''Dead Stop'' Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Enterprise' started by leandar, Nov 14, 2012.

  1. Orac

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    (arriving at the repair station)

    Archer: This is Captain Archer of the starship Enterprise. We need to make some repairs. I was told you might be willing to help us. We'd be grateful for any assistance you could offer. Please respond.
     
  2. Athena28

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    HOSHI: Nothing.
     
  3. Orac

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    Archer: Bio-signs?
     
  4. LeadHead

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    T'Pol: None that I can detect.
     
  5. Orac

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    Hoshi: Maybe it's abandoned.
     
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    TUCKER: We might be able to board it; salvage some of the materials we need.
     
  7. LeadHead

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    Archer: It doesn't seem like Enterprise could fit inside those docking berths. What's it look like inside.
     
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    T'POL: I'm detecting a liquid helium atmosphere. The temperature's -270.

    A bio-molecular probe.
     
  9. Orac

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    Travis: Sir.
     
  10. LeadHead

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    The starboard Dock opens up and expands into a larger dock.

    Trip: It's reconfiguring to fit the saucer section.
     
  11. Orac

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    T'Pol: The liquid helium's being replaced by a warmer oxygen-nitrogen atmosphere.
     
  12. Athena28

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    HOSHI: Still no response to our hails.
     
  13. Orac

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    T'Pol: It appears an invitation's been extended.
     
  14. Athena28

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    ARCHER: They need to work a little on their hospitality.
     
  15. LeadHead

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    Trip: I don't see that we have a lot of options.
     
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    ARCHER: Take us in.
     
  17. LeadHead

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    A docking tube extends to Enterprise as it stops in the docking berth.

    Archer, T'Pol and Trip exit Enterprise via the airlock and walk through a clean white hallway with lights directing them oneward toward...

    The diagnostic room. A holographic image of Enterprise is being displayed showing the damaged areas of the ship in red.


    Trip: They've isolated every hull breach, every damaged system... I'll be damned. We scratched the hull right here a year ago. I bumped it with the inspection pod, remember?
     
  18. Orac

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    Archer: I thought I told you to have that repainted.
     
  19. LeadHead

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    Trip: Well, I was gettin around to it.
     
  20. Orac

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    Archer: (exploring the wall monitors) Everything's in English. The ship wasn't the only thing they probed. I think that's Malcolm. That's where his left leg was injured.
     

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