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Old September 2 2010, 03:14 PM   #1
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"The City on the Edge of Forever" Line-by-line

Welcome to the Line-by-line thread!

After each completed thread, I'm randomly picking someone who participated to choose the next episode we do. The lucky winner this time around was brian! And brian has chosen "The City on the Edge of Forever" as our next line-by-line adventure!

For any unfamiliar with our "game," you are asked to post only a single line (defined as one character speaking without interruption by another character) per message. You can post as often as you like, but someone else must post a line in between your posts.

As before, at the conclusion of this thread, I will pick someone at random from among all the participants to choose the next episode we do.

Enjoy!
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Old September 2 2010, 03:16 PM   #2
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The Enterprise is on Red Alert in orbit of a planet. The ship shakes randomly

Kirk: Stay on top of it, Mister Sulu.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:04 PM   #3
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SULU: We're holding orbit, sir. The helm is sluggish.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:21 PM   #4
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Scotty: Control Circuits are threatening to overload, Captain.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:21 PM   #5
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KIRK: Understood, Engineer. Mister Spock? We can't avoid these areas of turbulence.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:22 PM   #6
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Spock: I believe we'll have them plotted in a few more orbits, Captain.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:23 PM   #7
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KIRK: Sickbay. To the Bridge.
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Old September 2 2010, 04:31 PM   #8
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Scotty: Switching to manual Captain. Do we maintain this orbit?
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Old September 2 2010, 04:51 PM   #9
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KIRK: Spock?
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Old September 2 2010, 05:12 PM   #10
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Spock: This is of great scientific importance Captain. We are actually passing through ripples in time.
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Old September 2 2010, 07:24 PM   #11
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KIRK: Maintain orbit. Open the channel to Starfleet Command. Precautionary measure, Lieutenant. Broadcast to Starfleet Command my past week's log entries, starting with the unusual readings we had on the instruments and how they led us here. Inform Starfleet Command that apparently something or someone down on this planet

(McCoy enters)

KIRK: (pointing to Sulu) Bones. Can effect changes in time, causing turbulent waves of space displacement
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Old September 2 2010, 08:09 PM   #12
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Bones: Some Heart flutter. Better risk a few drops of Cordrazine.
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MCCOY: Some heart flutter. Better risk a few drops of cordrazine.
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Old September 2 2010, 08:12 PM   #14
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KIRK: Tricky stuff. Are you sure you want to risk

(The hypo is administered and Sulu opens his eyes.)
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MCCOY: You were about to make a medical comment, Jim?
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