November entry - solarbaby

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Solarbaby, Nov 9, 2012.

  1. Solarbaby

    Solarbaby Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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  2. bullethead

    bullethead Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Not bad, but you need some blurring around the edges of the people (especially the hair) and the Cookie Monster apparently took some bites out of Odo's hair.
     
  3. Finn

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    I'd reduce number of people as well. It's a bit busy in the bottom half.
     
  4. Ziz

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    Yeah, the idea is good, you just need to work on your technical issues a little.

    Also, would it be better losing the three standing characters and move Odo down to make it look like he's forming out of the shapeshifter lake?
     
  5. Solarbaby

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    ahh I didn't notice the missing hair. I actually had the laptop hooked up to the tv and its not easy to see as using the computer screen. Also I cut the shapes out with the mouse pad as I broke my graphics pen. Having seen a few other entries I need to up my game - some very clever ideas by fellow Trekkies.