

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Part Three: Night

The door chimes rang out again. Archer, alone for a while after Daniels left out that same door, opened it. T’Pol stood on the other side in formal Vulcan attire. Archer reached forward and hugged her. T’Pol, having never been hugged like this before from Archer, returned it by putting her hands on his back.


“How have you been, T’Pol?”


“Good. And yourself?”


“Never better.”


T’Pol nodded and followed him in. “You appear to be a little more . . . excited than normal.”


“Big day.”


“Agreed.” T’Pol looked to the window. The clouds were starting to break up, sunshine and blue sky coming through.


“Do we have time to talk?” Archer asked her.


“We do,” she answered, sitting down in the same chair Daniels had been sitting in.


“Good.” Archer sat across from her. “I’ve been feeling rather nostalgic all day. You know what that means?”


She nodded. “Yes.”


“Thought we’d talk about the good ol’ days.”


“Any specific day you wanted to talk about?”


Archer considered the question. “That last mission.”


T’Pol eyes fluttered. “After Terra Prime?”


“Yes.”


“Any reason why?”


“Because we don’t talk about it. And it was something . . .” He paused. “After the Xindi attack, we didn’t do much exploring. Because then we had the Augments, then the problems on Vulcan, the Romulans, Terra Prime, and then the Romulan War. By time we were finished with that, the crew wasn’t . . . wasn’t what it had been.” Archer paused again, rubbing his chest and coughing loudly.


“Are you all right?”


“Fine. Just old.”


T’Pol considered his lie, but knew him better than to argue. Instead, she recalled what spurned that last mission.


2155

“A wormhole? Really?”


T’Pol looked up from her scope. “It appears to be so. It’s highly unstable if it is and incredibly small.”


“Just how small?”


“Two meters, possibly smaller.”


“Where does it lead to?” Sato asked.


“Unknown.”


Archer looked the screen. “Can we see it?”


“I am attempting to pinpoint it,” she reported back, fingers at work, trying to lock on it. A few seconds later, the wormhole appeared on the screen. It was a sickly green looking thing, wavering slowly in space.


“Continue scans, Commander,” T’Pol said, walking to his chair. “Travis, keep our distance.”


“Understood sir.”


Sato looked up. “Captain, I’m getting . . . I’m getting a signal. A transmission.”


Archer blinked. “From the wormhole?”


“Yes sir.”


“Can we hear it?”


“Yes, but it’s a language I don’t understand. I’ll try to translate it first.”


“Send back greetings,” Archer ordered and sat down in his chair. “I’d like to talk to our new friends.”


“A single transmission and they’re friends?” asked Reed. “Rushing things a bit, aren’t we?”


Archer grinned. “Unless their ship is two meters or smaller, I don’t think we have to worry about them too much, Malcolm.”


An alarm rang out at that instant on Reed’s board. “In-coming vessel, sir. Klingon bird-of-prey!”


“Tactical alert!” Archer ordered. “Polarize the hull plating, arm phase cannons and photon torpedoes!”


The ship shook violently as the bird-of-prey swept towards Enterprise. Phaser beams shot out, striking the bird-of-prey, but to no avail. Sparks rained down behind Archer as yet another spray of disrupter fire came upon them.


“Return fire!”


“Phase cannons one and two are down!” Reed reported.


“They’re demanding your head, Captain,” Sato said from his station, one hand on her earpiece.


“A second Klingon bird-of-prey is in-coming,” T’Pol announced.


“Travis, get ready to retreat,” Archer commanded.


Quite suddenly, the second bird-of-prey descended upon the first. Disrupter fire shot through space, smashing in the first. Reed, taking swift advantage of this, fired as well, doing his best to coordinate with the new arrival.


Within minutes, the first bird-of-prey exploded spectacularly.


“Sir, the commander of the second Klingon vessel wants to beam aboard,” Sato stated.


“Mr. Reed, you’re with me. Have MACOs ready at the transporter platform. Just in case.”


Archer and Reed arrived shortly to the transporter pad. With a curt nod to its operator, a form materialized before them. He was a huge Klingon, tall and very muscular. And even without his ridges, Archer recognized him.


“Klaang.”


“Archer. We will have words.”


Klaang followed Archer into the situation room, where the men stood. Klaang snarled a little bit and touched his forehead. “Rumor has it you’re responsible for this.”


“Not directly. And I thought that information was classified.”


“As a former courier for the High Council, I am still privy to a great deal of information. Don’t worry. I’m sure that history will be re-written with all aliens removed from mention – as usual. The great historians are already talking about the disastrous first contact between our people.” Klaang smiled broadly.


“Is that how you view it?”


“You save my life, Archer. I just saved yours.”


“Isn’t destroying that vessel going to get you in trouble with your superiors?”


“That House was a rival of mine,” Klaang responded. “It was permitted. And it removed my blood debt to you, Captain Archer.”


“I suppose I should thank you.”


Klaang nodded and smiled. “No need. There is a price on your head, Captain. I would steer clear of my people if I were you.”


“Including you?”


Klaang was headed for the door, but paused briefly. He turned around slowly. “I have spoken in your favor, Captain. We are even. I will have no more business with you.”

***

Back on the bridge, Captain Archer rejoined his senior staff. “The bird-of-prey is veering off,” Reed reported as soon as Archer arrived. “They’ve gone to warp. What was all that about, sir?”


Archer rubbed his chin. “I suppose you could say that we have one less Klingon to fear.”


“It was kind of strange to see Klaang without his ridges.”


“Agreed.” The ship suddenly rocked. “What now?!”


T’Pol went to work as Enterprise lurched forward – towards the wormhole. “The explosion has caused some sort of reaction with the wormhole. It’s collapsing. However, it’s undergoing a massive gravimetric distortion. We’re being pulled in – meaning we will be destroyed!”


“Travis!”


“I’m trying to take us to warp, sir!”


“Trip!”


“I think I’ve got something down here, cap, but I’m not sure!” Trip called from Engineering.


“Not sure about what?!” Archer demanded, the ship vibrating as it was pulled back.


“Well, we could end being destroyed by that collapsing wormhole or we could possibly destroy ourselves!”


“I’ll take the risk with us! Do what you gotta do!”


“Right. Travis, take her to maximum warp! Really push it! Everyone else, hang tight!”


Travis complied. The ship’s rocking became more intense. A hunk of the ceiling swung down and struck two lieutenants. Phlox arrived quickly.


“TRIP!” Archer shouted, as it began obvious that they weren’t going anywhere.


“I’m giving you all she’s got, cap!”


“Travis, adjust your pitch by .2 degrees mark 4,” T’Pol ordered. “The gravity distortion is less there.”


Travis did so. The ship hit that mark and rocketed out of there. It zoomed away from the death throes of the wormhole just in time.


“Slow us down,” Archer commanded after checking in with T’Pol.


Phlox slapped his hands together. “Well, that was exciting.”


Archer grinned at him.


Sato looked up from her station. “Captain, I’ve completed the translation. The transmission cut off when we warped out and it was mostly garbled anyways.”


“What did it say?”


“Mainly, they wished to convey their apologies for not being able to communicate with us with the wormhole destabilizing so rapidly on our end. They look forward to some day being able to contact us in person.”
“Did you get their name?”


She shook her head. “No sir. But they got ours.”


Archer nodded. “Good enough, then.”


At that moment, Trip arrived on the bridge. “We’re good down in Engineering, but I wanted to make sure everyone was okay up here.”


T’Pol turned her seat. “We are.”


Trip smirked at her. “I’m glad.”


“Travis, take us back out.”


2245

T’Pol stood next to Archer as the shuttle took them up to the orbital starbase. The sphere in its center held six saucers, each one capable of holding up ten four starships. It was a light day, so there were only four in all at the starbase. And there was only one Archer and T’Pol carried about seeing.


The USS Enterprise NCC-1701.


Constitution-class starship, second of twelve such starship commissioned by Starfleet Command in service to the Federation. Maximum cruising capacity of Warp 8 with a crew of two hundred and fifty. To be commanded by Captain Robert April for a five year deep-space mission of exploration, defense, and promotion of peaceful relations.


“It’s beautiful,” Archer said as the shuttle crossed over the saucer section. “The trial runs were all finished last week. It’s ready for space.”


“We launched straight from dry-dock, if I recall,” T’Pol responded.


“Well, that’s what happens when you’re rushed into service,” he replied with a smile.



Within minutes, they arrived in the shuttle bay and were soon greeted by Robert April himself. He was a short man with dark brown hair and distinctively sharp eyebrows. He stepped towards Archer and extended his hand.


“Mr. President.”


Archer paused and looked briefly to T’Pol. He then took April’s hand. “Admiral, if you must. It’s my current rank.”


“Of course, sir. Are you ready for the tour?”


“I would be delighted, Captain.”

The complete tour lasted for about an hour. Along with Archer and T’Pol were various members of Starfleet Command who had yet to come aboard the Enterprise – as well as two or three Federation ambassadors and a Vulcan who trailed behind Archer and T’Pol with his hood up.
When they all came to Engineering, Archer made straight for warp core. “We certainly have come a long way, haven’t we?” he muttered to himself. The Vulcan who trailed him also stared out at the engine.


“It sure is something,” the Vulcan said to Archer from underneath his hood.


Archer looked over at him, smiled, and turned back to the crowd as they were slowly escorted back out of the room.


At that moment, everything went a little dizzy. Archer grabbed hold of a nearby console to support himself. April, the Vulcan, and T’Pol all leapt to his side.


“Are you okay, sir?” asked April, helping Archer steady himself.


“Just – just fine.”


“Do you want to go to sickbay? My wife is the Chief Medical Officer.”


Archer grinned slapped April on the shoulder. “I’m fine, Captain. Just this new technology has me a little excited that’s all.”


April forced a smile and walked closely with Archer out of the room.


A few minutes later, they all arrived on the bridge. As the guests wandered around the bridge, observing its latest technology and newest equipment, Archer made straight for the chair. He put his hand on the back and closed his eyes, remembering his first maiden voyage.


“What do you think, sir?”


Archer opened his eyes and looked to April.


“She’s a thing of beauty, Robert,” Archer replied.


“Thank you, sir. Any words of advice?”


Archer looked around the bridge. “Space is . . . dangerous . . .” He paused. “And amazing. You will see things you never thought you’d see. You’ll learn things you never thought you’d know. You’ll visit new worlds and encounter new civilizations. Things are going to get hard at times, but with the right crew and the right ship . . . you can boldly go.”


April bowed his head a little. “Thank you, sir.”


Archer patted his shoulders. “Godspeed, Captain.”

***

The shuttle touched down a few hours later, Archer having seen the newest flagship off. He felt extremely exhausted, but knew that the night wasn’t finished with him yet. T’Pol and the Vulcan followed him off the landing pad. As soon as they were out of sight, Archer turned to the Vulcan.


“Trip,” he said, “pull down that hood.”


The Vulcan complied, revealing a gray-haired old man with pointed ears. Charles Tucker smiled and embraced his former captain like a brother.


2168

“I have business to attend to on Vulcan,” T’Pol said. She looked back at the one hooded Vulcan behind her. The taller one – he nodded. “But it can wait.”


The taller Vulcan stepped up next to T’Pol and pulled back his hood. A sworn secret that bound them together tightened. Trip was alive and well, living on Vulcan with T’Pol after his undercover mission in Romulan space during the war.


“Hey guys.”


Archer glanced around and then looked back at Trip, T’Pol, and their son. “Let’s find a private room. Someplace we can reminisce.”


Trip smiled at his old shipmates. “Sounds good to me, boss.”


2245

Trip, T’Pol, and Archer sat outside a bistro in San Francisco, enjoying a late dinner under the stars. Archer took another sip of his wine and smiled.


“Remember when we landed on the Sphere in the Delphic Expanse to repair Shuttlepod One?”


Trip laughed. “How could I forget? The damn thing goes floatin’ off into space and we’re stuck on the Sphere trying to figure out how the hell to get it down!”


“And what do we do? Reach for our phasers!” Archer continued. “Blast the thruster just to knock it down!”


“Right! And then it rolled right at us!”


T’Pol sipped her water. “I know. I read the report.”


Trip shook his head. “The woman never changes.”


Archer grinned. “Nice to know some things don’t. It was good to see you again, Trip.”


“Same here, cap’n.”


“How about a toast?” T’Pol suggested, motioning for the server to bring her some wine.


“Well what do you think of that?” Trip asked, grinning away.


“So what are we going to toast to?” Archer questioned.


“Enterprise,” T’Pol replied.


Trip nodded in agreement. “Can’t argue with that.”


Tomorrow afternoon, Jonathan Archer would pass away in his apartment due to natural causes. He was 133 years old and would be considered among the greatest men in Starfleet history.


“To the Enterprise,” Trip said, lifting a glass.


“The Enterprise,” T’Pol continued, raising her own glass.


“Past, present, and future,” Archer finished. “Cheers.”

Fin
 
Well, you stated at the start that it was 'talky', but that's not a problem as long as you've got something interesting to say. This is a far worthier ending to ENT than TATV.
 
Excellent story. I agree this should have replaced The Travesty as the "valentine" promised to the fans as it has several nods to TOS and bridges the series together nicely. It also has a "Sleeping in Light" feel to it that I like. Very cool stuff. Thew40...are you by any chance He-man.org? Because I lurk there a lot (not able to join) and am enjoying Mythology right now. Just thought I'd mention that if you were the same on on the board.
 
Excellent story. I agree this should have replaced The Travesty as the "valentine" promised to the fans as it has several nods to TOS and bridges the series together nicely. It also has a "Sleeping in Light" feel to it that I like. Very cool stuff. Thew40...are you by any chance He-man.org? Because I lurk there a lot (not able to join) and am enjoying Mythology right now. Just thought I'd mention that if you were the same on on the board.

Yep, that's me. Glad you're enjoying "Mythology" -- and that you enjoyed this. I'm planning on posting the next part of "Mythology" soon.
 
It's good, interesting and grabs the attention well.

Something that jumped out at me in the first paragraph though is describing Archer's bones as "cracking" when he gets out of bed - that seems a bit extreme, if he bones actually cracked he wouldn't be walking to the bathroom - so I'd edit that a little! :techman:
 
It's good, interesting and grabs the attention well.

Something that jumped out at me in the first paragraph though is describing Archer's bones as "cracking" when he gets out of bed - that seems a bit extreme, if he bones actually cracked he wouldn't be walking to the bathroom - so I'd edit that a little! :techman:

:rommie: Good call.
 
It's good, interesting and grabs the attention well.

Something that jumped out at me in the first paragraph though is describing Archer's bones as "cracking" when he gets out of bed - that seems a bit extreme, if he bones actually cracked he wouldn't be walking to the bathroom - so I'd edit that a little! :techman:

:rommie: Good call.

Crackling? I dunno-my knees have been known to "Crack!" when I sit Indian-style too long and get up....
 
It's good, interesting and grabs the attention well.

Something that jumped out at me in the first paragraph though is describing Archer's bones as "cracking" when he gets out of bed - that seems a bit extreme, if he bones actually cracked he wouldn't be walking to the bathroom - so I'd edit that a little! :techman:

I agree...I am not a great fan of ENTERPRISE and thought the finale was dreadfully boring...but this did grab my attention or I would not have read it all. Sorry it took so long for me to get to this one..well done!!! I thought the writer had Archer down real good; which is important since, for me, the writing for him, on the show, wasn't always consistant.

Rob
 
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