Started reading it yesterday before bed, got to about page 50. So far it's kind of annoying, and I'm not sure I'll finish it. Everybody's so out-of-character. I can't picture any of the TOS characters speaking some of the dialogue in this book. And it's lame for Kirk to be getting all excited about that new warp drive test. Then sulu, "sitting at his post like some smiling Asian god" (Lol), does some kind of "victory loop" when they're approaching the Starbase.
Maybe the "asian god" thing was from the Klingon Gambit, which I've also been reading. Can't remember. Anyway, I like all of the other Diane Duane books I've read, so I think I'll probably ride it out and see if I end up loving it after all.
