An Idea For A Game/Project

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by M, Jun 25, 2008.

  1. Starscape

    Starscape Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Great, looking forward to it!

    Welcome on board. No need to show us your art, anyone of at level of artistic ability can join in. :) We try to have get a new panel up each week, but that's not a hard-and-fast rule.

    Looks like we've lost some of the panels, so no wonder it's confusing. I'll see if I can put a brief summary together for you.



    Here's the updated list:

    [01.] NCC-1701
    [02.] ThomastheCat
    [03.] Ptrope
    [04.] PlanetMudd
    [05.] Vektor
    [06.] Redfern
    [07.] Masao
    [08.] Venardhi
    [09.] Starscape
    [10.] jon1701
    [11.] Klondike307
    [12.] ThomastheCat +
    [13.] NCC-1701 +
    [14.] Venardhi +
    [15.] Ptrope +
    [16.] Redfern +
    [17.] Starscape +
    [18.] Ampris
    [19.] Masao +
    [20.] Ptrope ++
    [21.] Venardhi ++
    [22.] ThomastheCat ++
    [23.] NCC-1701 ++
    [24.] Starscape ++
    [25.] Venardhi +++
    [26.] Joaqin[highlight]
    [27.] Praetor[/highlight][highlight]
    [28.] Starscape[/highlight] +++[highlight]
    [29.] johnsonalmighty[/highlight]

    + = 2nd panel
    ++ = 3rd panel
    +++ = 4th panel
     
  2. Starscape

    Starscape Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    As requested, the story so far...

    Kirk has been possessed by an alien known as Arashnievel who uses Kirk's authority to take the Enterprise to Omicron Centauri II so that he can take control of the "Great Machine" that resides there and so give himself limitless power.

    Kirk/Arashnievel has a device which looks an awful lot like the servo used by Gary Seven in the TOS episode "Assignment: Earth" (currently McCoy has this device). ;)

    Arashnievel has been pursued by his daughter, Asharina, who is attempting to return him to The Origin (no-one has explained exactly what that is, yet) for punishment.

    Asharina has a shape-shifting starship which she controls via a mental link.

    Early on both Kirk/Arashnievel and Asharina were subdued. Spock attempted a mind-meld to discover what was wrong with Kirk. But the mind-meld went awry and Arashnievel took possession of Spock's body as well as Kirk's (although Kirk's body remains unconscious).

    While Arashnievel was mentally probing for the machine on the planet the "combined"
    consciousnesses of Kirk and Spock manage to "piggyback" themselves onto his thought-waves only to find themselves on the planet where the "Great Machine" has manufactured them both new bodies.

    Spock manages to use the "Great Machine" to transfer himself (in his simulated body) back to the Enterprise where he confronts Arashnievel (still controlling Spock's original body) and who is about to kill Asharina.

    Asharina uses the distraction to psychically assault Arashnievel and also to project herself down to the planet where she meets Kirk.

    ...I think that's all the main points covered. Phew!! :)
     
  3. Praetor

    Praetor Vice Admiral Admiral

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    I think I'll have a couple more plot points to add to that. :shifty: ;)
     
  4. johnsonalmighty

    johnsonalmighty Lieutenant Commander Red Shirt

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    That's cool. I still gotta wait my turn and see where
    I can take this baby....Hmmmm a puzzling puzzle indeed.
     
  5. Praetor

    Praetor Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Okay, mine's up. I had promised someone a preview of it before I posted it, but since he's taking his time getting back to me, I didn't want to hold things up any more.

    Forgive my sloppy style - it happened part way through and I ran with it. ;)
     
  6. johnsonalmighty

    johnsonalmighty Lieutenant Commander Red Shirt

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    Ooooooo, nice twist in the plot there Preator!
     
  7. Starscape

    Starscape Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Good one, Praetor!!

    Although... :eek: how am I going to follow that?!! Hmmm, I need to do some serious thinking.
     
  8. Praetor

    Praetor Vice Admiral Admiral

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    Thank ya, folks. :D

    And Starscape, I'm sure you'll come up with something great. :)
     
  9. M'Sharak

    M'Sharak Definitely Herbert. Maybe. Moderator

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    Heh heh heh. :techman:
     
  10. Praetor

    Praetor Vice Admiral Admiral

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    I heard that. :p

    Thanks for the thumbs-up, M. :)
     
  11. Starscape

    Starscape Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    There's my latest panel posted. Sorry, about the delay.

    From where I've left off I reckon we could wrap the story up with one or two more contributions.

    johnsonalmighty, your turn. And if you feel you can bring the story to a conclusion, go for it. :techman:
     
  12. johnsonalmighty

    johnsonalmighty Lieutenant Commander Red Shirt

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    Okay I can finish this, but it might be a couple of pages (not fourm pages) if you want an awe inspiring finale.
     
  13. Starscape

    Starscape Fleet Captain Fleet Captain

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    Sounds great. Do as much or as little as you're comfortable with.

    Looking forward to it. :bolian:
     
  14. trampledamage

    trampledamage Clone Moderator

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    Wow! Looks like I found the comic at just the right time, if we're reaching for the stunning conclusion.

    I read the comic thread, and came here expecting to find that you had all worked out the script carefully before hand and were now just adding art, I can't believe you're all making it up on the fly. And so quickly too!

    Great art and great story-telling. Awesome work :techman:
     
  15. Venardhi

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    Im happy to take up another entry if you don't feel like wrapping it up with yours.
     
  16. johnsonalmighty

    johnsonalmighty Lieutenant Commander Red Shirt

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    Unfortunatly My scipt is Done >_< .....Unless you want to do the Epiloge....
     
  17. M'Sharak

    M'Sharak Definitely Herbert. Maybe. Moderator

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    I smell a sequel. :shifty:
     
  18. trampledamage

    trampledamage Clone Moderator

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    Umm... any sign of the last pages? Or are they already there, and I'm just blind...
     
  19. johnsonalmighty

    johnsonalmighty Lieutenant Commander Red Shirt

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    No your not Blind, sorry I've been busy with job hunting/getting kicked out of parents house/ and Identity Theft. Got about 5 outta 12 pages done( inked, not colored ) but needless to say I'm getting there.
     
  20. trampledamage

    trampledamage Clone Moderator

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    Crikey! That's a lot to be dealing with all at once. Hope you get things sorted.