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DOOMSDAY MACHINE?

James Wright

Commodore
Commodore
Is the novelization of "THE DOOMSDAY MACHINE" taken from the original script?
The reason I ask this is, Commodore Decker's first name was changed from Brand to Matt!

JDW
 
HEY YOU'RE RIGHT! In the Blish adaptation Commodore Decker does make it to the final period.
I wonder how William Windom would've felt about that!?

JDW
 
This is covered in an article in the current issue of the Star Trek magazine. According to Norman Spinrad, Blish made those changes himself for unknown reasons -- there was never a draft of the script in which Decker's first name was "Brand," and certainly none where he lived at the end, because the whole idea was "Moby Dick in space" with Decker as Ahab.

Keep in mind that Blish wrote these at a time when novelizations weren't expected to be any more faithful to the original shows and movies than films based on books are faithful to their originals. It was perfectly acceptable back then to change the story when adapting it to prose, since after all there was no home video and few reruns so it was unlikely that anyone would be able to review the original to compare. These days, we demand much more fidelity from novelizations. (And actually it was Star Trek that started that. It was those same 79 episodes running over and over for years on end that enabled the viewers to gain intimate familiarity with the details of a TV show for the first time, which led to pressure on Blish and his wife J. A. Lawrence -- who adapted or co-adapted the later volumes under his name when he fell ill -- to make those later adaptations more authentic.)
 
"Moby Dick in Space"?!? :guffaw: Say it ain't so...nothing like that could EVER happen...even almost 15 years later! :lol:
 
I reread this one recently, and a few of the others. Yikes.

To say that Blish's added dialogue is stilted is an insult to circus workers everywhere. The guy makes George Lucas seem smooth.

Joe, rough
 
Kryton said:
"Moby Dick in Space"?!? :guffaw: Say it ain't so...nothing like that could EVER happen...even almost 15 years later! :lol:

Huh? Oh, wait... are you making a Wrath of Khan allusion?
 
You have to ask? ;) (Though it was hardly a new idea even during Trek times...witness the original origin of Lightning Lad!)
 
I'm curious about Decker's surviving in the printed version.

How was the MACHINE destroyed? (What clued them in, if not Decker's sacrifice?)
 
Nothing clued them in. Kirk just had the idea out of the blue to fly the Constellation into the maw and detonate its impulse engines. Which isn't all that implausible, really. I mean, it's not that hard to think up "Let's try throwing a really big explosion at it and see if that hurts it!"
 
Christopher said:
Nothing clued them in. Kirk just had the idea out of the blue to fly the Constellation into the maw and detonate its impulse engines. Which isn't all that implausible, really. I mean, it's not that hard to think up "Let's try throwing a really big explosion at it and see if that hurts it!"

Not only that: "let's ram it down its throat." When you look at the maw it sure seems like a nice juicy target. Makes me wonder why no one in the other galaxy that it came from thought of it.

Robert
 
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