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Spoilers Day of the Pheasant Under Transparent Aluminum

Qonundrum

Just graduated from Camp Ridiculous
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My latest rewatch-o'-random was "Day of the Dove".

It's amazing that neither Kirk nor Kang figured out while bickering that mayhaps both of them got a bogus distress call, and from an alien that looks like the f/x designers pointed a camera at a flushing toidy and added a red filter in post? (It's honestly a very creative effect.)

Kirk's over-theatrics in showing to the camera that he's pressing the communicator's alert button would be in plain view of Kang and his fellow cohorts, of which all are holding disruptor pistols against Kirk's head. (In reality, it's because each film camera was the size of a Dalek and couldn't maneuver in any more nimbly, which is okay since (in general) television in the 1960s still produced shows as "televised stage plays", which is rather nice compared to the ersatz realism-based approach of more recent decades.)

Season 3 had Chekov's personality altered. My response on that? "Thank goodness." Gone were the comedy bits (either good lines like "and I'm the tsar of all the Russias!" or the catchphrase butt-of-jokes where Chekov states everything was "inwented in wussia by widdle owd wadies" or whatever, which wouldn't be funny if it weren't for Walter Koenig's delivery because on paper they're very flat - no pun intended) and replaced by a more stern and sincere character.

Seaosn 3 had other positives, but while Freiberger didn't always make the best of changes, his era isn't barrel scraping dregs just because it's his name as producer. Hell, there are overlooked values in Space 1999 season 2 despite the downsides (of which many more existed), and in both S1999 and Trek, some changes he had to oversee because the network demanded it. So it's not all on him (especially for S1999) and I might argue it could have been worse if someone else other than him had taken over. (It's neither here nor there unless one has a time machine so I can become S1999's producer and prove the fact rather quickly...)

The basic theme of enemies working together to face a common foe harks back to world war 2, if not earlier. WW2 is more recent and more accessible so I'll stick to it. Especially considering how "the war to end all wars" ended only 21 years later and what led to WW2 was pretty nasty in of itself. I'm no historian by any measure, but there were countries that weren't always friendly beforehand that became allies. To borrow a phrase from Doctor Who and apply it on a rather larger scale, "Fear makes companions of all of us." and I can't think of a bigger truism than that. Unless I go to a bar where I observe everyone getting drunk and getting past second base in the bathroom stall but that's not quite on the same level, now is it?

Also: "cooties".

Going back to Freiberger, who introduces TOS to less-than-happy endings on more than one occasion, "Dove" smartly avoids anything after the emotional vampire flees the ship and lets the audience decide how Kang and co. are returned home - and also note how Kang uses backhanded and overly strong pats on Kirk (remember, Kang did remind his crew to have patience), which almost derails their plan because the vampire fritter would surely grow stronger if the hate vibes weren't dwarfed by everyone else being shiny happy people...

Speaking of that,
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So in the end, avoiding any proper resolution between both factions could easily have led to something less than optimistic except 60s Trek had that reset button so McCoy could get busy with Natira at her favorite proverbial pub...

But far bigger, "Dove" is an exercise in not just species hatred (Humans vs Klingons) but race hatred and conflating the two, since a race is a set of unique qualifiers within a species that otherwise shares identical traits or a race is said to cover all within the species ("human race", "rat race", and so on.) It spares little expense and puts out some incredibly jaw-dropping, taut scenes... such as:

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(also note the "televised stage play" feel, though the dialogue and acting are far stronger than the production. That scene's first 1 minute and 51 seconds alone has far more subtle depth to it... this is truly an outstanding episode. All produced by Freiberger.)

Though at the 2:55 mark of that compilation video, Kirk claims the alien is just watching and laughing. This episode previously established this vampire needs "bad emotions" to survive and is using both Humans and Klingons the same way we use cattle and gardens. There's a bit of a difference... but the acting's too damn good to have me care.

The episode is also a great one for Spock, who isn't treated so consistently in other season 3 episodes...

Oh, Scotty gets to use "Vulcan" in the same censor-bypassing method McCoy had in "The Gamesters of Triskeleon" in the same way "Laugh-In" used "Funk'n'Wagnalls" albeit for comedic effect. Nowadays, shows just say the effenheimer (which in a way is more realistic) but there's something that I find more appealing about wordplay.

Lastly, I recall reading how Doohan was almost fired from season 3 because he was gaining weight. Note that Kirk had a similar stature. Note that Commodore Stocker from season 2 had a lot more stature...

The story is more of a visceral than intellectual exercise, which is also out of necessity to show how dire it is, but is an extremely well-crafted one at its core.
 
I just noticed that Kang's hard slap on the Kirk's back got a roar of laughter from the Klingons in background. Was that his intent to get his crew in the jovial mood to help defeat the alien? :klingon:
 
Doohan was nearly fired for gaining weight in season three? I've never heard that before and yet Shatner, who looked like he was wearing a girdle wasn't because he was the star of the show!!! :lol:
JB

I read that tidbit quite some time ago. Either a making-of book or magazine, probably the former. I'll try to find it as I'd rather have the reference available. I couldn't believe it either, but as much as there are times I'd defend Freiberger's choices, he made and tried to make a few that were just bat-bleep-bullblop... (by the seashore)

Shatner did go up and down in weight between season openers and season enders, probably due to the goodies set on the table for cast to eat and drink between takes, noting a coffee stain on Nimoy's uniform is readily visible in "The Trouble with Tribbles" and I'll admit I almost sleep through that story myself if I didn't have my fifth cup that day... Not that a few extra pounds should preclude anyone from being "undateable"; a proper relationship is what people put into it and not 100% what they want out of it. Why did I just digress? I dunno, ask the little verdin who's busy asking the aardvark if it should get its feathers dyed the same color as a hamster-eating macaw... now there's a NattyGeoink photo just waiting...
 
I just noticed that Kang's hard slap on the Kirk's back got a roar of laughter from the Klingons in background. Was that his intent to get his crew in the jovial mood to help defeat the alien? :klingon:

This is why I hate emotions! :guffaw: The slap on the back does ensure a good deal more high spirits and thankfully most of the Starfleet personnel weren't looking. Spock could easily restrict any emotional impulse... and the net amount of happy-hi-de-ho poison was far more than the hate that the whirlygig needed to survive. But it would be a calculated risk as those good spirits still stemmed from hate rather than a prevailing good. Given Kirk and Kang were likely both faking it, as their spouses otherwise reminded them often enough, it could be perceived Kang was on the right track in a gambit to up the ante... but it would be a big risk, had it backfired...

...but again, after the whirlygig leaves the ship the Earthers and Klingons aren't exactly having tea parties. Or any thing either way that we know of since the episode leaves it all waaaaaaay too open-ended for its own good. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too open. Maybe the Klingons are teaching the Enterprise crew Klingoni rather than English like how Korax was peacocking to Chekov and Scotty in "The Trouble with Tribbles". Which reminds of a tangent upon a tangent, on Earth there are several thousand known languages. Kling Qo'Nos Calgon only has the one, Klingonese? (Translation convention or otherwise, all this still goes back into that other untidy chestnut of how stories lack the time to set up such distinctive worldbuilding... but that's another story with a few million other tangents waiting in the wings from this cuckoo... :devil:)

Still, every story has nitpicks and plot holes big enough to dive into the deep end with. IMHO, if the bits that work wonders can make up for the rest that's far better. Might the parts that work make up for it? In "Dove"'s case, it definitely does - and then some.
 
The original ending had Kirk drop Kang, Mara and the Klingons off on a neutral planet before planting the seeds of co-operation and harmony in his foe's mind to contemplate! And it looked as if it was going to work as well as the episode was the last Klingon episode produced unless you count The Savage Curtain? :klingon:
JB
 
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