"Caretaker" Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Star Trek: Voyager' started by LeadHead, Mar 23, 2012.

  1. Orac

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    Tuvok: The interval between each pulse has decreased by point four seven seconds since we arrived. I can offer no explanation.
     
  2. Alienesse

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    JANEWAY: That's only one of the mysteries we're dealing with, Mister Tuvok. Take a look at this.
    (A scan of the planet on her desk monitor.)
    JANEWAY: It's virtually a desert. Not one ocean, not one river. It has all the basic characteristics of an M-class planet except there are no nucleogenic particles in the atmosphere.
     
  3. JanewayRulz!

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    TUVOK: That would mean the planet is incapable of producing rain.
     
  4. Enterprise1981

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    JANEWAY: I've studied thousands of M-class planets. I've never seen an atmosphere without nucleogenics. There must have been some kind of extraordinary environmental disaster. As soon as repairs are complete, we'll set a course for the fifth planet.
     
  5. LeadHead

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    Tuvok: Captain, you require sleep.
     
  6. JanewayRulz!

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    JANEWAY: Kim's mother called me just after he left her. Delightful woman. He's her only son. He'd left his clarinet behind. She wanted to know if she had time to send it. I had to tell her no. Did you know he played clarinet in the Julliard Youth Symphony?
     
  7. Enterprise1981

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    TUVOK: I did not have the opportunity to meet Mister Kim.
     
  8. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: I barely knew him. I never seem to have the chance to get to know any of them. I have to, I have to take more time to do that. It's a fine crew and I've got to get them home.
     
  9. Alienesse

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    TUVOK: The crew will not benefit from the leadership of an exhausted captain.
     
  10. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: You're right as usual. I've missed your counsel, Tuvok.
     
  11. JanewayRulz!

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    TUVOK: I am gratified that you came after me so I can offer it once again.
     
  12. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: I spoke to your family before I left.
     
  13. Alienesse

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    TUVOK: Are they well?

    (Hey, Blue! Glad to see you again)
     
  14. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: Well, but worried about you.
     
  15. Alienesse

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    TUVOK: That would not be an accurate perception, Captain. Vulcans do not worry.
     
  16. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: They miss you.
     
  17. Alienesse

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    TUVOK: As I do them.
     
  18. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: I'll get you back to them. That's a promise, Tuvok.



    (What are the rules on Captain's Logs? Do we continue on with them if it's the same character as the previous line? If so: )





    Captain's log, supplemental. The Maquis ship and Voyager have encountered a debris field where sensors have detected a small vessel. One humanoid life form is on board.

    [Bridge]

    JANEWAY: Hail them.
    (The viewscreen is covered in metal debris. Someone with spots and a mohican hair cut clears it.)
     
  19. Alienesse

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    (The viewscreen is covered in metal debris. Someone with spots and a mohican hair cut clears it.)
    NEELIX [on viewscreen]: Whoever you are, I found this waste zone first.

    (yeah, I think if the character speaking is the captain him/herself, then you include the Captain's Log part as well)
     
  20. BlueStuff

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    JANEWAY: We're not interested in this debris, Mister..