STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES

atpatp · March 24 2011, 06:59 AM

An original Star Trek story based on and set during the events of Destiny novels.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688339/..._DIEING_SHORES

So far seven chapters.

atpatp · March 27 2011, 08:03 AM

No reviews? I'd really like to know how bad I suck.

cathouse_joe · March 30 2011, 03:44 AM

You don't suck. You're actually a decent writer, but isn't "dieing" spelled "dying"? Instead of "acid smoke" try "acrid smoke". I've written a few stories on AdAstra and I'd love to see your's there, too.

March 24 2011, 06:59 AM	#1
atpatp Ensign	STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES An original Star Trek story based on and set during the events of Destiny novels. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688339/..._DIEING_SHORES So far seven chapters.

March 27 2011, 08:03 AM	#2
atpatp Ensign	Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES No reviews? I'd really like to know how bad I suck.

March 30 2011, 03:44 AM	#3
cathouse_joe Ensign	Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES You don't suck. You're actually a decent writer, but isn't "dieing" spelled "dying"? Instead of "acid smoke" try "acrid smoke". I've written a few stories on AdAstra and I'd love to see your's there, too.

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