My Poetry--Give your honest opinion!

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Top41, Feb 28, 2009.

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Do you like my poetry?

  1. Publish!

    5 vote(s)
    55.6%
  2. Kind of

    1 vote(s)
    11.1%
  3. I can't be bovvered

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. Perish!

    3 vote(s)
    33.3%
  1. Top41

    Top41 Vice Admiral Moderator

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    I present to you, Trekbbs, my creation, for your judgment.

    Should I publish?

    Perish?

    Are you in the "ehhhhh" camp?

    Please share your thoughts, now that I have lost my floss!

    PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPOEM:

     
  2. Top41

    Top41 Vice Admiral Moderator

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    don't know how i got so many P's btw--my keyboard must have taken on a life of its own!

    dfafhoa

    adaf
    yes!
     
  3. The Naughty List

    The Naughty List Working the Pole Moderator

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    I think you should read that poem at Obama's next inauguration.
     
  4. StolenThunder

    StolenThunder Poster Premium Member

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    It's all in the delivery.
     
  5. RJDonner&Blitzen

    RJDonner&Blitzen Idealistic Cynic and Canon Champion Premium Member

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    Warning for leaking a BR Thread. Comments to PM.

    Oh, well, if you can do it I can do it:

    Remember, kids, I'm a professional. Don't try this at home. :cool:
     
  6. Zulu Romeo

    Zulu Romeo World Famous Starship Captain Admiral

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    That was awesome. Abstract, thoughtful, full of meaning and soul - the psyche of a puzzled lyricist and artist, bared for all to see. The last killer line is incredible. :bolian: :) :D

    That was not too bad either. I could definitely sense a feeling of sadness at the thought of a remarkable loss, with a hint of wonder, curiosity, childlike innocence and awe in the lyric there.
     
  7. 1001001

    1001001 I Like the Beats and the Shouting Moderator

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    You are the next Maya Angelou.

    :beer:
     
  8. Miss Chicken

    Miss Chicken Little three legged cat with attitude Admiral

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    I kinda like it. Of course you will need more than one poem to publish and one reasonably good poem might just be a fluke. I need to see more of your poetry. Maybe you could write a couple about some ofthe more colorful Trekbbs members. Maybe even a T'Bonz poem?
     
  9. G2309

    G2309 Captain Captain

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    its always best to keep a copy of what you write. do you have much other stuff this is abt specific to the form
    I use Triond for feedback on work
    www.triond.com/users/Nathan+Grace

    Heres my profile page do poetry and have a bit of star trek humour
     
  10. Zulu Romeo

    Zulu Romeo World Famous Starship Captain Admiral

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    I like this idea. Call it Old Ravescene's Book of Practical TrekBBS Members. :bolian: