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Author "trademarks": Recurring elements in TrekLit author's works

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IMDb's trivia lists for films often include trivia items tagged as "director trademarks": A particular type of shot that appears regularly throughout the director's ouvre, or a situation, or a theme. A post in the review thread for Forgotten History gave me the idea to open a thread to collect TrekLit author trademarks, quoting:

Already found two instances of a Christopher hallmark and I've barely started it: explaining why something that he thought made no sense happened in an episode.

Can you think of any other trademark elements that pop up regularly in a particular author's works?
 
Diane Duane
- creating/using non humanoid aliens(Hamalki, Hwii's delphine species, ;At, Ornae, Lahit(and also had naraht as an officer)
 
David Mack's use of picayune and Dayton and Kevin's complete inability to use a split infinitive which drives me mad.
 
Mack, Dilmore, and Ward's use of Starfleet officers O'Halloran and Anderson (Dante and Randal from Clerks), sonic screwdrivers, and P-38s.
 
David Mack's use of picayune and Dayton and Kevin's complete inability to use a split infinitive which drives me mad.

The word Stygian :)
This is bullshit, and I will tell you why.

In the last ten years I've written six pieces of short fiction and 21 full-length books (counting both published and as-yet-unpublished manuscripts). Those works comprise more than 2 million words of paid-for prose.

Within those two million words, would you like to know exactly how many times the word "Stygian" appeared? Just 7 times — once each in seven separate works. (For reference purposes, I am basing this on the revised omnibus version of Star Trek Destiny.)

Guess how many times the word "picayune" appears in the span of two million words. The correct answer: 6 times, in only four out of my 27 published and upcoming works.

Calling the use of one particular word or another "an author's trademark" is, to be perfectly blunt, absurd. It's like calling the use of a two-shot or a jump cut a "director's trademark" when it happens only a handful of times within the context of a large body of work.
 
^ I'm sorry because you seem to feel upset at all this, but the honest truth is that you're the reason I learned the word "picayune" :). The first time I consciously read it was in Harbinger, and since I didn't know what it meant I looked it up in a dictionary, and henceforth noticed it whenever you used it again, which was a few times in the book, IIRC.

I think that's really what's going on here, actually: Words like "Stygian" and "picayune" are used so rarely they stand out, and that makes their use memorable. You're right that doesn't really make them "trademarks" as such, but I still think they fit the general theme of this thread: they're things you remember seeing repeatedly in an author's works, for whatever reason.

Also, it should be said that I ascribe to those "author trademarks" an endearing quality; it's about getting to know the voice of the artists who've been with you for some time. It's in no way meant in a "list things authors do that bug you" spirit.
 
How about a door sighing open or something happening "years earlier?"

The former occurred a fair few times in Destiny and the latter occurred what felt like every other page in Storming Heaven.
 
In the spirit of talking about genuine trademarks rather than things about a writer's style that irritate the reader, I'd note this:

I think one of David Mack's trademarks is a certain lyricism that crops up in his work. "Like the Fool gazing upon Lear, he saw only his shadow," from Deep Space Nine: Warpath, comes to mind. "I think it might be best if we let ourselves be guided by our consciences rather than a tyranny of numbers" from Destiny: Lost Souls. I for one very much appreciate it.
 
Oh I love thinking about this sort of thing; I have tons.

What was it Christopher said about David Mack, that he had a tendency to never let his characters off the hook, to make them make difficult decisions and then really experience the consequences? Something like that. That's a much better way of phrasing it than the usual "HE KILLS PEOPLE A LOT!" stuff. That's true, but it's not just random or gratuitous. In most Trek, if someone decides to sacrifice themselves to save everyone else, they probably make it somehow. In a Mack story, if they decide to do that, they're gonna die.

Peter David, even before New Frontier, was definitely the funniest Trek author, though he too had a tendency to put characters through unusual amounts of hell.

Christopher's novels almost always feature people working through deep emotional problems with long-form psychology-literate introspection and logic.

David R. George III often will focus his novels on unlikely thematic connections between disparate stories, most especially with Twilight having every story be about loneliness, but also Spock & Sisko's almost unconnected stories in Rough Beasts, McCoy's two distinct lives in Crucible, Demora's story and its recipient's implied story in his short story in Tales From The Captain's Table, etc.

You don't find too many people being violent, mean, or depressed in a KRAD book, unless it's the Mirror Universe.

Diane Carey's nautical lore has been mentioned.

Martin, writing by himself, tends to oversimplify emotional conflicts and get lost up his ass in unnecessary continuity bitchfixes.

Ward & Dilmore almost always spend the first quarter to third of a novel just letting every character monologue about everything that's happened to them lately; it feels to me like they just want to spend some time hanging out with the characters before making them do anything. Depending on my patience level, it's either endearing or really frustrating.

Margaret Wander Bonanno can never quite seem to write a plot worthy of her characters and emotionally genuine writing style.

Kirsten Beyer is awesome.

Una McCormack likes to hint at her characters' motivations without fully explaining them, which is thematically rather brilliant given how much she writes about Cardassia. Or maybe I'm getting cause and effect backwards there.

Whatever the weirdest thing you've read lately is, Ilsa J. Bick is way more fucked up. This is true even though she's written very few Trek tales.

L. A. Graf's books are going to be about the lower decks characters, especially Chekov.

There, how's that? :)
 
Gratuitous references to old episodes and cameos by obscure characters.


Like there are any authors that would do something like that. :lol:
Well, it's rather jarring when they all happen in the same book (or the first two books of a trilogy). But I liked the nod to Rain Robinson; kinda made me think that maybe she and Tom Paris might meet again some day. ;)

I don't recall which author(s) do this, but there are an awful lot of instances where they write "McCoy bounced on his toes." Sometimes he does a considerable amount of bouncing on his toes on the same page.
 
I will say that I learn new words from time to time reading anything. To me that is part of the authors being the professionals and I being the consumer. I really appreciate their efforts with Star Trek.
 
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