"Caretaker" Line-by-Line

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  1. BlueStuff

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    PARIS: What?
     
  2. JanewayRulz!

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    KIM: Sporocystian life signs. What's in the barn?
     
  3. BlueStuff

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    DAUGHTER: Oh, nothing but a big old pile of hay. Hey, come on, let's go see the duck pond. There's nothing in there. It's just a dark, smelly barn. Hey, do y'all want some devilled eggs? Huh?
    (Paris and Kim move the girl aside and enter.)

    [Barn]

    DAUGHTER: See? Nothing but hay.
     
  4. JanewayRulz!

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    KIM: There is a life form here. Just one.
     
  5. Enterprise1981

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    PARIS: Where?
     
  6. JanewayRulz!

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    KIM: It's everywhere. I'm also reading some kind of matrix-processing device. It may be the holographic generator. Paris, humanoid life signs over here. I'm reading a Vulcan and several humans.
     
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    DAUGHTER: I'm not ready for you yet!

    (She blocks their way and the dog snarls at them.)
     
  8. LeadHead

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    Paris: Paris to Janeway-

    Paris is hit by the daughter, falling back on the ground.
     
  9. BlueStuff

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    [Farm]

    JANEWAY: Janeway here. Paris? Come on!
     
  10. JanewayRulz!

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    [Barn]

    (Adah appears from thin air with a pitchfork, then the rest of the farmers. Janeway and four crew run in and the door closes behind them.)

    AUNT ADAH: Very well. Since no one seems to care for any corn, we'll have to proceed ahead of schedule.

    (The barn wall disappears to reveal a high-tech room that goes on into the distance. Chakotay, B'Elanna and Tuvok are lying on narrow ledges with a long needles sticking into their abdomen. Just as the farmers and Voyager crew vanish we see that all the Maquis are there. The next shot is of Janeway having her stomach skewered and her passing out. Paris is next to her and across the aisle Kim screams.)
     
  11. BlueStuff

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    [Engineering]

    (The crew wake up.)
    JANEWAY: Janeway to Bridge. Anybody there?
     
  12. JanewayRulz!

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    ROLLINS [OC]: Yes, Captain. We're here.
     
  13. LeadHead

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    Janeway: How long were we over there?
     
  14. JanewayRulz!

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    ROLLINS: Almost three days.
     
  15. LeadHead

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    Janeway: (over comm) 3 days?
     
  16. JanewayRulz!

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    ROLLINS: Captain, the Maquis ship is powering up its engines.
     
  17. LeadHead

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    Janeway: Tractor them. All senior officers report to the bridge immediately.
     
  18. Orac

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    [Sickbay]

    EMH: Excuse me. Could you explain what has transpired?
     
  19. JanewayRulz!

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    PARIS: Computer, locate Ensign Kim.
     
  20. LeadHead

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    Computer: Ensign Kim is not on board.