that's quite a different scenario. movie critics are specifically judging a movie for the benefit of their (presumably large and diverse) audience. if you want to take on that aura, that's fine, but i'm tellin' you we're all pretty hardcore fans here.
Its a very cool idea!! Cool art too, but the reliant just isn't looking beastly enough. Fill it with shadows and red light reflecting off the hull and it might help. . Also the phasers don't appear to be actually doing any damage or making any impact. showing the enterprise taking damage and vulnerable beasts up reliant.