Re: DS9: Section 31 - Abyss by D.Weddle & J.Lang Review Thread (Spoile ^ Thank you! That's very interesting - it would be amazing (though I presume impossible) to see that draft too. Your work was excellent then - I always felt Felt Hand felt very close to how Hertzler was presented Martok in the DS9 Companion, and the affinity he had for the character, but with lots of touches that I wasn't sure he would have perceived. I do love how Kahless was presented - a sense of the Romantic (even Goethe) in him - was this also from his draft? Certainly he is the most overtly Shakespearean in the final draft, but re-thinking it, so much feels like a stage play - even your 'comedic' characters like Pharh, the observers on the sides of the stage. As I said, excellent! Maybe I wish the idea of Kahless's invective and the hope for Martok changing his people will come up again!