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Old March 24 2011, 06:59 AM   #1
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STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES

An original Star Trek story based on and set during the events of Destiny novels.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6688339/..._DIEING_SHORES

So far seven chapters.
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Old March 27 2011, 08:03 AM   #2
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Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES

No reviews? I'd really like to know how bad I suck.
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Old March 30 2011, 03:44 AM   #3
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Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES

You don't suck. You're actually a decent writer, but isn't "dieing" spelled "dying"? Instead of "acid smoke" try "acrid smoke". I've written a few stories on AdAstra and I'd love to see your's there, too.
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