Spoilers TF: A Ceremony of Losses by David Mack Review Thread

Discussion in 'Trek Literature' started by Sho, Oct 20, 2013.

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  1. Corran Horn

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    Supposedly there'll be elections in 60 days. The Andorian blockade does seem nonsensical but we've seen things just as idiotic in the real world I suppose. When by-the-book Bowers is complaining you know there's a problem.

    On the flimsiness remark above - I meant "Crimson Shadow" with its similar pagecount, of course...
     
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  2. Sci

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    I'm not sure what you mean. Frankly, none of Ishan's broad policies -- canceling the treaty with Cardassia and going back on the agreement to withdraw Starfleet from Cardassian territory; instituting a trade embargo on the Andorian Empire; ordering Starfleet to prevent classified Federation secrets from being given to the Andorian government -- are in any way illegal or dictatorial per se. (I suppose one might ask whether or not instituting a trade embargo on a foreign state would require the approval of the full Federation Council, but nothing in A Ceremony of Losses establishes whether this happened one way or the other.)

    Ishan did issue several illegal orders -- both by circumventing the Starfleet chain of command, and by ordering an illegal incursion into foreign territory to apprehend Bashir and Ezri. These kinds of crimes may hypothetically lead to prosecution, although such a scenario depends on this information finding its way into the hands of a prosecutor and a grand jury willing to indict.

    But, in general, no, nothing about Ishan's broader policies are "dictatorial." They are all legally legitimate exercises of power by the head of government, and would be recognized as such under current law today in even the most libertarian of liberal democracies. Withdrawing from treaties, setting foreign policy, and securing classified information are all widely understood to be legitimate powers of a sovereign states's executive, and do not constitute an usurpation of the legitimate authorities of a legislature or a violation of anyone's civil rights or liberties. Ishan's policies certainly reflect an authoritarian personality. And the motivations behind these policies and the manner in which they are executed do seem to represent a very belligerent agenda that may evolve eventually into one that moves closer to authoritarianism. But they don't actually constitute a breach of Federation law.

    Yet.
     
  3. JonoKyle

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    It will be interesting to see who ends up as the new president - three books in and we already have Ishan & Kellesar zh'Tarash as candidates, I wouldn't be surprised to see if Akaar & Cort Enaren end up as potential candidates before this is over, and there is always the chance due to his celebrity status Picard could end up as a candidate to challenge Ishan or even someone completely new turning up in the next couple of books. Definitely looking forward to see how this turns out.
     
  4. ICW

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    Loved this book. Phenomenal.
     
  5. Paper Moon

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    There have been broad hints from several people, IIRC, that The Fall was going to tie off the current 24th-century story, and send the books in a "new direction."

    So my money's on big changes:
    -Riker's getting promoted and he's staying there, probably on Earth, raising his family. Vale possibly ends up as CO of Titan, but it doesn't really matter, since I doubt we'll be seeing more Titan books after this.
    -Picard will either stay on the Enterprise or he'll be elected President.
    -If Picard isn't elected President, Akaar will be. We're seeing too much of his internal monologue otherwise.
    Look at the publication schedule for 2014. Voyager, Seekers and then a random assortment of other stories.

    I think that we are seeing the end of the continuous post-Nemesis epic. I think what we will see instead are
    sporadic stories focusing on individual characters set after The Fall (like Section 31: Disavowed, which will clearly focus on Bashir and probably Ezri and Sarina, or Light Fantastic, which we know focuses on Data), and other stories set during the shows, to feature the ensemble casts with which more readers are familiar. I suspect that Home Again will be a bit of a reunion story for the TNG cast, something like the Generations to Peaceable Kingdoms' "All Good Things."
    The exception to this, I think, will be the Voyager novels. I think those novels are seen as feasible because they feature all of the characters from the original show. With the other series, a new reader picks one up, and won't know half the characters.

    I also wonder if this is partly so that we don't run into the Hobus Supernova; I wonder if Pocket Books is hesitant to deal with anything overt from ST09.

    Also, finished the book last night. Outstanding. Will post more thoughts later.
     
  6. Markonian

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    That's horrible! I can't believe there could be an end. There are loads of dangling storylines from planet-of-the-week episodes that need to be resolved (the augments of Darwin station, post-Borg ravage survival of member species like Risians, artificial rights campaign, solanogen-based intruders, Nyberrite Alliance, Atlantis project on Earth, Venus's new moon, the Andorian transporter duplicates and on and on).

    In short, there are so many stories left to tell, to many places to re-/visit, so many character development arcs to continue, so many questions (Will Starfleet adopt the AGT-combadge as in VOY: Timeless?), and the great mysterious threshold: What lies beyond the year 2400? We know what STO did but there's still the Pocketverse vision to explore, the 'Path to 2409' in the Destiny-timeline.
     
  7. zarkon

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    I'd rather that was never referred to again to be honest
     
  8. CaffeineAddict

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    I hope that prediction is wrong, and we aren't about to see the end of the current continuity, as this has reignited my interest in trek lit. While I am very much looking forward to Seekers, Voyager and TOS novels hold pretty much no interest for me.
     
  9. Paper Moon

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    Oh, don't get me wrong! I don't think the current continuity will end. I just think the focus will shift from telling this big epic story in which each novel advances the whole story to smaller-scale, more nearly standalone novels that focus on individual stories that take place within the updated continuity. (See below.)

    You actually are making my point for me. There are all these dangling threads from the canon, but it's hard to address those when we have a more compelling and more immediate ongoing storyline like what we've got going now (a continuous epic that spans from Rashanar through [presumably] the election of Ishan Anjar's successor). I think future 24th-century novels will address those dangling threads, just without the pressure to tie them into a highly-cohesive larger narrative.

    Look at it this way: there is some expectation that all of the 24th-century novels we're getting lately will advance a large part of the epic narrative, both the components that originate in canon and those that originate in TrekLit. I know I was disappointed when Brinkmanship ignored most of the TrekLit characters on the Enterprise. We were all, I think, pretty frustrated when our first visit back to DS9 after The Soul Key told us very little beyond what Bashir and Ro were up to. And even the most recent "big novels" still weren't big enough to follow up on every storythread that's ongoing at the moment. There's just too much going on for new novels to both tell a self-contained story and to advance this huge epic. (This has been the source of some of the criticism of Revelation and Dust, for example.)

    If, on the other hand, TPTB definitively conclude The Epic, that removes the pressure to constantly advance the entire novelverse, and instead allows for more flexibility in storytelling. A novel like Zero Sum Game feels more appropriate in that context, which is what I think we'll get with Disavowed.

    Basically, since all the canon characters have been scattered across the universe, recent TrekLit entries have either had to be sweeping epics that include discussion of all or most of the canon characters (think Plagues of Night or Revelation and Dust) or they've had to be stories focused tightly on a small number of characters (think Brinkmanship or Rough Beasts of Empire). But neither approach has really been satisfactory, I think.

    Also, there's the issue of bringing in casual new readers. As great as A Ceremony of Losses was, think about how much has changed from 2375, and how much a new reader would potentially be missing out on:

    -new DS9 ("wait, what? the show ended with DS9 intact! long camera pullaway with a lonely trumpet and all that!!")
    -Captain Ro ("who the hell is she? wasn't she Maquis?")
    -Andorians and their four-gender-thing (very far removed from what we saw on Enterprise and TOS)
    -the Andorian reproductive crisis (although he basically does provide the needed background)
    -Sarina Douglas ("didn't she and Bashir break up?")
    -the Typhon Pact (again, he explains it, but it's still something to explain)
    -Captain Ezri Dax ("wait– she was really shy and awkward on the show… and it ended with her and Bashir sleeping together! what happened??")
    -quantum slipstream drive
    -Andor's secession
    -Bashir's actions on Salavat (yes, he explains, but I'm not sure how clear it is that what Bashir did was questionable [and what compelled him to do it at the time])

    What I'm getting is that it's a lot to take in. Yes, it can be managed, and many readers will roll with it, and some will go back and read the other books, but others will be turned away, feeling that the stories in the books are not recognizable (justifiably so). The longer The Epic continues, the deeper it will get, and the harder it will be to attract new readers.

    I guess what I'm predicting is an end to the tendency for the 24th-century novels to move in lockstep with crossovers and such. I think this will lead to more variety in stories and yet more freedom for authors to do what they want. I think we'll see some more stories set during the shows, and I think the stories set in the 2380s featuring the ensemble casts of each show will feel more serendipitous in their reunion quality (like Picard and Riker's reunion in Destiny).

    Sorry for the long post. Still don't think I'm quite explaining myself, but I gave it my best shot.
     
  10. Corran Horn

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    At this point we are so far removed from filmed Trek that characters that are pure literary creations have moved on to do other things.
     
  11. JD

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    I don't know. Some of the recent books have actually been making it onto the NYT Bestsellers List, something which Trek Lit hadn't done in quite sometime. I doubt they'd want to change things to much for fear of risking that.
     
  12. Paper Moon

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    Good point. Maybe they feel they've isolated a specific component of that, though? A Ceremony of Losses is one of the best-paced Trek novels ever. The Crimson Shadow is incredible prose. Maybe they feel that they can hold on to great writing but draw in yet more readers by tweaking the content a bit. Maybe they're aiming to get TrekLit more regularly and consistently on the Bestsellers List?
     
  13. Sci

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    I'm really not following what it is that makes you think Pocket is going to be bringing an end to TrekLit crossovers -- especially since they're already doing a mix of crossovers and standalones in the 24th Century, and especially since the crossovers are consistently strong sellers (Destiny, Typhon Pact, Cold Equations, and now The Fall all seem to have sold very well). What prompted this idea to you in the first place? On what are you basing your speculation?
     
  14. Paper Moon

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    "Typhon Pact" is a very broad umbrella term, and I'm not sure I've seen enough to assume that all the books that fall under that title have sold very well. But I digress.

    I certainly don't think they'll stop doing crossovers. (Though I really don't think Cold Equations counts as a crossover– that's just straight up TNG. And aside from PoN and RtD, most of the Typhon Pact novels have been restricted to a single series.)

    I'm frustrated because I'm having a very hard time explaining myself, so please bear with me.

    I think that you can describe all the following novels as forming one coherent narrative, a deeply complicated and intricate one, quite literally an epic that spans from 2378 through 2385 (coincidentally, the length of a live action TV series):

    A Time To Be Born
    A Time To Die
    A Time To Sow
    A Time To Harvest
    A Time To Love
    A Time To Hate
    A Time To Kill
    A Time To Heal
    A Time For War, A Time For Peace
    Star Trek Nemesis
    Death in Winter
    Taking Wing
    The Red King
    Articles of the Federation
    Orion's Hounds
    The Sword of Damocles
    Resistance
    Q&A
    Before Dishonor
    Greater Than The Sum
    Gods of Night
    Mere Mortals
    Lost Souls
    Losing The Peace
    A Singular Destiny
    Full Circle
    Unworthy
    Children of the Storm
    The Eternal Tide
    Watching The Clock
    Over A Torrent Sea
    Synthesis
    Seize The Fire
    Fallen Gods
    Paths Of Disharmony
    The Struggle Within
    Indistinguishable From Magic
    Zero Sum Game
    Rough Beasts of Empire
    Plagues of Night
    Raise the Dawn
    Brinkmanship
    The Persistence of Memory
    Silent Weapons
    The Body Electric
    The Stuff of Dreams
    Revelation and Dust
    The Crimson Shadow
    A Ceremony of Losses
    [The Poisoned Chalice]
    [Peaceable Kingdoms]
    And I think what we'll get after this will feel separate. Different. I don't know, I can't quite put my finger on it.

    Like, Vanguard ended. Definitively ended. Not just in story, but, from what I can tell, in the way stories set after it (ie. Seekers) will feel different.

    The DS9 relaunch definitely ended. Not definitively, not resoundingly, not satisfactorily, but it definitely ended. ZSG and everything after that feel different.

    I think, in a year's time, we will look at that list above, and the list of novels set after the end of Peaceable Kingdoms and say, yeah, that's where the Epic ended and we moved on to the next thing.

    I think that the stories we'll get that are chronologically after Peaceable Kingdoms will feel different in their focus. I think that, with the loss of Nan Bacco as a compelling, built-up character, there will be less incentive for stories to look at the Big Picture and therefore less of a pressure for every 24th-century novel to involve the threat of cataclysm.

    The following post-Destiny stories have put the threat of devastating war or an otherwise extraordinary change in galactic affairs on the table as a potential consequence:

    The Eternal Tide
    Watching The Clock
    Paths Of Disharmony
    Indistinguishable From Magic
    Zero Sum Game
    Plagues of Night
    Raise the Dawn
    Brinkmanship
    Silent Weapons
    The Body Electric
    Revelation and Dust
    A Ceremony of Losses


    That's a lot of the recent ones. And I'm not convinced that those high stakes are what makes the books sell. The Crimson Shadow is one of the best-selling works of TrekLit in recent memory, if I understand correctly, and its stakes are not that high, compared to others. Most of these novels have involved high stakes that were the results of situations that have their immediate origins in TrekLit, not onscreen.
    You asked what prompted this idea in the first place.

    Compare The Persistence of Memory with A Ceremony of Losses. The former references and draws on existing TrekLit, but draws itself largely from the onscreen canon. The latter is so far removed from what is depicted in the onscreen canon that it is nearly unrecognizable (see my list a few posts back, which I realize now neglects inclusion of the whole Meta-Genome and Vanguard connection). ACoL draws as much on TrekLit as it does on onscreen material, in my opinion.

    Personally, I love that. But I also am skeptical that it's feasible long-term. If the trend continues, future Trek tie-ins will be so far removed from canon material that they'll nearly be original fiction. And, sadly, I don't see that as a likely final outcome.

    I don't know, this is all feeling and speculation based on what I've seen. I think it's telling that the publication schedule for next year looks like this:

    • Jan: The Fall: Peaceable Kingdoms
    • Feb: Voyager: Protectors
    • Feb: Titan: Absent Enemies (ebook)
    • Mar: No Time Like The Past (TOS, with connection to a Voyager episode)
    • Apr: Enterprise: Rise of the Federation: Tower of Babel
    • Apr: Seasons of Light and Darkness (TOS movie era ebook)
    • May: Serpents in the Garden (TOS movie-era, sequel to TOS episode)
    • June: The Lost Era: One Constant Star
    • July: TNG: Light Fantastic (focusing on Data)
    • July: The More Things Change (TOS ebook)
    • Aug: Seekers 1
    • Sept: Seekers 2
    • Oct: [presumably a yet unannounced paperback]
    • Oct: Shadow of the Machine (TOS ebook, TMP era)
    • Nov: [presumably an unannounced paperback, possibly one of the two December releases moved up]
    • Dec: Section 31: Disavowed
    • Dec: TNG: Home Again
    • possibly an ebook novella by Paula M. Block and Terry J. Erdmann, possibly a DS9 book
    • possibly another Voyager book from Kirsten Beyer
    No Titan. Of the two TNG stories, one is focused on Data; from what we saw in Cold Equations, I think Data's story will be largely separate from stories featuring the crew of the Enterprise. And the other TNG novel has a rather sedate title, which may or may not mean anything. No Typhon Pact novels. A DS9 novel, yes, but one that will probably focus on a small number of characters who have connections to Section 31 (and probably whose fates are left unresolved in ACoL, per David Mack's saying that it will be a direct sequel to that novel). A variety of stories which exist between 2161 and 2385. Very little which which definitely pushes the narrative forward beyond 2385. And the few that may go beyond 2385 feel like they will be very intimate in their focus, which isn't something we've seen in a while, in my opinion.

    Again, I don't know. I just have a feeling that the stories are going to look and feel very different than they have for the last seven years or so.

    I'm probably totally wrong. But it just feels like we're building to a series finale, you know? And we have heard that the stories after The Fall will be taking the 24th-century line in a different direction. :shrug:

    EDIT: Apologies for the long, rambling post. Hope it makes sense to something other than me. These novels have been a part of my life for a long time now, and it just feels like they are coming to some sort of conclusion/big change. I think that's provoking some feelings that I'm having some trouble articulating. :p
     
  15. JD

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    While I do agree that we are about to see a big change, I doubt that it will be as drastic as you are predicting. I'll admit, I haven't read anything past the PoN/RtD two parter, but it does seem that they are starting to tie some of the current stuff up. I really if we do get a big change, it will just be a shift in the arc, like Borg Invasion and the beginning of the Typhon Pact, not necessarily the end of the arc.
     
  16. Sci

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    Both Christopher and David Mack have said that the books billed as Star Trek: Typhon Pact sold very well.

    I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I don't agree at all. These novels do not share anything in common other than being set in the same continuity; they don't share a common author, common characters, common setting, common themes, or common... anything other than all being in Pocket's version of the Star Trek Universe (what I call the Destinyverse).

    I don't see them as forming one coherent narrative (meaning, one single story), and I never did. I see them as installments in several different series that are all taking place and being published concurrent with one-another, that's all. I certainly don't see them all as one big "Epic."

    I don't agree at all. I see the DSN Relaunch as continuing, just under a different title. Zero Sum Game felt to me like a classic DSN story -- as does, for that matter, A Ceremony of Losses.

    Maybe. Or maybe the next President will end up being an even bigger supporting character.

    I think you're projecting a new development onto something that's been a longstanding Trek practice. Star Trek has often had major stakes in the form of the potential for interstellar war or interplanetary/interstellar cataclysms.
     
  17. DarkHorizon

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    TBH, I've had a similar feeling about where the 24th century series will go following The Fall. There have been several statements from the authors that have strongly indicated that this "phase" of stories is coming to an end here.

    James Swallow was particularly indicative in an interview with Literary Treks (reported by 8of5 here; emphasis mine):

    Dayton Ward has also expressed similar indications (again via 8of5 here):
     
  18. Mage

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    Thanks for those quotes. I was wondering where people got it from that after The Fall things would go in a different direction.

    Personally, I would miss all the political intrigue and such, but a change might be good. As long the writing is still good, the stories good, I'm good. :)
     
  19. Sci

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    Hm. Given that they've been doing Star Trek politics novels since at least 2004's A Time to Kill/Heal, and that they say they will probably still keep doing some of these kinds of political intrigue novels, and the explicit reference to "the last two or three years," I wonder if this might mean that the cold war with the Typhon Pact is going to come to a close, or at least some kind of détente.
     
  20. JD

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    ^I've been wondering the same thing since before I read those quotes. Even before The Fall it seemed to me like we were building to one moment that would determine once and for all if there was going to be a war or not. Perhaps The Fall will end with that moment.