Xeris, you got me all excited. I thought you'd found it in a store somewhere. I already read the excerpt... Anyway, I enjoyed it... I'm intrigued to see where the story of Illiana goes... Now, I'm not the most conversant person in backstory and place names and dates and such... I'm having a hard time figuring out which world this excerpt takes place in... It feels like it would be the Mirror Universe, but could it also be our universe before Illiana undergoes the Bajoran surgery?
Looking at Memory-Beta, I think it is our world... especially seeing the reference to the bone carving. I like Illiana's character in this excerpt. I'm curious to see how she'll become dedicated to serving her world to the point of joining the Obisidian Order and becoming an undercover agent...
Heh, at first I was disappointed by the excerpt for the lack of any station regulars, but after reading it again, it's definitely gotten me excited once more for the continuation of the relaunch.