''Dead Stop'' Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Enterprise' started by leandar, Nov 14, 2012.

  1. Athena28

    Athena28 Rear Admiral Rear Admiral

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    TUCKER: Tucker here.
     
  2. LeadHead

    LeadHead Director of Comedy Premium Member

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    Archer: Trip,

    Engineering...

    Archer: (over comm) have you prepared our payment?
     
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  3. Athena28

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    TUCKER: The canisters are almost ready, sir.
     
  4. LeadHead

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    Archer: (over comm) Don't be in such a hurry.
     
  5. Athena28

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    [Station]

    TUCKER: 200 liters of warp plasma, as promised.
     
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    COMPUTER: Please place your compensation on the transport platform. (which slides out from the wall)
     
  7. Athena28

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    TUCKER: Hold on, hold on. There's a couple of problems we need to discuss first. Now I'm not real happy with the quality of some of your work. Are you listening to me?
     
  8. MickJo1701

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    COMPUTER: Please place your compensation on the transport platform.
     
  9. Athena28

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    TUCKER: I've looked at the bolt couplings you used to attach the new hull plating. I'm afraid they're not up to Starfleet specs. And the subspace amplifier you repaired? We're picking up distortion on all the high-band frequencies.
     
  10. MickJo1701

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    COMPUTER: Please place your compensation on the transport platform.

    (This is tedious...)
     
  11. Athena28

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    TUCKER: We're not paying until we sort this out.
     
  12. BlueStuff

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    (Archer pulls T'Pol up into the ventilation shaft)
    TUCKER: What guarantee do I have that these duranium pins won't fly out the instant we jump to warp?
     
  13. Athena28

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    COMPUTER: Your inquiry was not recognized.
     
  14. BlueStuff

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    TUCKER: On my world, we have an expression. The customer's always right. Maybe you should make that part of your programme. I want to know how someone files a grievance around here.
     
  15. Athena28

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    [Station ventilation shaft]

    REED: It's there, about 5 meters ahead.
     
  16. BlueStuff

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    [Station diagnostic room]

    TUCKER: Sounds like you've got more important things to deal with. (runs away)

    (T'Pol disables the transporter sequence, then gets the iris open by firing at it. They make their way out of the shaft into a more shabby part of the station, where people are draped over benches hung from the ceiling at various heights, and hooked up to a what looks like a central unit)
     
  17. Orac

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    Computer: Incursion detected in primary data core. Vacate this section or your vessel will be compromised.
     
  18. Enterprise1981

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    T'POL: I'm detecting one human biosign.
     
  19. Orac

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    Archer: Are they alive?
     
  20. KirkPicard

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    T'POL: Their vital organs appear to be functioning. They've suffered severe neurological damage.
     

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