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Star Trek: TNG Rewatch: 4x11 "Data's Day"

Trekker4747

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Jeyl[/i] is having personal issues and is unable to at this time continue with the rewatch thread, I've volunteered to take over in his place until he's able to return. I will post future threads sometime during the day on Thursday given that's when we're starting. Any suggestions on input/formating will be welcomed.

He left off with season 4's "The Loss" which, according to DVD/BD order, puts "Data's Day" up next.

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Data's Day takes place over the course of a "typical" day as chronicled by Data in a correspondence to Bruce Maddox (who tried to gain "ownership" of sorts over Data back in season 2, challenging Data's "rights" as a sentient being.) We begin as Data ends his "night watch" on the bridge and end with Data starting night watch at the end. Through the course of the day Data prepares for his role as Father of the Bride in a wedding service between Chief O'Brien and Keiko, Data learning how to dance in preparation for the wedding reception and having to try and act as a liaison between Keiko and O'Brien as the former gets wedding-day jitters. Meanwhile, the ship is transporting a Vulcan ambassador to Romulan space for diplomatic negotiations. Needless to say, everything doesn't go greatly as planned.

I've always found this to be an interesting episode as it the only episode, I believe, where the events in it are entirely narrated by a character giving us some insight into just how life aboard a starship may very-well be like. Made more interesting as the episode follows Data who gives us some insight into how he thinks of humans, human interactions and the various other events that happen over the course of the day.

Largely a "bottle" episode it manages to pull off the day's events pretty well. Probably least interesting is the marriage between Keiko and O'Brien as it seemed like a plot-point that wasn't much needed for a secondary character and a new character, though both would play larger roles in future episodes as well as in Deep Space Nine. Sometimes it can be nice to get to see some of the life of other characters other than the main ones but I'm not sure it was needed here.

The secondary plot centered around the Vulcan ambassador who turns out to be a Romulan spy is more interesting with a solution that comes probably too quickly and seems to me like something that should have been noticed as it was happening. We're often told how safe the transporters are and how very, very, unlikely accidents are given the transporters and all of the levels of redundancies they have. The crew seems to quick to accept this as a "transporter accident: when it initially happens, granted they were under some pressure from the Romulan commander to leave The Neutral Zone/Romulan Space.

Brent Spiner does a good job with Data in this episode but there's a few moments that strike me as "out of character" for a supposedly emotionless android. At one point Data stairs questioningly at the Vulcan Ambassador/Romulan Spy's headdress which it seems to me Data wouldn't do to a dignitary and at another point Data does a double-take at an alien woman getting her hair-died in the ship's salon. Quibbles, sure, but they stood out to me as odd.

The time-line in the episode also seems odd to me. It's his wedding day and O'Brien is on duty to run the transporters? He's Father of the Bride, and worked the night-shift, and Data is on duty? Worf, Riker and the rest of the senior staff are all attending the wedding and they're all on/off duty throughout the day? Granted, they're transporting a dignitary to a tense meeting and they're all officers on a ship with a militaristic sense of order but it seems to me things could have been planned better. All and all it seems like quite a bit happens over the span of 12 to 16 hours.

Some great moments:

Data and Crusher's tap dancing on the holodeck.

The "counseling session" between Data and Troi where Data admits he's thought about one day marrying.

Data having his FotB dance with Keiko during the wedding reception.

Picard welcoming the ship's newest passenger aboard. (A newborn baby in the ship's nursery.)

Great Line:

"I may be pursuing an untamed ornithoid without cause." - Data, suspecting he's on a wild goose chase trying to figure out the transporter accident that had supposedly killed the Vulcan ambassador.
 
Poor O'Brien: a cancelled wedding and a dead ambassador on the same day.

On a more visual note, this episode shows well why the "improved" make-up for the Romulans was a bad idea. The Romulans were presented in Balance of Terror (an episode strongly connected to this one) as visually identical to the Vulcans, not necessarily as a parent species. That was supposed to be the point behind a possible Romulan infiltration (or a Vulcan inflitration like in Gambit). So what the result? The only TNG Romulan without the forehead.

However, it's a good episode and with some pretty funny moments.
 
Yeah, this was a pretty fun episode, as I recall. Sort of like those M*A*S*H episodes where some character would be 'narrating' a letter home. I always did wonder how long those letters would end up being, based on the script segments! Was this episode the first time we met Keiko? I remember her coming out of nowhere...

I hope all is well with Jeyl. Best to him, and whatever his woes be. :techman: Your filling in for him reminds me of the 80's, when Edward Woodward took ill, and Robert Mitchum took his place for a while starring in The Equalizer! :)
 
Yeah, this was a pretty fun episode, as I recall. Sort of like those M*A*S*H episodes where some character would be 'narrating' a letter home. I always did wonder how long those letters would end up being, based on the script segments! Was this episode the first time we met Keiko? I remember her coming out of nowhere...

I hope all is well with Jeyl. Best to him, and whatever his woes be. :techman: Your filling in for him reminds me of the 80's, when Edward Woodward took ill, and Robert Mitchum took his place for a while starring in The Equalizer! :)

Second that, and oh, how I looked forward to watching The Eqaulizer!!!" ...sooo good...:techman: ...that said, I am hard-pressed to think of another "under-story" of a character in a series that does better than the various glimpses and lingers we were afforded in the character of Data...what an utterly fine job the writers and directors did, and a superlative acting effort recorded by Spiner...jesusgod, I hope he realizes the magnitude...

...and, no, in cases like this, it is NOT just a show!...

...can I get an "Amen"...oh, yeah...
 
Yeah, this was a pretty fun episode, as I recall. Sort of like those M*A*S*H episodes where some character would be 'narrating' a letter home. I always did wonder how long those letters would end up being, based on the script segments! Was this episode the first time we met Keiko? I remember her coming out of nowhere...

I hope all is well with Jeyl. Best to him, and whatever his woes be. :techman: Your filling in for him reminds me of the 80's, when Edward Woodward took ill, and Robert Mitchum took his place for a while starring in The Equalizer! :)

Second that, and oh, how I looked forward to watching The Eqaulizer!!!" ...sooo good...:techman: ...that said, I am hard-pressed to think of another "under-story" of a character in a series that does better than the various glimpses and lingers we were afforded in the character of Data...what an utterly fine job the writers and directors did, and a superlative acting effort recorded by Spiner...jesusgod, I hope he realizes the magnitude...

...and, no, in cases like this, it is NOT just a show!...

...can I get an "Amen"...oh, yeah...

Yeah! I used to plan my schedule around watching The Equalizer...definitely appointment tv then! That show could be so delightfully creepy, couldn't it? :) McCall took out some real dirt bags...you really wished he existed!
 
Yeah, this was a pretty fun episode, as I recall. Sort of like those M*A*S*H episodes where some character would be 'narrating' a letter home. I always did wonder how long those letters would end up being, based on the script segments! Was this episode the first time we met Keiko? I remember her coming out of nowhere.

Yeah, this is first time we meet Keiko and, apparently, she was friends with Data and he helped hook her and O'Brien up.
 
Brent Spiner does a good job with Data in this episode but there's a few moments that strike me as "out of character" for a supposedly emotionless android.

Data has "out of character" moments in almost every episode. Good thing too, otherwise his character would be pretty boring.

For example, in Contagion, he has to toss Geordi from a console because it was shorting out. Data winces after realizing he used too much force. Then in A Matter of Perspective, his reaction to Picard's painting is pretty funny as he realizes how sloppy it is. :lol:

I find Data no less emotional or quirky as any other character on the show, despite him reportedly having no emotions. I appreciate every ounce of Spiner's performance throughout TNG. The show could have been pretty dull without him.
 
Yeah, this was a pretty fun episode, as I recall. Sort of like those M*A*S*H episodes where some character would be 'narrating' a letter home. I always did wonder how long those letters would end up being, based on the script segments! Was this episode the first time we met Keiko? I remember her coming out of nowhere.

Yeah, this is first time we meet Keiko and, apparently, she was friends with Data and he helped hook her and O'Brien up.
I suppose she was created to compensate for serious flaw. The presence of families on starships was supposed to be an innovation of TNG, but none of the main characters had a "complete" family (two single-parents, that's it).
 
Our introduction to Keiko is her messing up a wedding, and making Data break it off for her, what a ....... Thankfully that character was scarce in DS9. I found her more annoying than Lwaxana and Alexander.
 
Our introduction to Keiko is her messing up a wedding, and making Data break it off for her, what a ....... Thankfully that character was scarce in DS9. I found her more annoying than Lwaxana and Alexander.

She was portrayed rather harshly in pretty much every episode we see her in across both series. In the next episode we see kinda getting all bent out of shape and almost disgusted over the idea of O'Brien's mother (or grandmother) preparing meals with actual raw meat "She touched actual meat with her hands?!"
 
Our introduction to Keiko is her messing up a wedding, and making Data break it off for her, what a ....... Thankfully that character was scarce in DS9. I found her more annoying than Lwaxana and Alexander.

Hmm...you know something? You're right! :lol:
 
Thanks everyone for your kind words and thank you Trekker for picking up the slack. Very nice write up!

One thing I liked about this episode was how it followed up on the ending to Season 2's "The Measure of a Man". Despite Data opposing Bruce Maddox from treating him like property, he still encouraged Maddox to continue his research. In this episode, we learn that not only does Data not bear any ill will towards Maddox, but also contributing to his research. Nice touch.

And while I do like Keiko's character in general, I do agree that she can be aggravating at times. I think this problem stems mostly from the writers inability to write the female portion of actual couples in a realistic way. They just come off as very self-assertive in an overbearing kind of way even though the story treats them as though they were in the right. They're not. Even Dax from DS9 falls into that trap with Worf on occasions, most aggravating example being that mess of an episode on Risa. She complains Worf's too controlling even though she comes off as ridiculously controlling to him on Risa all while the episode is beating us over the head in telling us that sheas the character we're supposed to be sympathetic towards.
 
Thanks everyone for your kind words and thank you Trekker for picking up the slack. Very nice write up!

No problem man, hope things get better for you.

And while I do like Keiko's character in general, I do agree that she can be aggravating at times. I think this problem stems mostly from the writers inability to write the female portion of actual couples in a realistic way. They just come off as very self-assertive in an overbearing kind of way even though the story treats them as though they were in the right. They're not. Even Dax from DS9 falls into that trap with Worf on occasions, most aggravating example being that mess of an episode on Risa. She complains Worf's too controlling even though she comes off as ridiculously controlling to him on Risa all while the episode is beating us over the head in telling us that sheas the character we're supposed to be sympathetic towards.

I agree that the writers struggled many times when writing female characters and Keiko in this episode is a pretty good example of that. The episode pretty much starts off right away with giving us no reason to like her as the very fist thing we see her do is essentially dump O'Brien, a character we know and have seen several times over the past few seasons, at the altar for essentially no clear reason whatsoever. Then she gets pretty strongly defensive when Data tries to "counsel" her on the decision and then by the end of the episode she's done a quick 180 on her position. It doesn't make much sense I feel like we missed something. Was she already pregnant at this point and were her emotions getting to her? It's all very odd.

One episode I really liked her in was Season 5's "Disaster" where she goes into labor in 10-Forward under Worf's watch as the ship recovers from a disaster. The interaction between her and Worf really worked there.

I've not watched DS9 in quite some time so I don't much recall her there other than trial separation between her and O'Brien when she gets a job on Bajor.

I do agree Dax's actions with Worf on Risa are odd and, well, I kinda agree with Worf that Dax's actions on Risa were a bit extreme, ditto for another DS9 episode and how Dax was behaving at her bacherlorette party. Trek writers, perhaps, weren't always great at writing for female characters (I don't think quite as bad as is sometimes presented) and chinks in the armor do show from time to time. This episode, in Keiko, is probably a good example of that. Though I do think Crusher and Troi were both treated well in this episode in the rolls they had in the story.
 
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Keiko was funny in Disaster playing off Worf, and she was pretty good in Power Play, but that's about it. Oh, and she was morbidly fun in that one DS9 episode where she's possessed by a Pah-Wraith and she keeps nearly killing herself.

When O'Brien pretty much confirms that he likes Julian more than his wife.... I think the audience totally understands. :lol:

I wouldn't say Trek couldn't write female characters well, just certain kinds. In early TNG, they sucked writing all women - pretty much all Bechdel Test failures, but it eventually got better. Troi started getting some decent episodes, and the writing staff created one of my favorite secondary characters, Ro. Kira was also an excellent character (except for the Odo romance which I hated). I'm thankful Forbes didn't accept the DS9 role because I liked what they did with Kira better. Not gonna speak to Voyager and Enterprise's treatment of women because I hate those shows...
 
Data's Day is definitely one of the best bottle episodes.

My favorite moment for Keiko was when she was fighting for education in the DS9 season 1 finale.

There are two well written female characters in Star Trek. Kira and Seven.

Maybe 2 1/2, Janeway sometimes.
 
There are two well written female characters in Star Trek... Seven.


Ehhhhh.... I may give you some push back on that. She certainly had her good and well written moments for sure but a lot of it is undercut by the ridiculous catsuit and heels they had her in.
 
Not a big deal to me, but if other STNG fans want to keep track of this rewatch better, wouldn't it be better to do it all under one thread? Just a helpful thought.

Also hope things look up Jeyl. Hate to hear of anyone having a tough time.

Data's Day: It always amazes when a few people dislike this episode. It's so amiable, well paced, and full of good character moments it's almost bullet proof for dislike.

RAMA
 
Not a big deal to me, but if other STNG fans want to keep track of this rewatch better, wouldn't it be better to do it all under one thread? Just a helpful thought.

Eh, it'd be easy for things to get lost in the clutter as people phase out of one episode, don't know when the next one was started on, mixing discussion on episodes, etc. I think doing a new thread for each new episode is fine, it's worked for the last 50-some, don't see a reason why change now.
 
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