"Breaking the Ice" Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Star Trek: Enterprise' started by LeadHead, Sep 11, 2012.

  1. Orac

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    T'Pol: It was a mistake. I apologise. (stands)
     
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    TRIP: Did it ever occur to you that you might have postponed the wedding because subconsciously you wanted to get out of it?
     
  3. Orac

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    T'Pol: That would imply that my subconscious mind controls my decisions. It doesn't.
     
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    Trip: Well, it happens to humans all the time. Maybe you're picking up some of our bad habits.
     
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    [Comet surface]

    (they're packing up to leave when Travis slips and falls back into the crater they blew)

    Reed: Travis! (goes down to him)
     
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    Mayweather: I'm okay.

    Travis screams in pain.
     
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    Reed: What?
     
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    Mayweather: My knee.
     
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    Reed: You rest here.
     
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    Mayweather: I'm all right.
     
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    Reed: Okay. (helps him up) Well, let's get you to the pod. I'll come back for the gear if there's time.
     
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    Mayweather: At least take the core sample, we shouldn't go back empty handed.
     
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    (a white dawn is looming below the horizon)

    Reed: Almost there.
     
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    TRAVIS: It might be faster without the suits.
     
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    Reed: Yes, and a lot colder.
     
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    (the sun has risen, there's a cracking sound)
    REED: What's that? (they look down to see a network of cracks appearing in the ice in front of them. As they approach the pod, the cracks start to become crevasses)
     
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    Travis: I hope I never see snow again. (they climb aboard)
     
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    [Shuttlepod]

    (trying to lift off, alarms bleeping, the pod falls through the weakened surface ice)
    REED: You all right?
     
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    Travis: We should have never ignited the thrusters.
     
  20. LeadHead

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    Reed: Well, it's not like we had a choice.

    the comm system beeps as the ship shakes. Reed climbs to the helm.

    Reed: Reed here.