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April/May Challenge: Phase 2

Bry_Sinclair

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The following is based on something I read on Memory Alpha. Back in the 60s, during production of Star Trek, there was a planned but never developed spin off proposed by Darlene Hartman called "Hopeship", which would follow Doctor Joseph M'Benga (as he was called in a script she sold but was never produced) as he took up a post on the medical ship Hope. There are no details about what this show might've looked like, with only M'Benga and his older brother Simon (the ship's XO) being the only mentioned characters, so I decided to take the idea and run with it, though just prior to Doctor M'Benga joining the crew.

So here I give you, Star Trek: Hopeship
 
Star Trek: Hopeship

PHASE 2



With trembling numb fingers, Olivia Castle wiped the blood off her lips from her latest nosebleed, her third in the last hour. She didn’t have much longer, the knowledge of what was eminent made her eyes water.

Determined to do all she could, Castle forced her hands to work the controls of the communications station, trying to find a frequency that she could transmit a message on. Despite her drive to carry on, her fingers felt as though they’d been exposed to the harsh vacuum of space, she could barely feel them. Like the nosebleeds, the numbness was an early symptom that only got worse, as well the headaches that made it so much harder to concentrate and focus.

“I can’t let it end like this. Not like this,” she croaked to herself, helmsman Eltak was the only other person on the bridge though he’d died two hours earlier.

She nudged the bandwidth control, working through the frequencies that might cut through the interference, trying to listen for the quiet amid the static. It was a task she’d done countless times before, something she could ordinarily do in her sleep, but with a body that was failing her it was arduous. She nudged the control again and for a split-second heard an open frequency before it was swallowed up by white noise again.

Easy. Take it slow. Just a little at a time, she coached herself, trying to will her hands to work. Please.

Degree by degree, her shaking hands turned the dial back towards the clear frequency. Tears ran down her cheeks as blood from both nostrils dripped from her chin. Please!

The static went silent.

Immediately, she stopped and punched the transmit control. “Mayday, mayday! This is the colony transport Walkabout. There is a contagion aboard. People are dying. We need immediate assistance. Please, help us.”

Summoning up every ounce of her remaining strength, Castle fumbled with the controls to lock her distress call into the comm system and set it to broadcast continuously, as spasms gripped her limbs and the world around her started to go dark. Her head felt so heavy and her body so weak, all she needed to do was tap one last button and her task was complete.

“Please,” she gasped, reaching for the control.

Her heart gave out just as her fingers made contact. As Olivia Castle slumped across the console, her call for help began to transmit.

* * * * *

“So, we’re discounting everyone we currently have on staff?” Commander Simon M’Benga asked, looking across the briefing room table at Captain Lenx Sa Edar and Commander Monsoon On Shallow Cove.

Behind his transparent domed helmet, he wore to survive, Monsoon nodded two of his four pairs of lips fluttering. “My staff are the best of the best, Commander, but that’s because they’re all specialists in their fields. My replacement needs to be a generalist, someone who can handle the administrative burden as well as be a top-notch diagnostician, skilful surgeon and thorough researcher.”

“You could always not retire, Doctor,” quipped Lenx, an awkward smile tugging at the Edosians thin mouth.

Monsoon blew a flurry of bubbles in the water he breathed, the closest thing the Megarite got to a laugh. “We can’t all be blessed with your lifespan, Captain, I’d like to enjoy my last years in this universe without having to wear this helmet.”

“Such is the burden of answering your calling.”

Whilst Lenx and Monsoon had served together for over a decade, M’Benga had only been aboard the U.S.S. Hope for the last eighteen months, but in that time he had come to have a deep appreciation and respect for their soon to retire Chief Medical Officer. On a hospital ship, Monsoon’s position took priority, at times even over that of the Captain, as it would be the CMO that would have to make a lot of their toughest calls and determine how best they proceed when dealing with whatever malady or crisis they responded too. It was a big role to fill, one they needed to get right, the kind his younger brother would’ve jumped at.

“If it’s the last thing I do on this ship, I’ll make sure that you have the best possible candidate to replace me, Captain.”

“I know you will, Doctor.”

The whistle of the intercom interrupted them. ”Rellon to briefing room.”

As he was sat at the computer terminal, M’Benga tapped the companel. “Briefing room, go ahead.”

”Commander, we’ve just picked up a priority one signal from Lambda Station.”

“Patch it through down here, Lieutenant.”

”Standby.”

M’Benga shared a puzzled look with the others in the room, which lasted just a second before the tabletop viewers came to like with the image of the Lambda Station Commander. His expression was grave, eyes sharp.

Lenx craned her neck forward. “What’s wrong?”

”Four days ago, the colony transport Walkabout failed to arrive at Ferrus Prime. An hour ago, we picked up a heavily distorted signal from them. After clearing it up we learned it was a distress call set to repeat. They’re reporting a contagion of some kind onboard, though provide no other details. We’ve tried to establish communication with them, but they aren’t responding.” As they were briefed, M’Benga saw a set of co-ordinates appear on his terminal followed by information on the transport itself. He sent the heading to navigation and updated their library with the rest of the data.

”The Hope is the best equipped in the region to assist them.”

“We’re on it, Commodore.”

“How many aboard?” asked Monsoon.

”An operational crew of sixty and eight hundred civilians.”

“We’ll keep you apprised, Hope out.” Lenx turned to him. “Commander—”

“I’ve transferred to heading to the bridge.”

“Get us underway.”

He tapped the companel again. “Bridge, I’ve sent through a new course, set it and engage at maximum warp.”

”Understood.”

Monsoon was already heading for the exit as the channel closed, Lenx and M’Benga were quickly behind him. He’d managed to make a few quick calculations as he’d studied the data Lambda Station had sent through, even at their maximum speed it would take them almost five hours to reach the stricken colony ship. With no further contact, it was impossible to know just what the situation was or just how back it was.

All they could do was hope that they made it there in time to do some good.

* * * * *

Captain’s log: supplemental.

We are ten minutes away from the point of origin of the distress call from the
Walkabout. The ship is in a neighbouring system to Ferrus Prime, the sun of which is highly active with solar flares causing widespread communications and sensor interference. We are locked onto the distress beacon and have located the colony ship, though any further attempts to establish contact have failed.

Commander M’Benga, Doctors Monsoon and Nguyen, and Lieutenant Rellon will be joining SAR-Ops alpha team as soon as we’re in transporter range. Full biohazard response measures are in effect, with all ICUs and pathology labs taking contagion action.


* * * * *

The Seacole-Class medical ship was designed to handle emergencies on a regular basis, from evacuations to widescale search-and-rescue, as such her transporters were set up to move large numbers of people as quickly as possible—as such their standard transporter pad was designed for twelve people, rather than the six found on most other Starfleet ships. M’Benga looked around the room at the nine others, all clad in yellow hazmat suits, that made up the initial away team. They would need to assess the situation and determine just how bad things were, through accessing their computers and searching for survivors. With no information, they had to get up to speed as quickly as possible.

Even through the suits, that covered them head to toe (except Monsoon, as his environmental helmet already afforded him sufficient protection), it was clear to see that even these experienced and thoroughly trained professionals were worried. It would always be the case when they were going into an unknown, especially when a contagion was the cause.

In the hours it had taken them to reach the Walkabout’s location, M’Benga had read up on the ship and her destination. Ferrus Prime was a new colony, with ground only being broken three months ago, as such most of the eight hundred colonists were construction technicians and support personnel to help get the new outpost set up. Around half of those aboard were human, though there were also a high number of Denobulans and Tellarite, as well as Arolo, Caitians, Rigellians, Tiburonians and a handful of other species.

He had always held a great deal of respect for these sorts of people, heading to the outer most fringes of Federation space to tame it. Though they knew that what they’d face could be dangerous, he doubted many would have expected to deal with a disease on the journey to their new home.

”Lenx to transporter room one.”

M’Benga tapped the companel. “Go ahead.”

”Commander, we’ll be in range in a moment. Standby.”

“Understood, Captain,” he replied, knowing that wasn’t the reason she was contacting them.

”We’ve finally been able to scan for lifesigns. We can identify one hundred ninety-seven aboard.”

The tense silence from mere seconds before turned heavy an oppressive, threatening to suffocate them all. Over six hundred people were already dead, who knew how many more would be joining them shortly.

“Acknowledged.” Even to his own ears his voice sounded hollow.

”Good luck to you all. Lenx out.”

M’Benga took a brief moment to take a deep breath and let it out slowly. This was not the time to mourn the dead, this was the time to fight for the living. Squaring his shoulders, projecting the self-assuredness and confidence he didn’t feel, he turned to his team.

“You all know your assignments. They’re even more important now. Let’s get ready.”

The team assembled on the dais, all of them mentally preparing as best they could for what they were about to face. The Executive Officer slowly counted his breaths. He’d gotten to four when the transporter operator signalled they were in range.

“Energise.”

Ten seconds later, they materialised into a vision of hell.

* * * * *

Doctor Tamara Nguyen wasn’t the sort of person to wear her heart on her sleeve, but even she was rattled by what the away team found once they reached the colony ship. Bodies lay in the corridor, twisted in agony, as they bled from every visible orifice. She wasn’t the only one effected, hearing gasps and muttering from the others in the team as she crouched beside the first body they’d spotted, an elderly Arkenite.

She was regarded as one of the best virologists in Starfleet (a fact that had seen many other postings try to poach her from the Hope), but as she studied the screen of her tricorder the data baffled her. By the symptoms she could see, there were a handful of viral and bacterial infections that might have been at work, but her scans for them were negative—of course mutated strains were a possibility, she’d have to get samples back to the ship for thorough testing. As she extracted blood samples, Commander M’Benga split the team up as planned.

The XO and Rellon would head for the bridge, to set up a telemetry link with the Hope and take control of the colony ship. Monsoon would lead a pair of SAR-Ops specialist and the team’s corpsman to the aft ventral section of the transport, where their scans showed the survivors were clustered together. The remaining members would split into pairs and make a cursory search of the ship looking for anyone else who might be alive, as well as try to gather as much data as they could about the contagion. Once they got the lay of the land, then they could bring in additional teams to help with transferring the survivors to the quarantine wards, as well as recover bodies and begin a full forensic sweep. Even with the hazmat suits and transporter biofilters, they always tried to keep the initial assessment team small and mobile.

Nguyen was teamed up with Rescue Technician Zharris, a strapping crimson skinned Saurian, with a multitude of skills under his belt. They headed to the portside, whilst Lieutenant Commander th’Khosh and Crewman V’Laar went to starboard. They made steady progress, their tricorders set to actively scan for lifesigns, the chirping of the devices was the dominant sound in the silent corridors. They discovered three other bodies lying in the hallways, the sight of so much blood in the once pristine corridors, like those on the Hope, was unnerving—it came as no surprise Zharris’s hand was poised over his phaser pistol.

She scanned every body they found, logging the results and set up her tricorder to run the results through the records. There were similarities to the Marburg virus from Earth as well as Rigellian blood fever and the Idorian red plague, though none were a match. What was worrying that it had seemed to effortlessly jump from species to species without any difficulties, which raised the worrying prospect that this was engineered. However, that just raised more questions, such as by whom and to what ends?

Her mind was going through all the possibilities, as well as putting together who from her staff of researchers and forensic specialist she’d need, that she almost walked into Zharris. She managed to stop in time and looked to see that they were at the entrance to sickbay, the doors or which were covered in bloody handprints of at least five different colours. Though his face wasn’t capable of expressing emotions as a human might, she could see the look of apprehension in his large yellow eyes.

Taking a steadying breath, she stepped towards the doors, the sensors registered her approach and whispered open. She stopped. Rooted to the spot in the doorway, her eyes darted around the room as she took in the horrendous mess that they’d stumbled into. Every bed was occupied, the patients were like all those they’d found elsewhere, all the monitors wailed the same steady pitch, whilst on the deck were the medics who had collapsed as they worked.

Slowly, she forced her legs to work, going further into the ward that was now a morgue. Zharris followed, just as reluctantly.

She went over to the nearest biobed, staring at the Tellarite woman who couldn’t have been much older than twenty-five. After a moment, Nguyen switched off the monitor and then pulled the blanket up over the younger woman’s prone head. At the next bed, her teammate followed her example. They carried on until all the monitors were quiet, there was nothing more they could do for them.

“I…I’d better have a look at their logs and records, make sure their transferred back to the ship.”

“Understood. I’ll go and check the rooms on the opposite side of the corridor.”

As they Rescue Tech left, she bent over the main workstation and got to work. Luckily, it didn’t take long, despite the situation the ship’s surgeon was methodical and had documented everything that had happened onboard, backing up all his data just to make certain that someone would find it and put it to use. She flagged it as priority and informed Rellon to get it sent back to the Hope ASAP. Zharris returned as she logged off the system then glanced at her gloved hands, which were covered in blood from the controls—somehow she hadn’t noticed until now.

“We better press on, Crewman.”

* * * * *
 
Inside the aft cargo bays what remained of the Walkabout’s crew were huddled together in clusters. They’d fled there as the disease that had gripped the ship had spread, being the section that was the furthest from inhabited areas where all the bodies had piled up and the chance of being infected was at its highest. Of course, that precaution wasn’t foolproof as any of them could have it and not know, they’d only show symptoms after five days, during which time it was at its most infectious.

Cargo Master Kyle Lasseter had seen what had happened to all those who’d been infected, had seen the fear that it had caused. The first case had been five days ago, since then they’d lost so many people, it had spread faster than anything the doctors onboard had heard of and everything they’d tried had failed. As the infection had spread, he’d sat in on all the department head briefings as they slowly discovered just how bad things were. He’d been present when Captain Borch had made the decision to stop the ship on the edge of the system K-2177, refusing to take the ship to Ferrus Prime and put the thousands of colonists there at risk. Though the Captain had been admitted to sickbay just hours later and died the following day, his orders stood. As with all the others, Lasseter was left to wonder if First Mate Castle had been able to get a distress call out, or if anyone would respond to it.

From the far side of the bay, the heavy doors rumbled open. Everyone turned to look, some clutched their loved ones close to them, others reached for phasers they’d brought for protection. No one was left alive outside of those doors, so whoever was opening them was either a rescue team come to help them or raiders looking for an easy score.

Four figures came into view and the doors opened, all dressed in Starfleet issue yellow hazmat suits. The leader of the group, a Megarite with a domed, water-filled helmet, stepped through.

“Please do not be afraid, we’re from the hospital ship Hope. We’re here to help you.”

Lasseter, the last surviving department head, took a breath and approached their rescuers, followed by a few others. He was surprised that Starfleet had sent a fully-fledged medical ship to help them, he’d been unaware there were any in the sector, but if anyone could figure out just what the contagion was, it would be them.

He stopped a few meters from them. “Thank you for coming, I’m Cargo Master Kyle Lasseter.”

“Chief Medical Officer Monsoon. We have a team searching the ship for any other survivors—”

“You won’t find any,” he interrupted.

“If they’re not in here, they’re dead,” added one of the colonists beside him.

“Can you really help us?” asked another.

“Please, you’ve got to get us out of here!” came a desperate plea.

A few more of the colonists risked the proximity to others and began to gather around the four Starfleeters. Lasseter noticed two of their rescuers grip the handles of their sidearms as the beginnings of a mob formed—if they were overwhelmed then there was the chance their suits would be compromised, exposing them.

Monsoon raised his arms. “Please, try to remain calm. I know you’ve all been through a traumatic event, but you need to stay calm. We’ve set up a quarantine area on our ship and will be beaming you over shortly, we’ll then begin taking samples and testing you all for this disease. If you’re clear, then we can get you set up in temporary accommodation, but we will need your co-operation and help to get this done as quickly as possible.”

Lasseter turned back to the terrified and angry colonists. “You heard the Doctor, they’re going to get us out of here, so be patient.”

The growing swell of people eased and slowly started to disperse, though a few stayed close by, some casting suspicious glances at the rescue team.

“Thank you, Mr Lasseter. Can I ask, did any of your medical staff survive?”

He shook his head. “They were hit hard. We only have a few people trained as emergency medtechs, but they weren’t involved in any of the work going on in sickbay.”

“I see. We’re accessing your computer records and logs, so we can start to piece together just what we’re dealing with, but if you and your people could provide any details on a timeline of events that would be—”

“Frak! He’s got it!”

“Get him out of here!”

“He’ll kill us all!”

The chorus of shouts and screams started in the far corner, but the effect was instantaneous, rippling through the crowd like a stone tossed into a still pool. The tense anxiety that had been the prevailing feeling among the survivors turned to terror, they pushed and scrambled to get away from whoever was showing symptoms. They were all heading for the entrance, threatening to overwhelm those that stood there.

Without a word, the Megarite burst forward into the crowd, heading in the opposite direction they were heading.

“Doctor!” one of his team, a Meshinite woman, shouted after him as she gripped her phaser.

She and the other two followed after him. Luckily, the colonists and crew were so panicked that they paid them little attention, all wanting to get as far away from the newest infected as they possibly could. Lasseter managed to slip through the waves of people in pursuit, he wasn’t about to go and help but he needed to see who it was.

On the other side of the throng of bodies, he stopped and watched as the doctor reached one of the colonists, a sandy-haired human man in his mid-twenties whose nose was bleeding profusely. Beside him a woman of a similar age, her belly heavy with child, had her arms wrapped around his shoulders as she sobbed. Monsoon crouched down before him, scanner in hand. The others neared him seconds later, though whilst one of the humans went to help the doctor the other two members of the team kept their distance. Though they were too far to hear, the aquatic alien looked to the Meshinite and issued and order, gesturing to the colonists. She nodded and headed back towards them, the last member of the rescue team following her.

The golden skinned woman stopped a few meters from the cowering crowd. “Attention please,” she bellowed. The cries and shouts eased to whimpers and murmuring. “Thank you. We’re going to begin emergency evacuation. We’ll only be taking yourselves over, no possessions until we can fully decontaminate them. As Doctor Monsoon said, you’ll be beamed into quarantine until everyone can be tested for signs of this disease.

“I need you all to organise yourselves into groups of thirty, so we can begin beaming you out. Everyone clear?” she asked, her tone stern.

There was a muttering of acknowledgements and nodding of heads. Lasseter looked from the woman managing the masses to the doctor treating the latest victim of the contagion, he had to admit these people were good. If there was anyone that could figure this out, it would be the experts on a Starfleet medical ship.

* * * * *

Chief Medical Officer’s log, supplemental.

The survivors of the
Walkabout are under maximum quarantine and testing is underway to see how many have been exposed. The man presenting symptoms in the cargo bay is deteriorating rapidly, whilst his wife is now displaying the early symptoms. We are treating both with broad spectrum antivirals, though they do not appear to be having any effect—given what we’ve learnt from the transports medical logs.

Doctor Nguyen and her staff are working through the data retrieved and samples collected to try and identify just what we’re dealing with, so far this virus doesn’t match anything in our records though there are similarities to several other haemorrhagic viruses. She has managed to piece together a timetable of events, with the first patient being admitted to sickbay five days ago with profuse nosebleeds, headaches and numbness in the extremities. Within six hours there were several dozen cases, and after a day there were over one hundred and fifty patients. The first patient died thirty hours after entering sickbay. Since that first day, there was a steady increase of cases, with the crew doing all they could to delay the spread, enforcing a lockdown of all non-essential personnel and colonists, though their measures appear to have been too little too late. Panic set in and those who were still healthy barricaded themselves in the aft cargo bay, as far away from the sick and the dead as they could get.

Whilst we may not know just what this virus is, we can determine that it is capable of jumping species easily and affects them all in an almost identical manner. After initial symptoms present themselves the patient dies between twenty and thirty-five hours later. Due to these factors, I theorise that this is an artificially created contagion.


* * * * *

“So how bad is it?” Lenx asked, her three hands clasped on the tabletop.

On the monitors Monsoon, who had opted to remain in the quarantine section to keep working, shook his head with a forlorn look on his. ”Testing shows that there are fifty-two people infected, though yet to present symptoms. Mr Daniels died at oh-four-twenty this morning from multiple organ failure and internal bleeding, his wife is now unconscious and deteriorating rapidly.”

“What about her baby?” enquired M’Benga.

”We performed an emergency c-section, but the child was stillborn. Initial tests show it was due to the virus.”

In the briefing room with Lenx and M’Benga were Rellon, Chief SAR-Ops Officer th’Khosh and Commander Emanuel, the ships Head of Nursing, whilst Monsoon and Nguyen were present on the screen. They were all quiet for a moment, taking stock of the situation they were facing. With only a day or two before those infected started to succumb to the virus and died, they didn’t have much time to work on the cure. What normally took weeks to months to formulate, refine, test, and dispense they had to try and do in fifty hours. The feat was near enough impossible, even with the resources they had at their disposal on the Hope, which meant that those fifty-two colonists would likely suffer the same fate as their friends and colleagues.

Lenx closed her eyes for a moment, giving a silent prayer to the Goddesses. She had served in Starfleet for eighty years, thirty as a captain with the last decade spent on the Hope, but even in all that time she’d never gotten used to losing people—if the day ever came that it got easier, she knew that was when it time to retire. When they’d received their orders those people in quarantine had already been infected, so going in the odds were stacked against them.

“Do all you can to make sure they’re comfortable, Doctor,” she instructed unnecessarily.

”I will, Captain.”

“Doctor Nguyen, have you got anything new to add?”

”Captain, I believe this virus is engineered. Even accounting for some major mutations, it isn’t like anything in our entire database. It looks as though someone has taken some of the most deadly viruses out there and spliced them together.”

“Who’d be able to do something like that?”

”I could,” the Head of Research admitted. ”I could also name three or four others in the Federation that could do it, but there’s no telling how many from other species would have the equipment and expertise to carry it out.”

“Understood.” Lenx supressed a shiver. “I don’t want to keep either of you, so if you have nothing more to add I’ll let you get back to your work.”

Neither did and both promptly signed out of the meeting. It was at times like this that she felt rudderless, as there was nothing she could do to help the experts, other than ensure they had all the resources they could possibly need. It was a feeling she’d never liked but one that was, at times, inescapable.

She turned back to those in the room. “Thoughts?”

“It has to be the Klingons!” announced th’Khosh. “They poisoned that shipment of quadrotriticale bound for Sherman’s Planet last year.”

“But they just targeted the grain, to keep it from growing and poison the ground to derail colony operations on Sherman’s,” M’Benga countered. “If they had something like this at their disposal, surely they would’ve used it instead.”

“They’re testing different chemical warfare methods.”

“If,” Lenx interjected before things got heated, “we were close to Klingon space, it would be a possibility, but we’re three hundred light-years from their border. There’s no advantage for the Empire to strike here. The Federation is not without its enemies, but something like this is paramount to a declaration of war.”

“I’ve gone through the ship’s logs,” Rellon began. “Since they left their last port of call, before the final push to Ferrus, they’ve had no contact from any other ship or stopped at any other station or planet. So this virus has been with them for a while, but only became active in the last week. That sounds like a planned attack to me.”

“Why just target a colony ship with less than nine hundred people, when the world they’re heading to has twelve thousand?” posed M’Benga.

“Some kind of failure with their delivery method? It was released too early.”

“We can go around in circles with the options, making theories and conspiracies with no real basis in fact. For now, we have to focus on what we know and take it from there.”

The officers all paused. Any of them could be right or they could all be way off the mark, there was no way to know, indeed they might never find out exactly what happened here—though if Lenx knew Monsoon and Nguyen, they’d give it all they had to unlock the mystery.

She turned to Emanuel. The Head Nurse had three decades of experience under her belt, over half of which she’d spent on the Hope, as such there wasn’t much she hadn’t had to deal with over that time. Due to her service and position aboard, she’d gained a moniker used centuries ago on Earth for senior nurses, one that everyone addressed her as.

“Matron, what arrangements need to be made for those who tested negative?”

“As this virus is something of an unknown, Doctor Monsoon is concerned about releasing them from quarantine—just in case our tests missed something. As such, we’re converting the isolation rooms into makeshift accommodation. They’ll be isolated from the positive cases, separated from the other survivors just in case there are any more carriers. We’ll carry out further tests and have them all under observation.”

“If you need any further help with that, we can get additional resources down to assist.”

“I’ll let you know if we do, Captain.”

“I’ve been in contact with Lambda Station, they’re the closest outpost with a dedicated biohazard care facility, so they’re ready to receive the survivors. They’re also getting a pair of tugs ready to retrieve the Walkabout for full decontamination at the station.” She looked from M’Benga to th’Khosh. “Before we get underway, I want a quarantine marker buoy attached to that ship.”

“I’ve already got a crew prepping one now, ma’am,” the XO confirmed.

“Good. Let us just hope that no one else has to deal with this contagion again.”

* * * * *

In the privacy of his isolation room and using the spike that had been hidden in the heel of his boot, the man using the name Kyle Lasseter was able to patch into the computer of the Hope without being detected. ‘Lasseter’ had seen that they’d attached a buoy to the Walkabout, which meant they’d be preparing to get underway.

He smiled to himself and subtly tapped a control on his wrist communicator.

The spike immediately overwrote the cameras watching him, replaying footage they’d filmed of him lying on his bed, whoever might’ve been watching him wouldn’t see or hear anything he was doing. ‘Lasseter’ took his wristcom off and affixed the last few components, likewise secreted on his person, that would allow him to send a scrambled signal.

“This is Mr Grey. Phase two complete. Eighty-three-point four percent of test subjects infected.”

”Understood. When can we expect your full report?” came the monotone response.

“We’re being taken to Lambda Station; I’ll submit my report upon arrival.”

”Recommendations?”

“Proceed to phase three.”

* * * * *

END
 
"Wow," seems to be the only word that I can think of to carry along my feelings about this story. Great work. I noticed a couple of punctuation errors. Other than that, it'll be difficult for me to decide who to vote for when it's time to vote. Keep up the great work, Mister Sinclair.
 
Very well written, Bry! You definitely nailed the challenge theme.
First, I was intrigued that the powers that be considered a "Hope" spin-off with Dr. M'Benga. Clever starting point for your story.
As usual, you put together an interesting and eclectic crew mix from multiple alien races. I don't know anyone who does that better. I tend to fall in the trap of a Vulcan in the main mix, with a few aliens in the background.
The contagion sounds absolutely ghastly! . . . Something akin to Ebola on steroids. You certainly portrayed well the horror and panic of the poor victims. The Hope crew seems capable and highly competent, if baffled by the virus.
And we learn that, yes, this is an engineered virus deliberately set loose by the mysterious Mr. Grey. Is he a Klingon disguised as a Human? A shape-shifter? Or something more sinister - a Human working with some shadowy organization?
I hope you will pick up this story beyond the April/May challenge . . . good grief, what a cliff-hanger!
 
Very well written, Bry! You definitely nailed the challenge theme.
First, I was intrigued that the powers that be considered a "Hope" spin-off with Dr. M'Benga. Clever starting point for your story.
I would've loved to have seen that series, can only imagine what might've happened!

As usual, you put together an interesting and eclectic crew mix from multiple alien races. I don't know anyone who does that better. I tend to fall in the trap of a Vulcan in the main mix, with a few aliens in the background.
I love a good Vulcan, always seem to end up including one myself (on Hopeship that is Crewman V'Laar, SAR-Ops alpha team engineer).

The contagion sounds absolutely ghastly! . . . Something akin to Ebola on steroids. You certainly portrayed well the horror and panic of the poor victims. The Hope crew seems capable and highly competent, if baffled by the virus.
This is the third draft of this story, starting off at a much larger and more overwhelming scale before I downsized it. Whilst Trek has lots of advanced technology, when they're faced with such a narrow window of opportunity and a pathogen that baffles them then there will be times they can't make the connections fast enough to do anything.

And we learn that, yes, this is an engineered virus deliberately set loose by the mysterious Mr. Grey. Is he a Klingon disguised as a Human? A shape-shifter? Or something more sinister - a Human working with some shadowy organization?

I hope you will pick up this story beyond the April/May challenge . . . good grief, what a cliff-hanger!
We shall see...
 
I really enjoyed this story, and the degree to which we get to know the various crew members during its events. I appreciated how there was no happy ending, and no easy answers were found. Hope's crew was thrust into a situation already in progress, and despite their best efforts, the prognosis for the survivors from the transport are not good.
 
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