New TAS comic

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by Kail, Mar 24, 2011.

  1. Kaiser

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    ooo What a Twist! =O
     
  2. Kail

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    You didn't see it coming? I was afraid I'd given to many clues away.
     
  3. Kaiser

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    Nope i did not honestly :) :techman:
     
  4. Kail

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  5. Kaiser

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    Good new comic :)
     
  6. Kail

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    Awesome, I finally got a chance to catch up! Love the art and the story too!

    ...two proofreading catches:

    p. 12: Competition, not compitition [top right]
    p. 26: Represent, not represet [bottom left]


    ...once you spend some time proofreading, it never goes away. :D
     
  8. Kail

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    Thanks Klaus! I'll fix those.
     
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  10. Kaiser

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    Awesome they found a pocket of space like that :)
     
  11. Ziz

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    Might want to do a little dialogue editing. "I'm game" sounds like a way too human phrase for an alien to say.
     
  12. Kail

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    You are right Ziz. I had meant to change that before but forgot. Thanks!
     
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  14. Kaiser

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    a good comic :)

    and would have been a good ep of the TAS :)
     
  15. Potemkin_Prod

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    Goof story, and well executed Kail! Congrats!
     

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