''Dead Stop'' Line-by-Line

Discussion in 'Star Trek: Enterprise' started by leandar, Nov 14, 2012.

  1. Enterprise1981

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    COMPUTER: Incursion detected in primary data core. Vacate this section or your vessel will be compromised.
     
  2. Orac

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    T'Pol: Their synaptic pathways have been reconfigured, integrated into the computer core.
     
  3. BlueStuff

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    COMPUTER: Incursion detected in primary data core. Vacate this section or your vessel will be compromised.
     
  4. Athena28

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    T'POL: Captain.
     
  5. LeadHead

    LeadHead Director of Comedy Premium Member

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    T'Pol sees Travis suspended above them.

    COMPUTER: Incursion detected in primary data core. Vacate this section or your vessel will be compromised.

    Archer climbs up to Travis and starts disconnecting him from a series of wires and tubes.
     
  6. Orac

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    Reed: Three of the station's arms have just clamped on to the hull.
     
  7. LeadHead

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    Trip: Polarize the hull plating.
     
  8. Orac

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    Reed: There's no effect!
     
  9. Athena28

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    TUCKER: Stand by weapons.
     
  10. LeadHead

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    Lights and power flicker and fluctuate.

    Reed: They're going offline.
     
  11. Athena28

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    HOSHI: The station's tapped in to the ship's umbilical ports. It's overriding our command functions.
     
  12. LeadHead

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    Trip: Try to lock out the main computer.
     
  13. Athena28

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    HOSHI: I can't. Our access codes have been scrambled.
     
  14. LeadHead

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    Back at the primary data core, Travis starts to stir

    Mayweather: Sir?
     
  15. Athena28

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    ARCHER: It's OK, Travis. We're taking you home.
     
  16. BlueStuff

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    T'POL: (looking for another way out) Right here.
    (they use their phase pistols to blast a hole in a bulkhead, out into a white corridor and then finally to an Enterprise airlock where Phlox and a crewman are waiting)
     
  17. leandar

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    Archer: Archer to the Bridge!
     
  18. BlueStuff

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    PHLOX: The comm's down.
    (Archer and T'Pol run off)
     
  19. Athena28

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    TUCKER: Travis?
     
  20. LeadHead

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    Archer: On his way to sickbay. What's our status?