"Amok Time" Line by Line

Discussion in 'Star Trek - The Original & Animated Series' started by LeadHead, Jun 23, 2011.

  1. LeadHead

    LeadHead Director of Comedy Premium Member

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    Hello and Welcome!
    We recently completed our line by line of "Yesteryear" in the TOS forum!

    After each completed thread, I, or more typically, the originator of these line by lines, CoveTom, will randomly pick someone who participated to choose the next episode we do. The lucky winner this time around was Brian! And Brian has chosen "Amok Time" as our next line-by-line adventure!

    For any unfamiliar with our "game," you are asked to post only a single line (defined as one character speaking without interruption by another character) per message. You can post as often as you like, but someone else must post a line in between your posts.

    As before, at the conclusion of this thread, we will pick someone at random from among all the participants to choose the next episode we do.

    Enjoy!
     
  2. LeadHead

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    In a corridor of the Enterprise, Kirk climbs up a ladder to the corridor as McCoy approaches from a nearby turbolift.

    McCoy: Oh, Captain. Got a minute?
     
  3. Enterprise1981

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    KIRK: A minute.
     
  4. Brian

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    MCCOY: It's Spock. Have you noticed anything strange about him?
     
  5. Admiral Shran

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    KIRK: No, nothing in particular. Why ?
     
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    MCCOY: Well, it's nothing I can pinpoint without an examination, but he's become increasingly restive. If he were not a Vulcan, I'd almost say nervous. And for another thing, he's avoiding food. I checked and he hasn't eaten at all in three days.
     
  7. Admiral Shran

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    KIRK: That just sounds like Mister Spock in one of his contemplative phases.
     
  8. A.V.I.A.F.

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    MCCOY (noticing Nurse Chapel walking to Spock's quarters with a tray of food): Miss Chapel!
     
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  9. Admiral Shran

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    CHAPEL: Doctor McCoy.
     
  10. Vulcan Princess

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    McCoy: Captain.
     
  11. Admiral Shran

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    CHAPEL: Captain.
     
  12. Enterprise1981

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    MCCOY: What's this?
     
  13. Vanyel

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    Chapel:Oh, noth......
     
  14. leandar

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    (McCoy lifts the lid and sees the soup)

    McCoy: Oh, Vulcan Plomeek Soup! And I bet you made it too. You never give up hoping, do you?
     
  15. KirkPicard

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    CHAPEL: Well, Mister Spock hasn't been eating, Doctor, and I, I just happened to notice.
     
  16. Captain Robert April

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    McCOY: It's all right. Carry on, Miss Chapel.
     
  17. Alienesse

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    (She turns and rings the bell on Spock's quarters. The door opens and she enters.)
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  18. leandar

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    McCoy: Jim, when I suggested to Spock that it was time for his routine checkup, your ''logical, unemotional'' first officer turned to me and said, 'You will cease to pry into my personal matters Doctor, or I shall certainly break your neck!"
     
  19. Admiral Shran

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    MCCOY: Jim, when I suggested to Spock that it was time for his routine check-up, your logical, unemotional first officer turned to me and said, "you will cease to pry into my personal matters, Doctor, or I shall certainly break your neck".
     
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    KIRK: Spock said that?