"The City on the Edge of Forever" Line-by-line

Discussion in 'Star Trek - The Original & Animated Series' started by Santa Garrus, Sep 2, 2010.

  1. leandar

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    Edith: That's very strange. You get some rest. I'll see you later. (Later, Edith, Kirk and Spock leave the Mission together, then Spock heads off alone. Kirk and Edith dodge traffic to cross the street.) If we hurry, maybe we can catch the Clark Gable movie at the Orpheum.
     
  2. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Kirk: What?
     
  3. leandar

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    Edith: You know, Dr. McCoy said the very same thing...
     
  4. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Kirk: McCoy! Leonard McCoy?!
     
  5. Ziz

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    Edith: Yes. He's in the Mission. He's...
     
  6. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Kirk: Wait right here. SPOCK! Stay right there!
     
  7. leandar

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    Spock: What is it?
     
  8. JanewayRulz!

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    KIRK: McCoy! He's in


    (McCoy comes out and they greet each other enthusiastically. A truck is coming down the street as Edith starts to cross, not looking.)
     
  9. leandar

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    Spock: No, Jim!
     
  10. Santa Garrus

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    Kirk: Edith.
     
  11. Ziz

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    (McCoy dashes forward but Kirk grabs him and pulls him back onto the pavement just as Edith and the truck meet in in a squeal of brakes.)
    McCoy: You deliberately stopped me, Jim. I could have saved her. Do you know what you just did?
     
  12. leandar

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    Spock: He knows, Doctor. He knows.

    (Kirk leans against a wall, about to break down into tears..)
     
  13. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Back at the Guardian Planet, Kirk and Spock Jump out of the Guardian Portal

    Scotty: What happened Sir? You only left a moment ago.
     
  14. JanewayRulz!

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    (McCoy returns.)

    SPOCK: We were successful.
     
  15. leandar

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    Guardian: Time has resumed it's shape. All is as it once was. Many such journeys are possible. Let me be your gateway.
     
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    UHURA: Captain, the Enterprise is up there. They're asking if we want to beam up.
     
  17. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Kirk: Lets get the hell out of here.
     
  18. leandar

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  19. Santa Garrus

    Santa Garrus Calibrating the Holidays Premium Member

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    Well done everyone! I'll send a message to CoveTom so we can see what'll be next!
     
  20. CoveTom

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    Congratulations, folks! I'll get things set for the next choice in just a few!