Elaan of Troyius - Mess of an episode

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  1. Terran_Empire

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    I have to say that this was one of the more disorienting episodes I have seen so far watching TOS in the remastered episode order. This episode could have been so good, it could have even been great thanks to some outstanding guest performances from France Nuyen and Jay Robinson, a solid premise and the Enterprise as the set and setting.

    The problems lies in the sudden and jerky change of focus and plot. As soon as Kirk touched Elaan's tears around midway in, the entire episode was essentially restarted. The arranged marriage is now a background element rather than the primary focus, the Dohlman is now docile and agreeable with her "monstrous savagery" seemingly forgotten and then there is the contrived sabotage angle and shoe-horning of Klingons.

    I, personally, wanted to see Kirk and company make a civilized woman out of that royal ingrate. Perhaps taking a turn for comedy or maybe even a memorable Kirk speech about the significance of tolerance for others' customs, etiquette and universal respect.

    ...But we got a rushed ship duel scene and a bad love story instead.

    Now normally I would love to see a damaged Enterprise take on a warbird and swiftly turn a sure defeat into a close victory but I was irritably thrown off by how the original crisis, a fresh and interesting one, was discarded in favor of the Klingons breaking the treaty of the billionth time. Even at the end of the episode it doesn't really seem like the Dohlman has learned anything or grown at all, complaining about her responsibilities and only begrudgingly going along due only to Kirk's insistence (whom she seems to have fallen into a spell for and not the other way around :rolleyes:). And if she has developed it was not truly demonstrated as to how and in what way.

    Just a frustrating one overall...
     
  2. CorporalCaptain

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    Last time I ranked all TOS episodes, I ranked "Elaan of Troyius" at 23rd best out of 79.
     
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    In the non-remastered version with the original effects, this was the first and only time on the series that we saw the Enterprise go toe-to-toe with a (non-Romulan) Klingon D7.
     
  4. EnriqueH

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    I disagree I actually enjoyed Elaan of Troyius.

    The Klingon space battle was very cool, but I also enjoyed Shatner and Elaan hitting it off.

    The cast was good in this one.
     
  5. Commishsleer

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    I had no real problem with this episode except maybe that the Federation was a party to taking a woman to be married against her will. I hope the Federation was above this sort of thing. Also there was a fine line in that Elaan talked about hating the marriage blah blah blah but wasn't like sneaking off in a shuttlecraft or something.

    I don't see why Elaan needed to be civilised to Earth standards anyway.

    The reason I thought she had become docile was because she thought she had Kirk in her power and he would save her. In the end when he didn't and with no other options she resigned to her fate.

    Amazing TOS co-incidence no 34, Spock was walking around with a dilithium detector when there was 'amazingly' some dilithium the bridge (in Elaan's necklace). Was the scene as dodgy as I remember it or did Spock detect some fluxations in something or other technobabble and decided to get his trusty dilithium detector out?
     
  6. Terran_Empire

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    The alternative was to sit back and watch two peoples destroy each other. The Federation was only facilitating a peace agreement that the Troyians and Elasians had themselves formulated.

    She nearly murdered the Troyian ambassador...her behavior was that of a spoiled brat in an adult's body complete with homicidal tendencies.

    She clearly needed to be civilized to ANY standards, let alone to those of Earth and Troyius.

    Which conflicts with her display of personality earlier on in the episode when she outright refuses on her life that such a marriage will never happen. There is some definite inconsistency here, love potion or not.

    Here you are right, that was absolutely absurd...but in my dizziness I must not have paid too much mind to it.
     
  7. CrazyMatt

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    This was one of the three or four best episodes of the third season. It actually has the feel of a second season episode. I find it well written, produced and acted. It also has a superb score.

    Not a mess at all, as far as I'm concerned, especially when compared to most other third season episodes. Definitely in my top 20.
     
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    That would be difficult, since "warbird" is the name applied to the massive Romulan vessel seen in episodes of Star Trek: The Next Generation, and no vessel with that nomenclature existed during the original series.
     
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    Spock is taking sensor readings all the time. When he picked up some odd energy readings and localized it to the bridge, he then used a general-purpose hand-held sensor to zero in on it. There was nothing about that scene that broke credibility, as I see it.

    "Elaan" is a great episode, especially for the third season. You get a dazzling female guest star, a Klingon battle scene, and one of Fred Steiner's most exciting music scores.
     
  10. Commishsleer

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    Did they explain it as well as you just did? I want to believe...

    I'd just have been as happy for Spock or Sulu or anyone to just recognise the necklace as being dilithium.
     
  11. Armored Saint

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    Speaking of her will, Elas side doesn't make more sense. She's visibly from a royal family who has the effective powers and can arbitrarily chose if someone will die or live. It's not a consitutionnal monarchy with a royal family well aware of its symbolic role. What the hell the Federation are doing with them? I mean, the Tellun star system is " under Federation control", so l conclude Elas (oh, I finally notice the reference) and and Troyius are federated planets...but these two planet are at war together and their political systems don't fit with what we can conclude about the Federation. So what, the Federation is there simply to protect them against the Klingons?

    I think it's a good episode, but one of it flaws is it show how much the Federation is underconceptualized.
     
  12. CorporalCaptain

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    This was addressed in the episode [link].


    All she had to do was resign as Dohlman or renounce the title.

    She needed to be civilized by Troyian standards. Kirk took over the job of civilizing her after she'd tried to kill Ambassador Petri.

    Since before she beams out she's talking about responsibilities and obligations, the word that Kirk had used before, I think we're supposed to believe that Kirk had gotten through to her.

    It was the latter, and it was probably just a general scanner. The actual prop was McCoy's medical scanner.

    :lol: You'd think they would have noticed them. Maybe all gemstones of the same color look alike to them. ;)
     
  13. Armored Saint

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    Spock looking at Elaan's breasts or Spock looking at his sensor screens? The second option is what he does usually.
    Especially since they wasn't refined crystals shaped for energetic functions, but crude crystals shaped for jewelry.
     
  14. T'Girl

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    The occasional insightful (and usually heavy handed) Trekkie Feminist wrote this review of the episode. Her reviews are often unintentionally funny.

    http://trekkiefeminist.tumblr.com/post/72395355289/tos-3x13-elaan-of-troyius

    There was something similar in TNG.

    Troyius too, their leader is referred to as a "ruler."

    I don't think they are Federation Members, the episode spoke of nuclear weapons being recently achieved, so that would be their tech level. Maybe protectorates?

    The Klingons were nearby and claimed the system, which arguably they wouldn't if both planets (separately or combined) were already Member worlds.

    Nothing precludes any (or many) of the Federation Member worlds from possessing a Royal system of government.

    (and who exactly is "we?")

    :)
     
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    This episode failed the Beschdel test. What a surprise?
    I would be surprised if any TOS episode passed.

    This is hardly a feminist episode and if we ignore the obvious comparisons to 'Taming of the Shrew' you can just take it as Elaan being a particular difficult person not just a particularly difficult woman.

    If Kirk were truly a compassionate man he would have presented Elaan her options at the end of the episode. He could have said if you don't really want to marry the 'Troyan pig' then leg it. But he didn't do it because he wanted to fulfill his duty and stop the war (McGuffin) and frankly he had made a whole heap of sacrifices in his life for duty as well.
    I wonder what Janeway or Sisko would have done in Kirk's place? We know Picard sent that girl on her way and Archer follows orders unless it endangers his dog.

    As another aside I find it difficult to believe that Uhura had to give up her 'palatial' cabin for Elaan. in 'Journey to Babel' they had 100 ambassadors on board. Where did they put them?
     
  16. Nightowl1701

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    Never said in the episode she had to give her quarters up.

    ELAAN: Am I a soft Troyian fawn to need pillows to sit on? And these ridiculous female trappings. They are an offense to my eyes.
    KIRK: My communications officer generously vacated the rooms hoping you would find it satisfactory.

    Uhura was clearly thinking a woman's touch would soothe the savage Elasian breast (and she could enjoy the swanky ambassadorial suite Elaan would otherwise have gotten in the meantime).
     
  17. Terran_Empire

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    That review encapsulates pretty much everything that is wrong with new wave feminism, from the pervasive sense of entitlement to making a victim of a female character who is intentionally depicted as severely flawed, so much so that she tries to kill a diplomat that only wants to facilitate peace, and right down to excusing violence against men but condemning men (Kirk) when the courtesy of a slap in the face is returned.

    Elaan acts as if she is running the show, threatening anyone and everyone around her with death and violence when they only want to assist her in forming a peace treaty that would save her people. She has no consideration for those around her, what they want and desire, much less what is good for her people. More over she is continually unable to accept the responsibilities and duty that comes with her title and yet somehow she is a victim in all of this? If the "Dohlman" was a man with the same personality traits and display of behavior would he have been given such a generous benefit of a doubt? I think not.

    Kind of makes you think that some fans or "trekkies" really let the soul and message of the series fly right over their heads.
     
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  18. Commishsleer

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    Yes in an enlightened Federation women should still be polite and be 'good little girls' and accept being married to someone they don't want to for the next 50 years.
    Women in poor countries today marry older Western men for much lesser rewards.

    Hey I know they were still doing it 100 years later in TNG so its gotta be OK.

    And if the Dohlman was a man I don't think Kirk would be talking down to and spanking the guy. Or showing him how to eat.
     
  19. EnriqueH

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    I thought Kirk's behavior in Elaan was consistent with the way he was portrayed in the past.

    In fact, we've seen Kirk try to teach a man how to behave: in Charlie X.

    Boy, was he a little shit or what? Talk about a sense of entitlement.
     
  20. Commishsleer

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    Yes Kirk is consistent with his treatment of women as portrayed in the past :(

    Kirk took on a boy not a man in Charlie X.