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“Jean-Luc Picard is back”: will new Picard show eclipse Discovery?

Not seeing a Klingon doesn't mean there aren't any hostilities, right? I mean, no one saw a Romulan before Balance of Terror, but we know the Federation and Romulans have certainly had hostilities and even war and negotiations. :)

Oh dear, and Spock had so many things in Star Trek 6, like didn't he say there's an old Vulcan proverb "Only Nixon could go to China"? And didn't he also say Sherlock Holmes is an ancestor of his? And when his line was written about 70 years, well you know they just picked something that sounds good, right? I'd imagine in Discovery they're trying to tell their best story right now, and aren't going to worry about every little thing that was ever said, because you can just easily brush those away and say it's an error or it's been changed, it's not like it's really something truly important, and no matter what they do there's so much contradiction from before that you just know someone's going to find something to get all worried about.

I felt Discovery did such a wonderful job showing how a fractured Klingon Empire comes back together because of fear, and now you can see why they're such a constant threat about ten years later or so during Captain Kirk's career as captain.
 
Not seeing a Klingon doesn't mean there aren't any hostilities, right? I mean, no one saw a Romulan before Balance of Terror, but we know the Federation and Romulans have certainly had hostilities and even war and negotiations.

Shouldn't Spock's line been "140 years of unremitting hostility" then?

...it's not like it's really something truly important...

I love how one person can determine what's important to another person. :lol:
 
We didn't "hardly see" the Soviet Union or have limited contact with them. We had contact all the time, Discovery said contact was very limited over the last century IIRC.

I suppose when space is so big, some of the notion of hostility against the Federation could just be political, such as discouraging alliances, spreading propaganda, and disrupting trade. No direct contact need be required . We know from Day of the Dove that the Klingons love their propaganda .
 
My thought is you're going to have a totally different type of tension you're using if you're doing a show that just has single unrelated episode stories, like TOS and TNG like you say, and if you're having a show with an ongoing story that's going to last a whole season, you know what I mean? You can totally do smaller stories like they did when you're going to have everything finished in a single episode, but if you want to keep someone's attention all season then you need something bigger, don't you?

And I don't feel Discovery was really about like the epic scale of war, this was totally about this crew's story and how they participated, like we didn't see big battles taking place from an Admiral's perspective, everything was Michael's point of view and her personal involvement. She felt responsible for how things started and her captain's death, and she's there at the end making sure they don't do something atrocious just to try to win.

I did feel they kind of went too far with making Earth almost destroyed, however I sort of understand because those stakes needed to be high enough for them to consider mirror Phillipa's plan, right? But I completely feel this was a very personal story, especially for Michael.

Long-form serialized-drama doesn't need to be epic and high stakes. But I do agree that for science fiction it works better if the plot is somewhat "epic." That said, a good epic story needs to unwind over more than 15 episodes. If DIS really wanted to go this route they should have spent the first season "setting the table" by developing the characters and building the tension up to the war, then have everything explode for the season finale, setting things up well for the second season. DIS overplotted the first season in terms of things that happen, yet did it with great haste as well.

They overshot on many things besides the Klingons almost destroying Earth though. The ISS Charon almost destroyed the whole freaking multiverse? Burnham both "started" the war and ended it. Her deceased captain was one of the most decorated in the fleet. She personally caused the death of the two most prominent leaders in the Klingon Empire. The Discovery was the most technologically advanced ship in the Federation fleet, and responsible for basically all of its victories until it vanished into the MU. That is "epic" stakes raising to an absurd degree.

Worst of all, none of it was needed from a story standpoint. DIS would have worked just as well if Burnham was a disgraced XO who got her captain killed, but her captain was a comparable nobody, and it wasn't the flashpoint which started the Klingon War. Discovery could have been some random-ass decrepit ship which needed warm bodies, so she was called up out of dishonorable discharge to serve under Lorca. Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
 
They overshot on many things besides the Klingons almost destroying Earth though. The ISS Charon almost destroyed the whole freaking multiverse? Burnham both "started" the war and ended it. Her deceased captain was one of the most decorated in the fleet. She personally caused the death of the two most prominent leaders in the Klingon Empire. The Discovery was the most technologically advanced ship in the Federation fleet, and responsible for basically all of its victories until it vanished into the MU. That is "epic" stakes raising to an absurd degree.

Once you save the Federation and multi-verse, what else is left?

Worst of all, none of it was needed from a story standpoint. DIS would have worked just as well if Burnham was a disgraced XO who got her captain killed, but her captain was a comparable nobody, and it wasn't the flashpoint which started the Klingon War. Discovery could have been some random-ass decrepit ship which needed warm bodies, so she was called up out of dishonorable discharge to serve under Lorca. Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.

Burnham has to be the super-bestest EVAR!!! Which is why you usually keep "superfans" away from Star Trek.
 
You see what's out there. :p

But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse. Everything else will seem like small potatoes.

It is like Star Trek Beyond, once you blow-up Vulcan and threaten Earth twice, the stakes just seemed tepid.
 
Long-form serialized-drama doesn't need to be epic and high stakes. But I do agree that for science fiction it works better if the plot is somewhat "epic." That said, a good epic story needs to unwind over more than 15 episodes. If DIS really wanted to go this route they should have spent the first season "setting the table" by developing the characters and building the tension up to the war, then have everything explode for the season finale, setting things up well for the second season. DIS overplotted the first season in terms of things that happen, yet did it with great haste as well.

They overshot on many things besides the Klingons almost destroying Earth though. The ISS Charon almost destroyed the whole freaking multiverse? Burnham both "started" the war and ended it. Her deceased captain was one of the most decorated in the fleet. She personally caused the death of the two most prominent leaders in the Klingon Empire. The Discovery was the most technologically advanced ship in the Federation fleet, and responsible for basically all of its victories until it vanished into the MU. That is "epic" stakes raising to an absurd degree.

Worst of all, none of it was needed from a story standpoint. DIS would have worked just as well if Burnham was a disgraced XO who got her captain killed, but her captain was a comparable nobody, and it wasn't the flashpoint which started the Klingon War. Discovery could have been some random-ass decrepit ship which needed warm bodies, so she was called up out of dishonorable discharge to serve under Lorca. Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
I think one of the most enjoyable things in the third NuTrek movie was the banged up old Ship coaxed back into service. It might have been interesting to see something similar in Discovery. They could even have had a rag-tag cast of non Federation types in the first season and gradually transition to a more traditional Starfleet cast as time went on.
 
Once you save the Federation and multi-verse, what else is left?

They wrote the season, quite honestly, as if they expected they were only going to get one, so they might as well go balls to the wall and hit the "climax" that most serialized drama waits till the 4th or 5th season for.

Burnham has to be the super-bestest EVAR!!! Which is why you usually keep "superfans" away from Star Trek.

I'm not getting into the ways in which they built Burnham up too much as a character as opposed to how they just made her the fulcrum of the fate of the entire federation, since that's character-related, not plot related. The whole "Spock's sister" angle was dumb as executed - particularly because we get to see Sarek have a far warmer relationship with Burnham than he ever had with Spock. Though if it were just the only "special" aspect of her it would have been tolerable.
 
But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse. Everything else will seem like small potatoes.

It is like Star Trek Beyond, once you blow-up Vulcan and threaten Earth twice, the stakes just seemed tepid.

I liked Beyond's stakes way more than the other two. I could feel Sulu's fear for his family rather than watching Spock deny all feeling about his people. And we actually got to know some of the people on Yorktown Station, as opposed to the movie expecting me to care about Earth/Vulcan for no other reason than because it is Earth/Vulcan.
 
But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse. Everything else will seem like small potatoes.

It is like Star Trek Beyond, once you blow-up Vulcan and threaten Earth twice, the stakes just seemed tepid.
This is something I struggle to understand. But, I've never been one who needs ever heightening stakes in order for something to be enjoyable. What I prefer is personal stakes and how it impacts the characters overall.

I guess it boils down to entertainment, which is obviously highly subjective. But, I love DSC and DS9 and their war plots because of the impact on the characters, not because I ever believed the Federation would actually be destroyed. I guess an imperfect analogy would be "Heartbreak Ridge." Since it happened in WW2 we know what happens. But, the personal story is far more engaging than just the war back drop.
 

COMPUTER: Klingon homeworld Qo'noS?
BURNHAM: Unwelcoming to the Federation.
COMPUTER: Correct. Klingon political order?
BURNHAM: 24 great houses.
COMPUTER: Correct. Location of the most recent Klingon terror raid?
BURNHAM: ...
COMPUTER: Unacceptable duration between query and correct response. Number of survivors at the Human-Vulcan science outpost at Doctari Alpha?
BURNHAM: ...

[...]

GEORGIOU:
Michael, almost no one has seen a Klingon in a hundred years.
BURNHAM: I have.

[...]

ANDERSON: Next time, you might try not disturbing the property of a warrior race we've hardly spoken to for a hundred years. Our only choice now is to navigate this situation with as much finesse as possible.
BURNHAM: Admiral, if I may, the ideal outcome for any Klingon interaction is battle. They're relentlessly hostile, Sir. It's in their nature.
ANDERSON: The Federation and the Klingon Empire have always been on the cold side of war. We've had only fleeting run-ins with them for a century, and now you presume to know their motivation, because it is in their nature?

(Remind me, what happened to Anderson again...?)

If "almost no one has seen a Klingon for a hundred years" then that means at least a few people have. Possibly quite a few more who didn't live to tell the tale, too, like Burnham's parents for example. If the Feds have "hardly spoken to" (sounds pretty hostile to me) them in that time, that means they have spoken to them at least a bit. Their "run-ins" may have been "fleeting" but there were obviously several of them. Between these sporadic encounters the Klingons remained "relentlessly hostile" and "unwelcoming to the Federation." Imagine you only see and/or speak to someone a couple of times in decades, but they basically tell you they hate your guts and try to fight you every time. Unrelenting hostility, meaning an attitude or feeling of ill will, dislike, distrust...not necessarily frequent or constant fighting on a continual basis.

Again, in TOS the Organians imposed a peace treaty on the Feds and Klingons, and yet there remained a hostile atmosphere between them nevertheless. And as @Marynator said, the Romulans were unremittingly hostile toward the Feds for a century without ever being seen by them at all...that we know of...

-MMoM:D
 
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Shouldn't Spock's line been "140 years of unremitting hostility" then?
Not necessarily, no, because the Klingon government was working in cooperation with ours (well, with Section 31 anyway) to handle the Augment virus crisis in "Affliction"/"Divergence" (ENT), and for all we know there are further tales to be told in future stories of more amenable times before things soured again...the NX-01 apparently visited Qo'noS a further time that we never saw on ENT per "The War Without, The War Within" (DSC)...:whistle:

-MMoM:D
 
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Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
Certainly not a very Star Trek one. ;)

Also, I think David Gerrold already wrote a similar story away from Star Trek.
 
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