Also wow the formatting on that site is horrible.
It is. The first one that popped up that had transcripts.
Also wow the formatting on that site is horrible.
Not seeing a Klingon doesn't mean there aren't any hostilities, right? I mean, no one saw a Romulan before Balance of Terror, but we know the Federation and Romulans have certainly had hostilities and even war and negotiations.
...it's not like it's really something truly important...
We didn't "hardly see" the Soviet Union or have limited contact with them. We had contact all the time, Discovery said contact was very limited over the last century IIRC.
My thought is you're going to have a totally different type of tension you're using if you're doing a show that just has single unrelated episode stories, like TOS and TNG like you say, and if you're having a show with an ongoing story that's going to last a whole season, you know what I mean? You can totally do smaller stories like they did when you're going to have everything finished in a single episode, but if you want to keep someone's attention all season then you need something bigger, don't you?
And I don't feel Discovery was really about like the epic scale of war, this was totally about this crew's story and how they participated, like we didn't see big battles taking place from an Admiral's perspective, everything was Michael's point of view and her personal involvement. She felt responsible for how things started and her captain's death, and she's there at the end making sure they don't do something atrocious just to try to win.
I did feel they kind of went too far with making Earth almost destroyed, however I sort of understand because those stakes needed to be high enough for them to consider mirror Phillipa's plan, right? But I completely feel this was a very personal story, especially for Michael.
They overshot on many things besides the Klingons almost destroying Earth though. The ISS Charon almost destroyed the whole freaking multiverse? Burnham both "started" the war and ended it. Her deceased captain was one of the most decorated in the fleet. She personally caused the death of the two most prominent leaders in the Klingon Empire. The Discovery was the most technologically advanced ship in the Federation fleet, and responsible for basically all of its victories until it vanished into the MU. That is "epic" stakes raising to an absurd degree.
Worst of all, none of it was needed from a story standpoint. DIS would have worked just as well if Burnham was a disgraced XO who got her captain killed, but her captain was a comparable nobody, and it wasn't the flashpoint which started the Klingon War. Discovery could have been some random-ass decrepit ship which needed warm bodies, so she was called up out of dishonorable discharge to serve under Lorca. Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
Once you save the Federation and multi-verse, what else is left?
You see what's out there.![]()
I think one of the most enjoyable things in the third NuTrek movie was the banged up old Ship coaxed back into service. It might have been interesting to see something similar in Discovery. They could even have had a rag-tag cast of non Federation types in the first season and gradually transition to a more traditional Starfleet cast as time went on.Long-form serialized-drama doesn't need to be epic and high stakes. But I do agree that for science fiction it works better if the plot is somewhat "epic." That said, a good epic story needs to unwind over more than 15 episodes. If DIS really wanted to go this route they should have spent the first season "setting the table" by developing the characters and building the tension up to the war, then have everything explode for the season finale, setting things up well for the second season. DIS overplotted the first season in terms of things that happen, yet did it with great haste as well.
They overshot on many things besides the Klingons almost destroying Earth though. The ISS Charon almost destroyed the whole freaking multiverse? Burnham both "started" the war and ended it. Her deceased captain was one of the most decorated in the fleet. She personally caused the death of the two most prominent leaders in the Klingon Empire. The Discovery was the most technologically advanced ship in the Federation fleet, and responsible for basically all of its victories until it vanished into the MU. That is "epic" stakes raising to an absurd degree.
Worst of all, none of it was needed from a story standpoint. DIS would have worked just as well if Burnham was a disgraced XO who got her captain killed, but her captain was a comparable nobody, and it wasn't the flashpoint which started the Klingon War. Discovery could have been some random-ass decrepit ship which needed warm bodies, so she was called up out of dishonorable discharge to serve under Lorca. Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
Once you save the Federation and multi-verse, what else is left?
Burnham has to be the super-bestest EVAR!!! Which is why you usually keep "superfans" away from Star Trek.
Except she isn't.Burnham has to be the super-bestest EVAR!!!
But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse.
But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse. Everything else will seem like small potatoes.
It is like Star Trek Beyond, once you blow-up Vulcan and threaten Earth twice, the stakes just seemed tepid.
Nomad and the Doomsday Machine threatened Earth, but they were dealt with long before reaching it.
This is something I struggle to understand. But, I've never been one who needs ever heightening stakes in order for something to be enjoyable. What I prefer is personal stakes and how it impacts the characters overall.But it'll never have the dramatic punch of saving the Federation and the Multi-verse. Everything else will seem like small potatoes.
It is like Star Trek Beyond, once you blow-up Vulcan and threaten Earth twice, the stakes just seemed tepid.
https://www.springfieldspringfield....-show=star-trek-discovery-2017&episode=s01e01
People can make of the above lines whatever they will...
Not necessarily, no, because the Klingon government was working in cooperation with ours (well, with Section 31 anyway) to handle the Augment virus crisis in "Affliction"/"Divergence" (ENT), and for all we know there are further tales to be told in future stories of more amenable times before things soured again...the NX-01 apparently visited Qo'noS a further time that we never saw on ENT per "The War Without, The War Within" (DSC)...Shouldn't Spock's line been "140 years of unremitting hostility" then?
Certainly not a very Star Trek one.Then tell a story about a crew of B-listers barely scraping their way through the war, as Burnham tries to redeem the memory of Georgiou. That would be a fantastic story - certainly a more relatable one.
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