The Doomsday Machine love

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  1. Ssosmcin

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    How do I describe my love of this episode? My all-time favorite, the one I would wait endlessly for in reruns as a kid, back in the day when you were at the mercy of the program director at your local syndicated station. I don’t know about you, but my local station rarely played Star Trek in any kind of order. If I was lucky, TV Guide would list the episode in the log line, but for the most part, I just had to watch every episode and wait. Which was not a problem, since I loved the series since I was four (or sooner, that’s just my earliest memory) and I had gotten the family to love it too. So we all watched Trek every night it was on. That was either six days a week or just weekends, depending on the era.

    So what is it about this episode? Well, I love action and adventure, and this one has it in buckets. I love tense drama, great performances, stellar background music and space combat. I also love me a good character study. The Doomsday Machine has all of these things, as well as a good moral lesson in the escalation of atomic weapon development. The episode has many examples of “firsts” for the season and series:

    The first episode not to have a captain’s log done by any regulars or a current stardate attached to the aired episode (Decker’s log happened prior the the start of the episode); the first episode of the season to show Kirk’s green wrap (and the only one without the black trim); the first episode of the season with Sol Kaplan providing the popular score; the first episode to feature another starship; the first episode of the season without Chekov or Uhura; the first use of Auxiliary Control; the first use of an AMT model kit on screen; and the first time another starship commander goes batshit crazy.

    Everyone is on their game here. I would assume Nichelle Nichols and Walter Koenig were dropped to save money in this effects heavy episode. William Windom is the only real guest star here, the rest are low cost day players. It doesn’t matter; Windom is magnetic and brilliant as the mentally scarred Matt Decker, as commanding a presence as Kirk and, under different circumstances, was probably the cream of the service. Decker was tough as nails, but unintentionally sending his entire crew to their death’s made him snap. It’s an interesting thought to consider this might be Kirk under the same conditions. Windom starts off weepy, but toughens and, honestly, you never hate him. His motivations are clear and understandable. He’s not necessarily wrong, just going about it recklessly and obsessively. In his death, he provides Kirk the clue he needs to defeat the planet killer.

    Shatner holds up the rest of this episode effortlessly. He also looks damned amazing in that shirt, the best shape he would be in for the run of the series. His performance runs from worry, to distress, then determination, anger, sadness, anxiety and then, finally, relief. It’s a powerful showcase for his talents. There are no laughs here; this is probably one of the most serious scripts of the season, a season where things got softer and more friendly. But there’s still fun to be had:

    “If I only had some phasers…”
    “Phasers? You’ve got ‘em! I just had one bank recharged.”
    “Scotty…! You’ve just earned your pay for the week.”


    (As a kid, I was so disappointed to discover they already used this line in Who Mourns for Adonias?)

    Scotty is totally sharp. This is Doohan’s favorite episode and it’s easy to see why: Scotty is doing exactly what he should be. He’s not commanding the ship, barking at ambassadors or freaking out over going to warp 6. He’s keeping shit running and without him, the damned Constellation wouldn’t budge. He was never more essential to the format as he is here. Doohan is, as usual, perfect.

    If anyone gets shafted, it’s Bones. He’s the “idiot of the week” who doesn’t know what a doomsday machine is so now Kirk can tell us (although it’s played well and not really out of character). After the necessary exposition and crabbing, he is shuffled off the bridge, never to be seen or heard from again. All the same, it’s an obvious solution: only Kirk would tolerate his senior medical officer’s bullshit. No other captain would take his crap and off he goes to where he should spend most of his time anyway.

    On the surface, it seems as if Spock isn’t used as well as usual either, but he does get the classic “Vulcan’s never bluff” line. He is a calm, logical and stabilizing presence. While we don’t necessarily hate Decker, we do dislike him primarily because of the way he treats Spock (“down here”).

    The music is just orgasmic. It’s proud, sad, ominous and downright operatic. It’s the perfect example of in your face scoring. While you can argue it’s a little over the top, it’s also memorable and does a great job selling the danger when the effects aren’t quite up to the ambition shown (which honestly isn’t often). The Enterprise, the Constellation, the planet killer and even the damned transporter beam get a theme! While Bob Justman preferred Fred Steiner to everyone else, Sol Kaplan was one of the top composers for the series. This is an excellent companion to The Enemy Within and both scores are amazing. I never tire of this music.

    The effects are spotty, but excellent for the time. However, even as a kid in the early 70’s, I spotted the model kit a mile away. The scale is off and it always looks exactly like what it is. The planet killer itself is another story: understated and deadly, it is a burned out horn of plenty; a huge Bugle snack; a cosmic lawn cigar. And totally terrifying.

    Fun points - Star Trek Time Bending: it takes a 30 second delay timer 1:20 to reach the end of the countdown.

    Mr. Montgomery, the security guard who fights Decker, is not the same guy who was standing there all episode. Jerry Catron, an actor/stuntman, was only there for this scene and the fight. The rest of the time, a rather mousy extra in a red shirt stood by the rest of the time.

    Clips of Tomorrow is Yesterday were inserted when the Constellation lurched forward. The engine room scenes; Scotty’s tricorder mysteriously vanishes from his shoulder.

    None of these things do a damned bit of harm to this outstanding episode.
     
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  2. CorporalCaptain

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    This is my favorite episode. It was the first thing I ever saw on TV that made me squee, and it's aged reasonably well. For reference, this, "City", and "Journey to Babel" are my top three.

    It has a few warts, such as inconsistency about staying ahead of the machine without warp drive, the failure to try photon torpedoes, and the telescoping countdown at the end. But I don't care. Those minuses pale in comparison with the pluses.
     
  3. Greg Cox

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    And written by Norman Spinrad, no less.

    (This is where I brag about Norman being one of my old writing instructors, who taught me how to write a novel outline.)
     
  4. CorporalCaptain

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    That's very awesome.

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    The guard magically changing into a stuntman as mentioned in the OP is pretty funny.

    One other thing worth mentioning about the guards is that they seem to be standing there all episode since before the teaser, just waiting to take Decker into custody. :guffaw: Now, don't get me wrong, I think having the guards there on the bridge is kinda cool. By the end of the series at least, it's certainly not unheard-of to have aliens beaming onto the bridge unannounced.

    There may have been a few other episodes with guards stationed on the bridge. "Dagger of the Mind" has a one come to guard the bridge during the intruder alert, smartly standing with his back to the door, so that Van Gelder can knock him out with a medically precise karate chop. Doctors are so good at assault. I can't think of any other guard-at-bridge-elevator episodes at the moment, but there were certainly not many.

    My point is that even if "Doomsday" was virtually a one-off with guards on the bridge for the whole episode, it was in actuality a good idea that should have been more prevalent during the series.
     
  5. Forbin

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    My brother-in-law and I thought this would be the perfect episode to introduce his teenagers to Trek with, a few years ago.

    All they could say was the effects were terrible. :borg:
     
  6. Warped9

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    People can say what they want, but I still love that rough hewn look of the original planet killer miniature. It probably looked like hell under normal lighting in real life, but as an alien looking device made of very unweildy material (neutronium) it looked great. Everyone I've seen trying to update this thing all ended up looking cartoony.

    For me the original still rules.
     
  7. Greg Cox

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    They probably think that the sound is lousy on silent movies, too. And that black-and-white movies need more color . . . :)
     
  8. Bixby

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    Easily in my top 3 favorites of all time, as well.

    I haven't analyzed it as much as the OP, but there is so much to love about this episode:

    William Windom's breakdown speech to Kirk and McCoy:
    ''Matt! Where's your crew?''
    ''on the third planet...''
    ''There is no third planet''
    ''Don't you think I know that? There was... but not anymore...''
    The following heartbreaking words always twist a knife in my emotions. Kudos, mr. Windom....Kudos!

    I've seen it dozens of times, but god do I love the pacing, action and especially the MUSIC when the Constellation finally lurches back to life and is pushed to go help the Enterprise...

    Bit roles that still ended up becoming favorites to many fans: Lt Palmer, Washburn, the kickass security guy...

    I still get a grin when I see Bones plunging a syringe in Decker's trapezius muscle, as if his stimulant potions can better travel through the body from there :)

    Decker looks like he has about 2 to 3 days' growth of beard there, while he stayed catatonic until Kirk found him. It made me realize for most all the other épisodes, no matter how dramatic the events, the men seemed to always make sure to keep well-groomed :)

    Love this episode...think I'll go watch it again right now, in fact!! :techman:
     
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  9. TOSalltheway

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    Great episode. Made even more so now that we know Decker survived the explosion and lived the rest of his natural life in late twentieth century and early twenty first century (See Star Trek; New Voyages) I challenge anyone not to get a lump in their throat watching Matt Deckers final report.
     
  10. CorporalCaptain

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    No.
     
  11. scotpens

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    He discusses the creation of the episode here.

    [yt]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=758fT5Ov590[/yt]
     
  12. CrazyMatt

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    "The Doomsday Machine" is not just my favorite TOS episode, it is my favorite TV episode of any series, Star Trek or otherwise. It was the first TOS episode I ever watched, circa 1972, on a small B/W TV on the local UHF channel after I got home from school. It absolutely blew me away. That day literally changed my life.
     
  13. Warped9

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    Also no. Nothing about that production worked for me.
     
  14. Commishsleer

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    What I also like about this movie is that the dialog/music whatever is so good that we Know what's going on even if they can't/don't show ever ship manoeuvre on screen.
     
  15. HarryM

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    Yes, this one is just about perfect. Great brisk story pacing, no fat on these bones. Fantastic music, guest star was awesome, and the best cliffhanger ending ever. A solid sci-fi concept as well. I'm hard pressed to choose a favorite TOS episode but this is about #1, but I like "Mirror, Mirror" about equally.
     
  16. Forbin

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    Same here. it was from the Before Times, when they made a couple of total fanwank disasters before getting their acts together.
     
  17. feek61

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    I agree with the OP. This has been my favorite episode since I first saw it in the late 1960's. I have watched it hundreds of times including 3-4 times this year. I never get tired of watching it. Everything just came together perfectly in the DM. What's even more amazing is that it was filmed in only 5 days (at least 1 day less than other episodes) and came in under budget!!! On top of all of that we get to see Auxiliary Control for the first time. Awesome, just awesome!!!
     
  18. Melakon

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    I love the episode, remastered effects or not. Though the original's final shots of the Constellation looked like the AMT model it really was.

    McCoy makes a crucial error when he beams over with Decker in the middle of battlestations. Instead of taking him to sickbay for an exam, he says "Come on!" and hustles Decker to the bridge.
     
  19. LMFAOschwarz

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    You could at least have mentioned the guy's name...but no worries: I grabbed the image right from the episode credits! :)

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  20. Redfern

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    Tell me about it! Getting the proportions right is achievable if one uses that side shot just as the Constellation explodes as a template, but that strange iridescent surface is nigh impossible to recreate!

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    I'm still experimenting with various "shaders", That's why I was so curious whether any "behind the scenes" information about the planet killer miniature existed.

    Sincerely,

    Bill