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A few things to discuss about Kes

If Before and After had been the blueprint for Kes instead of a one-off, it would have been more likely reworked a bit. For instance, Ocampa-human hybrids would likely have had a longer lifespan, so Linnis would likely have still been too young to marry anyone. Problem is, they'd already played the "kid grows up super fast" card with Naomi.
I don't see that as a problem (see The Curious Case of Benjamin Button).
 
It still creeps me out that Harry would marry someone he first saw as the baby of his best friend and knew as a child. But that's just me.
IDK. If they became involved, let's say, when she was 5, at a later stage of maturity, it could be a fun dynamic. I could see Harry dominated by a more mature woman.

ETA: If something about Kes doesn't work, IMO, it's the makeup. Lien complained about the effects of putting the ears on, so maybe they became wary of the more intensive makeup that would be required in later seasons. Or they decided Lien had to remain always young and beautiful, and would not explore aging makeup.
 
It still creeps me out that Harry would marry someone he first saw as the baby of his best friend and knew as a child. But that's just me.
It would require a certain flexibility, that's for sure. Especially since we know from (adult) Linnis that Harry's really good with kids; he was probably a regular babysitter to her.

That being said, I reiterate: Neelix, Tom, and Harry are all honorable men. They would not, under any circumstances, exploit a vulnerable person. So Linnis was clearly capable of making a rational choice, and she chose Harry. Maybe she had to do a lot of work on him to get him to go along with it.
 
It would require a certain flexibility, that's for sure. Especially since we know from (adult) Linnis that Harry's really good with kids; he was probably a regular babysitter to her.

That being said, I reiterate: Neelix, Tom, and Harry are all honorable men. They would not, under any circumstances, exploit a vulnerable person. So Linnis was clearly capable of making a rational choice, and she chose Harry. Maybe she had to do a lot of work on him to get him to go along with it.

That is absolutely a fair point. Still can't shake the feeling...
In real life, an old class mate of mine had a relationship with a woman for a while, he became custodian of her underage daughter when she passed away. As soon as that girl hit 18, they became a couple....
I may have a bias when it comes to things like this.
 
IDK. If they became involved, let's say, when she was 5, at a later stage of maturity, it could be a fun dynamic. I could see Harry dominated by a more mature woman.
Since the elogium happens only once between the ages of 4 and 5 they would have to have been together a little bit before then or it was a pretty last minute decision.

I wonder if the Ocampans are aware that only one child for every couple is a path to species extinction.
 
I may have a bias when it comes to things like this.
I think most of us do. And that's as it should be.
Since the elogium happens only once between the ages of 4 and 5 they would have to have been together a little bit before then or it was a pretty last minute decision.
Ocampa reach physical and sexual maturity before turning 2, so there's some leeway. A quarter of a lifetime of it, for them.

Still, it would have been a major mental adjust for all the humans involved. Given that what we consider "legally adult", the Ocampa consider "your grandchildren are dead".
I wonder if the Ocampans are aware that only one child for every couple is a path to species extinction.
I wonder what the writers were thinking. Surely even they knew that one child per woman is a path to oblivion. One that Europe, Asia, and the USA are currently on.
 
Maybe.
But I still see the nine-year lifespan as highly unrealistic and contra-productive.
I understand that you really, really like Kes, but are you this passionate about everything in Trek being as realistic as you want the Ocampans to be, or is this a matter of bias towards the Kes character?
My bad if this comes off as rude; it's a legitimate question.
 
Sad but true.

And even sadder is when videos made from fan script by AI are beyter than official ones (like it is in Star Wars now).
It's not true. Fans have more time and effort to put in than professionals. Fans lack any of the deadlines that professionals have or the pressure to complete something in a limited time frame.

People dies and it's acvcepted as a part of life, yes. But i don't like to have unnecessary death scenarios thrown in my face over and over again, especially not when it comes to favorite characters.
Unfortunately unnecessary death is something I feel like is a part of Trek.
But I don't see him as a god.
Obviously but the foundational ideas that he created for Star Trek persist, especially in the TNG era. But, as with new life seeking, there is opportunity with Kes to see things from a different point of view with a shorter life span.
 
I know what you mean. Harry's character was likewise destroyed, just in a different way.
Yes, but at least Harry survived which could lead to a promotion and further development in books and such (if the authors aren't too destructive or slaves to canon). Kes was uttely destroyed and no one (except me) have dared to come up wih some scenario in any book in which the destruction of the character in Tge gift and that season six episode are erased.

For harry there is always a chance for redemption while Kes forever remains destroyed.:weep:

Well, OK. But the leola root enchiladas were my idea. :p
I agree on that one! :techman:
Or just had her posted to another ship and been in and out. Like Terry Farrell wanted.

Or saved for another series.
I agree. In fact, Enterprise could have been a good solution. In that case Jadzia and some TNG character could have showed up in the last DS9 episode. We could also have got some information about what the Enterprise was doimng during the Dominion War. Strange that no one has written a book about what the Enterprise was doing during the war.
The Ferengi should never have been changed so much. Female equality could have been managed with a few added lines of dialogue and a rework of "Profit and Lace". But the changes added in "The Dogs of War" were unnecessary. Let the Klingons be warriors, and let the Ferengi be capitalist D-bags.
I agree about all that.

It gave me a sort of "Soviet feeling" when I watched that episode, sort of "all planets and empires must become like the Federation immediately, just like the Soviets did in Eastern europe after WWII when all the countries they occupied during the war became Communist dictatorships.

Maybe a harsh description since the Federation is actually a quite good society but ..........

Not to mention that future Trek would be boring if Klingons, Ferengis, Cardassians, Romulans and all the other would be Federation clones. We need a little tension, that's why Gowron should have remained Klingon Channcellor.
I actually wrote a proposed 8th season for DS9. It featured Sisko's return, added Weyoun to the main cast, allowed most of the departing characters to return for an episode, and resolved the "what happens when the Romulans find out they were hoodwinked" question.
Where can I find it?
And is there any chance for a Gowron come-back?
Took me about 30 to rewrite "Nightingale" to include a non-abusive Janeway, demonstrable character growth for Harry, and a way to give him that promotion that felt fresh and different. It's sad when unpaid amateurs like us can thoroughly outperform the professionals.
On the contrary, I find it quite telling and even inspiring when gifted fans can come up with better stories than Berman and his gang could.

It also shows that many of us fans care more for Star Trek and the different characters than the hired hands does.
A lot of that came from her being extremely young. She had no prejudices and far fewer preconceptions to deal with.
Yes and that made her a very intersting character.
"Before and After" shows that the Kes premise wouldn't work? I don't buy it. This is one of the strongest episodes of the first three season and a blueprint for what was to come. The actress was strong. If there were a few Harry Kim as son-in-law was perhaps a little skeevy, but it wasn't a necessary outgrowth of Kes' premise. It was just a bad choice that could have been ignored.
Jennifer Lien's acting in the episode was excellent. But the episode itself was quite weird and Kes's role was quite limited. A Kes with a human lifespan would have been much more interesting and then we wouldn't have to endure the Harry/Linnis relationship.
If Before and After had been the blueprint for Kes instead of a one-off, it would have been more likely reworked a bit. For instance, Ocampa-human hybrids would likely have had a longer lifespan, so Linnis would likely have still been too young to marry anyone. Problem is, they'd already played the "kid grows up super fast" card with Naomi.
Yes, they did and therefore another fast-growing kid was just unnecessary.
I guess that the episode was just a last desperate attempt to use the nine-year lifespan in some story.

It would have been better if they had concentrated on giving kes a human lifespan since they already had given us hints about it in Cold Fire.
IDK. If they became involved, let's say, when she was 5, at a later stage of maturity, it could be a fun dynamic. I could see Harry dominated by a more mature woman.

ETA: If something about Kes doesn't work, IMO, it's the makeup. Lien complained about the effects of putting the ears on, so maybe they became wary of the more intensive makeup that would be required in later seasons. Or they decided Lien had to remain always young and beautiful, and would not explore aging makeup.
Lien had an allergic reaction to the glue they used to attach the Ocampa ears.

As for aging makeup, it actually looked terrible when used on Trek actors. Mostly it looked like they were suffering from some sort of disease.
Since the elogium happens only once between the ages of 4 and 5 they would have to have been together a little bit before then or it was a pretty last minute decision.

I wonder if the Ocampans are aware that only one child for every couple is a path to species extinction.
The whole thing with a nine-year lifespan plus that silly one-child syndrome was downright stupid. How could they come up with such scenarios and why didn't they try to change them?
I understand that you really, really like Kes, but are you this passionate about everything in Trek being as realistic as you want the Ocampans to be, or is this a matter of bias towards the Kes character?
My bad if this comes off as rude; it's a legitimate question.
Actually a good question.

I do like when characters are realistic, not only the Ocampa.

Sometimes I cringe when I see giant space-living creatures or see Paris and Janeway be turned into lizards and then The Doctor reverse them back to normal like nothing has happened.

I have no bias against Kes as a character, it was just the life-span which was silly.

What was intersting with kes was her personality, something which could have been used even better.
It's not true. Fans have more time and effort to put in than professionals. Fans lack any of the deadlines that professionals have or the pressure to complete something in a limited time frame.


Unfortunately unnecessary death is something I feel like is a part of Trek.

Obviously but the foundational ideas that he created for Star Trek persist, especially in the TNG era. But, as with new life seeking, there is opportunity with Kes to see things from a different point of view with a shorter life span.
Fans also care more about the characters and the series itself than some of the hired writers seem to do.

Unfortunately unnecessary death seems to have become epidemic among the writers of episodes and authors of books too.

I mean, a series like NCIS at least have the decency not to kill off great characters like Tony DiNozzo, Ziva, Abby, Jack, Ellie and main character Gibbs himself when the actors wanted to leave but in Star Trek they kill off characters at random, even in recent books where there are no actors who want to quit.
I don't think that the nine-year lifespan made anyone to see anything from any different point of view. It was just a waste, a mistake which should have been corrected.
 
we wouldn't have to endure the Harry/Linnis relationship.
Again, why is it a necessity? The fact that it was shown in the episode does not require it to happen, and indeed, Janeway uses the information Kes passes along to affect what she does in Year of Hell. It's not predetermined or necessary.
 
Fans also care more about the characters and the series itself than some of the hired writers seem to do.
Yes. That is the nature of being a fan. Writers can't afford that care.


Unfortunately unnecessary death seems to have become epidemic among the writers of episodes and authors of books too.
Been there since TOS.


don't think that the nine-year lifespan made anyone to see anything from any different point of view. It was just a waste, a mistake which should have been corrected
And it could have been. That's my point is that it offers a creative opportunity to explore the nature of aging, to experience a lifetime and all the challenges that go with it. From a science fiction perspective that's an amazing writing opportunity if one is bold enough to try something new.
 
For harry there is always a chance for redemption while Kes forever remains destroyed.:weep:
A chance that keeps not happening. Efforts to bring Harry back in PRO and PIC were stymied. His LD appearance seemed designed to suck off the "forever ensign" crowd. And even an effort to give him posthumous recognition in SFA seems to have been deleted.
Not to mention that future Trek would be boring if Klingons, Ferengis, Cardassians, Romulans and all the other would be Federation clones. We need a little tension, that's why Gowron should have remained Klingon Channcellor.
Yes.
Gordon should have remained the fierce snd honorable, if also political and expedient, Klingon warrior. And Worf shouldn't have made a horrific mess and then summarily dumped it in Martok's lap with a platitude from Kahless to excuse his action.
It gave me a sort of "Soviet feeling" when I watched that episode, sort of "all planets and empires must become like the Federation immediately
Agreed. By adding taxation, welfare, and democracy to the Ferengi Alliance, they're basically the Federation with money now.
Jennifer Lien's acting in the episode was excellent. But the episode itself was quite weird and Kes's role was quite limited.
She carried the whole episode. How is that limited?!
The whole thing with a nine-year lifespan plus that silly one-child syndrome was downright stupid. How could they come up with such scenarios and why didn't they try to change them?
I'm OK with the lifespan because I understand what thry were trying to do... but the "one-child" nonsense is an insult to our intelligence.
Yes. That is the nature of being a fan. Writers can't afford that care.
It took me about 30 minutes to fix what was screwed up with "Nightingale". So, not buying it.
 
took me about 30 minutes to fix what was screwed up with "Nightingale". So, not buying it.
Not buying what? That writers don't care like fans? That fans don't have the pressure of writing under a deadline, modifying scripts based upon production limitations?

It's like fans questioning every football decision and wondering how the player couldn't possibly see X. Except, there are several other details they have to adjust for.
 
Again, why is it a necessity? The fact that it was shown in the episode does not require it to happen, and indeed, Janeway uses the information Kes passes along to affect what she does in Year of Hell. It's not predetermined or necessary.
Because that relationship was there and it was stupid.

I mean, they are people who are upset about the Kes/Neelix relationship and in that case we actually had a relationship between a 19 year old alien and a 30 or so alien. The Kim/Linnis relationship pushed it further.

Which is one of many reason why I'm happy that the alternate reality was just an alternatr reality-or a bad dream.
Yes. That is the nature of being a fan. Writers can't afford that care.
Oh yes, they can. Having a deadline doesn't excuse bad writing. I have had a deadline many times for my writings and still have had time to care to make a good article.
Been there since TOS.
Has it?

Let me see, Spock was killed off because Nimoy wanted to quit. Then they realized that Star Trek would lose a lot without him and persuaded Nimoy to come back and came up with ( a somewhat weird) come back story for Spock.

They didn't kill off Kirk, Scotty, McCoy or any other main character in the last movie as they did with Data in Nemesis.

And it could have been. That's my point is that it offers a creative opportunity to explore the nature of aging, to experience a lifetime and all the challenges that go with it. From a science fiction perspective that's an amazing writing opportunity if one is bold enough to try something new.
I think that they can spare us from that kind of melodramatic goo.

Star Trek is mostly about exploration and adventures. Those who like to watch aging, slow deaths and misery can watch some of those third-rate soap operas where the death of a main character takes six episode or so with old ladies crying in front of their TV:s
A chance that keeps not happening. Efforts to bring Harry back in PRO and PIC were stymied. His LD appearance seemed designed to suck off the "forever ensign" crowd. And even an effort to give him posthumous recognition in SFA seems to have been deleted.
Unfortunately, I have to agree here.

But the chance for a promotion for Harry is still there and it's a much bigger chance than a chance for Kes to come back in a decent episode where they don't finish her of for good, using that nine-year lifespan stupidity as a reason for doing so.
Yes.
Gordon should have remained the fierce snd honorable, if also political and expedient, Klingon warrior. And Worf shouldn't have made a horrific mess and then summarily dumped it in Martok's lap with a platitude from Kahless to excuse his action.
I agree. Here they have the best Klingon character ever and they made him look like a fool in that episode. Even Worf and Martok came out like fools here.

The Klingon Empire would be much better with Gowron in charge than the all too federation-friendly Martok.

As for Martok, he was great as a warrior and character but not as a Chancellor. That role should be Gowron's.
Agreed. By adding taxation, welfare, and democracy to the Ferengi Alliance, they're basically the Federation with money now.
Yes and it feels wrong in some way.
She carried the whole episode. How is that limited?!
She carried that episode, yes. But the character was limited because of the lifespan thing.

Imagine an episode when they had focused on Kes's abilities and personality instead.
I'm OK with the lifespan because I understand what thry were trying to do... but the "one-child" nonsense is an insult to our intelligence.
I'm not OK with the lifespan since it was unrealistic and limited the character. They should have done something about it, like letting Suspiria, Q or someone else give her something like a human lifespan.

As for the "one child" thing, it's incredible that they didn't realize how bad and unrealistic it was.
It took me about 30 minutes to fix what was screwed up with "Nightingale". So, not buying it.
Neither do I since I've had deadlines and still managed to come up with decent storiesand articles.
Not buying what? That writers don't care like fans? That fans don't have the pressure of writing under a deadline, modifying scripts based upon production limitations?

It's like fans questioning every football decision and wondering how the player couldn't possibly see X. Except, there are several other details they have to adjust for.
Some writers do care. There are series where they haven't done the same horrible mistakes as in Star Trek and there are series where they don't finish off main characters at random.
Again, without knowing the BTS we can only speculate. My larger point that writers and fans care differently stands.
In some cases, yes. But it still don't excuse sloppy writing.
 
Yes. That is the nature of being a fan. Writers can't afford that care.
Maybe in these bigger corporations. Smallers companies, like Stardock, do. Leading creator of Galactic Civilizations game series do care, engages with and respects fans and write well. And does it within deadlines to DLC/game release.

Brad Wardell (or Frogboy as he calls himself) is proof that creators can care.
 
Maybe in these bigger corporations. Smallers companies, like Stardock, do. Leading creator of Galactic Civilizations game series do care, engages with and respects fans and write well. And does it within deadlines to DLC/game release.

Brad Wardell (or Frogboy as he calls himself) is proof that creators can care.
Of course they can care. But deadlines don't let out it in like fans do.


Some writers do care. There are series where they haven't done the same horrible mistakes as in Star Trek and there are series where they don't finish off main characters at random.
Finishing off characters doesn't indicate a lack of care.


some cases, yes. But it still don't excuse sloppy writing.
Who is excusing it? I'm seeking understanding not blaming.
 
Somehow, I've got a feeling that, in general, game developers care more than film or tv producers. Maybe because games can usually be patched up, but it's harder for films and tv.
 
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