Chapter 9 Earth Mexico City Vulcan Consulate A.D. 2374 Shantok’s head turned, and her dark eyes traveled from the floor and upwards to hold...
Thanks for creating this thread. I think this is an elephant that deserves more attention.
I thought this was a great what if? tale. And not completely implausible. Also, I felt the rendering of Jellico was pretty spot on, and I say...
Sure! But I didn’t mean to create extra work for you.
I guess we could say that Aubrey is a pain in the ass at any age!
It's just a jump to the left... I'm a big time travel nerd which means I'm fussy about how it's done. Executing the concept in the right way...
There's a lot here to catch up on. But I just finished your first entry, "Haunted". Great intro to the ship and crew with lots of layered...
They trotted forward for another five minutes before arriving at one of the few permanent structures in the immediate area. It was a weathered,...
Chapter 8 From somewhere and somewhen else, the Lethean observed. He detested humans, a feeling shared by most of his kind. If one doubted...
Much appreciated!
YEAH, so.... Seems like the crew of Reykjavík isn't getting a fair shake. I mean, having to fight enemies from the future? Not very sporting. But...
You have my respect. I’ve gained a new appreciation for anyone having to navigate vision loss on a permanent basis. I wish you well. And thank...
Hey, just a quick note to anyone following Inevitibiliy. Don't worry, I haven't walked away from the story. In fact, before I began posting, I...
Chapter 7 Earth Mexico City Vulcan Consulate A.D. 2374 When Commander Shantok first appeared through the open archway in the consulate’s...
Chapter 6 Continued Ultimately it was Dravis who broke his own rule of silence. “I don’t understand,” He muttered. “How did he get in here? The...
Chapter 6 Earth A.D. 1975 Two figures emerged from the arches, morphing from light into flesh and blood. They were both clad in black...
Chapter 5 Earth A.D 1975 Jason decided to take another look. The brightness coming from the basement was still intense, but manageable....
Chapter 4 Earth North American Continent Wednesday July 23rd, 1975 “Man, so you just ran into Rhonda yesterday by accident?” Jason...
Some great info! We”ll have to assume those younger admirals in Trek were stellar exceptions, then.
Great feedback, as always! You both raised an interesting point concerning O'Toole's age. I actually hadn't given it much thought when I wrote her...
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