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Old August 4 2011, 07:37 PM   #1
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The subway. (my 1st try at Fan Fiction)

The subway




It was a night filled with dark. The moon was full. I wanked out of my apertment and crossed the street and went down into the subway. I was on fire in my mind. I entered the dark durty subway car as the door opened.. it smelled of body odor and urine odor.. a smell i have grown to like after years of city liveing. it was a quite night. a drunken klingon sat in the corner of the car... back to the wall.. i made shore i had my phaser near as i passed him into the next car... there where a group of teenage androids in that car... the looked like a street gang.. I gave them a look and they just looked at me as i passed.. Boston's android street gang problems had been high this summer and they where takeing over the streets. i did not want to mess with them. I was hungery.. i needed pizza.. i had a seat in a cart that was full.. there was lots of people sitting around near asleep... on there way home from some class or a friends house... we came to the next stop and i got off. I walked till i found a pizza shop... as i entered i saw a group of ferengi sitting in a corner booth drinking root beer floats... i order a slice of pizza and sat at a table near the window... a mustang convertible filled with girls partying went past... my order was done and i sat there eatting the pizza watching the cars go past...
it was going to be a wonderful day tomorrow.
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Old August 4 2011, 08:26 PM   #2
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Re: The subway. (my 1st try at Fan Fiction)

Very confused I am...
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Old August 4 2011, 08:49 PM   #3
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Re: The subway. (my 1st try at Fan Fiction)

wescrusherfan84 wrote: View Post
The subway




It was a night filled with dark. The moon was full. I wanked out of my apertment and crossed the street and went down into the subway. I was on fire in my mind. I entered the dark durty subway car as the door opened.. it smelled of body odor and urine odor.. a smell i have grown to like after years of city liveing. it was a quite night. a drunken klingon sat in the corner of the car... back to the wall.. i made shore i had my phaser near as i passed him into the next car... there where a group of teenage androids in that car... the looked like a street gang.. I gave them a look and they just looked at me as i passed.. Boston's android street gang problems had been high this summer and they where takeing over the streets. i did not want to mess with them. I was hungery.. i needed pizza.. i had a seat in a cart that was full.. there was lots of people sitting around near asleep... on there way home from some class or a friends house... we came to the next stop and i got off. I walked till i found a pizza shop... as i entered i saw a group of ferengi sitting in a corner booth drinking root beer floats... i order a slice of pizza and sat at a table near the window... a mustang convertible filled with girls partying went past... my order was done and i sat there eatting the pizza watching the cars go past...
it was going to be a wonderful day tomorrow.
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You'll want this moved to the Fan Fiction forum, wescrusherfan. Miscellaneous doesn't really have a place for fan fic.
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Old August 4 2011, 10:18 PM   #4
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Re: The subway. (my 1st try at Fan Fiction)

Also... the line "I wanked out of my apartment" ... that's probably not what you meant to say.

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Old August 4 2011, 10:43 PM   #5
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walked....
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Old August 5 2011, 12:57 AM   #6
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wescrusherfan84 wrote: View Post
walked....
Although you have to admit that's a bad place for a typo.
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Old August 5 2011, 01:12 PM   #7
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I wanked out of my apertment

Thanks for that.
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Old August 6 2011, 01:28 AM   #8
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I'll alert the Ministry of Silly Wanks.
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~laughing my @ss off~
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