There are more stinkers left here than in a locker room after a football game...
Galaxy's Child is next, despite the awkward scripting at times - another draft would have put polish on a great idea and follow-up to a previous episode. The engineering team at starfleet, reading Geordi's logs in a neat theme variation, is impressed by Geordi's tinkering over the years and things go bonkers from the start when Leah beams over and huffs'n'puffs with "her" engines and almost has to be cajoled to actually see firsthand what was done and why. (So why bother to beam on over when the logs told it all already? Because a 4x6 panel with blinking buttons is so rare and exotic?) Fleshing out more ambivalence may have helped.
The space whale stuff is borderline laughably bad, especially when the maudlin melodramatic music is cued up, but is handled just well enough - but most of it's cringe and leaves more questions, since these critters can't possibly travel faster than light yet their nourishment is so far away - so why did mommy go to the middle of nowhere to give birth? (I'm sure there's an Earth-parallel allegory that could be made to work, like the exotic
girafishippo that waddles to the middle of the desert to plop out some babies before going back to its lush streamed woodland to eat and bathe) but the distance space travel involves stretches things a tad...)
It's hilarious how the computer, with the rather significant
9.37% margin of error being the cause of all this, is completely glossed over given marital status is not a classified parameter, or how Roddenberry's big vision of the future wanted so much sex everywhere that marriage would be deemed as "unevolved" as STDs were since all would be magically curable by the 2360s*, or how the computer was taking what it had "read" and gave Geordi a neck massage as a result, to which even he says it's wrong. Heck, it was actually 9.47% to ensure another "M*A*S*H easter egg, but the computer got
that wrong too!
The "I make a great fungilli!"/"How did you know?!" is the one legitimately and unequivocally creepy line that also gets expounded on. Again, a polishing up draft could have rendered a lot more effective a story that means well, but isn't sure how much to make a villain out of Geordi or to make Leah out to be a villain or both.
* Lastly, is fungilli merely chili but swappin' beans for fungus? Just how badly is penicillin needed in the 24th century?
What's left:
Suddenly Human
Legacy
Final Mission
The Loss
Identity Crisis
The Host
In Theory
Redemption