Love the Carnegie. Though large, it retains the lines of the Constitution class. Raised nacelle, secondary hull down low--saucer to split the difference and balance things out... Some large saucers here--scroll down. These have some type of indentation in the nose: http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f252/CanisD/Misc/Backup/Star%20Trek/Parts/?albumview=slideshow The sensor pod on the hubble might even be used as a Galaxy-era nacelle with some mods.
I know I said I was done with this one, but tinkering with nacelles got me looking at a refit/retcon. USS Galaxy with PE-1 toroidal warp nacelles
I think it was Aridas that came up with the advanced circumferential engine (ACE) nacelle design we saw. His were much wider and rather flat. Ironically, he thought of having a return to the red-nosed nacelle--with the nacelle being between the saucer and secondary hull--long before the TNG galaxy class. Now the galaxy class you are thinking about was the smller Magellenic Cloud class ship in the novelization of STIII. Wasn't it slimmer than a connie--and unarmed? I keep thinking it would look more like a Decker class ship--a fast, sleek thing like this: http://www.tacticalstarshipcombat.com/FASA/sds/federation_decker.htm http://subodeon.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=ships&action=print&thread=1578 Also nice --big PDF http://www.jh.kobarg.de/k7/timeline/FSC_Vol12.pdf What you have would be a Picard type Galaxy class if they had to build it with refit era tech...
IIRC, the book never really mentioned anything other than the class, name and mission. No description. So my design is as good as any, IMO...and it's not all that much bigger than a Connie.
Ok, this didn't take as long as I thought it would. I inadvertantly poached a part by miscrediting it to Vance. The "extended" hull I used for several classes actually belonged to someone else. My apologies to JAFisher44 over at Sub Odeon. Here are reposts of the affected images with proper credits.
Found time to do some more: Valhalla refit with enhanced tactical sensor array and PE-3 toroidal coil warp nacelles: Spartan-class battlecruiser USS Nathan Bridger NCC-2647 (Cousteau-class scout)
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