DS9 11x02 - "Structural Integrity Compromised"
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TEASER
FADE IN:
1 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE (STOCK FROM 10x22)
Replaying from 10x22 “Ascension”. The Even Odds has been on the run, desperately trying to get through the massive Jem’Hadar-Ascendant battle safely. Prynn Tenmei is running the helm. She brings the ship to a stop.
PRYNN
These are the coordinates. Even
Odds to Defiant. We’re ready to
beam up, Commander.
DAX (comm)
Stand by, Prynn.
These are the coordinates. Even
Odds to Defiant. We’re ready to
beam up, Commander.
DAX (comm)
Stand by, Prynn.
Prynn stands and joins the others in the centre. Brad waves a bittersweet goodbye to Jake, while Facity hugs Rena. Jake holds his hand out to Dez. Dez hesitates... then takes it.
JAKE
Thank you for your help, Dez.
DEZ
Just try to leave me out of your
insane schemes in future, yeah?
JAKE
(smirk)
I’ll try.
FACITY
Stay safe, you three. And good luck.
Thank you for your help, Dez.
DEZ
Just try to leave me out of your
insane schemes in future, yeah?
JAKE
(smirk)
I’ll try.
FACITY
Stay safe, you three. And good luck.
That done, they stand ready. After a moment, Prynn, Jake and Rena dissolve in a Starfleet transporter beam.
2 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE (CONTINUOUS)
Continuing the rest of the scene... With their guests gone and business done, DEZ takes his centre seat decisively.
DEZ
Alright, let’s get gone before
anybody notices we’re still here.
FACITY
With pleasure.
Alright, let’s get gone before
anybody notices we’re still here.
FACITY
With pleasure.
FACITY, the buxom Wadi first officer, takes the helm and readies to get the ship underway. But the Cardassian medic GLESSIN interrupts before she can.
GLESSIN
Wait.
(they turn to him)
I want to stay. I want to watch.
DEZ
What?!
FACITY
Glessin...
GLESSIN
I want to watch. After what they
did to us, to the Drang, to
billions of others we’ve never
even heard of because they’ve been
doing this for aeons... I want to
stay, and watch them all die. I
want to make sure.
Wait.
(they turn to him)
I want to stay. I want to watch.
DEZ
What?!
FACITY
Glessin...
GLESSIN
I want to watch. After what they
did to us, to the Drang, to
billions of others we’ve never
even heard of because they’ve been
doing this for aeons... I want to
stay, and watch them all die. I
want to make sure.
He’s cold, hard, and not a little bit scary. Every inch a psychologically scarred Cardassian. Dez, Facity and BRAD all share awkward looks. Glessin is one of the team, they sympathise with his problems, but this is just... creepy.
Finally, Dez gives a worried sigh.
DEZ
Alright. Facity, take us to the
far edge of the Idran system, and
hold position there.
Alright. Facity, take us to the
far edge of the Idran system, and
hold position there.
Facity is not happy about this, but she accedes. She turns back to the helm and gets them underway.
Glessin watches the screen, blank and emotionless.
3 EXT. SPACE – IDRAN SYSTEM
The ongoing battle between the Jem’Hadar and the Ascendants still raging in the distance against a backdrop of the Eav’oq homeworld. In foreground, the Even Odds loops around and moves away, making sure to stay far out of reach. (The Defiant is under cloak and so not seen.)
Finally, in the shadow of a small rocky planet out on the outskirts of the system, the freighter ship comes to rest.
4 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE
Still again now, they sit and wait. Dez speaks quietly.
DEZ
Put the Anomaly coordinates on
screen, maximum magnification.
Put the Anomaly coordinates on
screen, maximum magnification.
Facity does. The image of a seemingly blank starfield appears. They all sit and watch in awkward silence.
It takes a few moments, but finally the wormhole opens – its customary beautiful blue and white flower. The ship judders slightly in response.
DEZ
What was that?
FACITY
Gravitational distortions. They’re
spreading throughout the system,
even this far out.
DEZ
(to Glessin)
Are you happy? Can we go now?
GLESSIN
Not yet.
FACITY
(points to screen)
Look...
What was that?
FACITY
Gravitational distortions. They’re
spreading throughout the system,
even this far out.
DEZ
(to Glessin)
Are you happy? Can we go now?
GLESSIN
Not yet.
FACITY
(points to screen)
Look...
They do, and the screen shows the cloud of tiny silver Ascendant ships heading towards the wormhole.
BRAD
(quiet, haunted)
Do you think they know what’s
going to happen?
DEZ
I have no idea. I hope not.
(quiet, haunted)
Do you think they know what’s
going to happen?
DEZ
I have no idea. I hope not.
Dez takes another look at Glessin. His blank face suggests he would be quite happy if they did know.
From a distance, they watch the subspace relay fire its small, innocuous beam into the mouth of the wormhole. A moment later, the wormhole REACTS – burning, erratic, surging with extra power.
The ship SHAKES again, much harder than before. Facity, Dez, Brad and Glessin are thrown off their feet or out of their seats. Panels EXPLODE all across the bridge. The gravitational forces are nearly tearing the ship apart.
5 INT. EVEN ODDS – HANGAR DECK
The same is happening here – panels everywhere EXPLODE in bursts of sparks, objects fly off shelves as the ship is tossed about. The single dropship has torn itself free of its docking moorings and HEAVES sideways into a bulkhead, CRUSHING equipment under tons of metal.
PREES, the Karemma engineer, tries in vain to avoid a machine that’s flying at her in the shaking. It HITS her hard in the shoulder, tearing off a chunk of flesh. She SCREAMS as her blood sprays out.
6 THE WA
The formless white space in the centre of the ship is going haywire, bucking harder than it ever has. It snaps back and forth like a living creature having a seizure.
7 INT. EVEN ODDS – HANGAR DECK
A hole is punched in the bulkhead as a piece of Wa BURSTS through the wall. The thick finger of white surges into the room, switching back and forth violently, bashing into equipment and knocking over anything that isn’t standing.
Pinned to the deck and bleeding, Prees watches it happen, terrified. What the hell is happening?
8 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE
The consoles along the rear bridge wall rupture as more Wa material explodes through them. Angry limbs of white punch into the air, bulging and retracting and surging out again. Panels and cables shatter and burst into sparks and flames.
Dizzied with a concussed head, Dez looks helplessly around at the chaos. His ship is being destroyed around him.
9 EXT. SPACE – EVEN ODDS
The Even Odds writhes in its death throes. Small explosions are happening all over its patchwork hull.
Then the biggest pieces of Wa material yet seen BURST out through the hull, ripping pieces of metal away, breaking massive holes into the very construction of the ship. A warp nacelle is sheared off and goes spinning into space as the shrieking Wa devastates the ship from the inside out.
Finally the Wa itself seems to just RUPTURE with the force of its anger. And in doing so, it goes grey and limp, flops back onto the outside of the ship. The Wa is dead.
The wormhole closes down, leaving its wisps of energy and a graveyard of destroyed Jem’Hadar and Ascendant ships.
And the Even Odds is lying there lifeless too.
FADE OUT:
END OF TEASER
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
10 INT. DS9 – QUARK’S BAR
QUARK is working behind his bar. The room is filled with a fair-to-middling evening crowd. At the sound of some small commotion, Quark looks across the Promenade and sees...
...Major CENN leaving the Security office in something of a hurry. He’s been summoned urgently. Quark watches him go.
Turning back to the room, Quark sees a dozen Starfleet officers, at various places around the bar, tap their combadges to receive a message. They listen, answer back MOS, then quickly knock back the last of their drinks or food.
Quark manoeuvres his enormous ears to just the right angle, and overhears some of the crowd walla...
INSERT – QUARK’S EAR
CROWD WALLA
...ordered to the Defiant...
distress call... it’s the Even
Odds... the who?... that pirate
ship from the Gamma Quadrant...
come on, we gotta go!
...ordered to the Defiant...
distress call... it’s the Even
Odds... the who?... that pirate
ship from the Gamma Quadrant...
come on, we gotta go!
BACK TO SCENE
Quark ponders this for a moment as the officers get up and leave. He looks across the room, to where the green dog-like alien PIF is sat on a seat, his wife and puppies nearby, all watching the dabo wheel with fascination.
Quark makes his decision. He walks around his bar and makes a bee-line for Pif.
DABO GIRL
Dabo!
Dabo!
The small crowd at the wheel cheers the winner, and the puppies pick up the general happy mood, YIPPING excitedly even though they don’t really know why. Quark approaches.
QUARK
Excuse me? Mister Gaber?
PIF
Hello, Ambassador. Please, call me
Pif. Everybody does!
(re dabo wheel)
Thank you for letting us watch
this. It’s a fascinating game.
QUARK
You’re welcome, but –
PIF
Perfect for teaching the little
ones all about arithmetic...
QUARK
I agree, but –
PIF
And everyone’s been so friendly,
I really enjoy –
QUARK
Pif.
(Pif stops)
I just came to tell you something
I thought might interest you. I
overheard them talking – they’ve
received a distress call from the
Even Odds.
Excuse me? Mister Gaber?
PIF
Hello, Ambassador. Please, call me
Pif. Everybody does!
(re dabo wheel)
Thank you for letting us watch
this. It’s a fascinating game.
QUARK
You’re welcome, but –
PIF
Perfect for teaching the little
ones all about arithmetic...
QUARK
I agree, but –
PIF
And everyone’s been so friendly,
I really enjoy –
QUARK
Pif.
(Pif stops)
I just came to tell you something
I thought might interest you. I
overheard them talking – they’ve
received a distress call from the
Even Odds.
Pif exchanges a horror-stricken look with his wife SETT.
PIF
What happened?
QUARK
I don’t know. But they’re sending
the Defiant to find out. And I
thought you might want to go with
them. Since that’s your old ship.
PIF
But we left them to come here.
QUARK
I know, but if they’re in trouble
I thought you might want to help.
But the Defiant’s leaving soon.
You’d have to go now.
PIF
Maybe I should go. Sett...?
SETT
It was your home for years.
QUARK
Why don’t you all go? Take the
whole family. You never know, you
might decide to stay there.
PIF
No... no I don’t think so. I’ll
go, but you and the kids stay
here, Sett, where you’re safe.
QUARK
(big fake smile)
Sure you won’t all go? Think of
the heart-warming reunions!
PIF
I'm sure. Thank you for telling
me, Quark. You’re a good man.
What happened?
QUARK
I don’t know. But they’re sending
the Defiant to find out. And I
thought you might want to go with
them. Since that’s your old ship.
PIF
But we left them to come here.
QUARK
I know, but if they’re in trouble
I thought you might want to help.
But the Defiant’s leaving soon.
You’d have to go now.
PIF
Maybe I should go. Sett...?
SETT
It was your home for years.
QUARK
Why don’t you all go? Take the
whole family. You never know, you
might decide to stay there.
PIF
No... no I don’t think so. I’ll
go, but you and the kids stay
here, Sett, where you’re safe.
QUARK
(big fake smile)
Sure you won’t all go? Think of
the heart-warming reunions!
PIF
I'm sure. Thank you for telling
me, Quark. You’re a good man.
Quark falters, a very brief moment of guilt coming through. But he brushes past it. Pif nuzzles goodbye to his wife and puppies, and quickly runs out of the bar.
As Quark turns and walks back to his counter, he mutters.
QUARK
Well, at least I managed to get
rid of one of the filthy things.
Well, at least I managed to get
rid of one of the filthy things.
11 INT. DS9 – DOCKING RING CORRIDOR
Several officers are filing through the airlock, ready for the Defiant’s departure. RO LAREN is one of the last to enter. Pif comes running down the corridor at top speed.
PIF
Commander Ro! I want to join you!
RO
Pif... how do you even know where
we’re going?
PIF
Quark told me all about it.
RO
Did he, indeed? How magnanimous of
him. Are you sure you want to come,
Pif? We don’t know what we’re gonna find.
PIF
I know. But... I left without a
proper goodbye. I owe them that.
RO
Well, okay. But I need you to do
what I say. If I tell you to run,
you run.
PIF
That’s what I'm best at!
Commander Ro! I want to join you!
RO
Pif... how do you even know where
we’re going?
PIF
Quark told me all about it.
RO
Did he, indeed? How magnanimous of
him. Are you sure you want to come,
Pif? We don’t know what we’re gonna find.
PIF
I know. But... I left without a
proper goodbye. I owe them that.
RO
Well, okay. But I need you to do
what I say. If I tell you to run,
you run.
PIF
That’s what I'm best at!
Pif trots happily on past Ro and into the ship. She watches him go, a touch bemused by the cheerful alien.
12 INT. DEFIANT – MAIN BRIDGE
The bridge is busy with activity. BOWERS is there as de facto first officer. NOG is at the Engineering console. Doctor BASHIR is at sciences, and Ensign ALECO is at the helm. Other stations filled by EXTRAS as needed.
The door opens and Ro enters. This is all very new to Ro, and she’s quite excited by it. Bowers stands instantly.
BOWERS
Captain on the bridge.
(approaches Ro)
All stations report ready, Commander.
On your order.
RO
Thank you, Lieutenant.
Captain on the bridge.
(approaches Ro)
All stations report ready, Commander.
On your order.
RO
Thank you, Lieutenant.
She sits in the captain’s chair, and shifts about a bit, pulling a face.
RO
Not the most comfortable chair
I’ve ever sat in.
BOWERS
You’ll get used to it, sir.
RO
Alright then! Lieutenant Tenmei –
Not the most comfortable chair
I’ve ever sat in.
BOWERS
You’ll get used to it, sir.
RO
Alright then! Lieutenant Tenmei –
The helmsman turns around, and Ro sees that it’s not Tenmei, it’s Aleco. Awkward moment. Ro curses herself.
RO
My apologies, Ensign Aleco. Please
release docking clamps and request
clearance to leave the station.
ALECO
Aye, Commander.
(works panels)
Docking clamps released, station
signals clear to depart.
BOWERS
Thrusters one quarter until we
clear all moorings, then set
course for the wormhole.
ALECO
Aye, sir.
My apologies, Ensign Aleco. Please
release docking clamps and request
clearance to leave the station.
ALECO
Aye, Commander.
(works panels)
Docking clamps released, station
signals clear to depart.
BOWERS
Thrusters one quarter until we
clear all moorings, then set
course for the wormhole.
ALECO
Aye, sir.
The ship begins to move, and Ro grins with excitement. It’s the first time she’s been in command of her own ship.
13 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE (STOCK)
In a standard stock shot, the Defiant pulls away from the station, turns slowly and heads out. The wormhole blooms open, and the Defiant dives inside.
14 EXT. MYLEA VILLAGE - ESTABLISHING
The small fishing village is in bright sun with light fog.
15 INT. MARJA’S BAKERY
It’s early morning here, and the bakery isn’t open yet. But JAKE SISKO is working behind the counter already, preparing rolls and cakes and loaves to go into the ovens behind him.
There’s the sound of feet clomping down wooden stairs, and then RENA enters from the back door. She sees what Jake is doing, and whistles appreciatively.
RENA
You’ve been busy. Marja should
leave you in charge more often.
JAKE
(laughing)
Hold on. I'm just helping out. I
never said I was taking over the
business permanently.
RENA
Imagine eating bread baked by
the son of the Emissary himself.
There’ll be lines out the door.
You’ve been busy. Marja should
leave you in charge more often.
JAKE
(laughing)
Hold on. I'm just helping out. I
never said I was taking over the
business permanently.
RENA
Imagine eating bread baked by
the son of the Emissary himself.
There’ll be lines out the door.
Jake groans, but he knows she’s only kidding him. She goes to him and they kiss warmly. Then there’s a jingling BELL. They react with surprise.
JAKE
Wow. You weren’t kidding. Shop
doesn’t even open for an hour.
Wow. You weren’t kidding. Shop
doesn’t even open for an hour.
Rena goes to the window and pulls back the curtain to see who is there. When she sees, she’s thrown, unsure how to react. She shares an uncomfortable look with Jake, then goes to open the door.
There stands PRYNN, looking nervous, hopeful and scared.
RENA
Prynn...? What are you doing here?
Are you okay?
PRYNN
Hi, Rena. Umm... no, not really.
Can I come in? I’d like to talk to
you both, if that’s alright.
RENA
Of course, come on in.
Prynn...? What are you doing here?
Are you okay?
PRYNN
Hi, Rena. Umm... no, not really.
Can I come in? I’d like to talk to
you both, if that’s alright.
RENA
Of course, come on in.
Prynn enters, and Rena closes the door behind her. At a silent signal from Rena, Jake gets some small rolls and glasses of water for the three of them. They settle into seats around a small table at one end of the shop.
JAKE
What can we do for you?
PRYNN
Well, this might be awkward. But
I was hoping you could talk me
through everything that happened,
you know... when you lost your
father in the wormhole.
JAKE
...Oh. Um, well...
PRYNN
I’ve read all the reports I'm
allowed access to, and some I’m
not. But I need to talk to
somebody who knows, I guess.
What can we do for you?
PRYNN
Well, this might be awkward. But
I was hoping you could talk me
through everything that happened,
you know... when you lost your
father in the wormhole.
JAKE
...Oh. Um, well...
PRYNN
I’ve read all the reports I'm
allowed access to, and some I’m
not. But I need to talk to
somebody who knows, I guess.
You got your father back when it
happened to him. I see no reason
why I can’t do the same. I just
don’t know how... yet.
JAKE
(hesitant)
Prynn, I’ll help you any way I
can. But... I'm not the one you
need to talk to. I think you’d be
better off talking to my dad. He’s
the one who actually remembers
what happened. I only know what
he told me. And what I already
told you.
PRYNN
To be honest, I thought you’d
probably say that. And I do want
to talk to him. But I don’t feel
right just turning up at his
house. He doesn’t know me.
happened to him. I see no reason
why I can’t do the same. I just
don’t know how... yet.
JAKE
(hesitant)
Prynn, I’ll help you any way I
can. But... I'm not the one you
need to talk to. I think you’d be
better off talking to my dad. He’s
the one who actually remembers
what happened. I only know what
he told me. And what I already
told you.
PRYNN
To be honest, I thought you’d
probably say that. And I do want
to talk to him. But I don’t feel
right just turning up at his
house. He doesn’t know me.
Will you take me to see him?
JAKE
I’d be happy to. But the bakery –
RENA
It’s fine. Go.
(re ovens)
You made enough here to get me
through the morning rush. I can
always call Halar and Parsh for
help if I get busy.
JAKE
If you’re sure...
PRYNN
Thank you. Both of you. Really.
JAKE
Have you got a ship?
PRYNN
I left the Brahmaputra in orbit.
JAKE
Well, alright then. We may as well
go right now. Dad should be awake
– he’s an early riser.
JAKE
I’d be happy to. But the bakery –
RENA
It’s fine. Go.
(re ovens)
You made enough here to get me
through the morning rush. I can
always call Halar and Parsh for
help if I get busy.
JAKE
If you’re sure...
PRYNN
Thank you. Both of you. Really.
JAKE
Have you got a ship?
PRYNN
I left the Brahmaputra in orbit.
JAKE
Well, alright then. We may as well
go right now. Dad should be awake
– he’s an early riser.
With another nod of thanks to Rena, Prynn gets up to leave. Jake gives Rena a quick kiss then follows Prynn out.
Once the door closes, Rena goes to the window and pulls back the curtain again. She looks out at Jake and Prynn just as they disappear in a transporter beam. She sighs with sadness. She lost her parents too.
RENA
Good luck.
Good luck.
16 EXT. SPACE – THE WORMHOLE (STOCK)
The Gamma end of the wormhole opens and the Defiant zooms out. Stay tight on it for the moment...
17 INT. DEFIANT – MAIN BRIDGE
Ro is working the panels by her chair, not paying attention to the viewscreen.
RO
Okay! Nog, you start scanning
for that distress signal, track
down the source. Bowers, you –
ALECO
Commander!
Okay! Nog, you start scanning
for that distress signal, track
down the source. Bowers, you –
ALECO
Commander!
She looks up at his alarmed tone. Everyone else is looking in horror at the main viewscreen.
VIEWSCREEN
With the Eav’oq homeworld in the distance, the foreground is filled with a massive graveyard of destroyed ships.
BACK TO SCENE
BASHIR
Oh my god...
Oh my god...
As they all gawp in dismay...
18 EXT. SPACE – THE BATTLEFIELD
The Defiant sits on the edge of the battlefield, where the smashed, ruined, obliterated corpses of both Jem’Hadar and Ascendant vessels are littered as far as the eye can see.
FADE OUT:
END OF ACT ONE
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ACT TWO
FADE IN:
19 EXT. SPACE – THE BATTLEFIELD
Where we left it, with the Defiant having just arrived in a mass of destroyed ships.
20 INT. DEFIANT – MAIN BRIDGE
The crew still stare at the screen. Quiet, haunted.
RO
Open a channel.
BOWERS
To who?
RO
Anybody.
Open a channel.
BOWERS
To who?
RO
Anybody.
Bowers works his panels, then nods to Ro.
RO
This is Commander Ro Laren of the
Federation starship Defiant, to
anyone in the Dominion fleet. Is
there anybody there? Can anyone
hear me? Do you need help?
This is Commander Ro Laren of the
Federation starship Defiant, to
anyone in the Dominion fleet. Is
there anybody there? Can anyone
hear me? Do you need help?
They wait for a response. Is there anyone even alive out there? After a long wait, a crackling signal comes through.
TARAN’ATAR (comm)
Commander Ro. Will any of our
numerous farewells ever last?
RO
(amazed, happy)
Taran’atar? Is that you?
TARAN’ATAR (comm)
Indeed, Commander. I am sending
you coordinates through the comm
channel. Please follow them.
Commander Ro. Will any of our
numerous farewells ever last?
RO
(amazed, happy)
Taran’atar? Is that you?
TARAN’ATAR (comm)
Indeed, Commander. I am sending
you coordinates through the comm
channel. Please follow them.
Ro looks to Bowers – he nods again. He’s received the data.
RO
We’ll be right there. Defiant out.
BOWERS
Sir? We don’t know why Taran’atar
is here. Do we trust him?
RO
(firm)
I do. Ensign Aleco, follow those
coordinates. Lieutenant Nog, keep
scanning for the Even Odds. They
can’t be too far away. Engage.
We’ll be right there. Defiant out.
BOWERS
Sir? We don’t know why Taran’atar
is here. Do we trust him?
RO
(firm)
I do. Ensign Aleco, follow those
coordinates. Lieutenant Nog, keep
scanning for the Even Odds. They
can’t be too far away. Engage.
Ro happily gets back into the command chair. She’s looking forward to seeing Taran’atar again. The crew get to work...
21 EXT. SPACE – THE BATTLEFIELD
The Defiant slowly and steadily pulls away, skirting the battle field and heading out of the system.
22 INT. DEFIANT – MAIN BRIDGE
Nog reacts to his panels...
NOG
Commander, I have the location of
the Even Odds...
RO
Umm, yeah. So do we.
Commander, I have the location of
the Even Odds...
RO
Umm, yeah. So do we.
Confused, Nog looks up and sees the viewscreen. It shows the image of the Even Odds in the shadow of the moon where we last saw it, with a Jem’Hadar ship docked alongside.
NOG
Oh. Well, I guess that saves us
some time.
RO
Life signs?
BASHIR
(off panels)
Several Jem’Hadar on their own
ship, and several more on the Even
Odds. Life signs for the Even crew
are... indistinct.
RO
Can we transport over?
NOG
Aye, sir.
RO
Alright. Bowers, you have the
bridge. Nog, Bashir, get your
crews loaded up and meet me
in the transporter room.
BOWERS
(stands, confronting)
Commander, as your first officer
it’s my place to lead away teams.
RO
Yes, but I have a much closer
relationship with Taran’atar than
you do. He won’t hurt me.
BOWERS
Maybe he won’t. But what about the
others? I suggest you go in armed,
just in case.
RO
(chuckle)
Don’t worry. I was planning to.
Oh. Well, I guess that saves us
some time.
RO
Life signs?
BASHIR
(off panels)
Several Jem’Hadar on their own
ship, and several more on the Even
Odds. Life signs for the Even crew
are... indistinct.
RO
Can we transport over?
NOG
Aye, sir.
RO
Alright. Bowers, you have the
bridge. Nog, Bashir, get your
crews loaded up and meet me
in the transporter room.
BOWERS
(stands, confronting)
Commander, as your first officer
it’s my place to lead away teams.
RO
Yes, but I have a much closer
relationship with Taran’atar than
you do. He won’t hurt me.
BOWERS
Maybe he won’t. But what about the
others? I suggest you go in armed,
just in case.
RO
(chuckle)
Don’t worry. I was planning to.
Ro, Nog and Bashir exit the bridge, and Bowers takes the command seat.
24 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE
The bridge is basically obliterated. A total wreck, it seems no equipment has survived unscathed. But there are no bodies to be seen anywhere.
Into this, Starfleet transporter beams deposit Ro, Bashir, Nog, nurse RICHTER, engineer CANDLEWOOD and security SEVAK. Once settled, they look around the broken room in dismay.
There’s a GRINDING noise, and they see two green and scaly hands forcing the doors to the turbolifts open from the inside. With a heave, the doors give way, and TARAN’ATAR stands there. He steps out into the bridge.
TARAN’ATAR
Commander Ro. Congratulations on
your promotion.
RO
(grin)
Taran’atar, it’s good to see you.
Commander Ro. Congratulations on
your promotion.
RO
(grin)
Taran’atar, it’s good to see you.
She would almost hug him in welcome, but he wouldn’t like that. After all they’ve been through, they respect each other as soldiers, as close to friends as a Jem’Hadar gets.
Then out from behind Taran’atar steps a smaller figure – the teenage Founder MEERA.
NOG
Meera!
MEERA
Hello, Nog. You look well.
RO
Taran’atar, what’s going on here?
What happened to the Even Odds?
And where are the crew?
TARAN’ATAR
The crew are in the ship’s medical bay.
Doctor Bashir, I believe your expertise
would be welcomed.
BASHIR
Then let’s get moving.
Meera!
MEERA
Hello, Nog. You look well.
RO
Taran’atar, what’s going on here?
What happened to the Even Odds?
And where are the crew?
TARAN’ATAR
The crew are in the ship’s medical bay.
Doctor Bashir, I believe your expertise
would be welcomed.
BASHIR
Then let’s get moving.
At Bashir’s suggestion, Taran’atar leads the group all back into the turbolift. It’s a bit of a tight fit.
25 EXT. SPACE
The Even Odds, the Defiant, and the Jem’Hadar ship sit together in the shadow of the moon.
26 INT. EVEN ODDS – CORRIDOR
The group walks along the corridor, which is just as ruined as the bridge. Panels blown off, wires sparking, deckplates warped, lights flickering. Ro and Taran’atar lead the way.
TARAN’ATAR
When I left Deep Space Nine and
returned to the Gamma Quadrant,
the remains of this fleet were the
first thing I encountered.
RO
(regretful)
After what happened to Commander
Vaughn, I guess we just didn’t
even think about what state the
Jem’Hadar were left in. Never even
occurred to me to ask.
TARAN’ATAR
Our losses were substantial. We
have attempted to make repairs,
but Jem’Hadar technical knowledge
is somewhat limited.
RO
But how did the Even Odds get
involved? According to Dax’s
reports they were free and clear.
MEERA
It was the Wa.
NOG
Of course! This ship is based on
Ascendant tech. The wormhole
inversion overloaded all their
ships and made them destroy
themselves. If the Even Odds
wasn’t far enough away, the same
thing could have happened to them.
When I left Deep Space Nine and
returned to the Gamma Quadrant,
the remains of this fleet were the
first thing I encountered.
RO
(regretful)
After what happened to Commander
Vaughn, I guess we just didn’t
even think about what state the
Jem’Hadar were left in. Never even
occurred to me to ask.
TARAN’ATAR
Our losses were substantial. We
have attempted to make repairs,
but Jem’Hadar technical knowledge
is somewhat limited.
RO
But how did the Even Odds get
involved? According to Dax’s
reports they were free and clear.
MEERA
It was the Wa.
NOG
Of course! This ship is based on
Ascendant tech. The wormhole
inversion overloaded all their
ships and made them destroy
themselves. If the Even Odds
wasn’t far enough away, the same
thing could have happened to them.
27 INT. EVEN ODDS – MEDICAL BAY
The door opens with a shudder and a whine, and the group enters to find a room just as ruined as the rest of the ship. Several bodies lie on biobeds or makeshift cots.
TARAN’ATAR
We have also attempted to make
repairs to the crew. But Jem’Hadar
are no more doctors than they
are engineers.
We have also attempted to make
repairs to the crew. But Jem’Hadar
are no more doctors than they
are engineers.
Bashir and Richter both rush forwards, pulling instruments from their shoulder bags, getting straight to work.
BASHIR
These people need to be on the
Defiant. I can’t help them here.
RO
Do whatever you need to, Doctor.
Nog, you get to work on repairs.
NOG
Sir - remember, the Defiant isn’t
completely fixed herself.
MEERA
The Jem’Hadar will provide
whatever you need.
RO
Thank you... Meera, is it?
(she nods)
Okay. Get to work, everyone.
These people need to be on the
Defiant. I can’t help them here.
RO
Do whatever you need to, Doctor.
Nog, you get to work on repairs.
NOG
Sir - remember, the Defiant isn’t
completely fixed herself.
MEERA
The Jem’Hadar will provide
whatever you need.
RO
Thank you... Meera, is it?
(she nods)
Okay. Get to work, everyone.
There’s a groaning from one of Bashir’s patients – Brad, the Dosi bodyguard/ jeweller. She’s coming around.
BASHIR
Just relax. We’re going to help.
BRAD
(half-conscious)
Jake? Is that you?
Just relax. We’re going to help.
BRAD
(half-conscious)
Jake? Is that you?
Off their wary, confused looks...
28 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE
Morning in the Kendra Valley. Outside the Sisko family’s pastoral cottage, Jake and Prynn beam into position.
Jake hesitates to approach. As Prynn looks at him, she sees that he looks as apprehensive about this as she does. She wonders – what’s the problem? Is he going to go in?
He settles and advances to the house. Prynn follows. At the door, Jake knocks. A moment, and the door opens to reveal KASIDY. Her face breaks open in a wide smile to see him.
KASIDY
Jake! What a wonderful surprise!
Come in, come in.
Jake! What a wonderful surprise!
Come in, come in.
Jake enters, Prynn follows, leading us into:
29 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE – LIVING ROOM
Jake gives Kasidy a peck on the cheek in welcome.
JAKE
Hi, Kas. You remember Lieutenant
Tenmei, from the Defiant?
KASIDY
Sure! Elias’s daughter, right?
PRYNN
That’s right, ma’am. Thank you for
seeing me. You have a lovely home.
KASIDY
Call me ma’am again and I’ll throw
you out of it. It’s Kasidy. Now, come
on in! What can we do for you?
JAKE
Actually, we were hoping to talk
to dad. Is he around?
Hi, Kas. You remember Lieutenant
Tenmei, from the Defiant?
KASIDY
Sure! Elias’s daughter, right?
PRYNN
That’s right, ma’am. Thank you for
seeing me. You have a lovely home.
KASIDY
Call me ma’am again and I’ll throw
you out of it. It’s Kasidy. Now, come
on in! What can we do for you?
JAKE
Actually, we were hoping to talk
to dad. Is he around?
Kasidy’s formerly warm demeanour cools just the tiniest bit, but enough for Prynn to notice.
KASIDY
Uh... yeah, sure. He’s out back.
I’ll take you through.
Uh... yeah, sure. He’s out back.
I’ll take you through.
She leads Jake and Prynn through the living room, through the kitchen, and to the back door, which opens onto...
30 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE – VERANDA
BEN SISKO sits on the bench on the veranda, REBECCA beside him. Doing nothing in particular, just looking sombrely out onto the countryside and spending time with his daughter.
When Kasidy emerges, he looks up hopefully. But she doesn’t look directly at him. Only nearly at him, just enough to acknowledge him without really making contact.
KASIDY
Ben... you have visitors.
Ben... you have visitors.
Ben smiles to see Jake... but then as Prynn appears, his jaw drops. He’s almost in tears at the sight of her...
SISKO
Prynn... oh Prynn...
PRYNN
(acknowledging)
Captain.
KASIDY
Rebecca, honey? Come on back
inside. Leave daddy to talk.
REBECCA
Okay!
Prynn... oh Prynn...
PRYNN
(acknowledging)
Captain.
KASIDY
Rebecca, honey? Come on back
inside. Leave daddy to talk.
REBECCA
Okay!
Rebecca jumps off the bench and toddles after Kasidy back into the house. Kasidy lets the door swing closed. Jake and Prynn take tentative seats next to or opposite Ben. Sisko can barely put his need to explain and apologise into words for Prynn.
SISKO
Prynn, I'm so sorry... your father...
he was...
JAKE
That’s why we’re here, dad. Prynn
wanted to know everything you can
tell her about what happened to
you seven years ago.
PRYNN
And most importantly, about how
you got out.
SISKO
I only got out because of Jake,
because he was with me at the time
of the accident. Because of our
connection.
PRYNN
(indignant)
Well, don’t I have a connection
with my father? There’s got to be
a way!
SISKO
There isn’t, Prynn. I'm sorry.
PRYNN
How can you be so sure?
SISKO
Because it was supposed to be me.
And I knew... that I was never going
to be allowed to come back.
Prynn, I'm so sorry... your father...
he was...
JAKE
That’s why we’re here, dad. Prynn
wanted to know everything you can
tell her about what happened to
you seven years ago.
PRYNN
And most importantly, about how
you got out.
SISKO
I only got out because of Jake,
because he was with me at the time
of the accident. Because of our
connection.
PRYNN
(indignant)
Well, don’t I have a connection
with my father? There’s got to be
a way!
SISKO
There isn’t, Prynn. I'm sorry.
PRYNN
How can you be so sure?
SISKO
Because it was supposed to be me.
And I knew... that I was never going
to be allowed to come back.
31 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE – KITCHEN
Ending on Kasidy, who had been listening just on the other side of the kitchen door, and heard what Ben just said...
FADE OUT:
END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
32 EXT. SPACE
The Even Odds, the Defiant, and the Jem’Hadar ship sit together in the shadow of the moon.
33 INT. EVEN ODDS – HANGAR DECK
The place is trashed. The dropship is in pieces on the deck. Two JEM’HADAR work on pieces of it, welding or wrenching or fixing, but they’re not really sure what they’re doing. Nog is hard at work, and Meera is helping.
NOG
I can see why Jem’Hadar would be
no good at fixing stuff. They’re
more used to destroying it. But
surely the Dominion has engineers.
MEERA
Jem’Hadar know enough to perform
small field repairs. But most of our
construction and maintenance is
done by the Overne.
NOG
So why haven’t you called them?
MEERA
I did. They haven’t arrived yet.
I can see why Jem’Hadar would be
no good at fixing stuff. They’re
more used to destroying it. But
surely the Dominion has engineers.
MEERA
Jem’Hadar know enough to perform
small field repairs. But most of our
construction and maintenance is
done by the Overne.
NOG
So why haven’t you called them?
MEERA
I did. They haven’t arrived yet.
Nog suddenly sees one of the Jem’Hadar – Second ILAT’EKAL – about to do something wrong. He shouts out...
NOG
Hey hey hey hey! That doesn’t go
there. You need to attach it to
the sub-molecular gyro first. The
green thing, right there. I'm
pointing at it.
Hey hey hey hey! That doesn’t go
there. You need to attach it to
the sub-molecular gyro first. The
green thing, right there. I'm
pointing at it.
The Jem’Hadar sneers at being told what to do by a tiny Ferengi, but he does as he’s told. For now.
Nog connects one large piece back into another large piece, and stands back to inspect his work. He’s not thrilled.
NOG
I can’t do any more with what I’ve
got. This needs a whole new EPS
conduit, and my replicators just
aren’t up to that yet.
MEERA
Do you have the pattern?
I can’t do any more with what I’ve
got. This needs a whole new EPS
conduit, and my replicators just
aren’t up to that yet.
MEERA
Do you have the pattern?
Nog nods, and calls up the pattern on a padd. He hands it to Meera, who inspects it, then hands it on to Ilat’ekal.
MEERA
Second Ilat’ekal. Take this back
to the ship and have whatever Nog
needs replicated at once.
ILAT’EKAL
(grits teeth, unhappy)
At once, Founder.
(passes it off)
Third. Do as the Founder says.
Second Ilat’ekal. Take this back
to the ship and have whatever Nog
needs replicated at once.
ILAT’EKAL
(grits teeth, unhappy)
At once, Founder.
(passes it off)
Third. Do as the Founder says.
The Third takes the padd and leaves the room with it. The Second turns back to Nog with a sneer of insincerity.
ILAT’EKAL
How else may I be of service?
How else may I be of service?
Nog is not stupid; he knows the Jem’Hadar doesn’t like him. But he feels safe enough with a Founder by his side.
NOG
You can clear the debris from in
front of that access panel over
there. But gently. Some might be
still be salvageable.
ILAT’EKAL
Of course. I am only too happy
to perform manual labour for a
Federationer Ferengi.
You can clear the debris from in
front of that access panel over
there. But gently. Some might be
still be salvageable.
ILAT’EKAL
Of course. I am only too happy
to perform manual labour for a
Federationer Ferengi.
The Jem’Hadar turns away to do as he’s told again. Once he’s out of earshot, Nog mutters sotto to Meera...
NOG
What was it you said? You didn’t
want to have anything to do with
the Dominion again?
MEERA
With the other Founders, perhaps.
But the Vorta and the Jem’Hadar...
Odo may have been right about them.
With the other Founders all gone,
they need a firmer hand than ever.
NOG
(small smile)
You’re definitely not like the other
Founders, are you?
MEERA
I don’t hate or fear the solids
like they do. I’ve often found
solids to be more trustworthy than
my own people, in fact.
NOG
I wonder if that’s because you
look so young?
MEERA
What do you mean?
NOG
Well, the changelings created the
Dominion to protect themselves,
because solids like me hated them.
But I don’t hate you. So... you
don’t hate me back. And I wonder
if it’s because you look like a
teenager. People see young, they
see innocent. Not anything to be
feared or killed. They accept you.
And that’s why you feel like you
can accept them back.
MEERA
I hadn’t really thought about it.
Maybe you’re right.
What was it you said? You didn’t
want to have anything to do with
the Dominion again?
MEERA
With the other Founders, perhaps.
But the Vorta and the Jem’Hadar...
Odo may have been right about them.
With the other Founders all gone,
they need a firmer hand than ever.
NOG
(small smile)
You’re definitely not like the other
Founders, are you?
MEERA
I don’t hate or fear the solids
like they do. I’ve often found
solids to be more trustworthy than
my own people, in fact.
NOG
I wonder if that’s because you
look so young?
MEERA
What do you mean?
NOG
Well, the changelings created the
Dominion to protect themselves,
because solids like me hated them.
But I don’t hate you. So... you
don’t hate me back. And I wonder
if it’s because you look like a
teenager. People see young, they
see innocent. Not anything to be
feared or killed. They accept you.
And that’s why you feel like you
can accept them back.
MEERA
I hadn’t really thought about it.
Maybe you’re right.
They are interrupted by a ROAR and a CRASH – Ikat’ekal has thrown a piece of the debris he was clearing across the room in frustration.
IKAT’EKAL
This is ridiculous! I am Jem’Hadar.
I should be fighting the enemies
of the Dominion, not lifting and
carrying for them.
NOG
(feeling bold)
Hey! I told you to be careful.
IKAT’EKAL
(advancing)
That fleet out there is in the
condition that it is because of
you. Starfleet. The ones we killed
for two years. And now we fight
your battles and mend your ships
and carry your junk. An alliance?
Ha! You should be serving the
Founders at their feet, not talking
as if you are their equals.
This is ridiculous! I am Jem’Hadar.
I should be fighting the enemies
of the Dominion, not lifting and
carrying for them.
NOG
(feeling bold)
Hey! I told you to be careful.
IKAT’EKAL
(advancing)
That fleet out there is in the
condition that it is because of
you. Starfleet. The ones we killed
for two years. And now we fight
your battles and mend your ships
and carry your junk. An alliance?
Ha! You should be serving the
Founders at their feet, not talking
as if you are their equals.
Ilat’ekal looms threateningly over Nog. Nog tries his best to hold his ground. Then Meera steps between them.
MEERA
(firm, angry)
Second Ilat’ekal. You will do as I
say, and that includes doing what
Nog says. He and all the Starfleet
people are here at my invitation,
is that clear?
(firm, angry)
Second Ilat’ekal. You will do as I
say, and that includes doing what
Nog says. He and all the Starfleet
people are here at my invitation,
is that clear?
It takes effort, but Ilat’ekal gets himself under control.
ILAT’EKAL
Of course, Founder.
MEERA
Go and find somewhere else to make
yourself useful, Second. While you can.
Of course, Founder.
MEERA
Go and find somewhere else to make
yourself useful, Second. While you can.
The implied threat has the desired effect. With a bow of the head, Ilat’ekal turns and leaves the room.
Nog leans against the dropship, breathing deeply, trying to calm his pounding heart and screaming nerves. He scratches at his false leg – his old nervous tic from the war. Meera lays a soothing hand on his shoulder. He is grateful.
NOG
Maybe you don’t hate us anymore.
But they sure do.
Maybe you don’t hate us anymore.
But they sure do.
34 EXT. BAJOR - ESTABLISHING
Back to the central monastery in Ashalla, Bajor’s capital.
35 INT. ASHALLA MONASTERY – REFECTORY
The room where the monks, prylars, ranjens and novices eat, at rows of simple wooden benches.
KIRA sits by herself, alone with her thoughts as she scoffs down some basic and unexciting food. There’s the general background hum of other diners chattering among themselves, the clatter of plates and cutlery. All perfectly normal.
All of a sudden, the sounds die out. Noticing the change, Kira looks up, and sees all the Bajorans looking in shock to the doorway, where RAIQ stands. They don’t know how to react to her, nor she to them. They’re all heretics to her.
RAIQ
I want to speak to Kira.
I want to speak to Kira.
All the Bajorans turn to look at Kira. She gulps nervously.
KIRA
That’s fine. Come in, Raiq.
Sit with me.
That’s fine. Come in, Raiq.
Sit with me.
Raiq does, keeping a wary eye on the Bajorans as she goes.
KIRA
It’s good to see you out of your
room. Are you hungry?
It’s good to see you out of your
room. Are you hungry?
Raiq looks down at the food on Kira’s plate, as if not quite sure what’s she’s looking at. Kira keeps eating.
KIRA
I just haven’t seen you eat
anything since you got here.
RAIQ
It is not necessary. The vessel
provides everything we need.
KIRA
Even your food?
RAIQ
(are you stupid?)
It is not necessary.
KIRA
(getting it)
Food is not necessary... Wow. I
never knew a humanoid race that
didn’t need food before.
RAIQ
The vessel is part of us. We are
bonded to it almost from birth.
It supports us, and we support it.
It is a gift from the True.
KIRA
But... your ship is gone. Iliana
took it. It was destroyed. So what
are you gonna do?
I just haven’t seen you eat
anything since you got here.
RAIQ
It is not necessary. The vessel
provides everything we need.
KIRA
Even your food?
RAIQ
(are you stupid?)
It is not necessary.
KIRA
(getting it)
Food is not necessary... Wow. I
never knew a humanoid race that
didn’t need food before.
RAIQ
The vessel is part of us. We are
bonded to it almost from birth.
It supports us, and we support it.
It is a gift from the True.
KIRA
But... your ship is gone. Iliana
took it. It was destroyed. So what
are you gonna do?
Uncertainly, Raiq reaches out and picks up a piece of food. She warily brings it to her mouth, sniffs it first, then takes the tiniest bite. She’s not entirely sure what to do next, so she improvises, and gets it mostly right.
She looks up, and finds that all the other Bajorans are watching her, curious. They instantly look away again.
KIRA
So... what did you want to talk
to me about?
RAIQ
I want to leave.
KIRA
Where would you go?
RAIQ
Away from you. Away from this
world full of heretics.
So... what did you want to talk
to me about?
RAIQ
I want to leave.
KIRA
Where would you go?
RAIQ
Away from you. Away from this
world full of heretics.
Kira sighs, disappointed. For a moment there, she thought they were getting somewhere.
KIRA
Without your ship, you have no way
of going anywhere. Besides...
these people aren’t so bad. If
you give them a chance.
RAIQ
They shame the True with their
very existence.
KIRA
No they don’t. They just believe
something different. Not wrong.
Just... different.
RAIQ
No-one may worship the True
but the Ascendants.
KIRA
And what about if there aren’t any
Ascendants? What if there’s just
you? Are you saying that you
alone, in all the universe,
worship the “right” way? That
everyone else but you is just
wrong and deserves to die?
Without your ship, you have no way
of going anywhere. Besides...
these people aren’t so bad. If
you give them a chance.
RAIQ
They shame the True with their
very existence.
KIRA
No they don’t. They just believe
something different. Not wrong.
Just... different.
RAIQ
No-one may worship the True
but the Ascendants.
KIRA
And what about if there aren’t any
Ascendants? What if there’s just
you? Are you saying that you
alone, in all the universe,
worship the “right” way? That
everyone else but you is just
wrong and deserves to die?
The harshness of that gives Raiq pause... but not for long.
RAIQ
Yes.
KIRA
That sounds like a very lonely
life, Raiq. Hating everyone else
in the entire galaxy, just on
principle. It’s no way to live.
Yes.
KIRA
That sounds like a very lonely
life, Raiq. Hating everyone else
in the entire galaxy, just on
principle. It’s no way to live.
Kira gestures around at the other Bajorans in the room, who are trying not to look like they can hear every word.
KIRA
I don’t believe the same as all
these people about every little
thing. But that doesn’t make me
right and them wrong. Actually,
I think it’s a nice chance for us
to learn from one another. Maybe
they’ve figured something out that
never occurred to me. Something
that might help explain...
(little wibble)
...explain why the Prophets let
some things happen. I don’t have
to agree with everything they say,
but it can’t hurt to listen.
RAIQ
Pretty words. But doctrine is very
clear. Ancient and unchangeable.
KIRA
We used to think so too. Having
one single religion held us all
together against our enemies.
But those enemies aren’t there
anymore. So now we’re free to
believe whatever we want. In fact,
the spiritual leader of our entire
race follows a different faith
from mine.
RAIQ
(appalled)
How can you allow such sacrilege?
KIRA
(laugh)
Because it’s not sacrilege! It’s
just a different way of looking at
things. Believe me, it took a
while before I was comfortable
with it, too. But that was my
problem, not his.
RAIQ
It is intolerable. I cannot fathom
spending time with heretics and
listening to their false words.
KIRA
You’re spending time with me,
aren’t you?
(off Raiq’s look)
You came looking for me, to talk
to me, on your own. Nobody forced
you to do that. So you can fathom
it, after all. And that’s okay.
You’re alone here, I get that.
RAIQ
Ascendants are always alone.
KIRA
But you always knew the others
were out there. Now they’re not.
(warmly)
But we still are. We might be all
you have left. And when you’re
ready to come to us, we’ll be here
for you.
I don’t believe the same as all
these people about every little
thing. But that doesn’t make me
right and them wrong. Actually,
I think it’s a nice chance for us
to learn from one another. Maybe
they’ve figured something out that
never occurred to me. Something
that might help explain...
(little wibble)
...explain why the Prophets let
some things happen. I don’t have
to agree with everything they say,
but it can’t hurt to listen.
RAIQ
Pretty words. But doctrine is very
clear. Ancient and unchangeable.
KIRA
We used to think so too. Having
one single religion held us all
together against our enemies.
But those enemies aren’t there
anymore. So now we’re free to
believe whatever we want. In fact,
the spiritual leader of our entire
race follows a different faith
from mine.
RAIQ
(appalled)
How can you allow such sacrilege?
KIRA
(laugh)
Because it’s not sacrilege! It’s
just a different way of looking at
things. Believe me, it took a
while before I was comfortable
with it, too. But that was my
problem, not his.
RAIQ
It is intolerable. I cannot fathom
spending time with heretics and
listening to their false words.
KIRA
You’re spending time with me,
aren’t you?
(off Raiq’s look)
You came looking for me, to talk
to me, on your own. Nobody forced
you to do that. So you can fathom
it, after all. And that’s okay.
You’re alone here, I get that.
RAIQ
Ascendants are always alone.
KIRA
But you always knew the others
were out there. Now they’re not.
(warmly)
But we still are. We might be all
you have left. And when you’re
ready to come to us, we’ll be here
for you.
Kira smiles encouragingly. Raiq is not sure how to respond. But it’s not outright hatred. That’s a start.
FADE OUT:
END OF ACT THREE
ACT FOUR
FADE IN:
36 EXT. DEEP SPACE NINE - ESTABLISHING
Just a moment to bring us back home...
37 INT. DS9 – QUARK’S BAR
The day continues in the bar as it usually does. Quark is behind his bar. Then he notices something and looks up...
VANNIS has entered the bar. The Vorta woman seems quite out of place and unsure entirely what she is doing here.
QUARK
Ambassador Vannis. Yours is not
a face I see in here very often.
VANNIS
There is very little you offer
that I require, Quark.
QUARK
Then I’ll be sure to make the most
of this rare opportunity. Take a seat.
Ambassador Vannis. Yours is not
a face I see in here very often.
VANNIS
There is very little you offer
that I require, Quark.
QUARK
Then I’ll be sure to make the most
of this rare opportunity. Take a seat.
Vannis primly perches on a bar stool. The person on the next stool looks distinctly uncomfortable at her presence.
QUARK
What I can get for you today?
VANNIS
Information... in the spirit of
diplomatic reciprocity, that is.
QUARK
Naturally.
VANNIS
I see the Defiant is no longer
docked at the station. I was
wondering where it went.
QUARK
What makes you think I know?
VANNIS
Your close... ‘bond’... with
Commander Ro is no secret.
QUARK
If I did know, and if I did tell
you, what would I get in return?
VANNIS
(seamless)
I would like a plate of foraiga,
please, Ambassador. Plus I would
like to sample several varieties
of hasperat, a range of cocktails,
and some time in a holosuite.
QUARK
How much time?
VANNIS
I will require several hours.
QUARK
(grin)
Coming right up.
What I can get for you today?
VANNIS
Information... in the spirit of
diplomatic reciprocity, that is.
QUARK
Naturally.
VANNIS
I see the Defiant is no longer
docked at the station. I was
wondering where it went.
QUARK
What makes you think I know?
VANNIS
Your close... ‘bond’... with
Commander Ro is no secret.
QUARK
If I did know, and if I did tell
you, what would I get in return?
VANNIS
(seamless)
I would like a plate of foraiga,
please, Ambassador. Plus I would
like to sample several varieties
of hasperat, a range of cocktails,
and some time in a holosuite.
QUARK
How much time?
VANNIS
I will require several hours.
QUARK
(grin)
Coming right up.
As Quark begins to prepare the order, he launches into some innocent faux-casual conversation.
QUARK
Look around. Have you noticed
who else isn’t here?
Look around. Have you noticed
who else isn’t here?
Vannis turns on her stool and gazes around the room.
VANNIS
Everything seems just like it
always has, Quark. Gamblers...
drinkers... the Aarruri family...
numerous Starfleet officers...
QUARK
All the Aarruri?
Everything seems just like it
always has, Quark. Gamblers...
drinkers... the Aarruri family...
numerous Starfleet officers...
QUARK
All the Aarruri?
Vannis looks closer, over at Sett and the puppies by the dabo wheel. Watching, she figures it out step by step.
VANNIS
The father is absent. Aarruri are
a family race. The father would
not leave his children unduly. But
the mother does not seem perturbed
by his absence. It is not unexplained.
(beat)
The father is gone at the same
time as the Defiant. Aarruri are
a Gamma Quadrant race.
(realises)
The Defiant went with the Aarruri
into the Gamma Quadrant. But they
did not take the entire family.
So taking them home was not the
purpose of the Defiant’s mission.
Then why else did the Defiant go
into the Gamma Quadrant?
(worried)
The Dominion...?
QUARK
Think smaller.
VANNIS
The pirate ship. That is where the
Aarruri lived and worked before here.
Then the Dominion is not in danger.
The father is absent. Aarruri are
a family race. The father would
not leave his children unduly. But
the mother does not seem perturbed
by his absence. It is not unexplained.
(beat)
The father is gone at the same
time as the Defiant. Aarruri are
a Gamma Quadrant race.
(realises)
The Defiant went with the Aarruri
into the Gamma Quadrant. But they
did not take the entire family.
So taking them home was not the
purpose of the Defiant’s mission.
Then why else did the Defiant go
into the Gamma Quadrant?
(worried)
The Dominion...?
QUARK
Think smaller.
VANNIS
The pirate ship. That is where the
Aarruri lived and worked before here.
Then the Dominion is not in danger.
As Quark places her order in front of her, she relaxes.
VANNIS
Thank you, Quark.
QUARK
My pleasure, Ambassador.
Thank you, Quark.
QUARK
My pleasure, Ambassador.
Quark steps away, satisfied with the transaction. Vannis, equally satisfied, tucks into the food she really doesn’t want but is willing to eat. For diplomacy.
38 EXT. SPACE
The Even Odds, the Defiant, and the Jem’Hadar ship sit together. This time we focus on the Defiant...
39 INT. DEFIANT – MAIN BRIDGE
Every biobed is busy with bodies – the crew of the Even Odds. Captain Dez, Facity, Glessin, Brad and Prees. Couple of other people we don’t recognise because they’re new.
Bashir and Richter move around, checking each one in turn. They all seem quiet, damaged and unconscious, but nobody is in immediate danger. Lighting is low and soothing.
Pif is also there, sitting and looking at them with tail low and spines sagging. He watches sadly as Bashir slowly pulls a sheet over Prees’s body. She’s dead.
BASHIR
I'm sorry, Pif. Taran’atar knows a
bit of basic triage, but it wasn’t
enough to save her. The blood loss
was just too great.
PIF
What caused all of this?
BASHIR
Nog seems to think it was the Wa.
It must have overloaded with the
power of the wormhole. The entire
ship was shattered around it.
GLESSIN (o.s.)
No...
I'm sorry, Pif. Taran’atar knows a
bit of basic triage, but it wasn’t
enough to save her. The blood loss
was just too great.
PIF
What caused all of this?
BASHIR
Nog seems to think it was the Wa.
It must have overloaded with the
power of the wormhole. The entire
ship was shattered around it.
GLESSIN (o.s.)
No...
They turn to see that Glessin has regained consciousness. They are glad to see him. He is weak, croaky, but forcing himself upright on the bed.
GLESSIN (cont)
It wasn’t the Wa. It was me.
PIF
Why do you say that?
GLESSIN
(quiet, bitter)
Because I'm a bad luck charm, Pif.
A dark omen of destruction and
death. Didn’t you know?
BASHIR
You can’t blame yourself, Glessin.
GLESSIN
I can if it’s true. I asked Dez to
stay behind.
(w/ disgust)
I wanted to watch. I wanted to see
them all die.
(gallows humour)
I got my wish. I always do.
It wasn’t the Wa. It was me.
PIF
Why do you say that?
GLESSIN
(quiet, bitter)
Because I'm a bad luck charm, Pif.
A dark omen of destruction and
death. Didn’t you know?
BASHIR
You can’t blame yourself, Glessin.
GLESSIN
I can if it’s true. I asked Dez to
stay behind.
(w/ disgust)
I wanted to watch. I wanted to see
them all die.
(gallows humour)
I got my wish. I always do.
The others exchange awkward looks. Glessin looks at Prees.
GLESSIN
I used to be Obsidian Order, did
you know that, Doctor? For all of
two weeks. I was part of the fleet
that attacked the Founders’ home
world. As far as I knew, I was the
only survivor.
BASHIR
You weren’t. I met others myself.
GLESSIN
I bet they’re all dead now too.
Everywhere I go, people die.
PIF
(plaintive)
Glessin, stop...
GLESSIN
I was a doctor. All I ever wanted
was to heal people. To make them
better. Look what I’ve become.
I used to be Obsidian Order, did
you know that, Doctor? For all of
two weeks. I was part of the fleet
that attacked the Founders’ home
world. As far as I knew, I was the
only survivor.
BASHIR
You weren’t. I met others myself.
GLESSIN
I bet they’re all dead now too.
Everywhere I go, people die.
PIF
(plaintive)
Glessin, stop...
GLESSIN
I was a doctor. All I ever wanted
was to heal people. To make them
better. Look what I’ve become.
As Glessin looks around at all the bodies around him, he breaks down into tears. He’s just broken, a ruined man.
40 INT. DEFIANT – ENGINEERING
Nog is at one of the large consoles trying to get on with his work. But the two Ferengi from the Even Odds – FEG and TRIV – are hanging on his coattails everywhere he goes.
FEG
You’re a clever man, sir, a clever
clever man...
TRIV
So very clever, just like your father...
FEG
Yes! Your father! I'm a big fan,
a big big fan...
TRIV
Is there anything we can help you
with? Anything at all...
NOG
Guys! I appreciate the support.
But just because my father’s the
Grand Nagus is no reason to follow
me everywhere I go.
FEG
Of course, sir, whatever you say,
we’re not here...
TRIV
We’ll get out of your way, sir,
anything you say...
You’re a clever man, sir, a clever
clever man...
TRIV
So very clever, just like your father...
FEG
Yes! Your father! I'm a big fan,
a big big fan...
TRIV
Is there anything we can help you
with? Anything at all...
NOG
Guys! I appreciate the support.
But just because my father’s the
Grand Nagus is no reason to follow
me everywhere I go.
FEG
Of course, sir, whatever you say,
we’re not here...
TRIV
We’ll get out of your way, sir,
anything you say...
Feg and Triv back away from him, but not too far. The other engineering staff exchange amused looks at Nog’s expense.
FEG
I did have one question, sir, if
I may be permitted to ask...
NOG
(sigh)
Go ahead.
TRIV
We were just wondering... why are
you doing this?
NOG
Doing what? Fixing the ship?
FEG
As the son of the Grand Nagus,
all the greatest opportunities are
yours for the taking.
TRIV
Yes! “Wives serve, sons inherit.”
FEG
That’s brothers, not sons.
TRIV
Don’t be ridiculous! Rule number
one-thirty-nine clearly states -
NOG
(interrupting)
I know the rules. The ninety-
second, for example – “There are
many paths to profit.”
FEG
Yes! Absolutely! But... surely
there is more profit in taking
advantage of –
NOG
Look – I enjoy this work. And I'm
good at it. Opportunities are
still opportunities even if they’re
not financial ones. Money isn’t
everything.
I did have one question, sir, if
I may be permitted to ask...
NOG
(sigh)
Go ahead.
TRIV
We were just wondering... why are
you doing this?
NOG
Doing what? Fixing the ship?
FEG
As the son of the Grand Nagus,
all the greatest opportunities are
yours for the taking.
TRIV
Yes! “Wives serve, sons inherit.”
FEG
That’s brothers, not sons.
TRIV
Don’t be ridiculous! Rule number
one-thirty-nine clearly states -
NOG
(interrupting)
I know the rules. The ninety-
second, for example – “There are
many paths to profit.”
FEG
Yes! Absolutely! But... surely
there is more profit in taking
advantage of –
NOG
Look – I enjoy this work. And I'm
good at it. Opportunities are
still opportunities even if they’re
not financial ones. Money isn’t
everything.
Feg and Triv look at each other, absolutely stunned. What can they possibly say to something so alien?
They go back and forth behind Nog’s back – “Say something.” “No, you say something.” “No, you.” “You!” Et cetera.
ILAT’EKAL (o.s.)
Ferengi.
Ferengi.
All three turn, and see that Second Ilat’ekal has entered the room. Feg and Triv instantly squeak and cower in fear. The Jem’Hadar is carrying a large tool box in each hand – they look super heavy, but he handles them with ease.
ILAT’EKAL
The Founder instructed me to bring
you these. She said you needed
supplies.
NOG
That’s right. Thank you, please
put them over there.
The Founder instructed me to bring
you these. She said you needed
supplies.
NOG
That’s right. Thank you, please
put them over there.
Nog points, and with a growl, Ilat’ekal does as he’s told. Nog follows him to inspect the contents of the boxes.
NOG
This is great. Please tell –
But as Nog turns around, he finds that Ilat’ekal is still there, right in his way. Towering over him. Nog looks up, trying to be brave...
ILAT’EKAL
(low rumble)
I could break you with a finger
before the Founder even knew.
She may punish me after...
but you would still be dead.
NOG
(scared hiss)
Get out.
(low rumble)
I could break you with a finger
before the Founder even knew.
She may punish me after...
but you would still be dead.
NOG
(scared hiss)
Get out.
With a last sneer of hatred, Ilat’ekal turns and clomps back out of engineering. We follow him out into...
41 INT. DEFIANT – CORRIDOR (CONTINUOUS)
The moment the door closes behind Ilat’ekal, Taran’atar UNSHROUDS right in his path. Ilat’ekal is unimpressed.
ILAT’EKAL
Ah. The Honoured Elder stalks me.
Should I be flattered?
TARAN’ATAR
Do you think Commander Ro would
allow you to roam the Defiant
unescorted? You’re a fool.
ILAT’EKAL
Get out of my way.
Ah. The Honoured Elder stalks me.
Should I be flattered?
TARAN’ATAR
Do you think Commander Ro would
allow you to roam the Defiant
unescorted? You’re a fool.
ILAT’EKAL
Get out of my way.
Fast as a whip, Taran’atar PUNCHES Ilat’ekal hard in the stomach. Then follows with an upper-cut to the jaw, and throws the younger Jem’Hadar against the wall, his arm jammed tight under his chin and pressing hard.
TARAN’ATAR
Do not threaten the Ferengi. All
the Starfleet crew are under the
Founder’s protection. And mine.
ILAT’EKAL
Your protection means nothing.
TARAN’ATAR
You are Jem’Hadar. You obey the
Founders. That is the order of things.
Do not threaten the Ferengi. All
the Starfleet crew are under the
Founder’s protection. And mine.
ILAT’EKAL
Your protection means nothing.
TARAN’ATAR
You are Jem’Hadar. You obey the
Founders. That is the order of things.
Ilat’ekal takes Taran’atar by surprise, pushing him off and going on the attack. They exchange several brutal blows, Ilat’ekal shouting in fury as he does. As they fight...
ILAT’EKAL
Who are you to speak of the order
of things?
(punch)
You do not even take the white.
(punch)
You are no Jem’Hadar.
TARAN’ATAR
And yet I follow their commands
better than you.
(punch)
What does that say of your loyalty?
ILAT’EKAL
The old order is gone! I heard the
Founder’s great speech. Even he
said the Dominion is in chaos.
(punch)
If you are free to do as you
please, why shouldn’t I?
Who are you to speak of the order
of things?
(punch)
You do not even take the white.
(punch)
You are no Jem’Hadar.
TARAN’ATAR
And yet I follow their commands
better than you.
(punch)
What does that say of your loyalty?
ILAT’EKAL
The old order is gone! I heard the
Founder’s great speech. Even he
said the Dominion is in chaos.
(punch)
If you are free to do as you
please, why shouldn’t I?
Taran’atar is older and more experienced, but Ilat’ekal is young and strong. Neither can beat each other in a straight fight, but eventually they are at a standstill.
Ilat’ekal steps back, looks at Taran’atar with disgust.
ILAT’EKAL
You see? You cannot even beat me.
TARAN’ATAR
Have you lost all your training?
You are Second! I am First!
ILAT’EKAL
You are nothing! You don’t exist.
But I will be there... when the
Founders finally execute you as
they should have done long ago.
You see? You cannot even beat me.
TARAN’ATAR
Have you lost all your training?
You are Second! I am First!
ILAT’EKAL
You are nothing! You don’t exist.
But I will be there... when the
Founders finally execute you as
they should have done long ago.
Taran’atar is genuinely taken aback by that. Satisfied that he’s won their exchange, Ilat’ekal turns and walks away down the corridor, leaving Taran’atar alone.
FADE OUT:
END OF ACT FOUR
ACT FIVE
FADE IN:
42 EXT. SISKO’S HOUSE
The day has moved on at the Sisko homestead...
43 INT. SISKO’S HOUSE – LIVING ROOM
Kasidy is sat on the couch, playing half-heartedly with baby Rebecca. After a few moments, the back door swings open and Jake enters. He walks slowly through the kitchen and into the living room. Kasidy looks up at him...
KASIDY
They still talking out there?
JAKE
I think it’s gonna take a while.
Best to just leave them to it.
They still talking out there?
JAKE
I think it’s gonna take a while.
Best to just leave them to it.
Kasidy looks back to Rebecca. She’s distant, restrained, passive aggressive. Not looking anybody in the eye. Jake can tell something’s very wrong here. He sits with her.
JAKE
You’re still mad at him?
KASIDY
Shouldn’t I be?
JAKE
I'm not judging, Kas.
KASIDY
I hate this. You know? Being the
wife of the Emissary. I love Ben...
but I hate the Emissary.
JAKE
Kas...
KASIDY
He was ready to leave us again.
You... me... Rebecca.
JAKE
But he didn’t. Focus on that.
KASIDY
But he was prepared to do it. He
only didn’t because Elias took his
place. I should be grateful I’ve
still got my baby’s father...
You’re still mad at him?
KASIDY
Shouldn’t I be?
JAKE
I'm not judging, Kas.
KASIDY
I hate this. You know? Being the
wife of the Emissary. I love Ben...
but I hate the Emissary.
JAKE
Kas...
KASIDY
He was ready to leave us again.
You... me... Rebecca.
JAKE
But he didn’t. Focus on that.
KASIDY
But he was prepared to do it. He
only didn’t because Elias took his
place. I should be grateful I’ve
still got my baby’s father...
The back door opens again, and Kasidy immediately clams up. All emotions, good and bad, are pulled under neutral cover. Then Ben and Prynn appear in the kitchen doorway...
SISKO
Kasidy...?
KASIDY
Yes?
SISKO
I’ve offered to take Prynn to the
monastery in Ashalla. Maybe Nerys
can arrange for her to see an Orb...
I thought it might help.
KASIDY
Sounds like a fine idea. When will
you be back?
SISKO
No... I want you to come with us. All
of you. So that we’re all together...
Kasidy...?
KASIDY
Yes?
SISKO
I’ve offered to take Prynn to the
monastery in Ashalla. Maybe Nerys
can arrange for her to see an Orb...
I thought it might help.
KASIDY
Sounds like a fine idea. When will
you be back?
SISKO
No... I want you to come with us. All
of you. So that we’re all together...
A little flutter of relief and gratitude on Kasidy’s face. He is trying. She looks at him, not sure what to say.
JAKE
I really ought to be getting back
to Rena. She’s running the bakery
all on her own. But you should go,
Kas. Be nice to get out of the
house, get some sunshine.
I really ought to be getting back
to Rena. She’s running the bakery
all on her own. But you should go,
Kas. Be nice to get out of the
house, get some sunshine.
She smiles gratefully at his encouraging tone. He’s trying to be the peacemaker. She relaxes somewhat.
KASIDY
That does sound nice. I’ll go and
get washed up, then. Watch Rebecca
for a second, will you?
That does sound nice. I’ll go and
get washed up, then. Watch Rebecca
for a second, will you?
Kasidy gets up and exits to the bedroom. Sisko goes to do the same, leaving Prynn and Jake alone.
PRYNN
Thank you for bringing me, Jake.
I don’t know if it’ll help, but at least
I feel like I'm doing something to
help my dad.
JAKE
(subtext ahoy)
I wish I could do more.
PRYNN
Need a lift back to Mylea?
JAKE
It’s fine. It’s not a long walk to
the transporter station.
Thank you for bringing me, Jake.
I don’t know if it’ll help, but at least
I feel like I'm doing something to
help my dad.
JAKE
(subtext ahoy)
I wish I could do more.
PRYNN
Need a lift back to Mylea?
JAKE
It’s fine. It’s not a long walk to
the transporter station.
He gives her an affectionate grip of the arm, then exits out the front door. Prynn stands alone, watching over Rebecca, preparing herself for what’s ahead.
44 EXT. SPACE
Back on the Even Odds, the Defiant, and the Jem’Hadar ship together behind the moon. Focus on the Even Odds...
45 INT. EVEN ODDS – BRIDGE
PAN across the destroyed bridge... somewhat cleaned up from what we saw earlier, but still a real mess. Eventually we find Taran’atar and Ro standing at the back, looking forlornly out across the sight.
RO
This poor ship... it’s already had
the bulkheads beaten out of it
twice. I’d say we should give it
up for scrap, but...
TARAN’ATAR
Captain Kira once told me why the
Bajorans fought so hard to reclaim
their world from the Cardassians,
rather than simply leaving and
going elsewhere. She said it was
because it was... home... and
people often define themselves by
where they come from. For the crew
of the Even Odds, this ship is
their home.
RO
You'’re right. And they nearly lost
it because of us. So it’s up to us
to fix it for them, no matter how
damaged it is.
TARAN’ATAR
I have no home. The Dominion I
knew no longer exists. And if it
did, it would not want me.
RO
Deep Space Nine could be your
home, if you let it. Worked for
me, and a dozen others.
TARAN’ATAR
No. Too much has happened there.
Both good and bad.
RO
Do you regret it?
TARAN’ATAR
I cannot change it. I can only go
forward from here. But I do miss
when life was clearer.
RO
When you could follow orders
without thinking, you mean.
TARAN’ATAR
Not that. Or not just that. The Great
Link was a symbol of the larger
Dominion. It did not matter to us
which Founder spoke because all
the Founders were one. The unity of
the Link was the unity of the Dominion.
(beat)
But now the Link has broken. And
the Dominion has broken with it.
RO
“Things fall apart. The centre
cannot hold.”
(off Taran’atar’s look)
Human literature. It just always
stuck with me because I thought
it described my life perfectly. But
you know what? Things do get
better. It sounds like a cliché
but it’s true. The hard part is
waiting it out until they do.
This poor ship... it’s already had
the bulkheads beaten out of it
twice. I’d say we should give it
up for scrap, but...
TARAN’ATAR
Captain Kira once told me why the
Bajorans fought so hard to reclaim
their world from the Cardassians,
rather than simply leaving and
going elsewhere. She said it was
because it was... home... and
people often define themselves by
where they come from. For the crew
of the Even Odds, this ship is
their home.
RO
You'’re right. And they nearly lost
it because of us. So it’s up to us
to fix it for them, no matter how
damaged it is.
TARAN’ATAR
I have no home. The Dominion I
knew no longer exists. And if it
did, it would not want me.
RO
Deep Space Nine could be your
home, if you let it. Worked for
me, and a dozen others.
TARAN’ATAR
No. Too much has happened there.
Both good and bad.
RO
Do you regret it?
TARAN’ATAR
I cannot change it. I can only go
forward from here. But I do miss
when life was clearer.
RO
When you could follow orders
without thinking, you mean.
TARAN’ATAR
Not that. Or not just that. The Great
Link was a symbol of the larger
Dominion. It did not matter to us
which Founder spoke because all
the Founders were one. The unity of
the Link was the unity of the Dominion.
(beat)
But now the Link has broken. And
the Dominion has broken with it.
RO
“Things fall apart. The centre
cannot hold.”
(off Taran’atar’s look)
Human literature. It just always
stuck with me because I thought
it described my life perfectly. But
you know what? Things do get
better. It sounds like a cliché
but it’s true. The hard part is
waiting it out until they do.
The turbolift doors open, and a shuffle-stomp precedes Dez, the Even Odds captain, being supported by Nog and Bashir. Dez looks around the bridge of his ship, too tired and beaten to be outraged.
RO
(gently)
Captain... I'm not sure you should
be up and around.
BASHIR
He insisted, Commander. As soon as
he was conscious and capable.
DEZ
It’s my ship. My responsibility.
(turns to Ro)
I met you before, on the Alphie
station. You’re in charge?
RO
That’s right. Commander Ro Laren.
DEZ
Well, Commander... what are you
going to do to put this right?
RO
I’ve already given orders that we
will do everything we can to get
you good as new.
DEZ
Nog tells me the Wa is dead. I'm
not sure what the Even Odds is
without the Wa. And now you have
Jem’Hadar strutting around and
shouting at people.
(gently)
Captain... I'm not sure you should
be up and around.
BASHIR
He insisted, Commander. As soon as
he was conscious and capable.
DEZ
It’s my ship. My responsibility.
(turns to Ro)
I met you before, on the Alphie
station. You’re in charge?
RO
That’s right. Commander Ro Laren.
DEZ
Well, Commander... what are you
going to do to put this right?
RO
I’ve already given orders that we
will do everything we can to get
you good as new.
DEZ
Nog tells me the Wa is dead. I'm
not sure what the Even Odds is
without the Wa. And now you have
Jem’Hadar strutting around and
shouting at people.
Taran’atar reacts, slightly insulted...
DEZ
Not you, Taran’atar. I trust you. But
you’re not like them.
Not you, Taran’atar. I trust you. But
you’re not like them.
Ro and Taran’atar exchange a look - that’s not any better.
NOG
Captain... the Even Odds will fly
again. I promise you. We owe you
that much, and more.
DEZ
(quiet, flat)
Yes. You do.
BASHIR
Alright, I think that’s enough now.
I want to get you back to sickbay.
Your crew needs you there more
than here right now.
DEZ
My crew. What’s left of them.
Captain... the Even Odds will fly
again. I promise you. We owe you
that much, and more.
DEZ
(quiet, flat)
Yes. You do.
BASHIR
Alright, I think that’s enough now.
I want to get you back to sickbay.
Your crew needs you there more
than here right now.
DEZ
My crew. What’s left of them.
Nog gives a ponderous and not entirely happy “Hmmm...”
RO
What does that noise mean?
NOG
Sorry, Commander. I was just
thinking...
RO
About what?
NOG
Well... we can repair the Even
Odds. Even this badly damaged,
with enough time and care I will
be able to get it working. And
most of the crew survived.
RO
Yes, we’ve said that already.
NOG
Yes but... my point is... it was the
Wa that destroyed this ship, right?
And it was the Wa – their own
versions of the Wa anyway – that
destroyed all of the Ascendant ships.
BASHIR
What are you getting at, Nog?
NOG
This ship survived. What if... what
if some of the Ascendant ships
survived too?
RO
But you said you watched them
all burn in the wormhole.
NOG
No, sir. We saw the ones that came
to the wormhole burn. But what
about the ones that didn’t come
to the wormhole?
TARAN’ATAR
The ones the Jem’Hadar destroyed first.
NOG
Right. There’s a whole field of
damaged ships out there –
Jem’Hadar and Ascendant. If this
ship survived, isn’t it possible
that one of them did too?
What does that noise mean?
NOG
Sorry, Commander. I was just
thinking...
RO
About what?
NOG
Well... we can repair the Even
Odds. Even this badly damaged,
with enough time and care I will
be able to get it working. And
most of the crew survived.
RO
Yes, we’ve said that already.
NOG
Yes but... my point is... it was the
Wa that destroyed this ship, right?
And it was the Wa – their own
versions of the Wa anyway – that
destroyed all of the Ascendant ships.
BASHIR
What are you getting at, Nog?
NOG
This ship survived. What if... what
if some of the Ascendant ships
survived too?
RO
But you said you watched them
all burn in the wormhole.
NOG
No, sir. We saw the ones that came
to the wormhole burn. But what
about the ones that didn’t come
to the wormhole?
TARAN’ATAR
The ones the Jem’Hadar destroyed first.
NOG
Right. There’s a whole field of
damaged ships out there –
Jem’Hadar and Ascendant. If this
ship survived, isn’t it possible
that one of them did too?
They all exchange worried looks, very much dismayed by that prospect.
CUT TO:
46 INT. ASCENDANT SHIP
Beginning close up on the face of an Ascendant WOMAN, not seen before. She is unconscious, her bio-armour damaged and bruised, her head bleeding silver liquid.
She begins to move, small semi-conscious flutters as dreams and nightmares pass through her damaged brain. Just enough to let us know that she is alive.
PULL BACK to show that she is sat in the seat of her ship, the chair itself seeming to cradle her, wrap itself around her to protect her.
A part of the ship has SPEARED her leg as it lashed about. The silver liquid creeps half-heartedly towards the wound.
PULL BACK further as we see the rest of the inside of the Ascendant vessel. The ship is made of Wa material, organic technology. It sags half-dead in places. Bruised, bleeding, warped out of shape, dim and lifeless.
But as we watch, it starts to give the tiniest signs of life, the same as its occupant. The saggy parts tighten just slightly before flopping again. Lights throb.
More silver fluid creeps sluggishly across a surface, until it finds a crack in the plating. It flows into the crack, and fills it up. The ship is alive too.
PULL BACK further still, until we pass through the outer hull of the ship and out into...
47 EXT. SPACE
Outside the ship. It looks just as damaged as the inside. Punched, dented, bruised, warped out of shape.
Continue to PULL BACK, in one unbroken shot. We see the ship is resting adrift inside a cloud of gas and debris, surrounding it and mostly blocking it from view.
Further, and we see the cloud is alone. There is no grave yard of dead ships – this one Ascendant ship is by itself.
Further, watching the ship and the cloud recede from sight. It’s almost lost in the blackness of space. Our perspective turns away, but still in one unbroken shot.
Then two SHIPS cross our path – two single-pilot scout ships of Bajoran design. They go on about their business.
As we turn to see where the ships came from, we see a blue-green planet in the distance with several moons, a bright star far behind it.
And eventually, coming slowly into view, the familiar shape of Deep Space Nine itself.
The Ascendant ship is in the Bajoran system.
BLACK OUT:
END OF SHOW
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